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Wed, 11/23/2011 - 21:46
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Hello. Some may no me s TransDoc, some may not. But i am going to write a story, and as the title shows, is a side story of fofo fluffy tails. Yes, i spelled it wrong. But this is TransXDoc, AKA: The Doctor, and he is the 4th key. He is in the line of- Rinstcku, who is the God of The Hidden. He isnt well known, but he is a powerful god, aqnd is also the god, of Knights. He is not
THE powerfulest, nor the weakest.

Well, The story starts off TransXDoc In a area called "The Arcade"
The Arcade is a palce of fears and mercy, the place of death. It is sick and crueling, but peoplee seem to enjoy it.
Lets get to the story.

He slises his throght, and backstabs a another. He pulls his Peace maker out of his pocket, and fires threw the man's skull.
As he walks away, he wonders why its called peacemaker. "It kills people, Inocent people. Why "peace" maker?"
And then, a man runs up to him.
"Stop!"
"What?!"
"I need the key!"
"What Ke-"
I got no further. He shot me in my leg and I screamed. He Was about to say "Klensi Ochos" Which is Slentigans for "Good Night"
But Shweebs shot him in the face with his auotgun looking thingy.
"I f you Ev- Oh! Hay Trans, Whats up My brotha?!"
"...You just killed him, and you say whats up!?"
"A thanks would be nice."
"That makes no sence."
"Lets just go, ok ?"
They walked to the Arcade, And entered Iron Core Meltdown, or , Thats what they call it.
TransXDoc Used his Hunting blade to jab 3 guys in the chest, then pulled his sheild up just in time to deflect a Wild swing from a Zombie.
Shweebs Pulled the Zombie away to snatch offf his head, then threw it towards another Zombie.
"They Just keep coming, Hu-" He got no further. A zombie slashed his back, and When TransXDoc Triend to save him, He got blacked out.

Next thing he new he was in a hospital.

Wed, 11/23/2011 - 21:46
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New people

Also give idea for people- Read Flo fluff Puppies's for ideas.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 00:31
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Fofo-Tails-Puppiez's picture
Fofo-Tails-Puppiez
Hmm Transdoc

You did way better then when I started out but ill give out some tips or maybe some advice
Tomorrow as I need to go.Cheers,My friend also be sure to read some other fanfictions like Im different you can learn something from them.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 07:17
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Fofo tails puppiez

Alrigght man thx for the tips.

I reallyl like yours, so im going to you know, go on with it. It fits in with the Spiral knights stuff.

Im sticking with your theme/story area.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 07:18
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Chapter 2 mates

Ok, so chapter 2 will get some new people, such as blue, peepers, and tails.
FOFO TAILS PUPPIES
In chapter 2 Blue, is the poisidon key.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 07:34
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Chapter 2 - I make these things fast!! And this is now 1st perso

I Woke up, And i herd a shot. I got out of bed, and pulled my sword out of my scrabard. A man ran into the room, Luckily i didnt shoot him, Becouse he isn't the gun shot. He Was helping me escape.
"We have to go!"
"Who ar-"
"We have no time left!"
He ran towards the window on the left hand side.
"Go through this window."
I didn't talk.
I went to the window, and a man came in.
Then i had a vision.
He came in and said, "Adious amigo" And shot me.
Wait, i had another vision.
In the real world, he walked in, pulled out his Auoto gun, and was about to shoot me, when the man who was helping me pulled out his Ilecrily, and sliced the man's head off.
I kclimbed through the window, and he joined me.
"Why are yo doing this?"
"Why am i helping you? I need you alive."
"Im some sort of prisoner, huh?"
"Yep."
"That sucks."
"You have know idea."
"Well, my name is peppers."
"TransXDoc, nice to meet you."
"Come with me"
As we walked threw the ally, I pullede off my hunting blade, and used the butt of my blade to knock him out.
"Prisoner, aye? Not today."
I walked away, then got a message saying there is a guild meeting.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 07:51
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Chapter 3- The guild meeting.

I Walked in the hall, and heard our guild leader, Solumb, Talking.
"Everybody knows im 34500 cyclesw old, and i am going to die soon. I need a trustworthy offiecer, to take my place."
He looked among the crowd.
"Offecers, come up here."
As the offercers walked up here, the crowed claped for the respect of the officers.
"Shweebs, you are the most superior offecer, so there is no doubt that i would pick you."
"Shweebs, get to work as guildmaster. You have work to do."
He said that, smiling.
"Yes sir!"
"Im no Sir anymore, Your Sir."
"Thank you,"
"You've earned it."

"So, conragts Shweebs. Wanna do a Congradulations raid?"
I Said that, smiling.
"Sorry man, i have a ton of guild work to do."
"Ok man."
"But il go for a walk."
"What ever you want, Sir."
"I will never get used to that."
"Oh yes you will."
As they strolled threw the park, TransXDoc Had another vision.
"Hay!"
"Get down!"
TransXDoc shouted to the boy, running from the man shooting at him. He had sence of coldness, and fear arua around him.
Thats wierd, TransXDoc thought.
The man shot right after another man shouted, "GUN!!"
I know who that man is.
Its Dane.
The leader of the Crimsons?
Im no good with names.
But then, everbody dunked, and the gun fired. The man went to jail, then my vision was over.
"Another vision."
"Weird."
Then the vision repeated all over again, this was real life.
"It came true."
"What?"
"My vision, came, true."
Shweebs Stood in awe.
"Il go finish my Paper work."
Shweebs left.
TransXDoc walked through allies, till he came to a girl, and a brother.
It could be a father, TransXDoc thought.
Then he realized something.
The Poisidon key.
She were blue
Here name was blue.
But he needed more info.
He decided to follow her and here brother.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 13:20
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Fofo-Tails-Puppiez's picture
Fofo-Tails-Puppiez
Good This is interesting

but people can get really mad when there is a ton of spelling mistakes.It is really interesting anyway here are my other tips and some questions of mine

.Tails is about to go on a top secret mission.Do you want to be the medic?

. Some parts don't make sense at the intro but in chapter 2/3 you make it up with an awesome chapter.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 13:57
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Hayo

Thx for the info Fofo tails.
I DO Have a ton of spelling mistakes.
And yah someparts really dont make sence- gotta check over them.
And yes, The Docter (TransXDoc) Would love to be the medic on the team. Actually, il add enough chapters until I catch up to you alright man!?

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 14:06
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Fofo-Tails-Puppiez's picture
Fofo-Tails-Puppiez
Alright

Ok good friend and Happy Thanksgiving.Remember,Tails is the Hades key also you might wanna make a character application thing like this
Name and etc.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 14:23
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Chapter 4- The long chapter

They went to the beach, the park, the ice skating rink, every thing with water/ ice.
He knew it was her. He knew it!
Then finally, they went to the colosuim.
They were doing a underwater fight thing, and tails was in it.
Tails...Was that the boy running from that man?
Everbody knew that he has the key of hades, but I didn't know he was amazing with fighting.
A legendary man named wolverine was against Tails now, and tails might lose.
But, of cource tails had the levian blade- Wolverine's Secret Weakness.
Tails won the battle, but that wasn't why im here.
TransXDoc Looked down at the girl, and knowtest somthing strange.
The water in the tank closests to her was very clear. Like, Really clear.
It was true!
She had the key of Poisiden!!
"Now, what am i go-"
A man was about to kill blue, But TransXDoc Teleported behind him
"The Docter is Ready to See you"
He stab the man in the ribcage, and charged up his blade, and unleached a serese of stabs and slashes, which chopped him up into little peices.
Luckaly, blue didn't notice.
"Il stay here from now on" TransXDoc thought.

"I have to tell you somthing..."
"What is it?"
"I think you have the key of poisidon."
"That-....Its true" Her brother butted in
"IT'S TRUE?!?!?"
"Well, yes, but it wasn't the right tim-"
" I dont care! You shouldv'e told me!!"
"...."
They sat in silence for a bit, theen TransXDoc Had another vision.

A man walked up within the silence, and stabed blue in the back. Her brother pushed the man back, but the man unleached his gun's Awful power.

The vision ended.
Thats weired. I didnt get to see the gun's true power. TransXDoc thought.

Then, a man walked up to blue, But before he could do anything, He got shot in the head.
"Who the-"

Peppers couldn't here what TransXDoc said, but he was sure it was Who the heck?!

He walked inside the hall, and shot a man in the leg.
He quickly turned around, and sliced a man's head off.
He Teleported behind another man, obvisously an offecer, and said what he says.
"The Docter is ready to see you."
The Offecer's eyes widened with fear right before he didn't have a mouth.
Or a head, for that matter.

TransXDoc Teleported behind the guildmaster, and said,"I know poisidon."
"Huh?"
"The key. The poisidon key. I know where it is."
"Where is he?"
"Not a he. Its a she."
"Where!!?"
"We have to make a deal. Stop hating me, and trying to kill me, and il give her to train."
"Done."
"Onemore thing."
"What is that?"
"She has a brother."
"hmmm"
"Oh, one last thing."
"What?"
"You aren't the guild master. He is."
He pointed to the man in the seat next to the desk.
"How did you know?"
"You just now tolod me."
"....."
"The Docter is Ready to See you..."
"NOOO-"
He got no further.
A fire bomb exbloded on his desk.
The Dusty mist uncovered, leaving TransXDoc, bearing his sheild.
"Got that Dan?"
"Got it."
The guildmaster went back to work.

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 14:34
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Chapter 5- The team-or the short chapter

The crimson's guild was fine with TransXDoc from then on, but he was known as- "The Docter"
He also got to know Tails a bit more. He talked to him a bit, and told blue abot him too.
"Yah he is pretty nice i guiess. He is what'd you'd expect, really."
"Hmmm...."
"Thats all i guiess."

Tails ran up to TransXDoc and said,
"I heard you were good with potions and healing."
"The Best"
"Well i need to kill the gremlin president, and-"
"Count me in. The Docter is in your service."
"Thanks!"
Tails walked away, thinking, "That was easy."

"So Dane, Who do you think is the 3nd key?"
"Well, you're the key that gets us to the 3 keys, and we haev 2 keys- Tails and Poisidon. "
"Well, ive been studying a guy named alen, who might be Zues."
"Bring him to me."
"Il try."

Thu, 11/24/2011 - 14:35
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ok man

ok il post it happy thanksgiving!!

Sat, 11/26/2011 - 07:06
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Chapter 6- After the Team-The door

We Ran threw the open field towards the gate, leading to to elevator to ....whats it called? I always forget. I'm no good with names.
Anyways, We forced the gate open, and jumped into the elevator. We went to that town, And noticed Lord Vanduc doesn't really want us here.
Heh, I thought, Tough luck.
Blue was breaking in to the orphanedge, and took Aren, Who I think is the Zeus key.
I studied Tails.
He was a brave fellow, but Too sure of himself. He is an amzingg fighter, mabye even better than me!
All of a sudden, behind us came lord vanduke, who was about to pull out his sword, but tails jumped on him, and stabbed him 37 times in the chest.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3-vsynsE8RQ THats the joke

Vanduke fell to the ground, on the cold stone, laying still. I saw dane in the cornor, and nkew our deal isn't going to work. I Told tails secretly What daen is going to do, I know him the best. I studed him for years, and this is why. Tails heard this, and tossed his sword at Dane. He shot him in the head, and I knew he isn't dead. How stupid does he think I am? I told Tails this, and told him to think he is dead, but keep an eye on him. When we start opening the gates, he will surely attack you.
"Tails...I know you you trust me. And you think i'm not a key. Well, let me tell you this- I am the key that has brung us here. I had visions, that brung us as friends, and that has saved peoples lives, including blue's. I'm the one who saved your life when we were travleing down the clockworks killing monsters. I am a key- The key to getting here."
Tails thougth for a moment, and was about to say something, when Aren came.
When he came in, the door still would open, So he wasn't the key.
Arus walked down the stairs, and the door opened.
Arus was the key!
but there was another lock.
I walked up to it, and said-
"Sela Uncholas Hero san andranas portagoly to humbilnes."
"What the heck was that TransXDoc?!"
"I spoke from the heart. I spoke it God's talk. You know what i said."

(Tails)
I did. He said Open the $%^&ing Gates or il ^&**ing killl you.
Then the gates opened.

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