Spiral Knights - Spiralstory Prequel: The Kradel

Spiralstory Prequel: The Kradel

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Wed, 01/11/2012 - 18:09

Frostrex

Now, before you tell me this is someone else's work, I know. I asked, and if you don't believe me, you can ask Isis.

Disaster Master

Vot was walking into the building where he and his friends had decided to do some revolutionary weapon testing. In secret, of course. Weapon testing without permission from the Spiral Order was illegal. It was just lucky that one of his best friends, Kiri, had managed to secure the old abandoned warehouse. He had brought everything they needed. He was sure.

Kiri had to wait in the warehouse with Frostrex while she waited for the one hour late Vot. "Seriously, what's taking him so long?"
"Its Vot. What do you expect? He's always late to stuff, especially this type of stuff. He's probably nervous about another Mecha Crab trying to claw his face off again." Frost tried not to laugh.

"Yeah," she replied. "That was kinda funny. But he's still pretty mad about us completely destroying it."
"We didn't completely destroy it," Frost argued. "We just, kinda, tore it apart."
"Whatever."
Frost rolled his eyes because of his bad timing while Kiri giggled. Vot was stepping over to them. "Are we ready?"
"If anyone finds out," Frost warned. "It was your idea."
"I'm with Frosty," Kiri said, knowing that the sentence would annoy both of them. "Don't call me 'Frosty'", Frostrex whined. Vot wouldn't let his annoyance show, but he hated people picking sides.

"Alright, I've got everything in place,' Vot said, starting the invention. It was a Temepered Calibur with a motor attached, along with spikes on a chain."Motor running, spikes not jamming, Mod Calibrator in pla-"
"Wait, Mod Calibrator?" Frost said quickly. "Oh, shi-"
The exprimental device literally jumped out of Vot's hands and sawed into Frost's armour, wounding the Knight's chest. He managed to pull it out with some help from Vot and Kiri. Vot went to tend to his friend's wounds while Kiri kept stamping her foot on the machine. Somehow, Vot was sure he would let it slide this time.

Now for the binary version, because I was bored:

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Yeah, try and figure that out. Chapter 2 coming soon.

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 19:02

Isisdelltion

YAY

YAY! BINARY!

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 19:28

Frostrex

Yeah, I just found a binary

Yeah, I just found a binary translator and decided to write in that.

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 19:32

Isisdelltion

Binariationafication

Well, who doesn't like like Binary?

Wed, 01/11/2012 - 19:35

Frostrex

It does my head in.

Thu, 01/12/2012 - 01:44

Frostrex

Chapter 2!!!!

Stupidity

"Vot, you gotta be kidding me! Not only were you illeagally testing weapons, you convinced two of your friends, one of which is an official Order Knight and injured someone!!"
"I'm sorry." That's all Vot could say to the doctor, Herb, who was extremely angry with the young inventor because of his most recent stuff up. It was the third time that week. The last time, it was to get a mechanical claw off of his helmet.
"Is 'sorry' going to fix Frost's ribs?" Herb yelled.
"I guess not," Vot mumbled.
"You 'guess'? What do you mean you 'guess'?!"
Kiri was sitting next to Vot, obviously annoyed. She never much liked Herb.
"Oooowwww," She groaned.
"'Ooww' what?" The doctor turned.
"Do you have anything for headaches?"

"Okay, the special medicine I gave him has starting mending his ribs and closing the wound," Herb said, apparently calmed down. "As long as the bandage stays in place, they should pop back together perfectly. You can go see him now." He sat at his desk to read a newspaper or something.

Vot knocked at the door. "Hello?"
"Hey, Vot, my best of friends, come on in!"
"Whoa, um, what did he give you?"
"Oh, I don't know, something so I didn't fell him pluck the spikes right out of me," Frost said, his voice turning bitter at 'pluck'.
"Look, I'm sorry about that. It's easy to get Mod Calibrators mixed up with Calibration Mods."
"I'm pretty sure any 'engineer' wouldn't let that happen." Vot couldn't believe it! Frost was so angry that he was insulting his ability to build.
"Well, I'm sure any 'fighter' would smash it out of the way with his sword," Vot retorted.
"It was my sword."
"Oh, um... Yeah... Well... Yeah, I got nothing."
"Guys, can we seriously stop arguing?" Kiri stepped in. "Its over, okay?"
"Yeah, alright." Vot was happy to be friends with Kiri. She knew when things like this had to stop.
"Whatever." Frost had a hard time letting things go, especially arguments he didn't win.

"He can go now," Herb suddenly walked in. "Just be careful and don't mess around with weapons anymore."
"Yessir." Vot was still feeling a little too guilty. Frost saw this guilt. "I forgive you," he said. Vot looked up at him in surprise. "Are you sure you're feeling alright?"
"I'm fine," Frostrex laughed.

Next chapter! And things get worse...

Sorry, no binary this time, Isis.

Thu, 01/12/2012 - 13:51

Isisdelltion

NOES!

NO BINARY? D:

Thu, 01/12/2012 - 23:50

Faronel

FUN!

Yay. Bianary. Then no bianary. FUN!

Fri, 01/13/2012 - 00:03

Frostrex

And things get worse... Vot,

And things get worse...

Vot, Kiri and Frost were walking down the road that led to their homes. Fortunately, they lived in the same street, which was weird at the same time. "Well, that certainly didn't go well," Vot said glumly.
"What do you mean 'didn't go well'? It was a complete disaster!," Kiri continued, "not only did you break Frost's ribs, but Frost slipped on the way out, snapping his newly fixed ribs and then we had to wait another two hours while Herb gave us another lecture about reading signs and safety, while we waited for his ribs to mend again!"
"In my defense, the stuff he gave me disorients people," Frost said.
"Okay, it was more then bad, but at least we now know that a Chain-Calibur doesn't work." Vot was attempting to be optimstic. Frost was the pessimest.
"It would have worked, if you hadn't of put the wrong device on," Kiri snapped.
"Hey, like I told Frost, it's eas-"
A black bar cut him off, sending him to the ground. "Oooowww, what the?"
Another hit Frost, but he had spun, so he managed to block it. Kiri did the same.

There were three men standing there, cloaked by the darkness of the alley they'd turned down before. "What do you want?" Vot yelled, trying to sound brave. But that wasn't easy dazed. "We want you," one of them said. Another baton to Vot's face knocked him out cold. Frostrex punched the one who'd attacked Vot, and managed to put him to the ground, but one of the others hit him, sending him sprawling onto the cold pavement. Kiri threw a punch, but it was caught. She then met a wall of black.

They all awoke in the back of a vehicle. "Woohoo," Frost said sarcastically, "I wonder if things can get worse."
"Probably," Vot said. "They always do in situations like this. You know, tied up in the back of an unknown vehicle, three mysterious men, black batons, I could expand that list."
"Please, don't," Frostrex said.
"Come on, why not? We're really not doing anything else." Vot argued.
"Its not gonna help us out of this situation, now, is it?"
"No, but it'll distract us from what our fates might be."
"Now you've made it worse!"
"JUST SHUT UP!!!"
The boys instantly stopped their arguing. Kiri was still breathing heavily. "Sorry," Frost and Vot said in unison. The van stopped. They had arrived.
"Fantastic."

"Now, you'll wanna know why your here," said an Order proffesor.
"I'll also wanna know why I have a bruise on the side of my face," Frost said angrily.
"Errr... yeah, that too," the scientist replied. "Come, I'll explain it all."

Fri, 01/13/2012 - 15:37

Frostrex

APPS!!!!

Yes, things are terribly bad...

"So, as you can see, you are in a top secret Spiral Facility," the scientist, whose name was Clyde(lol, I don't know), told them.
"I would know if I could see!" Kiri yelled angrily. They were still pretty hurt from the beating they took just hours before.
"Um, yes, I'm deeply sorry about that," Clyde apologised, "but we simply could not risk you knowing where our base is."
"You could have asked us nicely to get in the van," Frost said.
"But then you wouldn't have come."
"EXACTLY!"
"Guys, can we seriously hear what he has to say?"
Vot was seriously starting to get annoyed. Why couldn't his friends just get over it and shut up?
"Fine," Kiri said reluctantly.
"Good. Thank you..."
"Vot."
"Vot, yes. Thank you. Now, the reason you're here is because, we need some highly skilled civillians, which two of you are, to combat an invasion that happened recently," Clyde continued, "in the wilderness. We don't know the exact nature of this, but we know how dangerous the attackers are. We've already lost five very good men to it."
"So, why do you need us?" Frost asked. "Kiri's the only Knight here."
"Well, we need a very specialized team. We need," he motioned to Vot, "a very skilled inventor, a," This time it was Frost, "reckless, but skilled warrior, and," Kiri, "a very level-headed leader."
"That's it?" Vot was curious.
"No. We need a demolitions expert, a recon knight, a medical proffesional and a computer genius.'
"Hhhmmm, that does sound specialized," Kiri chimed in.
"Yes, and they are arriving just now."

And as the scientist said this, another van drove in, and four Spiralians stepped out.

Now, this is where you app. Only four will be chosen, but one is reserved for Isis, as they are the creator of Vot, Kiri and the Spiralstory.

So, I need a medic, hacker, demoman and a recon Knight.

Name:
Race: It's obviously Spiralian
Equipment:
Skills: Nothing too special, just one or a few special skills that define your character
History:
Additional Facts: Are they friends with Vot, Kiri or Frost? Do they hate the Order:

If I missed anything, just add it. Later in the story, They might meet up with some other characters, so you can join then. But more details later.
Thanks for reading!

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 16:07

#10

Valorai

MEDIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Equipment

MEDIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Sun

Equipment: Angelic set. Leviathan blade. Heavy shield.

Skills: Very experienced with medical needs. Also can do well with repairing machines. Takes notice of tactical things, schematics, and ways to escape. )Paranoia from spiral order) Basically, nothing can hold her. Also, very skillful. She knows moves that are pleasing to the eye (Twisting, spinning ect)

History: Been on very many trips to the clockworks. Loves animals (mostly wolver) and nature. Very nice, and helps friends alot. Served with the order for a while but quit. Always put herself in the front lines to help her allies.

Additional: Hates the order. She suspects they are corrupt with power. Often stares into space from the horrible memories from serving with the order. Also: Shes a gunner. THe er.... 5 star antigua thing. Has been studying the wolver race for a while. She came through with a breakthrough. (Add that if you can)

Fri, 01/13/2012 - 17:52

#11

Frostrex

Name?

Fri, 01/13/2012 - 22:30

#12

Nechrome

Name: Necro Race: It's

Name: Necro

Race: It's obviously Spiralian

Job: Recon

Equipment: Flourish, Jalovec, Khorovod, Arc Razor, Super Blast Bomb, lightning capacitor, shockburst brandish, bristling buckler, solid cobalt armor, magic hood.

Skills: Nothing much. He is obsessed with Greavers, and has some kind of mutual understanding with them; he doesn't hurt them, they don't him him.

History: JUst the average SPiral Knight. He got his Greaver obsession because he likes weird stuff, and Greavers are weird.

Additional Facts: Loves inflicting shock on enemies in LD, is pro at BN, loves his heavy swords and crushes any noob that thinks they're stupid.

Sat, 01/14/2012 - 07:28

#13

Valorai

I put the name in the app.

I put the name in the app. Also I edited a few other things

Sat, 01/14/2012 - 16:43

#14

Isisdelltion

ROADTRIP!

I have limited time, but the way you have my characters are great! Also, the current state of Spiralstory is MANY NEW CHAPTERS that I can't post up until later. Also, great story so far! :D

Sat, 01/14/2012 - 21:08

#15

Frostrex

Necro and At, you're

Necro and At, you're accepted. And thank you Isis.

Sun, 01/15/2012 - 17:40

#16

Frostrex

Okay, I've managed to come up

Okay, I've managed to come up with a few other classes: ranger, pilot, guardian, equipment carrier, translator and weapons master.

Mon, 01/16/2012 - 14:39

#17

Valorai

Aww..... I would've picked

Aww..... I would've picked one of those. XD

Mon, 01/16/2012 - 15:52

#18

Frostrex

So?

You can change your app.

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 23:28

#19

Frostrex

C'MON

PEOPLE! POST APPS! ISIS< WHY HAVEN"T YOU POSTED ONE???? Or is Vot your character, in a sense.

Actually, Atgatg, your character can be a hybrid class; medic-ranger.
Necro, you can be a recon-weaponsmaster hybrid.

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 12:39

#20

Isisdelltion

Yeah

I'd go for Vot (I'm too lazy to do make another). But feel free to take other characters, like Kort or Sly!

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 13:12

#21

Frostrex

Yeah, but...

Vot didn't know Kort or Sly, so mabye he forgot their names?

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 14:42

#22

Valorai

YAY! Those are the two

YAY! Those are the two things! I love nature (Ranger) and helping p[eople (Medic)

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 15:03

#23

Isisdelltion

I mean like, only Frost

I mean like, only Frost interacted with them.(Vot was knocked out or something). That could be the reason why Frost was accepted into the Band (Kort had seen his bravery or something). Or maybe Sun despises Kort or something. Its up to you. :D

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 15:08

#24

Frostrex

Mmkay..

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 00:15

#25

Frostrex

BUMP!

NO! NOT SECOND PAGE!!!

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 08:05

#26

Isisdelltion

Any new chapters coming up?

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 13:19

#27

Frostrex

Yeah, but...

I need characters. If I don't get any, I'll have to make them up. And I HATE creating characters based off nobody. It makes them hollow.

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 14:13

#28

Isisdelltion

so true

Yeah, but making characters allows you to send them away (kill, or in Kiri's case, literally send away). It always nice to have disposable characters. Wow that sounded evil. :D

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 14:18

#29

Valorai

I just keep all my made-up

I just keep all my made-up characters as slaves.

*Slave character hands nacho platter to Atgatg*

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 16:08

#30

Isisdelltion

Yep

That pretty much what I do too. *Turns around* "Hey guys, how's that huge statue of me doing?"

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 16:27

#31

Frostrex

Uuuhh...

I can't belive I'm friends with you guys... *Steals a nacho off of Atgatg's plate*

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 16:37

#32

Isisdelltion

I WANT THE NACHO!

I want one! *Turns again* "Hey guys, while you're at it, make me some nachos!"

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 20:37

#33

Valorai

NO WAY! *Turns to army of

NO WAY!

*Turns to army of slaves*

Destroy Isis's statue and make a statue of me after you destroy it! *Eats nachos*

(The statue is at the bottom of a hill, the slaves are at the top, and the sun is setting)

Slave says, "FOR ATGATG!!!!!!!!"

*All charge down hill*

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 23:00

#34

Frostrex

Characters!

Here's the list of central characters:

Listed by rank in Owlite Squad:

Kiri:Leader

Frostrex:Warrior

Vot:Engineer

Sun:Medic and Ranger

Necro:Recon and Weapons Master

Nikolsen:Demoman and Guardian

Sentia:Pilot

Drid:Hacker and Translator

Elm:Equipment Carrier

There's the cast of characters.

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 04:51

#35

Isisdelltion

Nice. "FOR

Nice.
"FOR ISIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*All Charge uphill, get tired, charge back down*

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 06:52

#36

Valorai

*All reach statue at bottom

*All reach statue at bottom of hill. They are moving too fast, so they run right past the statue into the river with raging rapids, and sharp jagged rocks.*

*Atgatg looks down in rage*

"LIGHTNING BOLT!!!!!"- Atgatg

* I lightning bolt hits it but does not destroy it.*

"I understand now!"

*Throws nacho platter, which destroys statue.*

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 12:55

#37

Isisdelltion

MY STATUE!

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Wait, FREE NACHOS! YAY!"

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 14:34

#38

Frostrex

STOP!

This is NOT a roleplaying thread. Stop spamming this here.

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 15:52

#39

Frostrex

Meet the Team

As the four knights stepped out, cuffed, another van showed up, carrying two more. One was wearing the Angelic Set. She looked very angry, like she was pulled out of bed for this. Chances were, she probably was. They brought her over and uncuffed her. "Hi, my name is Sun," she said, almost sounding depressed. Another was pulled from the van, doning Solid Cobalt Armour, wearing a magic hood. "Your name?" Vot asked politely. "Necro. I'm th Recon Knight. I'm also the Weapons Master"
"Oh, yeah," Kiri said, turning to Sun. "What's your speciality?"
"I'm the Medic. I'm also a gunner, more of a Ranger." Sun said it without turning, keeping her eye on the secruity guards. Next, a Knight came out wearing Cobalt Armour. "And you are?" Frostrex asked.
"Sentia." She said it happily. She shook hands with everyone in the group. "I'm your pilot."
The other walked up, in a Heavy Bomb Suit. "Nikolson." He said solemnly. It was obvious he was the Bomber. Two others came out, chatting. "Drid and Elm. We're brothers," the one named Drid said. He was wearing a Magic Cloak, with a Magic Hood. The other, Elm, was wearing a large backpack, wearing a helmet in similar fashion to Brinks, exept blue, and also wearing a Magic Cloak. "Hacker-Translator," Drid said. He also had glasses. "Equipment Carrier and Expert." Elm.

"Now that you've got the Owlite Squad together, Vot, Kiri and Frostrex can come with me. The rest of you, get your arnaments!" Clyde led them to a small room. On a table in front of them, were two sets of Mighty Cobalt Armour, and one set of Azure Guardian Armour. Above the Cobalt, was a Solid Cobalt Helm. Above the Azure was a Mighty Cobalt Helm. "Kiri, Zure Armour. You two. Mighty. All of them changed into their respective armours. Frostrex prefered to put his helmet's mask down. Behing it, you could see the soft glow of his dark blue eyes.. "We can tell the difference now, even though Vot's were green. Clyde handed Vot a Ascended Calibur. He gave Frost an Ascended Calibur, as well. Kiri got a Cold Iron Vanquisher. They left the room, puttig their weapons in their scabbards. "Sergeant Kiri, your squad is awaiting orders."
"Yes, Clyde. Thank you," she responded. "Everybody," she shouted. "We are going to investigate an unknown invasion." Her confidence was good so far. "We are the second strike against this. We will have to stop this at all costs."
"Of course, always the way with the Order." It was Sun. Frost turned to her. She had said it very quietly, but he heard her. "You bitter toward the Order, huh?"
She didn't answer.
"We will have to find a way to the home world of these creatures. That's what we have Sentia for." Kiri continued, "The Order has already lost Knights to this, so let us avenge them. Let's fight back!" Everyone cheered except Sun. She knew they had a long road ahead. In fact, everyone knew. Only she was willing to accept it.

Alien Worlds

"There is a wormhole from which they are attacking from," Clyde explained. "You will be transported to Ground Zero, and will have to find a way through the wormhole. You got me?"
'Yes." Kiri.
"Well, step into the Transporter."
"Wait, we're being teleported?" Vot asked.
"Well... yes... get in."
Owlite Squad sqeezed in, and, in three seconds, they were surrounded by forests. A giant, red hole was spiraling in the sky. "Oh, fantastic." Frostrex's pessimism kicked in. They were being slowly sucked towards the wormhole. Vot thought for a second. "Everybody! Jump!" They all jumped and were instantly picked up by the gravitational pull. "I think I'm gonna be sick!", yelled Elm. They went through.

They ended up in the cabin of a small ship. "Oh, they probably transported this too," Sentia said, clearly happy. "Yay." She pulled down the Helm-Mounted Display and started piloting the craft. They stated nearing a planet made of gears and the sort. But it had no surface. "Oh, yes," Clyde chimed in as a hologram. "Welcome, to The Kradel. Where twisted dreams come to lie...."

Basically, The Kradel(Kra-Del) is an incomplete version of Cradle, which went wrong in a horrific accident. This story will be told soon. Its a completely different FF.

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 16:05

#40

Valorai

Srry, i made a few changes to

Srry, i made a few changes to my app.

Nice chapter!

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 17:50

#41

Isisdelltion

Good Chapter

Nice! Again, great chapter!

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 18:07

#42

Arkate

can there be a new knight introduced later?

if yes then...
name:arkate
class:gunslinger
equipment:nameless hat, sunset duster, silversix and sentenza
skills:excellent shooter, good tracker as well, and a very fast runner (if need be).
history: known to have fired off 6 shots at a superior knight, after being ordered to shoot down a swarm infected vehicle containing knights and refusing. right hand has been replaced with a mechanical hand, as it was ripped off during the first crash.
additional: hates eating jelly, would rather throw his beloved guns into the firestorm citadel than eat it, keeps his guns in pristine conditions, and refuses to reload during a battle.
quote: sometimes, it's better to run and live than fight and die, and other times you have to bash the living daylights out of that...enourmous...(whimpers)...pile of jelly

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 18:50

#43

Frostrex

Hhmmm...

I was thinking of having a charcter who was stuck on the Kradel, if that interests you. And Arkate would probably be scared of Jellys because there is a twisted Gelly Cing. And there is also a twisted PhyreCtorm Sitadel.

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 21:27

#44

Arkate

sure

ok sure just make sure he gets out eventually, and the jelly was getting sick by eating some during early childhood

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 02:50

#45

Frostrex

Don't worry...

Its a town now, called Hevaan. It is populated by Spiralians that had been captured by the Kradeliens. It was first inhabited by Stranger-like people called Strengarrs. By the way, should I have two fan-fics running at the same time, or not?

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 09:17

#46

Spyash

i'll be a weapon master (as i see some one with to jobs has that

lets even out the jobs

Name:Spyash

race:spiral knight

armor:skolver cap and dead shot mantle

weapons:Polaris,Blitz Needle,Wild hunting blade, and Acheron. (this way i can counter every type of damage

shield:Grey owlite shield

is that ok or shall i be the Assassin

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 12:51

#47

Isisdelltion

One is good

@Frosty: I would stick to one, if you have a bunch of stuff at once, it just gets confusing.

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 14:36

#48

Frostrex

@Spyash

I would have to get rid of one of the characters that I have already written about. You can be an assassin that we encounter on The Kradel.

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 14:49

#49

Valorai

Arkate, you said his hand was

Arkate, you said his hand was replaced by a mechanical.

Theres a prob with that.

U ALREADY HAD A METAL HAND>

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 15:10

#50

Arkate

umm no

in the game those are gloves, not hands

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