(i am NOT a very good writer sorry but i am trying)
Prologue:Chapter 1:Armed man in a day makes the day horrible
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!My parents yelled in joy.I,Tails was turning 360 cycles old today.I decided to open my presents,WHOA an auction house addition comic book but these are so rare,thanks mom i said in joy.As I opened my other gifts,I thought my life couldn't turn upside down,I was wrong.
It had happened,I heard the shattering of windows a clocked figure said "adios amigo" and shot both of my parents both in the head,I started running to make sure my own life wasn't taken,breaking through the window i ran as fast as i can.My life was ruined
The World of the Keys,I am back :D Way more chapters like 20 more coming fast
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 19:21
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 20:29
#2
PINGAS
or in my words, awesome.
Name: Arus
Equips: Crimson Order uniform. Looks like an Elemental Set. Same stats as a Magic Set.
Weaponry: Crimson Order ranked Mender wand.
Notes: A gremlin :P, 500 cycles old
Bio: Never knew his past, Amnesia at 450 cycles old
Ideas: Open minded fill-outs are only for the open-minded. Cheese. Cheese. Cheese. Two lefts dont make a right but three do. Cheese. Cheese. Cheese and crackers. INDENT INDENT INDENT INDENT SPELLING INDENT INDENT SPELLING
Ign: Jmtheawesome
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 20:29
#3
PINGAS
or in my words, awesome.
Name: Arus
Equips: Crimson Order uniform. Looks like an Elemental Set. Same stats as a Magic Set.
Weaponry: Crimson Order ranked Mender wand.
Notes: A gremlin :P, 500 cycles old
Bio: Never knew his past, Amnesia at 450 cycles old
Ideas: Open minded fill-outs are only for the open-minded. Cheese. Cheese. Cheese. Two lefts dont make a right but three do. Cheese. Cheese. Cheese and crackers. INDENT INDENT INDENT INDENT SPELLING INDENT INDENT SPELLING
Ign: Jmtheawesome
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 21:22
#4
Accepted Arus And Chapter 2
(Tails)As I ran by,My ribs started to hurt i couldn't keep this up forever.I had a idea,a good idea running off to the side i quickly blended in to the ice cream stand in the bazaar.
(Arus)What i saw i couldn't easily forget a little 360 cycle old running to the side and sitting next to me to blend in.I wondered why but then i saw a person in a gunslinger set aiming his gun at the 360 cycle old i wanted to yell 'GET DOWN" but it didn't come out of my lungs.
(Guildmaster Dane)I saw the two little kids sitting next to each other and the gunslinger pointing guns at them.I saw how useful the kid with the party hat could be so i yelled "GUN" and the kids got down as everybody else did.
(Tails)The evil gunslinger was stupid to aim a gun at me he got trialed for murder and got death penalty I thought it was over.Of course i was wrong of freaking course I had to worry about the thing they called orphanages but the person who yelled "GUN" decided to take me. Little did I know that he was the guildmaster of one of the greatest guilds of all time.
(Arus)I felt lucky not that i was one of the youngest Crimson Order recruits of all time but how i lived.That kid who was apparently named Tails was on TV everywhere,Yep everywhere.But i had to get back on my Crimson Order work so I did.
(Tails)I was walking to my new home,weirdly everybody was dressed as elite knights,I quickly realized what this place was.This place was a training camp, one of the most elite of the elite.You'll never believe what Dane told me.
(How was that chapter sorry about kinda leaving you out Arus but this next chapter will be kinda about your character)
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 22:35
#5
Peppers
Name: Peppers
Equips: Black skolver with a silver star on forehead
Weaponry: Only has one weapon- An Icicle
Notes: 600cycles old
Bio: Is a fence-sitter character. Can't choose between being on the good or the bad side. Will sometimes switch between the two causing distrust and loyalty issues. But all she really wants to do is make someone happy.
Personality: Shy, but with quiet intelligence.
Ign: Cricketheart, your ever loyal Guildmaster ;)
Mon, 11/21/2011 - 23:30
#6
Character....
Name: Wolverine
Equips: Vog armor sets,
Weaponry: both hand are claws
Notes: unknown, since known of the clockworks
Bio: Strongest creature, ever been alive and remain undefeated, "has no sign of weakness, has unquie ablilty to keep heal quickly, so it appear to be immortal, but is it???
Personality: animal, beserker
Weakness: back spot where ther's no armor to cover, (no body ever get behind him) also you can shoot him from above with flying creature, also has strange weakness of softy hamster. (so bring yoru pets he will be soft as puppy! :D)
Yojiahbo, trusty ninja! :D
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 11:56
#7
Chapter 3:The Training Day
(Arus)I was told that Tails was important so i needed to get him.King Tink wanted him but for what?(later)I was almost at the camp when i heard a growling noise Running was the first thought but then i remembered.I had a pet hamster that i would send out in dismay I knew i had to sent it him out but how the monster was going around 100mph.I took the hamster out of my pocket and put him on the ground.
(Wolverine)I LOVE hamsters,so cute and furry,their just so loveable.I took the hamster then left.
(Tails)Dane told me "Adios Amigo" and shot his gun at me.Blood came from my mouth and outta my head.I woke up realizing it was a dream but the weird thing is that i still felt pain from the shot.What Dane really told me is a myth The 3 Keys of Immortality he told me it.
(The Three Keys of Immortality)Once there was 3 gods one named Zeus,Another One named Poseidon,Finally There was one named Hades.These were the Ancient Greek major gods as you know.Each one had a family generation that came down right to you.Every 36000 cycle they would pass the key on losing their infinite age BUT they never had immortality.Deep down in the core of the core there lies a door.The door would open with the 3 keys.
You possess the Hades key.
(Arus)I overheard the story in their camp.The guards let me in to grab Tails for some reason but told me to bring him back tomorrow so I took him.
(Peppers)The Three Keys of Immortality hmm.I could use them hehehehe.Well I don't need it until I turn 5600 cycles old.
(Tails)I got my armor set which was a wolver set along with a calibur."Hit the dummy"said Dane I smashed the dummy but as i smashed it into wooden pieces.A familiar voice said "Adios Amigo" I was done hearing that voice i grabbed a owlite shield from the ground and held it up blocking the enemys shot but it ricocheted and grazed my leg.The person said:You killed my best man,Any last words as he aimed his gun at me.Yes actually PEPPERS!!!!!
(Wolverine)I heard Peppers and i loved peppers as spice so i went to it.
(Peppers)I heard a help call and readied my icicle.Running to Tails I saw a bullet go through his wolver hat.He was bleeding bad,I threw my icicle into a wall and it ricocheted off the wall and hit the gunslinger in the face.
(Arus)All in a days work King Tink then i realized that this Tails was a robot O.o oh sh.
(Tails)My mother who was smiling said it wasn't the time quickly I couldn't grasp the words and i woke up.I was in the hospital and there was everybody looking at my head.Everybody sent a get well gift.The best one was from my future training partner Bob.As I smiled i needed some rest so i told Peppers to get everybody out of here.
Then I realized that wasn't Peppers.
(how was that)
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 11:54
#8
I need more Characters
Around 3 more would be good.Also i need everybody else to get a chance so no double posting unless I say so.
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 14:18
#9
BUMP
Also be sure to post feedback as I will always accept help
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 14:59
#10
Name: Blue
Equipment: Skolver
Name: Blue
Equipment: Skolver coat, mighty cobalt helm, heavy plate shiels, leviathan blade.
Notes: As a baby, her parents died, and she now has only her brother.
Bio: Living in the streets of haven, blue and her brother have been living for a while.
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 19:23
#11
Hello
I changed my account to steam so yeah also we still need 2 more characters sadly but if they dont come in two days then ill have to ask for multiple characters Also if you use a password then you can make a chapter i have given a password to Blue to use on this story you can ask for a password but unless your good at writing stories then i wont accept them
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 19:31
#12
Chapter 4 planned
This chapter is going to be special because somebody dies in it the character i decide who isn't worthy and isn't really entertaining Arus and Blue have great potential so they are being kept its just 1/2 now Why?Did i pick them Peppers is kinda a bump in the road and i could replace her and Wolverine
is just too strong and kinda boring to read to and is uneven compared to the other characters.Now i know that Tails is a bit overpowered as well but he does have a bad weakness which you'll get to figure out in this chapter.
Tue, 11/22/2011 - 22:56
#13
Chapter 4
(Tails)The fake peppers turned out to be the gunslingers boss."Time to DIE!!!"he said with madness coming from his lungs.He jabbed at me with his sword, quickly i stepped off to the side and grazed his rib area.I performed a fake cut to the knees then jabbed at his gut,Unfortunately he didn't fall for the fake and blocked my jab and counterattacked with a backhander to the face while i was stumbling he threw his calibur into my foot.Laughing he prepared his Argent Peacemaker and prepared to pull the trigger "Any last words?"Yes actually" i said and threw my calibur into his head making him stuck to the wall.He took the calibur out of his head and said "Finish me I have no more respect."Vindictively I cut threw him like butter.His torso was disconnected from the rest of his body and he stood there dead on the ground.
(Arus)King Tink wasn't mad at me although he was disappointed he said "Arus I need the real Tails NOW!!!"I asked him why and I stood there amazed that he trusted me enough to tell me the truth."You know the stories of the three keys right?"Yes Yes Sir"Anyway Tails possess the last key The Key of Hades"Woah and that is why we need him?"Yes of course my loyal trooper"Now get going"I did as ordered and continued to track Tail's location.
(Blue)"Yes brother" i said as i continued my chores my brother said "After your done with your chores we can go get some ice cream."I smiled in glee ice cream was my favorite treat.After my chores we went to go get some ice cream."Thanks brother your the best"Its no problem you deserved it"We both smiled after the ice cream.He asked me if I wanted to go see one of the Krogmo Coliseum games.Smiling I said "Sure"and so we went to the coliseum.
(Peppers)It was said that Tails was going to a Coliseum game.Now that i am out of this putrid closet as a thank you gift for getting him out I got him a new coat and hat made out of vog fur.
(Tails)I would never forget my first Coliseum game.I was the youngest competitor in this coliseum.King Krogmos and Dane wanted me to go because of my skill. The Coliseum speaker said loudly "Welcome to the arena today,we have a special guest,Tails!!!!!"The four other competitors were around 1600 cycles old.Suddenly,Water filled the arena "Today it shall be a swimming match to test all the competitors skill"Luckily for me,I learned how to swim when i was even younger then 360 cycles old.Going underwater one of the competitors tried to drown me by dunking me underwater.Grasping for air,Stabbed his hand with my new Levitation Blade.As i swam up i realized it was the legendary creature known as Wolverine.Also I realized that the real fourth competitor was dead along with all the other competitors.
(Wolverine)Of course my only weakness "The Levitation Blade of Ancient Babylon"It was from a very far away place from the cradle,very far indeed.I realized that my life was going to end soon with this young skilled swordsmen.I remembered all the people i killed,all the horrible things I did.Smirking I didn't feel bad for doing them i felt bad that my life was about to be ended right in front of the girl named Blue eyes.The sword went straight threw my gut my eyes went whole and then closed as my life ended
Narrator:Tails was known as the greatest Swordsmen of this generation Until A later generation (720 cycles later)
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 07:15
#14
Woah.
._.
Its better than the other chapters.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 07:26
#15
Pretty good!
It's a great story so far! What I think you should do is when you begin dialogue, add a comma like this: I said, "Let's go!" It'll just make the story a little nicer, but it's really good already.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 07:42
#16
Its not that you're not
Its not that you're not writing fine but there are some spelling mistakes ("addition" should be "edition") and you're not spacing out after using punctuation, making the thing just so much harder to read. You may still be young yet, which I'd understand, but try to keep the end of one sentence away from the start of the next.Not like this,Or this. The ideas are definitely there but the writing itself is the problem.
Basically, whenever you're using a comma or period, you have to put a space after it. You also do not need to capitalize after a comma.
If you're writing this in a play-like style, you don't need to do this "(Arus) blah blah blah" you can simply put "Arus: blah blah blah" There's another problem with the way you're using it all, in that you don't need to do this for actions, only dialogue. Currently, you're writing in both first person and third person at the same time, which makes everything harder to read. I'm honestly still confused if you're using several points of view (as with the trialed gunslinger) or if you're just messing up third person and first person views.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 12:39
#17
@Prisega and everyone else
BLAME BOSWICK!!! Just kidding, the trialed gunslinger is a sub character (meaning that he isn't exactly a character but he still gets some role in the story) I kinda thought that Tail's flaw wasn't really good enough so i want you guys to decide yes keep the flaw or no get rid of the flaw for a way worse flaw. Be sure to remember I still need characters for chapter 5.Also here is the cycle time thing (Taken from Littlerbit's story)
10 cycles=1 month
120 cycles=1 year
Also Atgatg remember in ask i said the password is Tailsaton? (passwords are random) well a password is when i give you permission to write a chapter I shall also give Littlerbit a password you dont have to use it if you dont want it say decline in a reply mail or on here or even on ask
Thanks for your feedback I love writing these so I am going to continue when i get 2 or 3 more characters (Also if you like you can advertise this fan fiction)
(You dont have to but it would mean more chapters faster)
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 13:19
#18
???
what?
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 14:38
#19
Remember
In tell I told you the password is Tailsaton (you can make a chapter or you can decline the password and not make a chapter)just say decline or make a chapter or do nothing.Kinda hard to understand and for that i am sorry.Also forget the characters I will just write chapter 5.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 17:04
#20
Chapter 5
(Tails)The image still went around in my mind. I still remember that horrible cycle,the day when i first went to the guild. It was my birthday today, I got no presents anymore.It was because my guild thinks that once you become 600 cycles old you cant get anymore presents.Instead we had to go through brutal training every year. This year was doing the 100 mile run if you got less then one day, you died. Instead of doing that this year I had to go to my final coliseum game.It was the championship today and everybody was watching.
(Blue)"YES!Another coliseum game this year,I cant believe you are taking me!!!"No problem sis,we did have a deal right?"Of course,last years championship you didn't let me go or the years before that."Don't get snotty"OK brother"
(Arus)Today was my day off and I was going to watch the championship today,UNTIL King Tink gave me a important assignment "Tails is going to be at the championship we HAVE to make sure he dies"But it was my day off!"Dont complain I know you feel that killing Tails is a bad idea.King Tink laughed in maniacal maner "Infinite power shall be MINE!!!"I shuddered,man King Tink creeps me out sometimes.
(Peppers)Today is Tail's first "Champion" coliseum game today.I wished him luck just as I wish everybody luck.I had a bad feeling about this game,but i cant stop him from going as now as he is in age to go to a championship.
(Tails)Blood and sweat covered my face.This stupid Crimson Order gremlin mender keeps making his scratches go away.I noticed in the crowds that there was another gremlin dressed in Crimson Order robe.Whoa that was a close one he tried to whack me with his staff but luckily i stepped to the right and he just hit my kneecap.Better that then my head,I sliced at his knees and punched him in the face and finished my combo with a kick.Finally I said "Im done playing games"finishing him off by removing his head.Bleeding on the ground he died by my feet.Of course I wasn't finished ANOTHER Crimson Order person came in.
(Arus)Here was my chance to actually get the real Tails.King Tink told me to kill him or just take him to him.I tried punching his face but he broke my arm.I wasn't proficient at fighting meaning he had a advantage here.He sliced my ribs and then just walked away with his trophy.I heard him say "I'm done I killed enough people."Some Knights even got me help as they couldn't just leave me there.I passed out waking up to the sounds of voices.
(Blue)"Do you think the poor gremlin will be awake yet."He woke up wondering where he was and why the Knights rescued him."Your finally awake sleepy head."I smiled I was home alone until my brother got help from Basil.Suddenly my door opened,but it wasn't brother it was....
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 19:53
#21
Better... I know what you are
Better... I know what you are missing. Put things like, said Blue. Or Blue said. That kind of thing
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 20:03
#22
Chapter 6 warning
Chapter 6 is probably going to be the last chapter I do before I need characters also Chapter 6 is going to be mostly about Tails fighting a bunch of people also I would recommend that you play the Primal Dialga Theme while reading the fighting parts.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 21:03
#23
Better, And A charector
Hay man. You know me! This is a great sieries. MAKE MORE!!!
Well, some things aren't too great tho.
I really dont care about spelling, but some thingsa in it dont make sence. And spaceing. Add more spacing. :3
Ok, But this is amazing btw this Fan fiction is great.
Now here is a charector.
Name: The Doctor
Line: "The Doctor is Ready to See you"
Notes: The Docter just looks at people, and stalks people. He is GREAT with medicene, and can actually rez people. Energy is lurking from his body, and he is a stranger. Noone really knows him. He is also an assassin. His True name is Transparent Docter,
Or "TransXDoc"
And 1 last thing.
He uually makes funny comments on things, and usually butts in to a disscussion, or argument.
GEAR: He is wearing a Magic hood, With MAX Elemental 3/4 Health and Full Pierce.
He is also wearing angelic Body, With the same stats.
He has a Wild hunting blade, and a PEacemaker.
Bio: He Is an Orphan, And was raised by "The Mist" Guild.
Bio For The Mist: The Mist is a friendly, guild and everbody is nice. :D
But, A lot of people are stealthy, and everbody follows orders. They aren't Afraid to torture someone until death, and is Horrably secret.
:D Thats all
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 21:11
#24
Alen
Name: Alen
Equipment: Dragon Scale Helm and Wyvern Scale Mail
Weaponry: Blazebrand, Avenger, and Electron Charge
Notes:200 Cycles old, an orphan, due to a war between his clan and the Gremlins 190 cycles earlier
Bio: Alen is very insecure and uncertain, but will willingly step up and even risk his life to save those he cares for
More to come later as Alen's story progresses
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 21:27
#25
1 more thing
I had an idea.
It was that TransXDoc Was another key, but nobdy knows, and nobody is after him.
Im gonna write a side story on TransXDoc later btw. Read it for more info on him.
Wed, 11/23/2011 - 23:20
#26
Accepted and Accepted
Both character ideas are amazing plus I am going to write chapter 6 later but ill write like a tiny part
(Tails)After I won the championship,some sketchy people wanted me to do a top secret mission along with a few other spec ops "volunteers"I accepted and went to the helicopter we needed to use to get to the president.Yup thats right we are going to kill the Gremlin president.I readied my pistol I was going to disguise my self as the pilot and kill the Gremlin leader and his body guards as soon as we got high enough.But they never planned escape.
Thu, 11/24/2011 - 13:28
#27
IM going to note that
Chapter 7 will have all the other new and old characters.Chapter 6 is just a random workout (lol i hope you know what i mean)well Ill give the best 4 characters that are KNIGHTS in the story to be in the team.
Thu, 11/24/2011 - 13:59
#28
Chapter 6:Happy Thanksgiving
(Blue)The person was part of the legendary guild known as the Mist he asked if my brother was here."No i'm sorry but he will be home soon."Ok he is already at the operation not to worry though he will be back tomorrow."Ok thanks see you later."Also you should read the three keys story it is very interesting."The door slammed and I was home alone.
(Tails)This time after i won the championship,weird people wanted me to go to some crazy secret operation.I decided to go and next thing i knew it I was in a helicopter.I had a sniper rifle and a sub machine gun.The sniper was to do the dirty deed of killing the Gremlin president.I had to make sure he didnt finish his speech or even start it.It had to be a fast kill or else the Gremlins will riot their way to Haven and a massive war will be unleashed.I noticed the other people in the helicopter.One was named TransXdoc another was Blue's brother.Other then me there was also a Gremlin named Bob.Bob was piloting the helicopter.I readied my sniper rifle as we were getting close.BANG the Gremlin presidents head fell of just like a fruit falling off a tree.He was slumped upon the stage dead.
(TransXDoc)A huge amount of fire came I saw Tails ready the helicopters machine gun and started shooting.He fell down on the machine gun quickly so i gave him a med-pack to heal himself with.There was tons of fire coming down so i decided to use my RPG to blow a tower down killing a bunch of the fire. Suddenly my leg started to hurt real bad.I realized a bullet was in my leg i used one of my tools to take it out.A huge amount of men tried to parachute down on our helicopter. Fortunately they all landed in the blades.Soon we were out of the Gremlin city and had escaped.
Narrator:As Tails grew up he became more and more powerful with his weapon becoming one of the legendary swordsmen of haven.(Later when Tails is 1600 cycles old)
Thu, 11/24/2011 - 14:02
#29
I just wanted to make a quick chapter
Chapter 7 will be longer and better with more characters.
Thu, 11/24/2011 - 15:10
#30
Check Out this Fanfiction
Check out Transdocs fanfiction it is really good and is a side story to my story.
Thu, 11/24/2011 - 15:25
#31
DARN IT
UGH I JUST DELETED ALL OF CHAPTER 7 ON ACCIDENT.
Fri, 11/25/2011 - 12:11
#32
Chapter 7
(Tails)We were going to find Alen,who we suspected had the third key.It was the key of Zeus we needed then we would have to get to the door.Im not sure if I should trust the doctor or not.There may be more then 3 keys.But in the story it said "The Three Keys are the keys that will give the ultimate prize after all the challenges."Many people said the keys gave infinite power for those who have them.Although we know that Alen is in Amirang,he might not be the key.We were about to take the elevator to this city,I readied my sword.(Now put on unfitting Primal Dialga Theme) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4b7BYar8j_w
(Alen)My vision was creeping me out.They knocked out my whole orphanage out and then me out.I woke up by this big door with all these keyholes on it."Darn the door wont open meaning Alen isn't it."
(TransXdoc)Blood covered our faces.Lord Vanaduke didn't want us in Amirang.I saw Tails jump on his back and started stabbing him 30 times.Finally Lord Vanaduke gave in and died. Suddenly when we thought we were done.Two Rabid Snarlbolaxs came in. Suddenly Bob came in and hit the bell,we all started hitting the heck out of the Snarlbolax and they died.
(Blue)I decided to come on this extremely difficult mission to steal a kid from an orphanage in Amirang.We were almost at the orphanage when suddenly
a bunch of Crimson Order agents came in.(put on Mewtwos Theme from pokemon stadium 1)"Get down on the freaking floor!!"I saw Tails slice right through one of the Crimson Order agents.The Doctor shot ones head off,I made a move and sliced right through two.We broke in to the orphanage and stole Alen.
(Dane)Darn I needed to kill that little boys friend.Bob hmm well he is about to meet fate along with TransXdoc.I shot Bob killing him.I knew Tails saw that I killed Bob and ended up throwing his sword threw my chest.I was kneeling down dieing of blood loss.Tails shot me in the head ending my life.Well he didn't realize that I could only die when my mission was complete.So i acted dead.
(Tails)We had Alen and took him to the door.But the door didn't even budge.I wondered what could be wrong and then I realized Alen wasn't the key.
(Arus)I broke into the door and then the door opened.I saw what looked like a tiny army with a kid known as Alen.I saw him I saw him it was Tails along with all the other keys. Suddenly the door behind them opened.I was the Zeus key.
Fri, 11/25/2011 - 21:06
#33
BUMP
BUMP also Chapter 8 planned when I get a few more ideas you can suggest them to me also some more characters would be nice cause soon another time skip will happen but this time only by 200 cycles
Sat, 11/26/2011 - 13:04
#34
Another Bump;
BUMP
Sat, 11/26/2011 - 14:02
#35
Chapter 8
(Tails)
The gate opened, and everything in the room was dark. I could see a thing. All of a sudden,
3 sets of red eyes opened up. Then it was lightend again. There were 3 people, who looked like
Me, blue, Arus, and TransXDoc. Myself Was Flying on his tail and held 2 divine avengers.
Blue Was floating by her water power, and i felt like that could really hurt someone.
Arus was a Gremlin, and it had a spining thuder shield, and a spinning Shocking edge, with max Speed, max shock, and max damage.
TransXDoc Looked like a Miracle hood, and Miracle cloths, with duelweild wild hunting blades. He also had a bed pack, and looked like a skilled healer.
This was ganna be hard.
(Blue)
Myself was tough, but i could beat her.
I charged at her, my Proto sword in my hands. I felt the thumping of my chest. My clone ran over me with her water.
I absorbs all the water, and threw it at her. As she was falling, she got sent back to the wall, and got knowcked out.
Or so I thought.
She rocketed at me, and I had no time to recover. She made a water blade, looked like it was brandish, and sent a ton of water slahed at me.
It did nothing, im part posidion. I Puched her in her face, then shoved my blade, into her stomach.
She pulled it out, and Called for TransXDoc's clone to heal her.
(TransXDoc)
Blue was foolish to think that this would be easy.
I teleported behind my clone, and stabed him in the neck.
He screamed with agony, then stabbed me in te stomach.
I was about to heal myself, but My clone was in the middle of it.
I kicked him to the side, and grabbed his med pack.
"No healing for you"
I pulled out my bomb, and threw it at his face. He caught it, then realized his mistake too late.
The bomb blew up, and sent him a fire.
I headr Blue's Clone call for help, and i pulled out my needle gun, and sent 1000 needles to her face. all of them hit there targets. she was poisend, and dead. Blue came over and kicked My clone in the face, and I whatched Arus Send a lightning bolt toward his clone.
(Arus)
I whatched as My clone growed in size, the buted me with his Brandish.
I parryed his next move, and did a sword stroke to his waist. He feal down to his knees, and faked death.
Faker, Arus thought. He cut off his head.
Allofasodin, he pulled out a easy button.
"That was easy"
He whatched Blue's Clone rise form her death, and nearly drown TransXDoc with her water powers.
Blue saw her, and grabed the water and fling it towards TransXDoc's Clone.
Nice move.
(Tails)
My clone looked sick. He was flying with his own tail, and Had 2 Divine Avengers, and charged at ME.
I parryed most of his moved, but one hit me in the leg, and another in the arm.
I got mad.
I rose 10 Dark Kitties from the ground, The big kind.
When my clone was fighting them, I went behind him and chopped off his arm.
He kicked me in my crouch, and then in my face. He sliced my fingers off, and then one of the Kitties got him.
He kicked it off, then chopped off my head.
TransXDoc Saw this, and shouted
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!"
He sliced his clone, and stabbed Blue's.
He ran to Tail's, and killed him in the back, while he was distracted by Kitties.
His clone rose up fromthe dead along with arus's.
"That's Impossoble!!"
TransXDoc Shouted
Sat, 11/26/2011 - 14:44
#36
Note
I asked transdoc to do this chapter for me because I would be busy.I thought Transdoc did an excellent job give him a round of applause.Also Chapter 9 isnt the last chapter,We still have along way till this story ends
Sat, 11/26/2011 - 21:03
#37
Bump
It is time for a contest.What shall the chapter 10 prologue be.It can be anything where will you take the story.I shall decide who is the winner so post something like.(this is similar to the chapter 9 intro)
"(Narrator)Tails awoke in a nice place."But I thought i was dead."YOU ARE."wait what will happen to my friends."THEY WONT DIE"Why?"NOW IS NOT YOUR TIME."wait what?"Who are you?"HADES, I SHALL AWAKEN THE TRUE YOU."PREPARE FOR BATTLE!!!"
Sun, 11/27/2011 - 00:49
#38
Or in other words
I want you guys to write an example of what the next thing in this story will be please and thank you.Also anybody can participate even if they had no experience.
Sun, 11/27/2011 - 14:29
#39
T_T
Why did u steal Jm's idea of putting a link in the story for music?
He put the Test Chapter before the chapter that had the link in it.
And Jm copyrighted his idea.
Sun, 11/27/2011 - 20:06
#40
....
I never read his story sorry JM.I never had time
Sun, 11/27/2011 - 20:15
#41
Chapter 9 is planned
Chapter 9 is going to be a very big big big big big big big big big big big big big SHUT UP!!! Chapter
Mon, 11/28/2011 - 16:23
#42
NOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEE
:O
Fri, 12/02/2011 - 23:35
#43
Sorry
I have quit Spiral Knights and i am now addicted to other games.I want you guys to continue the story until i get back.Feel free to use my character Tails.
Thu, 12/15/2011 - 19:03
#44
ITS BACK
After my long break i am back lots of chapters after my orchestra concert
I need a few characters recruits or trainers it doesn't matter post your character ideas like this please(My characters sign up)also with a little help
Name:Tails(if you don't know what names are then that is sad)
Equipment:(you'll learn this later)(like your characters clothing)
Weaponry:^^(look above at the equipment)
Notes:(for example)360 cycles old and parents just died(optional)
Bio:(Kinda like notes this is also optional)
Ideas:Im not a very good writer so ill take suggestions on the story if they are private send them to this IGN
IGN:Fofo-Tails-Puppiez