hi im making a story and i need 7 people
i need name of character, gender, color, likes, dislikes, hobbies, personality, and arsenal (costume)
eg
name: Sir Shade
gender: male
color: yellow
likes: machinery, gremlins
dislikes: monsters, obnoxios people
hobbies: inventing things, dissembling the clockworks, conversing with gremlins
personality: keeps to self, loyal, a tinkerer
arsenal: wild hunting blade, polaris, grey owlite shield, mercurial mail (wolver cloak), mercurial helm (magic hood)
BOOM the first explosion rocked the ship. I scrambled to get up and looked around. I saw a bit of crimson under a pile of debris so I raced to get Dusk out of there. "Dusk" I yelled but he was unconscious so I started dragging him to the escapepods when BOOM the second explosion blew. I yelled in pain as debris fell on my leg in the distance I heard a shout as my eyes slowly closed....
(this is my first time so sorry if its bad)
ps they will get longer the more people join 6 more slots!
Lol
Name: Equanox
Gender: Male
Color: Plasma Green
Likes: Collecting, Pain, Causing Chaos
Dislikes: Order, Following Directions, Obeying
Personality: Knows what's good just doesn't like it, Barbaric, Helpful, Split-Personality
Arsenal: Gran Faust, Divine Avenger, Volcanic Plate Helm & Mail, Aegis
When I woke up the first thing I noticed is that it was cramped. There was a door so I opened it to a strange landscape. I exited and started exploring untill I ran into another pod. I pried open the lid and there was Dusk! I jumped as Equanox startled me "OMG I hate it when you do that Nox!" I yelled as I turned back to Dusk. Then Dusk jumped out scaring the bejeezes out of me "I hate you guys" I said smiling. Just then we all got a message from Spiral HQ stating we should get to the rescue camp. so we headed of....
5 more slots!
You'll seem more official
Go to forum preferences and click edit
Then chose one
in game yes for account can only pick one and when u do all u did changes too see (I believe that u didnt make the wise oakgear forum)
Im not talking about that
Im saying story characters
So you have seen that :D
let me think...because so little people have made characters sure but say if u want this guy to be on this team or another teams (only 4 in a party for clockworks)
"OMG my feet are so tired" whined Dusk "Boo hoo Desk haha" laughed Nox "THATS NOT MY NAME" yelled Dusk "Shut up both of you" I said as Nox was stifling another laugh. "We re here" I continued "FINALLY" Dusk and Nox said simultaneously with a sigh. "Come on" I said as I ran for the camp. I asked the nearest knight who and were the commander is he answered with a shrug. So I continued on running into Sir Flare "Hi" I gasped as he stood up. "Hey check out I was promoted to commander" he boasted "Good Im glad Its you" I said as Dusk and Nox finally caught up. "Whos this" they asked "Why its my old school rival" I stated. "So Flare where to next?" I said turning to Flare when WHACK he punched me in the face and I thought "What a week" as I fell unconscios again....
4 slots left!
need another character before i can make the fourth chapter
If no one else does it
Name: Connspirk
Gender: Male
Color: Red
Likes: Conspiracies, Mysteries, Questions
Dislikes: Being wrong
Personality: Curious, Questioning, Wanderer
I woke in a dark dank cell to the drip drip drip of water. It was a crude cell made from what looked like an old old machine. I moaned as I got up thinking "Im so sore". "Your finally awake" said a voice in the shadows I looked but couldnt make out who it was. "who are you and where am I?" I asked "I am Connspirk and we are in Haven jail" he said. "Haven, good thats where I need to be" I muttered but then I realized "Wait weres my friends?" I said with a start "From what I can tell only you were arrested" he answered. "That means they can bust me outta here" I said Joyously "No, they cant cause nobody knows about here" he said crushing my spirits. "Well you better get some sleep its gonna be a long day tommorow" he said sleepily so I said "Huh? what do mean?" but he was already asleep. I yawned as I lied down and quickly fell asleep....
4 spots left!
IGN: Grittle
color: orange
male
equip: rock jelly helm(game face accessories)
miracle cloak
scary skelly shield
pepperbox
masterblast bomb
electron charge
has a pet mini green jelly, speaks jelly, bashful
name: Aaron
gender: Male
color: Indigo
likes: Construct monsters, Hoarding Vials
dislikes: Phantoms, Greavers, Zombies
hobbies: Crafting items, UV hunting
personality: Eccentric, Rash, Pushy
arsenal: Cold Iron Vanquisher, Plague Needle, Barbarous Thorn Shield, Crown/Armor of the Fallen
im changing the name instead fanfiction its _________ and i need ideas plus im giving someone a pet wolver, who wants it?
Name: Kairatas
Gender: Female
Color: Sky Blue
Likes: Nightblades, shadow weapons, beggars' antics, running, love puppies
Dislikes: Wolvers, Greavers, annoying beggars
Hobbies: Crafting, polishing her Nightblade, chasing Critias (her friend who she likes) around
Personality: Loud, boisterous. Often rowdy, but is willing to fight to the death for those she cares about
Arsenal: Silent Nightblade, Blizzbrand, Argent Peacemaker
Shield: Dragon Scale Shield
Armor: Dragon Scale Mail; Dragon Scale Helm
Costume: Seraphic Mail, Blue Chapeau
Name: Xeris
Gender:Male
Color:Blue-Green
Likes:Wolvers,Cosmic forces,Shadow Lairs, Pvp,Skolvers,Vogs
Dislikes:PURE EVIL!!!
Hobbies: being a force of pure good,playing with his pet skolver,Snarl
Personality:Quiet,Kind,Good-Hearted,Adventureous
Weapon: Divine Avenger
Shield:Grey owlite Shield
Armor:Skolver Coat
Helm: Divine Veil
Costume: White Tabard
scratch the shadow lairs thing im against the idea know that i know whats going to happen
sure we will both have pets;)
(i wanted a wolver)
THAT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING IVE EVER HEARD All 7 spots are taken right? I wanted to get a spot... :( ._.
sure you can plus i changed my mind every sat new chapter plus im gonna do specials
Ill just put this here :D
Name: Blue
Gender: Female
Color: Dark green
Likes: Wolvers, people
Dislikes: Death.
Hobbies: Healing, with medical pack
Personality: Loyal, kind, likes puzzles, always does the right thing
Arsenal: Levi blade, Heavy plate shield, Skolver coat,Gold rose, hat.
Name: Jies
Gender: Male
Color: Light green
Likes: Adventuring, and socializing
Dislikes: Rude people, scammers, and beggers
Hobbies: Adventuring with guild mates, crafting various things
Personality: Most of the time happy, unless something really irks him
Arsenal: Faust, polaris, Decked out Dragon scale helm, Vog cub coat, (vitasuit) , Barbarous Thorn shield
After the guy that punched Shade out he called a bunch of guards to take him away. We followed them through whats known as the clockworks. From what I sawits HUGE the whole planet is one big machine. But anyways we followed them out of the clockworks and into a town we later learned was Haven. Unfortunately we lost them in the crowd, we looked everywhere but we couldnt find them. We were about to give up when a girl sitting on a rock polishing her Nightblade said "If your looking for Haven jail you wont find it". "and who might you be? I asked "Kairatas, you?" she said "Im Dusk and this is Equanox" I answered" then I asked And how would you know this?". "My cru...friend Critias was taken, I know where they are but I lack the power to get in" she said. I noticed Nox eyeing another girl so I said "Well certainlly help right Nox?" "Wah" he snapped away confused "oh right wait what?" he sputtered as Kairatas and I laughed walkingaway....
ps Xairathan im gonna need a character sheet on Critias
Your chapters are shorter than some of the chapters of Moby Dick, sir!
I'm just wondering what's your aim with some of this. Are you going for a coherent plotline or are you just writing a bunch of anecdotes of your chars? I haven't really bothered to look but the chapters are so short I just couldn't imagine getting much out of them.
theres a plotline and if u read it u would know what it is
I shouldn't have to be invested in the entire story to get a sense of what's going on. The first chapter alone is about three lines and all it's telling me is that there's an explosion, your friend was knocked unconscious, then you were knocked out too. You can't seem to spell "debris" right.
I'm just saying you should consider expanding on it a bit. There's a lot of things you could consider to enhance a story and draw in a reader.
um well that was when i first started and i didnt have a lot to go on + if your so good make your own!
I made fanfiction when I was 9 years old. I stopped making it when I was around 14 or 15. I traded out fanfiction for drawing at that time, and roleplayed.
But I CAN write and I make essays, position papers, and research papers constantly for college. I also write for certain scholarships as well. I plan on making a simple story for SK but I decided to do it in a comic format because I prefer pictures to writing to be honest.
But if you want to see a better sample of writing I can paste in one of my short stories.
PS: May want to take some lessons on writing and grammar. Nobody's perfect, but you're making a lot of amateur mistakes.
just making sure this thread doesnt die
can I join?!
Name: Amber
Gender: female
Likes: WOLVERS:P
Dislikes: knights who do stupid thinks to get her to like them.
Weapons: Tempered Calibur
Armor: Dusker everything with special royal jelly shield.
Please let me join I want a slot.
k but im being boged down by school work probably not this week
Dusk
Male
Crimson
Likes fighting and getting muneys
Dislikes obnoxious people
Outgoing , funny, expert fighter
Arsenal: divine veil, grey feather mantle , grey owlite shield , acheron, boltbrand, gigawatt, volt driver