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Wed, 09/07/2011 - 17:21

#51

Kjtk

epic series :3

dude to me this sounds like a war (technicaly it is) but you prob couldnt tell it was spiral knights if there wasnt jelly cubes lumber in it so this is like AWESOME so i rly cant wait for the next chapter, i was actualy trying to sell u something about blob when the jelly chapters come but i didnt know how to word it..... ( i dont rly see about grammar becasue ppl say i dont got good grammar so not rly a prob for me :D )

Wed, 09/07/2011 - 17:39

#52

Lonewolf1206

Legacy Username

Dear Grittle I am sorry that

Dear Grittle

I am sorry that you were injured badly in the Battle of Camp 12. Thanks to you my generator was safe. I will specifically instruct the engineer to build your arm faster. I hope you would get better soon. You are gonna attack the most secure factory of Gremlins. If this works, we can win this war. We will provide you with new supplies and weapon. Good Luck!
From Faw

Letter from Squadron Leader Faw to Captain Grittles in Gremlin-Spiral Knights War

Dyrus threw a plasma grenade at the remaining lumbers. They all turned off. But unbeknown to Dyrus, a lumber was behind him, ready to strike. Grittle pushed him out of way. His body got crushed. All that was left of him was his head. Fortunately for him, Shadow put his head in the energy box to keep him alive. Necro struck the last lumber with his Khorovod. The sword chopped the lumber in half. They looked around. Everything…was burning.

‘WTF!’ shouted Gamer, who had come along to see Faw, to say HQ called him. Faw’s communicator was destroyed in battle so Gamer had to come. He was going to meet Faw anyway to discuss about his position. He was an engineer. A skilled one, but he hated his job. He hated clanking his life away. He was tired of fixing other knights’ (who had all the actions) gear. Where he really wanted to be was Tactical Division, like most of his friend and some guy named Dyrus who he never saw, but heard that he was strategist for Guild 10. Faw could help him out with his dream. Gamer rushed in quickly and searched for Faw. He was okay. He went to tell him that the Commander called him. He was about to tell him that he wanted to join Tactical Division when Faw started saying, ‘Ok, Gamer, I am going to Haven. While I am gone, could you fix Grittle’s body?’ Gamer groaned. More fixing? Before he could say anything, Faw ran off to Haven.

‘Sorry I couldn’t come here faster, Bigfoot,’ said Dyrus. ‘But HQ found a new factory near Haven. Had to investigate it,’ ‘What kind of Factory?’ asked Homminid. ‘Gremlins call it Darkfang Factory. It develops high-tech machinery. One of them includes replica of Spiral Knights,’ informed Dyrus, ‘Crimson Order is already like Gremlin version of us. We will lose this war if this continues. Our only hope is bringing that factory down.’ Everybody was quiet at this point. ‘Just bring some Howlitzer and blow it up,’ said Shadow. ‘HQ already tried. All 50 of them were destroyed 50 miles away from the factory. HQ has spoken. WE have to go.’ Bigfoot shortly replied, ‘we move out in a week.’

‘Dude,’ pleaded Grittle, ‘could you finish that thing quickly?’ Gamer quickly replied, ‘Stop talking. It’s weird.’ He wasn’t having a good day. He was ignored by Faw and this head was keep telling him to finish a job that takes days. A green mini jelly came in with a juice. Grittle started suck it with a straw. ‘Good jelly, Sniffle,’ said Grittle as he finished his juice. ‘You talk with jelly?’ asked Gamer. Great. A JELLY-TALKING head. As if just talking head wasn’t bad enough. He took a blow-torch and started to weld Grittle’s new arm.

Shadow was worried. 50 Howlitzer bombers were destroyed even before getting to factory. How are they going to get there then? A person sat next to him. ‘hey,’ he said ‘Sergeant Major Kayson,’ he said,‘You? Shadow replied, ‘Sergeant Major Shadow,’ ‘Want one?’ Kayson said as he offered a box of cigar, ‘stole it from the Air Force,’ He said, ‘It says it’s Buran.’ Shadow took one, ‘Thanks.’ They started talking to each other. ‘I just came here today to support Operation: Coup de Grace,’ Kayson said. ‘That’s what HQ calls it?’ Shadow laughed. ‘We call it suicide.’

Bigfoot and ‘Knights and Day’ was in charge of Marines. They were beamed up to Naval Satellite. Each was prepared with a Drop Pod. ‘When you go down there, you will see all the hell loose! What you must try to do is try to survive until Sergeant Major Kayson actives his Construct Disabler. Then you throw Porta-Trench and give Gremlins hell with your modified Shadow Machine gun! Army support will arrive around this time. After this, you proceed into the factory! After you get in there, copy every files in there, rescue prisoners and destroy it!’ After saying this, Colonel Bigfoot entered his pod. Other marines followed.

They dropped to Cradle. The pod was aimed right next to the Factory so it would be dangerous. There was some firing from the factory turrets. 2 pods exploded. Then 5, then 10, then more Out of 40 marines, only 19 successfully arrived. The constructs were blocking the way so there was so way to get the factory. Marines waited for Kayson’s signal. Kayson quickly turned on the disabler as he landed and adjusted the settings. Yes! It worked! Roarmuluses and other constructed were disabled and left only very confused and scared Gremlins. ‘Now!’ Bigfoot cried. Marines threw the Porta-Trench and hid in it. Then they started to set their machine guns. ‘Fire!’ Shadow bullets were shooting out of everywhere. Gremlin started to fall back. But Spiral Marines wasn’t so merciful. After they defeated the gatekeepers, a message came. Army reinforcements were massacred by Crimson Order. And they were coming back to the Factory.

New Character: Gamer, Kayson (Kjtk)
List of 19 guys who lived
Bigfoot
Homminid
Spiral
Schwagg
Artifice
Lewis
Dyrus
Shadow
Necro
Gamer
Kayson
Grittle
Silverfire
Wolfein
Brumus
Ledge
Firene
Hisaka
Aatu

Wed, 09/07/2011 - 17:41

#53

Lonewolf1206

Legacy Username

I am working on a piece of

I am working on a piece of Fan art as my Half-Chapter finished(it was last one. The last letter to Dyrus. Now its Grittles turn).

Wed, 09/07/2011 - 18:11

#54

Wfawwer

By any chance, could you make

By any chance, could you make this into a forum-rp
As in, everyone has control of their character.

Thu, 09/08/2011 - 05:09

#55

Lonewolf1206

Legacy Username

but that gives some random

but that gives some random guy a chance to just ruin the whole story.
U can always tell me in the game what u would like to be like. If there is no request, writer has right to make the character whatever he wants him to do.

Sat, 09/10/2011 - 17:12

#56

Lonewolf1206

Legacy Username

Dear Grittle. Did Gamer

Dear Grittle.
Did Gamer finish your body? I hope so. We found a sample of soul jelly in the clockwork, searching for minerals. We are trying to duplicate it. I heard you are a part of Operation: Coup de Grace. Well, good luck and I hope you survive. All the armies have been massacred so you are on your own. Be careful.
From Jeth

Dyrus was holding his Faust tightly. They didn’t know anything about enemies, but gremlins are weak to shadow. Faust should come handy. He was never so scared in his entire life. If Bigfoot didn’t tell them to separate and find either prisoners or main control centre, he would be with his friends and would be less scared. The purple aura from Faust was lighting the way. Then he saw 2 green lights. He held his Faust tighter. It was Bigfoot. ‘You scared me!’ Dyrus shouted. ‘You are a soldier. It’s an occupational hazard,’ replied Bigfoot. ‘I found a prisoner.’ 2 blue eyes appeared next to Bigfoot. ‘His name is Player. He is the Truth-Seeker.’

Grittle, Shadow and Necro were walking through corridor. They currently found nothing. They found a door, labelled, ‘Top-secret lab.’ They broke their way in. They found the main control centre. They went through all the files and copied them to their storage device. Then they found a file called ‘Project: Knights’ They opened it. What they saw inside was something that scared them so much that they didn’t even realise a dark figure coming to them, holding a sword.

Kayson, Artifice and Lewis was setting bombs. Kayson was holding his invention in his arms. Then, it started to go frenzy. Kayson dropped it and it soon exploded. ‘S***,’ he muttered. This wasn’t good. Lewis talked to Bigfoot, ‘The machine went out of order! Now what?’ ‘We got the prisoner and Grittle found important files! Let’s get out!’

Dyrus was fascinated by Player’s story. Few centuries ago, their species were not controlled. Violence was everywhere. Then 4 divine, peaceful Knights decided to put an end to injustice. They searched places for people and formed Spiral Order. Spiral Order ended the century of darkness and opened a new age. 4 Knights left as they realised the world didn’t need them anymore. But before they went, they shared their omnipotent powers to every knights, but they could only be unlocked when one needed it most. Time passed and new knights were born. They still carried 4 knights’ Blessing. And if Player was right, he carried the Blessing too. If he could unlock it… He could help people and finish this war.

Grittle, Necro and Shadow were running. They just saw what everyone else should know. The one behind all this. Then a gremlin came out of nowhere. He was wearing Chaos Cloak, but he was a gremlin. He took his Leviathan out, which was Black and red, instead of white and blue. His eye turned black. Then he started murmuring something. Grittle, Necro and Shadow could not remember what they saw. They remembered seeing something… but what was it? The gremlin slashed his Dark Levi. It was blocked by Artifice, who came just in time.

‘Player, you need to go to my friends,’ said Bigfoot. ‘They should be in Sector G3.’Player nodded and left with a Darkfang shield he found. ‘We need to investigate this place.’ Then a Gremlin wearing Vog Cub Coat attacked them with a Black coloured striker. He slashed his sword and it cut Dyrus’s eyes. ‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!’ He cried. He couldn’t see anything. He was blind. Bigfoot engaged the enemy, only to be defeated. Dyrus could feel the blade next to his neck. Damn, was this how he was going to die? He closed his useless, light-less eyes. Then, something happened. His sense was…different. It was great. So great that he could ‘see’ the gremlin. He could see his enemy’s fur. And his body…it was light. Gremlin was about to strike a finishing blow to his blind enemy, only to be surprised at his quick punch. Dyrus ran to his striker and threw it at the still confused gremlin. It landed on its head. ‘S***, Dyrus, your eyes,’ said Bigfoot. Eyes didn’t matter to Dyrus anymore. He unlocked his Blessing. Super Sense. He could feel where other people were. He lost his eyes for greater thing. Dyrus shortly replied, ‘occupational hazards.’

Thu, 09/22/2011 - 11:01

#57

Lonewolf1206

Legacy Username

Hey, guys! It’s me! Dyrus!

Hey, guys! It’s me! Dyrus! Due to the school starting and complete lack of good idea, I decided to explain the world of Fiction-Letters.
Gremlins and Knights are fighting. Gremlin is using their seemingly infinite men-power and Constructs to win this war. Knights are using their superior technology and tactics to win the war. But the war was started by someone very powerful and is clever enough to manipulate gremlins. I am going to reveal who or what this is.

The battle field, of course, is the surface of cradle. Knights are using their Drop Pod technology to get to the battle zone, like ODSTs from Halo. These guys are called ‘Marines.’ Bigfoot and basically everyone from the story are Marines. These are their ranks and their powers, which they will get soon.

Colonel Bigfoot – Aura control
Liteunant Colonel Faw – electro-kinesis
Liteunant Colonel Homminid- invulnerability, super strength
Captain Artifice- super speed
Captain Lewis- Mind control
Liteunant Dyrus- Super sense, Super agility, Chimera (uncontrollable)
Sergeant Major Grittles- Jelly manipulation
Sergeant Major Shadow- Invisibility, Shadow manipulation
Sergeant Major Kayson- Pyrokinesis
Sergeant Necro- Necromancy
Sergeant Gamer- Robot control, Teleportation of a material/machine

If you read my last chapters carefully, you should know that they are in Darkfang Factory, which provides state-of-art constructs and parts for Gremlin Knights… They, using information of Player, unlocked inner power of Knights. They tries to annihilate Marines using their powers, until Dyrus(me) unlocks his power, Super-sense and super agility, but not before losing his eyesight thanks to one of the gremlin’ poisonous sword. Poisoned Dyrus will become a problem for his friends later, as the poison starts to mutate him into an ancient demon… This is an end of spoilers for now. Oh, and I am planning on making unique weapon for everybody, so comment what weapon you would like. No comment means that I will just make it up!

Thu, 09/22/2011 - 11:36

#58

Rangerwillx

GR8!

Dyrus, this is Rangerwill, yer friend in the game? These are great stories! Now for the 'slinga to come in.
If you have a slot.. here I am.
Occupation: Gunslinger.
Skills: Doesn't die. Doesn't lose body parts. Revives people. Has cool hat.
Slots:
Slot 1: Gigawatt Pulsar 4* Elemental Damage.
Slot 2: Virulent Catalyzer 4* Shadow Damage.
Slot 3: Mega Magnus 4* Piercing Damage.

Helm: Sunset Stetson 4* Low ASI for guns.

Armor: Sunset Duster 4* Low ASI for guns.

Personality: I imagine you know this, though here's a update. Killed vanaduke over 25 times, Killed Royal Jelly over 40 times, Destroyed the Rourmulus Twins over 15 times, (In which I've soloed the whole factory including the boss without dying, no pills.) Will help when needed, is nice, loves what he does. (Hope to help you in the factory with the gremlins if you can do it. Not needed though.)

Great stories!!
=)

Regards,

~Rangerwill~

Mon, 10/03/2011 - 15:32

#59

Dyrus

Changed Name

I changed my name due to steam forum update. This name will be posting the fics now

Mon, 10/03/2011 - 16:43

#60

Flists

/Wave Name: Flists Weapons:

/Wave

Name: Flists
Weapons: Barbarous Thorn Blade, Divine Avenger, Cold Iron Vanquisher
Helm: Vog Cap
Armor: Skolver Coat
Costume: Green Rose Regalia

Personality: Likes to hang out, solve problems. Enjoys Chapeaus.

Good luck!

Tue, 10/04/2011 - 13:35

#61

Dyrus

Final part for Chap 1 guys!!!

To Grittle
Hello, I believe you must be Grittle, the Jelly Whisperer… I have a few warnings for you. In few years, I am going to make Jellies rampage the Haven and there is nothing you can do about it. I wonder what your face would be like if your precious pets attack the Haven. I suggest evacuating all people to the nearest camp, because I do not want to kill more than I need to. Don’t even try to foil my plans! Muhahaha!
From anonymous

Bigfoot was confused. Dyrus just took down a Gremlin Knight in 3 seconds while he was blind. Could it be that he unlocked the blessing? But that doesn’t explain it collapsing and suddenly grow a devil wing, does it? And now he was fighting another Gremlin knight. This time, he was beating the gremlin up. Its probably because of this weird green gas around his fist. Speaking of which, what the heck is this?!
Kayson was equally confused. A moment he was on the floor with swords on his neck and his friend’s, yet now, the gremlins were on fire. And the flame’s source was young, confused, Spiral Knight. ‘Run, guys, I will hold them off!’ But, he didn’t realise that another gremlin, holding Gran Faust was coming right at him. The shadow steel blade shattered. The gremlin watched in horrified eyes as his eyes were looking at a fist covered in green gas. ‘Looks I came just on time,’ said Bigfoot. Kayson replied. ‘Would it have killed you to come here faster?’
The Marines quickly escaped the Factory with all the files. All they have to do is destroy it. When Bigfoot was about to destroy it with his bombs, a message from a HQ came. It told them that the factory was modified from a Spiral Knight grade 8 battlecruiser. They were not to destroy it. Then they realised that the Constructs started to shoot again. ‘Whoa!’ shouted Shadow as he dodged the bullet.
‘Come on, Dyrus, Wake up,’ said Hommind. Dyrus stood up. And he began to change. His demon wing grew bigger. His left arm turned into Construct cannon. His right arm turned into spiky jelly. His legs turned furry and black. His chest turned into Trojan’s and head turned into fiery zombie head. ‘RAWR,’ Roared the creature. ‘WTF?!’ shouted Homminid as he jumped out of the way. The beast shot a blue laser from his left cannon, decimating all the constructs. Then it looked at the factory and shot another laser at it. The factory exploded. ‘Ah, s***,’said Bigfoot as the factory that was not meant to be destroyed was obliterated and the guy who just did that turned back to Knight Form.
‘Sire!’ cried a gremlin to King Tinkinzar. The King was angry after hearing that his most prized factory just got blew up. He went into a secret room through a door next to his throne. ‘Vanaduke, my master, our factory has been destroyed. We have no ways to defeat the Knights. Our curse to a Knight has backfired. The Chimera is uncontrollable. Gremlins must surrender.’ Vanaduke replied, ‘Where is the Jelly controller?’ ‘Right here, master,’ said the Gremlin as he gave him a mysterious remote controller. ‘Good, now we have no use for you!’ Vanaduke shouted as he crushed the still confused gremlin with his mace. ‘EXTERMINATE GREMLINS!’
‘You destroyed probably the most important thing that we ever came across in this goddamned war!’ yelled the Commander back in Haven. ‘Dyrus, you are effective immediately fired!’ ‘Are you mad, sir?’ cried other members of the team. ‘He is one of the best strategist Spiral Order ever had! Hell, he managed to defend a whole camp from 200 gremlins and 2500 constructs with just 6 knights! You can’t fire him while the war’s still on!’ ‘I just received this letter from Crimson Order,’ replied the Commander, ‘Gremlins surrender as their king is dead. In return, we must help to purge the zombie menace, and we do not need strategist for that,’ Shadow opened his mouth to complain, interrupted by Dyrus, ‘Dura lex, sed lex, law is a law, however undesirable it may be. I will follow your order.’ Dyrus took his Vog cap and coat and his weapons off. He then gave it to the Commander, ‘I would like to keep my CIV, Faust and Pulsar, as they were mine from the first place.’ ‘Strangers and Rangers are leaving 3 hours later, go with them, ‘replied the Commander. ‘Just saying though,’ said Dyrus, ‘You will need me again one day.’

Tue, 10/04/2011 - 13:49

#62

Mr-Spiral-Knight

Wfawwer

lol ya eyes are bleeding
from ya picture look like ya blind

Wed, 10/05/2011 - 17:54

#63

Rangerwillx

Hah.

:O Great chapter.. a bit eye-popping though. Which is good. Wait a sec.. DYRUS IS DISCHARGED?? WTF?

Wed, 10/05/2011 - 18:06

#64

Flists

The content of this last

The content of this last chapter is great! However, is it possible to indent paragraphs? Or space them apart a bit more? It might make it easier for us to read =D Good job tho!

Wed, 10/05/2011 - 23:47

#65

Dyrus

SOrry i write it with

SOrry i write it with paragraph in MS word. It seems when i load it, pargraphs are negated. I will try to fix this

Thu, 10/06/2011 - 15:57

#66

Dyrus

Sneak Peek!

Hey guys, that was the end of chapter 1! I am collecting ideas for chapter 2, which will be based 4 years after this. Spiral Knight has Factions;
Swordman- Warlord -Asura
Divine Knight –Paladin
Cursed Knights –Damned

Gunslinger- Gunner- Duelist
Archer- Ranger

Bomber- Miner- Grenadier
Artillery- Howitzer

Engineers- Mechanic- Meister
Cyborg- Fullmetal

Magician- Elemental Masters(Fire, Ice, Wind, Earth, Light, Lightning)- Sage
Necromancer- Archmage

This is entirely based on the knights power. Dyrus is none of the above, coz his power is special. :3
Well, sneak peek of next chapter is that Dyrus stays with Rangers, and is informed of his true power. Meanwhile, Heaven is destroyed by jellies and Skylark was evacuated to nearby Paladin camp.

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 13:36

#67

Grittle

so im an archmage, most

so im an archmage, most likely.

but the thing is Grittle didnt just learn jelly suddently, the ancient modules for the ancient languege of jelly is in a maze in the run downed part of the clockworks, where Grittle was the only person to go in in out of the maze alove many times to learn the studies of jelly im 1000's of years.

now sice 77% of the jellies are now probably controlled he now has weapons (hopefully dyrus will do this)

pepperbox
master blast bomb
electron charge

and now he has teh game face on

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 17:30

#68

Miqueas

id like to be private

id like to be private Miqueas
if i ca choose my faction i would be a swordman, if not ill be good with artillery or bomber or even gunslinger,
Id like my character to be little clumsy and in some part of the history just ruin everything by doing something stupid

PS i forgot to say that im in the guild knightmare recruits, i feel like a noob (im not a noob!( hey that could be like my phrase!))

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 20:12

#69

Shadownox

i'm not sure what power mine

i'm not sure what power mine might be. i am asumming that it is archmage or necromancer. by the way, nice story! ilike the way u gave us all special pwoers and stuff. keep up the good work! i suspect this could be my competiton :D

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 20:20

#70

Shadownox

o yeah, im gonna update my

o yeah, im gonna update my stuff
Swords: Leviathan Blade, Striker, Brandish, Sealed Sword
Guns: Magnus, Blaster
Bombs: Spine Cone, Blast Bomb
Armor: Wolver Coat, Magic Cloak
Helmets: Dusker Cap, Magic Hood
Shields: Twisted Targe, Wise Owlite Shield

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 20:38

#71

Nechrome

wow

wow, it's been a loooooooon time since i've looked at this thread. so far, pretty good! this is keeping everyone happy while im working on my stories. =D. here's my gear update

armor: cobalt armor, magic hood
stuffz: khorovod, jalovec, Shockburst brandish, Bristling buckler. yes, i sold everthing else. but i still have my bombheads and newbies.

so, yeah.

im a necromancer! woo hoo! but i have a suggestion. i like greavers a lot, so, along with my necromancer powers, i would like to request the ability to summon my own personal giant ruby greaver to fly into battle. =D

Tue, 10/18/2011 - 07:35

#72

Rangerwillx

;_;

/sad Give me stories.. give me more.. give me.. give..

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 08:43

#73

Dyrus

Chapter 2-1, first story

A man in a shadow steel armor stopped by at a inn in the Wildwood. ‘This is the place,’ he said as he looks at the sign at the inn ‘Blind Man’ He parked his wolver and went in. There were not many people in there, probably because of the war with jellies that started 2 months ago. His mission was to re-recruit possibly best strategist and a veteran in Gremlin War. Lieutenant Dyrus. Discharged for destroying Grade 8 battlecruiser. Grade 8 battle cruiser is a planetary warship. Its shield can survive 100 nuclear missile fired at it simultaneously, its hull is thick enough to hold 100000000 plasma cell- powered grenade. How can a single individual destroy this monster? As far as he knew, only weapon that exceeds this battlecruiser is Grade-9 Mothership, the strongest weapon in Knight’s arsenal, Omega Laser, a facility made by Gremlins that brought Skylark down, and 7 archangels, made by Knight’s deities, Humans.
‘Hmmm,’ said a blind inn owner. ‘Dyrus, eh? I heard the name. Name’s Blind D. What’s your’s ?’ ‘Shadownox. Call me Shadow.’ D showed a sign of a surprise. ‘Well, Shadow, you wanted to find Dyrus? If you fight me and win, I will tell ya where he is.’ Shadow agreed, thinking beating down an blind man would be easier than fighting a Devilite. 20 minutes later, he changed his mind when his Faust was about 10 yards away and his face in the mud with CIV on his neck. ‘Dyrus,’ he said, ‘I f**king hate you.’ Dyrus replied, ‘how many blind man will challenge you after hearing your name, Shadow? You are dull as always.’ ‘Shut up, I just didn’t use my Cursed Knight power and my blessing.’ Shadow sulkily replied. ‘Heh, as that would have helped ya.’ Dyrus teased him, as he withdrew his big, modified CIV. ‘Oh, yeah?’ Shadow controlled his shadow to attack Dyrus. Dyrus simply parried it. ‘Cold Iron repels any dark essence, you should know that. Anyways, what do you want?’ Shadow grinned. ‘Order wants you back.’
Necro, now Archmage, was trying to tame a rare Giant Greaver. ‘Come on, Greavy, listen to good ol’ Necro.’ The greaver spitted acid on his face. ‘Ah f***!’ He grabbed his eyeballs and rolled on the floor. Shadow came in, ‘Necro, I bring good- WTF?!’ He got alkaline bottle next to him and poured it to Necro’s eye. ‘God dammit, Necro, you are an Archmage! Behave!’ Dyrus came into Necro’s room, now fully armoured in Vog. ‘Something never changes, does it?’
Bigfoot was looking at briefings with Kayson, Faw and Gamer. They were to drop in the RJP, and assassinate Royal Jelly and possibly Imperial Jelly, if it actually existed as many people said. They are accompanied by Necro/Shadow brother, who are shadow attackers. The tactics will be made by… Dyrus? ‘Dude’, Kayson said in annoyed voice, ‘there are some errors in this briefing.’ ‘There are no mistakes, Dyrus will accompany you,’ informed the Commander. ‘Oh yeah, Team Awesome is back!’ shouted Kayson.
‘So how do you use this?’ said Dyrus as he was trying out Striker shield. ‘Press that big red button and run,’ told Shadow. Dyrus did as he was told, he landed face flat on a wall. ‘This is gonna take some time,’ said Necro. ‘Umm, Lieutenant Dyrus?,’ said an entering nurse. ‘your blessing check is completed… its adaptation, not super sense.’ ‘There must be something wrong with that checking machine, he is sure as hell not adapting to new tech!’ ‘His power helped him survive the Chimera blood, resulting him turning into Chimera. Normal people wouldn’t have survived that.’ ‘Well, guys, as much as I love this new- whatever this is-, I have a hunting today, and I gotta go, bye!’ Dyrus said as he ran away with Striker Shield. ‘That is military- property, fool!’ shouted Shadow, but Dyrus was already gone.
Flist and Rangerwill was waiting for Dyrus. ‘What’s taking him?’ ‘I dunno, probably getting his bow and arrows.’ Dyrus appeared with Striker Shield. ‘Sorry I am late, let’s go!’ They were in Gloaming Wildwood, looking for signs of Snarbolax. ‘There it is!’ said Flist who fired an arrow at it, which got deflected off. ‘Flist, no offense, but you are too weak. Let me show you power of Rangermaster.’ Rangerwill fired an arrow, so fast that it created sonic boom. It went right through the Snarbolax with shadowy armour still on. The snarbolax had its final roar and fell. ‘Good catch, guys,’ said Dyrus. He took his CIV out. When a snarbolax dies, the shadow armor permanently sticks, and cannot be removed with beast bell. But, Dyrus’ CIV, made with real Cold Iron, can repel it. He pierced it through the snarbolax’s body and activated it. Shadow armor disappeared and covered CIV instead of Snarbolax, making it harder and sharper. ‘Ok, I get the spikes and bones!’ said Dyrus. ‘I will take its fur.’ Said Rangerwill, ‘I want a fur coat.’ ‘I am taking its eyes, I am almost finished with the necklace,’ said Flist. They took what they want and started heading to Ranger Camp. ‘So,’ said Flist, ‘ what took you so long?’ ‘I am back in military. You know Jelly war is on right now.’ Replied Dyrus. ‘You want Rangers’ help? We can kill Jellies easily, Flist made shadow arrows out of shadow essence he collected!’ ‘Great, come to Paladin Camp tomorrow morning,’ said grateful Dyrus. ‘Paladin Camp? Not Haven?’ asked Flist. ‘Haven’t you heard?’ said Dyrus, surprised. ‘Haven was overwhelmed by Jellies. It’s new Jelly Palace.’

New Character:Rangerwill, Flist
I am no longer gonna add short letters at the start... its too hard...

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 17:51

#74

Flists

Good work Dyrus! Can't wait

Good work Dyrus! Can't wait to find out what my necklace of Snarby eyes does =3

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 18:10

#75

Rangerwillx

Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! Love it! Now give me the next one. C'mon, I'm waitin!
Great!

Cheers.

Tue, 10/25/2011 - 18:38

#76

Nechrome

"Necro, now Archmage, was

"Necro, now Archmage, was trying to tame a rare Giant Greaver. ‘Come on, Greavy, listen to good ol’ Necro.’ The greaver spitted acid on his face. ‘Ah f***!’ He grabbed his eyeballs and rolled on the floor. Shadow came in, ‘Necro, I bring good- WTF?!’ He got alkaline bottle next to him and poured it to Necro’s eye. ‘God dammit, Necro, you are an Archmage! Behave!’ Dyrus came into Necro’s room, now fully armoured in Vog. ‘Something never changes, does it?’"

lololz! =D

"‘God dammit, Necro, you are an Archmage! Behave!’ "

N0z! 1 UUiLl n0T B3h@Ve! dI3!!!!!!!1111!!!234!!!@#$!!!!PEANUTBUTTER!!!!!

Wed, 10/26/2011 - 12:21

#77

Shadownox

nice stuff! except i don't

nice stuff! except i don't have a faust. it is still a sealed.

Thu, 10/27/2011 - 10:35

#78

Dyrus

Another critics from Wfawwer XD

@Wfawwer Good point there. I should add stuffs on strategy, shouldn't I? You can't declare fanfic as a fail yet, though, the story isn't even halfway there, there are total 7 chap and last one was first episode of 2nd chapter! How about telling me specifically what I should do, instead of telling work that people did in 3 a.m. a failure (yes I am little offended by your comments, wouldn't you?) Anyways, thx for your comment

@Shadownox the character in there is based on you, not you. you can't really control shadow and turn them into a weapon, can ya? Anything can happen in this fic XD

Thu, 10/27/2011 - 13:20

#79

Grittle

just reminding dyrus!

so im an archmage, most likely.

now sice 77% of the jellies are now probably controlled he now has weapons (hopefully dyrus will do this)

pepperbox
master blast bomb
electron charge

and now he has teh game face on

Thu, 10/27/2011 - 13:39

#80

Dyrus

actually, 100% of jellies are

actually, 100% of jellies are controlled. And Grittle isn't an archmage, he is not on the list, like Dyrus and few other ppls. If I had to name his job, it would be jelliologist. He studies Jellies and get paid for it.

Thu, 10/27/2011 - 17:53

#81

Doggies

Can I join?

Name: Amber ( just look at profile pic to know what my colors are)
Gender: Female (can females join the spiral marines?)
IGN:Doggies
Gear: Tenpered caliber, Twisted snarl barb, Prismatech alchemer MKII, Dusker armor, special royal jelly shield.
Personality: calm and collected. Loves to help out.
Likes: WOLVERS :P
Dislikes: lichens (what, the description says there extraterrisateral AKA aliens.
Class: Swordswomen
Special power: sold hers to Skolver to have the strength and agility of a teir three alpha Wolver. ( as in armor gets claws, and she moves super fast)
Guild: Voltail Pack(this is my own guild in game)
P.S. Can she not die early if she Is added.
P.S.S. She has a pet virtual teir three Alpha Wolver that doesn't die. When it takes enough damage, it breaks apart into little white squares that slowly come back together again to form the Wolver.
-Thanks

Thu, 10/27/2011 - 15:38

#82

Rangerwillx

Dyrus,

Dyrus, I would like to request a name change.
Nothing big, just something to make it easier on you, and me like it better. :P
Change my name to simply Will? :D?

Cheers.

Fri, 10/28/2011 - 03:34

#83

Dyrus

Reading this story is free,

Reading this story is free, you can read it. But if you are reading it free, why not just shut up? If you don't like it, don't read it! Don't ruin it for other people! Its called internet etiquette, Faw. You really should learn it. Criticism I appreciate, Trolling? I hate them more than anything in this world. So don't! What is wrong with you? Sure, people say that trolling is for humor and freedom of speech, you know what I think? I think that there is no difference between troll and hate speech. Seriously, it can be a criminal offense sometimes. Its cyber-bullying, I literally can report you for this. You think you are safe behind those screen of yours? Think again.

Fri, 10/28/2011 - 22:25

#84

Nechrome

"Reading this story is free,

"Reading this story is free, you can read it. But if you are reading it free, why not just shut up? If you don't like it, don't read it! Don't ruin it for other people! Its called internet etiquette, Faw. You really should learn it. Criticism I appreciate, Trolling? I hate them more than anything in this world. So don't! What is wrong with you? Sure, people say that trolling is for humor and freedom of speech, you know what I think? I think that there is no difference between troll and hate speech. Seriously, it can be a criminal offense sometimes. Its cyber-bullying, I literally can report you for this. You think you are safe behind those screen of yours? Think again."

i don't see any posts from Faw that relate to this... unless it got deleted.

un an unrelated note, why not make Shadow a Shadowmancer? or ShadowCharmer?

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 07:13

#85

Rangerwillx

It did.

It got deleted Necro. So did my post relating to it.

Cheers.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 11:34

#86

Dyrus

Shadow is shadowmancer...He

Shadow is shadowmancer...He controls shadows at will attack, defend, hide and if neccesary, control enemy's shadow to attack its caster. In this case, the shadow of the enemy has the enemies power. However, doing this will cause Shadow to have extreme headache. (enemy cannot win the battle against his shadow, as it has no limits on using its power and it cannot be harmed, as it is just a shadow.)

Necro's power is Necromancy, ability to raise dead. Necromancy is mentioned in many fictions; like Harry Potter's Inferi. He can summon dead anytime, and the dead doesn't have to be a person, it can be any kind of animals that have physical body that is not completely destroyed. How necromancy work- Caster need a physical body. It doesn't have to be humanoid, it can be of animal. When person dies, his/her consciousness leaves the body, and Pneuma(greek for breath) is left in the brain. Necro uses that as a catalyst to summon their consciousness from wherever they are. The idea of necromancy is not resurrection; its temporarily raising dead for certain reasons like information or manpower.

Will’s power is extreme accuracy. His eye has adapted like that of bird of prey, such as vulture or eagle. His eye works like a telescope; he can literally see your sweat pore from 500 metres away from you, making him an excellent marksman.

Flist’s power is aerokinesis, control of wind. He can use a concentrated force of wind to slice down almost anything. He can also feel anything in the air…meaning he can sense basically anything that is not underground. This makes Will and Shadow’s power next to useless, as Flist knows what’s coming.

Faw’s power is electrokinesis. Being a good engineer, he can teleport his machines to fight for him. His arsenal includes; mecha-knight Mk2, Mecha-Knight Mk3, various guns like Tesla gun

Velcro(soon to be introduced) has gravity control. He also uses gravity to slow the time down (theory of relativity and all that).

Gwen, another soon-to-be-introduced, (I had choice of choosing her power) has power to control sonic wave, in another word, sound. She carries a guitar and uses it to fire concussive sound wave to enemies… and boost allies moral XD
Well that’s most of new powers, and it seemed that some of you wondered just WTF Dyrus’ power is.

Dyrus is Bio-kinetic. He can alter his body to suit his need, such as faster speed, immunity to certain poison, adapting to desert or sea. As you see, his power is not that needed and the change is only temporal unless the environment doesn’t change, like his blindness. He also can shape his body to weapon… similar to Alex Mercer in Prototype. But, I mean come on. You guys can like… blow tank up to a smithereens. So I gave my character an unlockable XD Chimera. He can change part of his body into that of monsters… like, leg of a beast. Quick movement. Jelly Shield, arm turns into jelly to damage. Construct arm cannon. Shoots laser. Trojan chest, Full frontal defence. Zombie head. Looks cool and breath out fiery gas. Greaver wing… fly! Etc etc.

And the reason I wrote more about Dyrus than other characters are because it’s me and I chose it. Other character… you can add more details about. XD

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 14:17

#87

Rangerwillx

Kool

*Clap* =D

Cheers.

Mon, 10/31/2011 - 16:33

#88

Grittle

actually dyrus, theres only

actually dyrus, theres only ONE jelly thats not controlled, Grittles pet mini rock jelly, Sniffles, the guardian of the jelly labrynth

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 06:37

#89

Rangerwillx

Let it go dude.

Grittle, let it go. He's the writer.

Cheers,

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 15:54

#90

Dyrus

Actually, Sniffle is not

Actually, Sniffle is not controlled. However because of few reasons, Sniffle is contained in a stasis field.
Reason being:

Too Dangerous to let it roam free
Can be a valuable information to win the war
Grittle is away for a mission and he cannot be controlled by him
Influence of Imperial Jelly is far greater than Grittle's otherwise it wouldn't make sense

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 20:35

#91

Shadownox

Ranger, stop using the cheers

Ranger, stop using the cheers thing! ur making me think ur british.

on that note, Cheerio!

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 22:33

#92

Flists

Eat my wind =[

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 13:12

#93

Rangerwillx

Trololol,

Ha.

Cheers,

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 14:30

#94

Grittle

@rangerwill

cheers mate

*clings mugs of misery*

Sun, 11/06/2011 - 17:37

#95

Rangerwillx

Hurry up. =X

Darn it. Hurry up!
@Grittle Mug of Misery's for all!

Cheers,

Sat, 11/12/2011 - 21:05

#96

Dyrus

PrologueI saw Necro do one,

Prologue
I saw Necro do one, so why not

5000 years ago, Earth was ruled by sentient beings called Homo Sapiens, or Humans. They were civilised and had weapons that can obliterate a planet with a push of a button. However, their excessive abuse of environment resulted in serious pollution, slowly killing the mighty race. One scientist, seeing that it was too late to save humanity, decided to create a capsule to store their superior DNA, hoping that if that would be a help to someone who might come across it. So, using his DNA, he created 4 cyborg each containing DNA of humans. He then created 7 colossal robots, modelled after 7 archangels of Christianity. Shortly after leaving his legacy, the Scientist, later known to all Spiral Knight as the Creator, died. 4 new knights, using technology of humans, made copies of themselves. The reproducing continued, making huge amount of Knights. Then they were attacked.

Enemies were time-travelling beings called ‘Swarm’. They were immune to most of attacks and tried to assimilate the Knights to gain more power. However, upon discovering that physical attacks were more damaging to the swarm, Knights quickly made a sword for counter-attacking. This sword, which was known as The Leviathan was mass produced to neutralise the threat. 10 years passed until Knights decided that they would flee as they were losing, even though more varieties of weapons against Swarm was developed. They built 7 mother ships, each containing an Archangel, fled to different side of the galaxy. As they were going, they trapped the Swarm into giant machinery, made with metals and Earth’s body.

4000 years later, Skylark, one of the mother ship was shot down by a laser fired by the Gremlins. Surviving Knights sent Alpha Team to find out where they are. They did, but was killed before they could tell what they found. Cradle is Earth… and the infinite fury still is trapped in it, slowly making its way out of the prison…

I always wondered. Spiral KNights has an extremely advanced tech than current humans. Why the hell are they using swords then? I had to ponder a lot to come up with this idea... They were attacked by foes who can only get damaged by melee attack. What do you think? I personally think its not bad...

P.S. I wonder if Mug of Misery will make coffee taste better...

Fri, 11/18/2011 - 15:55

#97

Dyrus

No comments? Anyone? Next one

No comments? Anyone? Next one who comments will get a surprise? Please? Someone? Anyone?

Fri, 11/18/2011 - 16:11

#98

Rangerwillx

Yeeeeeeah!!

Yay! Sorry haven't checked for a while, now it's back! Yay!!

Cheers,

Fri, 11/18/2011 - 17:59

#99

Nechrome

awww, rangerwill beet me to it.

o well.

eagerly awaiting the new chaopter

Fri, 11/18/2011 - 18:01

#100

Dyrus

...no great prologue or

...no great prologue or something?

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