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The Thirst. `FanFic` please tell me what you think ( ._. )

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Wed, 11/02/2011 - 05:54
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"Congratulations to the units that have been promoted today. Tomorrow begins your new training and that means new assignments."

General Saffron's voice boomed through the rusted mic. Standing atop of an abandoned building was a pristine white figure. The fur around his collar seemed to glow as the Cradle Sun shines down.

"WLV-R units will Report to Captain Nuice tomorrow, he can be found near the Cinder training grounds. He will be your newly assigned CO. DSK-R units are asked to report directly to me. I expect to see all of you at the SKLV-Barracks no later than 0500 hours. Have I made myself clear?"

The two large groups stood in attention as the snowy white figure left the podium and disappeared from view in a group of ASH-T elite soldiers. The small faction had turned into a large army in a matter of months after the Drain. All of them fighting the thirst. This was the day I was pulled into it. This is my story.

<1 month earlier>

My name is Henly. I dont remember my last name. I don't remember if I ever had one. I landed on cradle like everyone else, but the memory unit in my pod was said to be wrecked on impact. I arrived as a miner, a mere worker for the Divine Order. I accepted my job, with very little options. without and identity, I was a no one, which means I had to work, and work I did. The Crowns were low, and the mist was steady, but it was no life anyone would want to live. For three years, i went down those elevators with the same goal. Come back with the crystals. The workers had very little to defend themselves, but we made do with the mining equipment. Shovels as melee weapons, and mining explosives as makeshift bombs. Coming back up those elevators wasn't guaranteed.

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 06:16
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No crystal left behind.

I remember one of those trips down the elevator like it happened yesterday. A small group of us went down into the clockworks, tools in hand. The man I was grouped with, his name was Mayn, he was the usual leader for the mining groups. Mayn was an ex soldier of the Cobalt Arms, under direct rule from the Divine Order. It was their duty to explore and scout the lower levels of the mines before it was authorized for mining, and to fight the Cradle Natives like the gremlins. We are invaders. Mayn realized this and committed treason. He would never tell me what he did specifically, but it had him demoted to a mining slave for the order. No pay, just mist.

We touched down on the first floor and Mayn would usually survey the scene. That day was different. Mayn was silent and hesitant to press forward, but eventually started to march forward in search of what we came for.

"You all be careful today. Something isn't right in the clockworks."

He usually never speaks, and never tells us to be more careful. Immediatly I knew something was wrong. I never held that shovel harder than I did that day. My hands can still recall the pain of the handle digging through my gloves.

It felt as though we walked for hours, with no sight of a crystal. only teltale marking on the metal ground. Scratch marks. No ordinary scratch marks made from the wolver claws, but large scratch marks. As if they were made by someones struggle. The marks led to other things. Equipment, shattered crystals, and broken vials. Mayn stopped mid stride.

"Some one is here"

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 06:23
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Break time

I just want to apologize for my english if its wrong before hand, and also thank anyone whos willing to read my drivvle ;)

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 06:42
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No crystal left behind. pt 2

All of the miners including myself cowered behind Mayn. I couldn't sense anything, but I knew better than to question Mayn's instincts. On earlier trips down into the clockworks, he's saved the miners countless times from packs of wolvers and renegade jelly. This day was different. Mayn inched forward, a cutter in hand. There was a noise now. Various noises. The rustling of leaves, footsteps, and they all seemed to get louder as we stood there motionless and seemingly defensless. What was only a few seconds felt like hours. The footsteps approches us, but louder, and faster. Judging from the sound, there were multiple things approaching us. Several of the miners turn and ran back in the direction of the elevators. Mayn was shouting now. It was inaudible in all of the chaos. And then I saw them. Dozens of them. They were other miners for the order, but the glow in there eyes were all a feint white. I ran. I can't remember anything else but running. I ran the mist right our of my bones, the sounds in the background all mixing into a frenzy of screams and unthinkable horror. The miners were attacking the other miners, but its as if there were't spirals anymore. They were thirsty and they wanted our energy. They thirsted for our mist.

"HELP ME! DEAR GOD HELP ME!"

I heard one of the miners scream as I bolted towards the elevator. This would be how I died, I thought to myself. My meaningless existence would come to an end right here. I was wrong. I was a few hundred meters away from the elevator when I saw an elevator car coming down. The hatches opened and there stood soldiers I've never seen before. Halos on their heads, and wings on their helmets. The swords they carried glowed a bright yellow. I stopped to catch my breath a few feet from the elevator hatch and looked up at one of them

"Thank god... you're here...something...is..."

And i blacked out. The last thing i saw was a knight's sword careening towards me wit its flat blade. Everything went black.

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 11:26
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Yes

Yes

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 11:28
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I will...

...Continue in a few hours. Kinda busy.

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 04:20
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No crystal left behind. pt 3

"NO!"

I bolted forward in bed, in a cold sweat. I didn't know where i was at the tie, I just knew that I was alone. I remember the smell of candles mixed with the mustiness of the old room. After looking around, I realized that the room that I awoke in was a cell. I kicked off the covers and looked to the locked door. Why was I here? I remember the gaurds looking at me, terrified, and backing away from the cell gate.

"Tell the Lord Marshall that the subject has awoken."

One of them said to the other, followed by quick footsteps that disappeared into the hall.

"Wh-where am I?"

"You're in the Divine Order's Holding cell. The Lord Marshall has been waiting for you to regain consciousness. They'd like to question you"

The guard had a hand fixed at the handle of his sword. It was a calibur. One of the lower end swords issued by the Cobalt Arms. I looked at him and crawled towards the bars, not having the energy to fully stand

"How long have I been here? What have I done? What ha-"

"There will be time to explain."

What looked to be a man in stunning silver armor approached the cell door. The armor resembled that of the knights down in the clockworks that had intervened when the chaos happened. Seraphic in nature and had an aura of strength.

"You were there that day, were you not Mr. Henly? Yet you don't seem to show any signs of the thirst."

"The thirst? What in the hell are you talking about!? What happened down there!? Where are my comrades!?"

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 05:14
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No crystal left behind. pt 4

"Silence you swine! You dare speak to the Lord Marshall in such a manner! I should drain you of your mist and throw you back into the clockworks!"

"Thats enough."

The guard barked at me. I was shaking by now. I was a wreck. Remembering the chaos unfold right before my eyes. The screaming, the yelling. I would never see my fellow miners again. I shuffled back to the bed and stared blankly at the Lord Marshall. He was silent now, and only stared at me. The silence would rip my mind to shreds as he just stared down at me. I whimpered something.

"How...long have I been here"

"You've been under confinement for 2 weeks now. We watched to see if the disease would develop in you, but there are no signs of it. Everyone else down at clockworks with you has contracted it though Now they are no where to be found."

"Disease? You mean..."

"The thirst. It causes spiral beings such as yourself to go mad...They attack any one in their way and drain the mist right from their bodies Theyve been known to even devour the surplus crystal energy from soldiers and knights..."

He fell silent. The man looked back to the guard and laughed quietly.

"We have nothing on the disease...we were hoping to study you if you contracted it, but now it seems that all was for nothing. You're free to leave. Show him out through the palace gates."

The guards looked down at me and smiled.

"Are we going to feed him to the thirsty?"

"Do as you wish"

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