Chapter 1- "A Letter From Cradle"
*A Letter From Cradle*~ A New Born Deity
Dear Vaelyn,
"I do not know where I am. I cannot tell who's an ally during the night. I have lost the feeling of fear and my memory became staggered. Why am i HERE? I tried to meditate while I searched for my comrades.Along the gloaming paths, I walked alone. After several intervals of loneliness, I discovered a feathery fellow. I couldn't depict whether it was prey or predator, but that didn't matter. I found a living creature. I found a friend. For some eccentric reason, I named it Snipe. Snipe loathed fiendish dwellings as I figured when he saw the charm on my necklace so I kept it hidden within my arsenal. A couple miles later, snipe fell asleep. I let him rest on my hat which I laid on the ground for his comfort. While I managed to stay awake, I heard squeals that howled throughout the night. It caught my curiosity so I began to race towards the voices. As I entered the vicinity of the squeals, I was surrounded by wolves. Desperately I vanished as quick as I could have dashing my way through bushes and thorns. I took a peek behind and no wolves were present. I wondered why they didn't chase me, but then...I saw a shadow. It's ambiguous thorns pierced the ground. The shadow came closer and closer while I ran faster and faster! Whenever I looked, It was several foots behind me! After I grew fatigue, I hurdled onto the ground and thought that I was finished. As the shadow came closer and closer, my memories were brightening. My charm developed the look of a skeleton. As the shadow attached itself to me, I became fearless. As the shadow engulfed me I became your enemy.As the shadow gazed upon my pupils I became a...murderer. I became.................................................Snarbolax"
From..............Vain Oz Graywolf
The Devine Hunters.
Author's Questions and Comments.
I thought that the letter format would create a unique introduction to the story so I decided to implement it.
Did you guys like it? It was my first fan fiction for SK. If you guys like it, I'll make more chapters :D. For those who opposed, please leave a comment on how and what I should improve upon. Thank you.
If you guys want, Feel free to create a character which you think that can relate to this story. Be Sure to include the:
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Species:
Personality:
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I will note these characters as "Devine Hunters" (It's spelt wrong but there's a good reason within the story)
Jayme Marini has dozed off.
I think its good but im having trouble figuring out What is going on.
Name: Chie (Pronounced: Chee)
Species: Very small skolver
Personality: Friendly curious, cautious, freindly to friends. Ferocious to enemies. Doesn't make friends easily. Attacks first, asks questions later.
Background: Cold and desperate, Chie was abandoned by her pack and was captured by knights. They abused and gave her a metal scar. Apparently these knights were bad because some knights attacked her captors. They freed her but implanted a device so that they could track her. She has no idea whether knights are good or bad.
Other: Sometimes she is good. But most of the time she is evil. (Perhaps she can be saved?)