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Spiralmas special fanfic

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Mon, 12/05/2011 - 17:07
Valorai's picture
Valorai

December 5th
Pod
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Finally! After waiting so long my pod was starting to drift toward the planet! It had been a while since I was in this pod. I t would be good to finally be able to stretch our legs. Oh yea. In the pod with me were my 3 friends, Mightyputty, Scarkro, and Petunay. " Guys!" I said. "We're finally drifting towards the planet!" They started to wake up. Yes, they were asleep. "Really?" Mightyputty asked. "Took this pod long enough...." Petunay and Scarkro started a conversation with each other. So, I started to talk to Mightyputty. "What do you think will happen when we get down there?" I said. Mightyputty said, " I don't know. There will probably be a team coming to greet us. There even might be some natives there. For all we know, everyone died in there pods." That sent a shiver down my spine. "That won't happen to us right? I mean... It's not like theres no chance that we'll survive..." I looked out the pod's window. I desperately wanted to see where we were gonna land.

The whole planet was covered in a swirling mist.

Only yesterday, the planet looked as green as ever.

"Look at the planet" I said. Everyone looked. Mightyputty said, "I think our odds have an even less chance of surviving now."
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I will be writing 1 chapter every day, the last chapter will be on Christmas.

Tue, 12/06/2011 - 06:49
#1
Jmtheawesome's picture
Jmtheawesome
:O

Good

Tue, 12/06/2011 - 15:01
#2
Valorai's picture
Valorai
December 6th Pod

December 6th
Pod 10:24
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A day had passed, and we were starting to go faster to the planet.

"Mightyputty" I said. "What will happen when we go into the atmosphere?'

He said, "We'll go down at a great speed. The bottom of the pod will probably get burnt a little, so hang on to the walls. But it'll mostly depend on where we land. If we land in mountains, we'll die. If we land on water, we'll die. Probably the only SAFE spots are landing on treetops and plains."

That sounds grim, I thought. Scarkro noticed something. "Look over there!" he said. Outside, maybe 15 yards away, was another pod.

We all squeezed against the window. We could see inside the pod too. There were 2 knight together. One pink, and the other blue. They appeared to be fighting with each other. Then a green knight appeared. hE WAS IN THE SHADOWS. hE POINTED IN OUR DIRECTION. They saw us and waved. We waved back. Then they started to wave frantically. What were they trying to tell us? A huge thud made all 4 of us fall. A meteor had bumped us. We were not damaged though. The meteor headed straight for the other pod. When it hit the pod a small chunk of it fell off. They all appeared to be fine.

The rest of the day was uneventful.

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Wed, 12/07/2011 - 16:10
#3
Valorai's picture
Valorai
December 7th Pod 4:23

December 7th
Pod 4:23 P.M
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Finally! By the end of the day, we'll either be dead, or exploring the planet! So.. 50% chance I guess....

The knights in the next pod were still sleeping. What would it take to wake them up? Petunay took one look at them and said, " They're dead."

We all looked up. "What? " we said. "They're eyes aren't on. And they are not sleeping."

"How did it happen?" Scarkro asked. "I think the meteor took an important piece with it. Something that keeps us alive."

We all looked down. There went some friends to help find our way around....
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9:47
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This was it. We were hurtling toward the ground. We all braced ourselves. It looked like we were going to land in a snowy landscape. And there were mountains. Not good. I looked out the window. The pod with dead knights was still there. When we had to be no farther than 200 yards from the ground it burst into flames. We all prepared for the same. There was a crash, incredible pain, then nothing. I waited.
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11:59
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Was I dead? Was I alive? Time to face the truth. I opened my eyes.
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Thu, 12/08/2011 - 15:07
#4
Valorai's picture
Valorai
December 8th pod

December 8th
pod 12:00AM
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I opened my eyes and saw nothing. It was too dark to see anything now. "Nothings going to happen" I thought. "I should just take a nice nap...."
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?:?? ??
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I woke up. Petunay and Mightyputty were looking at me. "Are you OK?" Petunay asked.

"Yea I'm fine" I said.

It was light enough to see that our pod had landed safely. There was a huge whole in the pod to see outside. Out there it was snowing. The sky was bright though. I got out of the pod. "Wheres Scarkro?" I asked. "I dont know" Mightyputty said.

"He wasn't here when we woke up."

"So what should we do?" I asked

Mightyputty said, "Lets look around.

So we went into the trees.

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After maybe an hour of walking things were looking better. There were trails. That should lead us to people. Once in a while we heard dozens of tiny footsteps but we never saw anything.

"Lets stop" Petunay said. She was breathing heavily. We agreed to rest for 5 minutes.

5 minutes later we started again. This time our legs felt 20 times there weight. I felt like there was something on my leg. When I touched my leg something on it felt cold and scaly. 5 feet behind us we heard a yelp. 10 Chameleon like creatures appeared out of nowhere. "What are they" I asked mightyputty.

"I don't know" he said. But I don't tthink they're friendly. We started to run soon they caught up with us. We turned around and started hitting the creatures with our sword. Thankfully, they were easily defeated.

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Rescue camp
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Scarkro had found the camp and began to collect food to bring back to his friends. He heard something coming from the white forest. His friends walked up the stairs.

"Oh good" he said. "You're here."

"Yep" I said. "What do you think this place is?" "Looks like a camp" Petunay said. "Well I think we should stay here for a while." Mightyputty said.

"How long?" Scarkro asked.

"As long as the food can keep us alive."

Thu, 12/08/2011 - 15:37
#5
Fallconn's picture
Fallconn
character entry :D

name:Falcon

Personality:Heroic,Helpful,Funny

Gear,Vog cub set, Wild hunting blade, Polaris, Divine Avenger, Acheron, Grand flourish, Heavy plate shield

Color:Red

Likes: Being heroic and beating the crud out of enemys

Dislikes: All foes

Gender: Male

Other:Sometimes in a fit of rage will throw aside his sword and beat enemies with his flaming fists of fury

Thu, 12/08/2011 - 16:11
#6
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Er... I didn't ask for

Er... I didn't ask for anybody to join..... Maybe I could put you in somehow....

No one else though plz.

Fri, 12/09/2011 - 14:43
#7
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I dont feel like writing much today....

December 9th
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Today we just ate and stayed at the rescue camp.

Sat, 12/17/2011 - 14:41
#8
Jamoo's picture
Jamoo
ooo

Nom Nom Nom Nom...can I haz food?

Sat, 12/17/2011 - 15:44
#9
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Hey!

Change the title to Winterfest special fanfic.

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 23:15
#10
Windsickle's picture
Windsickle
Bu... A chapter a day, huh?

Bu... A chapter a day, huh? Oh well.

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