Sk Adventures(fan fiction)
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 13:21
(Prologue)-Meeting Of The Order:
Night falls upon Haven, a few knights are still either training, shopping, or crafting. As this is happening they have no idea what’s going on close by. A few miles away from Haven1 the Spiral Order has called a called a meeting among top officials. Five figures in a conference room hidden in darkness
begin to talk amongst themselves in worry and panic.
“It’s been one week already”.
“People are getting very worried about this crisis”.
“What should we do?”.
Three other figures appear in the shadows and sit down amongst the others at the long rectangular table.
“Mr. Chairman sir glad you made it”.
“Yes I have” said the Chairman in a tired voice “Now let’s get down to the matter at hand, three of our best recon agents have gone missing in the Royal Jelly Palace".
“Yes we have been informed that they have been out of contact for one week now”.
“That is correct” the Chairman murmured “Protocol dictates that after one week of no contact they will be assumed MIA and three other recon teams will go investigate the matter and finish what the others couldn’t”.
“If you don’t mind me asking Chairman” one of the figures interrupted “what were one of our best recon teams doing in the palace?”.
“As you should already know” the Chairman spoke up “As of 264 hours ago the jelly kingdom went dark…”.
“What do you mean by dark?”.
“No contacts with any jelly species in the whole clockworks teir1-3, our recon team was sent there to investigate”.
“So what now sir?”.
“All current recon teams are already in the field so review candidates for three possible recon teams, I want them prepared and ready to go by fourteen hundred hours”.
“YES SIR!” the seven figures said in unison.
The shadowy figures then got out of their seats and walked out a door behind them, the Chairman stayed behind. He then looked at some papers, shuffled them then put them into a folder.
“I haven’t seen this in a long time” he said to himself as he slowly walked out of the room.
*this is the updated version of the prologue*
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 14:09
#2
I agree
Reader prefer not having to sort through a block of text. Paragraph at every new idea and speech part.
(Prolouge)
Meeting Of The Order: Night falls upon Haven, a few knights are still either training, shopping, or crafting. As this is happening they have no idea what’s going on close by.
A few miles away from Haven1 the Spiral Order has called a called a meeting among top officials. Five figures in a conference room hidden in darkness begin to talk amongst themselves in worry and panic.
“It’s been one week already”.
“People are getting very worried about this crisis”
“What should we do?”
Three other figures appear in the shadows and sit down amongst the others at the long rectangular table.
“Mr. Chairman sir glad you made it”.
“Yes I have” said the Chairman in a tired voice “Now let’s get down to the matter at hand, three of our best recon agents have gone missing in the Royal Jelly Palace".
etcetc...
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 14:22
#3
Yeah ill be shure to fix that
(Ill fix that on the next one -_-) If you want to join then fill out the character sheet: Name:
Gender:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
Armor*:
Race**:
Color***:
Do you want to die?:
*if you are a knight and have 5 star armor write down the 4 star virsion of it reason(later on in the story you get "upgrades") **if you are not a knight you will be added to the story at chapter 5 or 6 i have already have chapters 1-4 sorry for the wait ***if you are not a knight instead of color write what kind of the species you are ex/if you are a devilite(overtimer,firebrander,pit boss,ect.)
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 15:16
#4
are u going to upgrade all my stuff or only my current 5*
Gende:male
Color: crimson
Gear: miracle set , silent nightblade, bolt brand, wise owlite shield, daring rigadoon , plasma capacitator
Personality: friendly, funny, awesome ( :D )
Likes: fighting, hanging out with friends
Dislikes: obnoxious people
No dieing
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 17:54
#5
Name: Bluegender:
Name: Blue
gender: Female
Likes:People, and skolvers
Dislikes: People dying.
Personality: smart. Fun-loving. Cares for her friends
Armor: Skolver coat, Mighty cobalt helm, heavy plate shield
Race : Spirilian
Color: Light blue.
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 16:42
#6
Name:darksoulgirl
Gender:girl
Name:darksoulgirl
Gender:girl
Likes:jellys
Dislikes:noobs
Personality:nice,funny
Armor*:ash tail coat,fire break helm,blazebrand,dark thorn shild
Race**:knight
Color***:red
Do you want to die?:NO!
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 17:49
#7
Please ?
Please ?
Gender:Male
Likes:Fighting,Revenge,Killing
Dislikes:Anything That Tries To Kill Him
Personality:Aggressive,Clever,Has An Unknown Emotional Side,Helps People...At A Price
Armor*:Skolver Set
Race**:Spiralian (Spiral Knight)
Color***:Red
Do you want to die?:Heck No !!!
Thanks !!!
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 17:55
#8
I changed my race and armor.
I changed my race and armor.
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 19:56
#9
note that chapter 1 and 2
note that chapter 1 and 2 starts the plotline with the characters i already had before hand but you will be mentioned in chapter 2
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 19:55
#10
Chapter 1-Knights Wanted
Chapter 1-Knights Wanted
The sun now rising on the horizon, every knight is now awakening as two silhouettes come into view. Two knights walk through the gates of Haven1. The first one was a knight with red eyes that was wearing an ash tail coat and a wyvern scale helm, he had a barrel belly over his shoulder as if it was duffel bag. The second knight came lagging after the first as if he ran 5 miles without rest. His eyes were green and he was wearing a magic hood and strangely colored cobalt armor.
“Why did we have to leave Haven23 in such a hurry, why didn’t we just teleport here, and why did we take that route” the second knight wined.
“As you would remember I don’t like my particles being messed around with, plus I suggested a different route but you said this one was faster” the first knight said in anger. ”and you’re the one that disturbed a pack of sleeping wolvers!”
“But I thought…”
“But you thought nothing” the first knight yelled. “YOU BIT THE ALPHA WOLVER AND YOU DIDN’T EXPECT HIM TO DO ANYTHING?!”
“He sure looked like a pie from where I was standing”
“Why is everything you think about always about food?”
“I don’t know and why are we here to start with?”
The first knight took out a piece of paper out of the barrel belly and gave it to him to read it said: Knights Wanted: Join the special division of the spiral order(limited spots available) to apply come to the Haven1 arcade and speak with Feron.
“What is this?!” The second knight looked worried.
“What?”
“Void are you out of your mind this is to apply for the Spiral Order, and not just that but a special division, I’m no soldier I’m an adventurer!”
The second knight’s stomach started to growl with hunger.
“Er…”
“Well” said Void “you can’t get something to eat without any crowns, you should know that Sam”
As they entered the arcade a knight from the Order wearing full solid cobalt armor came up and asked their business.
“We are here to see Feron about a job”
“Ah, ok” the knight said as he pointed behind him “he is right there”
The knight then ran off toward the town square in a rush as if he was late for something.
“Hello Feron” said Void in a glad voice “nice to see you again”
“Hello nice to see you as well” Feron answered “we have been expecting you two”
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 20:20
#11
lol
LOL I DID BITE THE ALPHA WOLVER AND I DIDN'T EXPECT HIM TO DO ANYTHING!!!!!
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 20:41
#12
can you make my character say
can you make my character say "lag is bad for my health, it could kill me" (lol) or something like that
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 21:00
#13
Name: Necro
Gender:
Name: Necro
Gender: Male
Likes: Fiends, Troika sword line, explosions.
Dislikes: Retrodes laser attack, shock, fire
Personality: Evil. He is a highly wanted fugative, although no one knows what he's wanted for. Highly dangerous. Tends to be shadowy and not talk a lot. Just appears, does what he came to to, then suddenly disappears. He has a profound interest in fiends, and breeds Greavers. he now has a small army consisting of about 100 various greavers at the moment. generally takes 2 or 3 of them with him on missions.
Armor*: Cobalt armor + helm, magic hood, super blast bomb, jalovec, khorovod, shockburst brandish, bristling buckler
Race**: Spiral knight
Color***: Green + red
Do you want to die?: Not for now. But I want him to make others die... hehehe...
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 22:19
#14
EVIL!
that sounds truly evil.
Fri, 11/11/2011 - 22:21
#15
Evil=Good
Evil=Good To Me
/evillaugh
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 08:53
#16
Chapter 2-Meet The Team
Chapter 2-Meet The Team
Without warning Void ad Sam were blindfolded and put on an elevator with two other knights escorting them. As the elevator slowed and stopped they can feel a change in the atmosphere. It was colder now, the place had a dead empty feeling, the two knights guided them about 40 feet and then stopped. They heard a door open in front of them and they went in, they were seated down and the blindfolds were removed. It was dark but not dark enough to not see anything.
There were seven other knights there that they didn’t know and Void had a feeling that they didn’t know what was going on either. The knights that had escorted them into the room had stepped out and closed the door. All that was there was were themselves and a strange looking pillar about four feet tall. For a moment there was only silence. Then all of the sudden a figure stepped into the room, it was Feron, he then stood near the pillar and began to talk, his voice somehow echoing in the small room.
“I apologize for the way we have brought you here” he began ”but this is a matter of extreme secrecy and importance” he took a breath “As of 270 hours ago there has been no jelly contacts in any depth, we sent a recon team to investigate this matter at the Royal Jelly Palace but they have not returned…”
There was a moment of silence.
“Your mission” he started again “is to infiltrate the Palace and gather info on the matter at hand and if possible find and rescue the three missing agents”
At that moment a hologram clicked on, it was coming out of the pillar. It displayed a floor plan of all three depths of the Palace. It then zoomed in on the second floor.
“We believe them if they are still alive to be on the second floor of the Palace or depth 16”he took a breath then started again “If you cannot find them continue on to the throne room and gather as much info as possible to help us find out what’s happening”
The hologram then shut off and then a light illuminated the room could now see the others more clearly they had different armor and they were defiantly not from the Order there was a miracle set ,and two other ash tails one with a mighty cobalt helm the other with a fire break helm the others were too far to see in the dark.
“You will be split up into three groups of three” Feron continued “you will start at depth 13 the clockwork terminal and continue downward into the Palace understood?!”
“Yes” all the knights mumbled except for one knight in the back that shouted “YES SIR!” and saluted.
“That’s the spirit” said Feron with a smile as he walked out of the room.
Void and all the others looked back at the knight when Feron stepped out. He was wearing full azure guardian armor, so he must be in the Order already and he was probably a sergeant because he still had silver armor. Most ranks above that have black armor and the best high ranking soldiers wear purple ceremonial armor(game masters). As almost the knights looked at him they started laughing and so did he…but two knights further in the back didn't say or do any thing they sat at opposite corners silently this would be a start of a great adventure.
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 08:17
#17
as you would know the two
as you would know the two knights in the back were Firehate and Necro
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 09:09
#18
EDIT: I now have Skolver coat
EDIT: I now have Skolver coat
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 10:13
#19
Ill be sure to add that after
Ill be sure to add that after the next two chapters so probably chapter 4
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 11:30
#20
"EVIL!
that sounds truly
"EVIL!
that sounds truly evil."
y, thank u! =D
i expect to kill and maim a lot of people.
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 11:42
#21
Name: GrittleGender:
Name: Grittle
Gender: Male
Likes: jellies, valstone, punkin pie, technology
Dislikes: dark magic, fausts, undead
Personality: bashful, can talk jelly,and has a pet mini rock jelly sniffles, smart
Armor*: miracle cloak, rock jelly helm, sinister skelly shield, pepperbox, master blast bomb, electron charge,
Race**: Spiral knight, with a hint of jelly
Color***: orange
Do you want to die?: no, but you can make him injured sometime in the story by necro :|
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 12:18
#22
Not if I kill you first. >:D
Not if I kill you first. >:D
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 19:21
#23
"Not if I kill you first.
"Not if I kill you first. >:D"
highly unlikely. >=D
"no, but you can make him injured sometime in the story by necro :"
aww, not kill? D=.
at least I get to maim u! hehehe! >=D
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 19:54
#24
*spoiler alert*
someone dies by vana and gets brought back to life if you want i can make it ur fault so you can get to kill someone XD
Sat, 11/12/2011 - 19:57
#25
=D
sure!
=D
sure!
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 12:31
#26
Chapter 3-Mission Start
Chapter 3-Mission Start
As the nine knights walked out of the room the realized that they were in a closed off section of Moorcroft Manor. As they were going toward the elevator they saw Feron standing over an engineer who was tinkering with the elevator control panel. Feron walked up to them as the engineer closed the panel.
“Ok people” Feron started “we will descend into the clock work terminal, we have programed the elevator to go straight there, once there I will split you into teams”
There was questioning and doubt among the knights.
“How did they get it to skip five floors”
“I don’t really care”
“Do you think they’ll tell me how to do that”
“This doesn’t seem safe”
“It is absolutely safe” Freon interrupted “Gracken here is the only one who can do it and even then it takes 46 hours to do the programing”
As the knights look closer at the engineer they noticed it was Gracken from Emberlight there he sells vita pods and vials they guessed this is what he does in his spare time.
“Ok Feron we are all set” he said as he handed Feron a barrel belly and a vita kit “and don’t forget to come to my store whenever you visit Emberlight”
“I won’t forget” Dark said sarcastically as she walked over to Blue “no one buys that overpriced stuff anyways and plus he said visit not buy”
Dark and Blue started laughing as Feron walked toward the elevator.
“Ok let’s move out!” Feron commanded as he stepped onto the elevator.
As the rest of the knights crowded onto the elevator Dusk looked at the crowded elevator thought for a second then stepped on the overcrowded elevator. As the gears turned the elevator started with a jerk then started slowly down Sam, Blue, Dark, and Void looked back and saw Gracken’s worried face through the small opening of his hood. Man was he ugly (XD).
The elevator then slowed then stopped when they reached depth13, all the knights fell out except for Feron, Firehate, and Necro.
“LAND!” Sam yelled in pleasure as he fell to the ground kissing it.
Basil stood over him in confusion then let out what appeared to be a laugh.
“We were only on there for two minutes” Void explained as helped the others up.
“Well it is kinda scary, two minutes in a crowded elevator wondering if it has a weight limit…” said Dusk as he looked at Sam.
“HEY!” yelled Sam as he started getting up “I’m the most in-shape guy here”
“Right…” Void said sarcastically.
“Aw come on guys can’t we all just get along and be friends” Blue said
“She is right guys settle down” said Feron as he stepped off the elevator and opened the barrel belly “now then we have com units, binocular visors, and mounted helm displays, come take what you need… oh and Doc.
“Yes?!” Doc. said as he looked up in a nervous excitement.
A knight stood up that was wearing a vitasuit deluxe with a drab bomb bandolier attached and a spiral bombhead mask. He was holding a master blast bomb and on his back was the crest of Almire.
“This is for you” Feron said.
As he gave Doc. a vitakit he broke the knights into three teams.
“Team A” Feron started “will be Dusk, Blue, and Doc., team B will be Void, Firehate, and Sam, and team C will be Dark, Arc, and Necro”
As Feron announced the last team the knights gasped and whispered to each other.
“I remember that name isn’t he a highly wanted criminal” Void announced.
Then Necro gave a cold stare at Void so he stepped away.
“That is why” Feron interrupted to prevent panic “we put Arc on this team so to keep an eye on him we caught him two days ago we all would like to see him locked away but we need his skills for this mission”
All the knights approved of what Feron told them and there was relief among them.
“Good luck teams” Feron announced as he stepped onto the elevator.
As the elevator started to go up they saw that he had a worried face not quite the same that was on Gracken and they started to wonder what they have gotten themselves into.
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 15:19
#27
Grittle you joined in late so
Grittle you joined in late so you wont be in the next 2 chapters but you get a special role as one of the missing recon team agents
Sun, 11/13/2011 - 16:35
#28
lol Dusk called him fat XD
lol Dusk called him fat XD
Mon, 11/14/2011 - 01:39
#29
Nice going with the paragraphs
Sorry to be the...paragraph police, but nice going with implementing that. It makes it much easier to read, just work on where the new ideas start and using double paragraphing instead of the occasional single.
Also...
About your story...
...
COOL STORY BRO! :D
Mon, 11/14/2011 - 20:35
#30
note that chapter 4 will be
note that chapter 4 will be huge so it will be broken into two or three parts
Mon, 11/14/2011 - 20:50
#31
new armor. solid cobalt armor
new armor. solid cobalt armor now.
Thu, 11/17/2011 - 18:38
#32
Chapter 4-Recon Duty (part1)
Chapter 4-Recon Duty (part1)
Night once again falls upon haven and a crash sounds from outside the arcade. Yelling from hundreds of knights sounding from the outside. A knight with mighty cobalt armor runs in from the town square and salutes Feron as he is coming off the elevator.
“Sir!” shouted the knight “we can’t hold them back much longer, they are demanding a variety of items acquired from slimes”
“What has happened while I was away?” Feron asked in grief “I leave you in charge for three hours and this happens?!”
“They have started protesting, prices on gel drops, rocky cores, and etc. we are also seeing a dramatic increase in jelly gem buying, what will we do sir?!”
“We just have to wait and see if our teams are successful in finding a solution to our problems… but I’m worried call spiral command and tell them to contact our teams, priority alpha”
“YES SIR!” said Wegner as he put on his com unit.
Meanwhile in the unusually peaceful area of the Royal Jelly Palace Team B has secured a guard tower that overlooks the throne room.
“THIS IS SPIRAL COMMAND” a voice blasted over the com units “COME IN VOID DO YOU READ… BLUE, ARC IS ANY ONE OUT THERE?!”
“Yes this is Void go ahead” he answered.
“Yes I’m here” said blue “what’s up?
“This is Arc over”
“BLUE, ARC IS THERE ANY SIGN OF THE MISSING RECON TEAM?” command broadcasted.
“Nothing here sir” reported Arc.
“Nada here as well”
“HRM I SEE” said the voice over their com units “ARC IS NECRO STILL THERE?”
Arc looked to his side there Necro stayed sitting. He was absolutely silent as he observed a gel core lying on the floor. As he was putting it into his back pouch he made a gesture behind his back. Behind a bunch of bushes three greavers slowly backed away.
“Yes he is still here” Arc answered.
“IS HE UNARMED?” command questioned.
“Yes I have his weapons”
“GOOD NOW RENDEZVOUS WITH TEAM A THEN MEET WITH Team B, YOU WILL BE GIVEN MORE INSTRUCTIONS ONCE YOU ARE ALL TOGETHER UNDERSTOOD?!”
“Yes sir ETA 15 minutes” Teams A and C answered as they clicked off their com units.
“VOID” command started again “ANY THING TO REPORT ON THE JELLY KING?”
“No” he answered “but he’s defiantly plotting something”
“OK DON’T FORGET TO MAKE A RECORDING OF YOUR FINDINGS ON THEBINOCULAR VISOR AND KEEP US POSTED UNDERSTO-(STATIC)”
“Hello command are you there, hello anybody… bah darn thing said four barsguaranteed anywhere, piece of junk”
“Hello Void are you up there?” Sam called as he walked up the last few stairs of the guard tower.
“Yes” answered Void “where else would I be?”
“Um… is that a trick question?”
“Just come sit down here” Void said with a sigh.
“Me and Firehate were wondering” Sam was saying as he sat down “what’s taking so long up here?”
“Command has told us to ma-“
“Hey” Sam interrupted “didn’t you have to kill a guard to get up here”
“Yeah over there” Void said as he pointed to the floor covered with jelly “why?”
Void turned to look at Sam. He was walking to the defeated jelly with a jar of peanut butter and a bag of bread in his hands.
“Seriously, where did you even get those!”
“What its lunch time and I have nothing good to eat… want one?”
“Gross no!”
“Oh well your loss, oh and why are you taking so long up here?”
“As I was saying command has told us to make a recording and- wait something is happening”
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 17:51
#33
notes:
more chapters will be
notes:
more chapters will be posted later this week the reason, working on a thanksgiving chapter special
chapters 4 part 2 -chapter 13 are finished on paper
the game masters will have major role in chapter 13
working on a short spiral knights animation(idk when it will be done but definatly by the end of the year)
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 21:45
#34
now haz flourish.
now haz flourish.
Fri, 11/25/2011 - 08:20
#35
HAPPY LATE THANKSGIVING
I seem to have misplaced the thanksgiving chapter i was looking for it all day yesterday, so ill just tell you what its about, ill post the whole thing when i find it.
ok so the kinghts are trying to find out what they are going to do for thanksgiving. They say it is useless because every year Sam eats all the food before the rest can get to it. So they said that they should not invite Sam but blue said everyone has to be included. So they had an idea, send Sam to get and prepare all the food so he will be to tired to eat with the help of a tier3 sleep vile. They send Dark-Alloy (new character) with Sam to make sure he doesnt... well you know. So Sam and Dark-Alloy go into the clockworks to try to get things for thanksgiving but Sam accidentaly slipped and the tier3 sleep vile that Alloy was carrying went crashing into his own face. Sam decides to leave him in the terminal and go get the things himself. After Sam got every thing he went cooked it and then returned to the others when he walked into the door Necro smashed a sleep vile over his head and sat him down at the table. Dark made a joke at blue saying that we are all included. They figured that Alloy wasnt there ment he went home to have thanksgiving with his brother. oid said that it was good for an artificial turkey because there was an inccident a year ago when the turkeys were than extinct he said as he looked at Sam. Then he woke up after 30mins of eating and he asked how the wolver turky,the oiler gravy, ect. tasted. Then lets just say a day of eating became a day of cleaning vomit off the floor.
HAPPY LATE THANKSGIVING
Sun, 11/27/2011 - 09:31
#36
lol they shouldn't of put him
lol they shouldn't of put him to sleep
Fri, 12/23/2011 - 17:55
#37
Glad to be free.. for the moment atleast
ok so i havent posted in along time i know school sucks right any ways i have some pictures to you from me so enjoy
note*-the topic today is the sniped stranger hat :)
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k0hhz
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k0h4c
Fri, 12/23/2011 - 18:02
#38
My almost best work
Lord-Void
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k0hqw
Takaxhappy
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k0j5u
Arccommander
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k0jen
Sat, 12/24/2011 - 08:31
#39
Snowball fight?
Well it isnt exactly a snowball fight if the person is stuck and unable to defend himself is it?
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k2g6u
Sun, 12/25/2011 - 19:35
#40
Merry Christmas
Happy holidays from the SK Adventures team ... well that is im the only one so from me to you
From left to right:Basil, jelly#1&2, Firehate, Nolas, a baby snarby, Doc., a devilite, Necro, Arccommander(not in azure guardian), Lord-Void, Sam, Dark-Alloy, Swift, Blue, Dusk
On the pillar:Grittle, Dark
http://exl1.deviantart.com/#/d4k80lx
Merry Christmas
-Lord-Void
Interesting, but break up the wall of text.