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Sat, 12/24/2011 - 08:32
Valorai's picture
Valorai

Apparently, my 2 other fanfics: The way it was before... And A new threat are not looked at.

Im hoping to make a new fanfic that more people will post on. Does anyone care about those other fanfics anymore?!

This new fanfic is a Mystery.
~~~~~~~
I woke up in a cold sweat.

I panted and shivered. "I had the dream again" I thought.

The dream was the same every time. I woke on the platform that was next to the core. I was bloody and bruised and a terrible laugh echoed in my ears. I saw another knights silhouette but nothing else about him/her. Then something scary happened. In the dream, I screamed, "NO!" at the person. It jumped, or fell? Of the platform and was going to land on the core. When it was just about to touch it my vision faltered and could see blackness. Then... I heard the screams of every spiralian that walked on cradle.

Then... I felt a knights arm on me. It was dragging me somewhere. I felt it throw me... Then I was falling...

For the 7th time this month, I had that terrible dream. And today was January 7th. I looked outside my window and saw Haven beginning to stir. The sun was coming out and there were knights preparing for another day into the clockworks.

One knight in a Ash tail set looked at me. In his eyes I saw the very same darkness on my dream.

I backed away from the window, the knight still staring at me. I tripped over something on the floor and fell with a yelp.

When I looked up I saw the knight. Looking down at me, I saw his eyes. Black. Darkness. Nothingness. He lifted me up as if I weighed nothing. I knew, he was in my dream. Whether he was the one who dragged me, or who jumped/fell off the platform.

His Sword in his hand, he stabbed me. Again and again. He threw me to the floor. I was dead.

Wait... I was dead? How was it I could still see and everything?

"Oh Blast...." I thought. "Another dream..." "When will the nightmare end?"

I heard a voice. It said, "When you come and do your part in Cradles fate. All people will die. Everyone. Come to me, and we shall be able to prepare you..."

I woke up.
~~~~~~

Im not sure if I will be accepting people for this fanfic but I will consider ALL applications.

If you do apply, I would prefer knights, but you're bio would have to fit in with the story very well.

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 09:13
#1
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
Dusk Knight Crimson ( color

Dusk
Knight
Crimson ( color )
Divine veil, skolver coat, grey owlite shield, acheron, voltedge, voltaic tempest,daring rigadoon
Tri-heart pendant, slash module
Friendly , good fighter , rarely smiles
Bio: (not too good at making a bio) can you make one up?

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 09:24
#2
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I think I can put you in.

I think I can put you in.

Sun, 12/25/2011 - 06:18
#3
Mysticbeam's picture
Mysticbeam
:D

Mystic
Were-trojan
t3 trojan in trojan form, a ninja in half vog/divine veil in knight form :P
loyal to dusk, a great fighter, has a sarcastic sense of humor
bio: the fweakin king of trojans, was once a knight but was cursed into being a were-trojan by the konjuring kat. he can shange from trojan to knight and viice versa at will.

Sun, 12/25/2011 - 06:59
#4
Softhead's picture
Softhead
What!!!

I'm waiting for A New Threat and All those Years Ago...

Mine(Almire Renaissance) Is dead...

I'm Hoping Excalibur is popular!

Name: Matt 'Enigma'
Personality: Thoughtful, Mysterious, Assertive
Equips: Mighty Colbalt set, Callahan, Blitz Needle, Virulent Catalizer, Blackened crest.
Bio: A smart knight who has a guild like buissness called ''Mystery'' that solves mysteries in Haven. He has a good reputation that earned him ''Enigma'' a nickname. When somthing happens all over the planet, he wants to solve it(what happenes is atagtg's oppinon)

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 07:09
#5
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Chapter 2: Dark Days

Chapter 2: Dark Days ahead.

~
The next day
~
I had had it. The dream was there again. Why wouldn't it go away. Ever since I woke up I swore I would find out whats happening. I thought that the voice in my dream might actually have been real. But where would I search? Haven? Or the clockworks? It would take a long time either way...

I decided to stop wasting time and look around Haven. When I looked at the auction house for over an hour I realized that was silly.

So I went to the Bazaar.

Before I left I saw a knight staring at me. Not like the knight in the dream. He looked... Curious.

"I should move on" I thought.

I arrived in the Bazaar to find no one there. "Strange" I hought. "Theres always some strangers here. There was one knight that came.

He wore a..... he wore somthing. It was too tattered and worn to tell what it was. He looked at me and smiled.

I had a feeling he was the one who talked to me in my dream. So I walked up tp him.

"Are you the one...." I said. I didn't finish the sentance because I didn't want some stranger to think I'm crazy if he's not the one.

He nodded. I couldn't believe it.

"oh good." I said. "I thought I'd have to look all day for you."

"You really think I would let you do all that pointless searching?" he questioned.

I assumed that was rhetorical. 'What do you want with me?" I said.

He said, "Follow me."

He left and I followed. "Where are we going" I asked. He yelled back at me, "To safe place!"

We went through all the alleyways and some passages I didn't know about in Haven.

"Are we getting close?" I asked anxiously.

He stopped next to a wall. "Look" he said.

He went through the wall. I reallized my mouth was gaping I closed it, and moved toward the wall. I touched it, and felt tingly inside. A hand reached out and pulled me in. As I passed through I suddenly heaRD the rush of water. Looking around, I saw there was a small and calm stream 5 yards in front of me. The ground was green, and I think there was a waterfall somewhere.

"What do you think of my home?" he asked.

I said, "It's amazing!". I enjoyed nature.

There was another knight there. He was the one looking at me at the auction house.

He walked over to me and said, "Hello! Glad to have you on board!"

"What?"

"Well... You... You ARE going to help us right?" he said.

"I haven't told her yet." the knight said to the ...er... other knight.

"What are you're names?" I asked.

"I'm Dusk." one of them said. He was the one who looked at me. Me shaked hands.

"I can't tell you my name yet." The other one said.

"So... Why did you bring me here?" I asked.

Dusk grew serious. "We need you to save cradle."
~

Ok heres the people in:

Dusk (If you didn't just read the chapter)
MAYBE I'll put in Atrumvindex.

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 10:00
#6
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
yay im in!

B-D

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 19:55
#7
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Chapter 3: What has been

Chapter 3: What has been foretold...

~
I laughed at them. "Cradle is perfectly safe" I said. "Theres no problem here besides the natives. And they have proven to be easy prey."

"You talk like one of the killers." the mysterious knight says.

"Killers?" i asked. "Killers." He said. "They are those knights who care only about killing and have a lust for blood."

"No! I love nature! I didn't mean that..... Well.... Sorry!!" i said.

"I understand" he replied. "Now. I must tell you about the fate of cradle." I stood silent, waiting for the explanation. "For over 10,000 years cradle has been peaceful. When we arrived we disrupted the peace. The core will open."

"Wait wait wait... The core will open? That's great!! I wonder what's inside!" I said.

He responded coldly, "Death. Death and pain and suffering. That's what's in the core." he looked to the ground. "3 of my friends sacrificed themselves so that we could love a while longer. But soon it will all be over.... That is.. Unless you help us." He looked at me. "Will you please help us?"

"Well.. err.... I guess so. I could use a run to the core. Lets's go to Emberlight then." I said. He stopped me. "No. we must start at the first depth." He said.

"What, why?" I said. He replied, "Too many questions. I will answer once we leave."

~
Depth 1
~
"Ok, if you don't start answering my questions i'm going to be leaving" I said. "I'll answer you're questions" Dusk said. He walked next to me. "What do you want to know?"

"Well first..... What did he mean by all that in the core?" I asked. "I'm not sure myself. My best guess is that the core contains some kind of monster" Dusk said.

"Hm..." I thought. "Why does he want ME to come along?" I asked. He turned to face me, "You've had the dreams yes?" he asked. I said, "If you mean those nightmares I've had lately then yes." I told him. He said, "Then the planet has chosen you."

I didn't want to move further into the subject. "Wouldn't it be easier for us to have more people to come along?" I asked. "Others will come." he said. "And when they do, we must leave you." he said.

"WHAT?!" I yelled. "I don't know what this is about, what I should do..." I stopped. "How do you even know that I won't just go back to Haven once you leave?" I asked smugly.

He simply said with a cold stare, "Don't."
~

1k cr to the man/woman who guesses who the mysterious man is!

Hint: I wouldn't give you a hint. You think I WANT to lose 1k cr?

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 20:13
#8
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
Enigma

Enigma

Wed, 12/28/2011 - 21:29
#9
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Nice story so far! Still

Nice story so far! Still awaiting the new chapters of A New THreat and THe Way it Was Before... they haven't been updated in a while...

Might as well try to submit a character.

Name:Necro

Gender:Male

Equipts: Shockburst Brandish, Solid Cobalt Helm, Magic Hood, Khorovod, Jalovec, FLourish, Bristling Buckler, Static Capacitor, Super Blast Bomb, Wolver Coat with UV Freeze Med. which he doesn't wear, and 5 cobalt Helms all wiht UVs (Stun Low, Shadow Low, Shadow Medium, Curse Low, and Normal Max. THey're all for sale, along with the wolver coat! :D) which he also doesn't wear.

Personality: Shadowy, doesn't talk much. Tends to keep away from people, which sort of clashes with his job, since he's a bounty hunter. He isn't evil, but will work for evil people, as long as they pay more than everyone else.

Appearance: Like a normal SK guy, but one of his eyes is black instead of his ordinary red. He keeps his two heavy swords in a special double-sheath on his back, his Shockburst and Flourish in 2 belt sheaths, his Bombs in 2 bandoliers criss-crossing his chest, his shield tied to his left hand, and the stuff with UVs in a pack on his back. (hey, that ryhmes!)

Bio: Used to be a SK, discovered unknown passageway, managed to escape barely alive, but a bit of the Swarn had infected him, making him what he is today.

If the bio doesn't work, you can just make him an ordianry Knight or something.

As for the mystery guy, I also think he's Enigma.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 01:08
#10
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Enigma!

I know my own character when I see him!

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 01:11
#11
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
....

Is Matt the character you clobbered together from your ideas mixed in with Zenith?

Just askin.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 01:16
#12
Softhead's picture
Softhead
@Psychodestroyer

Are you asking me? If so, I cobbled it from Zenith and Max pre amesia from obversation. It would be better if you asked me on my own fanfic. If you want, you can make your own character to replace the cobbled character.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 01:28
#13
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Psychodestroyer
Oh

If you need characters, I have one. Whether or not you use him at all...

ANYWAY. Here he is.

Name: Grey
Personality: Loner. Cold, and a fighter. Keeps to himself a lot.
Equips: Grey Feather Cowl, Chaos Cloak, Ascended Calibur and a Dark Thorn shield.
Bio: No-one knows much about him. He is seen randomly, often following events of destruction. He will help others when in dire danger, but says nothing unless absolutely CRUCIAL. If need be, he will fight until he can no longer move, but his motives are completely in the dark.
Also, he seems to know more about most things than he should...

EDIT:
EEP. Nvm Atrum. I was just curious if that character WAS who I thought he was. Thanks, and no need about changing and all.

EDIT EDIT: This entry was my own entry for this fic. Not a replacement for existing ones.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 07:09
#14
Valorai's picture
Valorai
No, it IS NOT Enigma. Keep

No, it IS NOT Enigma.

Keep guessing.

Chapter 4: Beginning the Journey
~
In the wolver den we cut through the waves like a blade. By the time we got to the end of the depth, we decided to take a break.
‘I have 2 health pills and a fire vial, and a freeze vial. What vials do you have?” Dusk asked. “I have a pill and curse vial” I said. The mystery man didn’t have any. He stood up and said, “Time to go.”
“WHAT?!” I said. “Already? We haven’t completed a single depth! What am I supposed to do? And what does all this have to do with my dream?
“You will find out as you continue through the clockworks” he said. “And remember. Companions will come.”
I watched as they went up the elevator, leaving me alone.
Now, I had to decide whether to go on, or forget about the whole thing.
I made a small list of pros and cons.

Going back to Haven
Pros: I won’t have to see those weirdoes again.
Cons: I might miss a chance to find out what my dream meant. The world might end.

It was pretty obvious what would be the good choice.

I went down to depth 2.

~

As the first wave of mecha bots ran toward me I clenched my sword in my grip.
They stopped a few yards in front of me when the first one spoke.
I didn’t know mecha bots could talk…..
It said, “You are the savior, yes?”

“Errr…… Yes?” I said. I certainly did not want to fight them.

“Come with us” It said.

“The gremlins will be coming for you. And they’re coming for your blood.”

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 07:27
#15
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
Mystic?

Mystic?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 07:28
#16
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
o_o

Or is it me? And the other guy is pretending to be me?!

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 10:11
#17
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Nope

Nope

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 10:46
#18
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
Another person u made up?

Another person u made up?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 10:51
#19
Softhead's picture
Softhead
I am clueless.

Must be your own character.

BTW, Excalibur has been updated with mystic's intro.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 13:17
#20
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Do you give up? If I get 4

Do you give up?

If I get 4 people saying they give up Ill tell you who he is.

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 14:58
#21
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
...

It MUST be your own character, unless you borrowed him fro someone else's story...

Did you?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 15:13
#22
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
IF you borowed.. that guy

IF you borowed.. that guy would fit one of my many characters quite well.

I'm gonna go out on a oimb here, is he Necro?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 16:14
#23
Valorai's picture
Valorai
I didn't BORROW anyone. In

I didn't BORROW anyone. In fact, I dont think this person was ever metioned before in treasure vault

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 17:09
#24
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Psychodestroyer
D:

THEN HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO GUESS WHO HE IS!?

OK. Then I rule out Batman, because he never says 'please'.

I'm guessing someone like Halt From Ranger's apprentice...

OK. I GUESS ATGATG.

JUST BECAUSE. PROBLEM?

Thu, 12/29/2011 - 17:35
#25
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Necroterra
@ Psychodestroyer

LOL Halt in Spiral Knights...

I give up.

BTW Lordofnecromancers this bio of you character:

"Bio: Used to be a SK, discovered unknown passageway, managed to escape barely alive, but a bit of the Swarn had infected him, making him what he is today."

When did you come up w/ that idea? Cuz its weird that you and me came up with the exact same thing :P

Fri, 12/30/2011 - 16:40
#26
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Ok Im gonna tell you. He's

Ok Im gonna tell you. He's Grantz. In the Alpha squad.

Chapter 5: Meeting "Enigma" and Kirogen.
~
As the mechas led them deeper into the depth, I was thinking of escape routes and other things to help ensure my survival. They all stopped, my guess was that we arrived. The first thing I noticed was the FWEAKING 10 foot tall trojan in a stage of some sort. With it there was a mecha bot that seemed to give of something that said he was in charge. I yelled over to him and asked what he wanted. "I want to ensure you survival to the core" it said in a mechanical voice.

He continued, "As we said earlier, the gremlins are looking for you so that they can kill you."

I asked, "Why would they want to kill me?" "Because they want every thing else on the planet to die. As you know, they are experts at building. We saw that they had made something to protect them in the coming days."

I thought for a moment. "Why would you mechas want to help us? You are robots that work for the gremlins! I don't think I can even trust you!" I-

It cut me off. "We CHOOSE to help you because we can. And we would also be destroyed when the day comes. And as for our gremlin masters... We became too smart for them and escaped them."

I decided that I was safe. "Why have you brought me here?" I asked.

"Because of me" I heard a gruff voice say. I turned and saw the trojan walking toward me. "I'm here to help, and protect you."

I heard someone say, "I will also be coming on your journey." I saw that a knight was walking toward me. "Kirogen" he said and extended his arm. "Blue" I said and shook his hand.

"So when are we to leave?" I asked the mecha.

"Immediantly" he said. All of the mecha bots raised their guns and fired me. I was knocked out immediantly.
~
20 minutes later
~
I woke up with my head throbbing. I was at the spot where the mechas first talked to me. Beside me were the trojan and Kirogen. Apparently they were waiting for me to wake up because Kirogen said, "Finally awake sleepy-head? We need to go, we have a long journey ahead of us."

We started walking and I realized I didn't know the trojans name. I asked and he said, "I'm Mystic."

I said, "We''l Mystic, I'm glad to meet you. And based of what the mechas said we'll need you."

Mon, 01/02/2012 - 10:47
#27
Valorai's picture
Valorai
No comments? How can I make

No comments? How can I make this fanfic better?

Chapter 6: A furry situation.
~
We descended into the first depth of the gloaming wildwoods. It was darker and much more creepy than any other part of the clockworks. I don't think any trojans ever come here, so Mystic had a disadvantage.

"No wonder my species never comes here..." Mystic said. "It's so overgrown with plants we trip easily." The familiar wave of wolvers came to attack us. We had all had many encounters with wolvers and dealt with them easily. As we battled more, and got closer to the gate, I asked Kirogen how he got mixed up in this nonsense. "Well, I kept having these dreams that were freaky. So I found a knight that told me to go to the mechas." "Same thing happened to me" I said. "But he helped me get through a few depths then he left." A wolver popped up next to me and lunged at my throat. Kirogen simply thrusted his sword forward, stunning the wolver on contact.

"Thanks" I said
"No problem"

Soon enough, we got to the gate and headed for the second depth. The population of wolvers here was thick,, and we had to use a health pill or two. We stopped to rest on a log for a moment. I drank from my water canteen and saw a pair of blood red eyes looking at me. Almost hypnotized, I started walking towards it. "No" Kirogen said. He grabbed my hand and held me back. "Don't look at it" He said. Soon it went back into the dark shadows and left us alone. I snapped out of my trance and thanked Kirogen. As we went along more dangers popped up.

~
Somewhere in a gremlin laboratory
~
"Project Roarmulus was a failure." Sinkre said. "But this should deal with those pesky knights." "What are you calling it, sir?" Trocle asked.

"I'll call it.... Project "Shadows"" he said. "That fits the project well" Trocle said. They both looked at their sinister creation. It looked right back at them. "Before we set it free we should give it a test." Sinkre said. "Those knights headed to the core is just what we need."

The gremlins set the thing free. Faster then the eye could see, it ran off to find the knights. "Set to kill?" Trocle said. "No. Set to capture." Sinkre said.

Mon, 01/02/2012 - 17:59
#28
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Chapter 7: Snarbolax ~ As we

Chapter 7: Snarbolax
~
As we went to face the snarbolax, a conflict was erupting in my head. I thought, "Should I keep going? Or should I just go back to Haven?"

We were coming up to the site were the Snarbolax always comes to fight. As usual the snarbolax came up. We put our shields up and went to the bell. Mystic, however, trojan charged into the snarbolax. Since he didn't know what the snarbolax was, he didn't know that it did absolutely no damage. He kept pushing the snarbolax until I couldn't see it anymore. We saw it come barreling our way, and we hit the bell just as it came to us. Stunned, it stumbled right into our swords. It fell, and we collected some frumorious fangs. We heard some snarbolaxs in the distance. We quickly went down the elevator, into Moorcraft manor.
~

Small chapter because I already made one today.

Tue, 01/03/2012 - 04:18
#29
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
I like it :l

I like it :l

Tue, 01/03/2012 - 05:02
#30
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Witalon
Can i still join?

Can i stiil join? If i can here is my character.

Name: Witalon

Gender: Male

Personality: friendly, timid, loves to blow stufs with his bomb, graveyards and phantoms scare him, dont like to talk with strangers, alway smiling

Equips: mad bomber set, RSS, DBB, AoA and Shivermist buster,

Bio: spiral order found him in FSC when he was baby, nobody now how was hes really parents and nobody never told him that he was found in FSC (you can change bio if you want)

Thu, 01/05/2012 - 23:52
#31
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Faronel
This story is going really

This story is going really good. May I still join?

Kantint
Name: Kantint

Race: Spiralian

Equipment: Mercurial Demo Set, has a large variety of bombs, but usually uses a Big Angry Bomb, Electron Vortex, and a Valance.

Abilities: Can hide freakishly well, especialy in shadows.

Bio: After his friends and family had been killed by, uh... crazy people, he became a scientist for the Spiral Order. He Usually doesn't like to talk about it, though. He still owns a poket watch given to him by his best friend long ago. Only a few of the oldest knights know of his past.

Personality: Very wise and smart. Sometimes cold-hearted. Will only help when it is absolutly need, otherwise he will just watch. Sometimes pops out of nowhere. Doesn't stay around others for very long.

Facts: Is VERY skilled at fighting.

Fri, 01/06/2012 - 14:36
#32
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Sorry, Im using the ammount

Sorry, Im using the ammount of characters I was planning, so It would have to be a REALLY good appliacataoin for me to accept.

Fri, 01/06/2012 - 20:49
#33
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Isisdelltion
Okay

Well, I'll give it my best then.

Name:Vot

Race:Spiralian

Equipment:Solid Cobalt, An Acended Calibur and a Master Blaster

Abilities:A strong leader, who values cleverarity (I don't know if thats a real word) over brute strength. Fairly good with engineering, although he is much better at building something from scratch than acually fixing something.

Bio: After destroying the Skylark, he worked himself into a secret branch of the Spiral Order that even he doesn't even know about. (This is after the first mission, but before the first).

Personality: Nice, but pretty ruthless when it come down to the nitty-gritty. He is sometimes very awkward, and even a bit weird.

If you don't want him, its fine, but can you at least try to wedge him in at some point, just as a very minor character?

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