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King Tinkinzar

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Tue, 01/17/2012 - 20:44
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Idespawn

Chapter 1:

It was a crispy-cold day in haven, the snow was falling down, the snipes were chirping... Until I heard a huge crash. Nobody seemed to bother to check it, it was almost like that nobody even heard it. I followed the black smoke into a dark alley. I saw something...but I couldn't make up the picture, I put on my night vision goggle accessory. Nope, nothing. The smoke wouldn't clear up too. I started running, even though I couldn't see anything, I had an uneasy feeling that something bad was going to happen, from bumping into a tree, or running into a monster. I tried calling one of my friends, but I had no reception, so I was all alone in the dark, smokey alley. After a while, the smoke started bothering my breathing, a few minutes later, I collapsed.

I woke up, wondering where I was. The smoke started to clear up...I saw an elevator. I looked at the energy cost; 20. "You've got to be kidding me!" I said. I called some friends to help me with this. Still, nobody picked up. I guess I had to do this alone. I stepped into the elevator, but something strange happened. The elevator didn't go up, it shot me straight up to the skies... I was screaming in terror, I needed to throw up. I closed my eyes for a few seconds, and ended up in a danger room.

"Great, to make my day even worse..." I muttered.
But then, another patch of smoke came up... I saw my friend.
"So great to see you!" I cried,
"Same with me." my friend said.

There's something terribly wrong with the danger room, I don't know what it is, but I have a really uneasy feeling in this place... Blackness started to cover the room...
"SWARMS!" I cried out to my friend, I tried to find a way out, but there was a monster gate, so I really have to beat these guys... My friend and I drew our swords and raised our shields.

It is time to fight.
||Details||
Me
Items: Ash Tail Cap and Armour
Swords: Avenger and Silent Nightblade
Guns: NONE
Bombs: NONE
15 Vitapods.

Friend
Items: Snarbolax Cap and Armour
Swords: Divine Avenger
Guns: Argent Peacemaker
Bombs: Graviton Vortex
20+ Vitapods

NOTE: There may be some flaws in this story, and chapter two will be finished....until next week, maybe?

Want to be in this story? Fill this out
Monster or Knight?
If monster fill out this:
Name:
Skills:
Weapons:
Details:
Type of monster:

If knight, answer all of those questions EXCEPT for the last one.

Tue, 01/17/2012 - 20:57
#1
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Frostrex
Name:Frostrex Skills:Has

Name:Frostrex
Skills:Has strong resistance to ice, can sometimes use energy to create ice
Weapons:BlizzardHale(Read Spiralstory's last chapter for details), Vile Striker, Horned Owlite Shield, Ash Tail Set
Details:A very experienced fighter, Frostrex is very dangerous, but reckless.

It doesn't have to be your actual knight does it?

Tue, 01/17/2012 - 21:12
#2
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Outnuendo
Nice

Pretty interesting so far.

Also,

Knight 
Name: Jed
Skills: Ridiculously good vision, can snipe, knows gun-kata
Weapons: Sentenza, Polaris, Biltz Needle, Biohazard, Nameless Set.
Details: Always one with the plan, Jed never rushes into battle. He can be quite hard to talk to, as his frequent personality changes keep you on end. He behaves very differently inside of a battle compared to being outside of a battle.

Sun, 03/13/2016 - 09:00
#3
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Doomskull
Knight

EDIT: I was a child. Deleted everything cause I have pride.

Tue, 01/17/2012 - 21:55
#4
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Sanin
First Monster YAY!

MONSTER!

Name: Skolvy
Type of monster: Skolver Cub
Skill: like all tier 3 wolvers, Skolvy is ninja fast(you see him now, you turn around, now u don't). freezes enemies on every hit. One of the most powerful beasts in the Clockworks
weapon: Fang of Skolver, frozen claws
Details: loyal only to the knights with pure hearts, unlike other wolvers, Skolvy is a kind-hearted beast that wont attack unless it needs to protect itself or others

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 03:14
#5
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Heavy-Duty
...

Name: Mekk
Skills: Healing, Finding, Fixing, and Running
Weapons: Mender's Apprentice Staff
Details: He mutters an awful lot, but often goes "Eh?" or "Ah" when he wants to communicate. When a certain word is pronounced several times, indicating importance, he refers to it. Example: "Wrench! Find Wrench! Lost Wrench!" He carries a few pills around, and uses his staff to bash whatever he fears is too close. He's a tad clumsy, but very useful for running around in the dark. He'd rather stay close to a leader than go off alone, however, and instead of "fixing" machinery, Mekk creates new devices, which unfortunately work only a few times. He yelps when in trouble or outnumbered, and tends to keep near his saviors. He hates Kats and Grudjin.
Type of monster: Gremlin Mender

Name: Grudjin
Skills: Melee and Beast bashing
Weapons: Stolen Khorovod
Details: In charge of Mekk, Grudjin almost acts opposite of him. Well educated, his words can deceive any wise being, and turns on them with his Khorovod, which he keeps near him at all costs. An elite commando, he stays loyal to Tinkinzar, or at least his Crimson Order commissioner. He lost Mekk, and is in search for him. He hates Wolvers and Knights. It is said he met a stalemate with a Skolver which took his left eye as he took one of its fangs. That Skolver is known now to be one of the most powerful beasts in the Clockworks.
Type of monster: Gremlin Darkfang Commissioner

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 13:00
#6
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Isisdelltion
Knight

Knight
Name: Vot
Skills: Somewhat normal, likes to tinker with stuff.
Weapons: Leviathan Blade, Solid Cobalt Set.
Details:Sort of regular, Vot like to make stuff. That stuff usually tries to murder him. He is timid, and doesn't like to charge into battle, waiting until he has a plan before going in to the fray.

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 14:40
#7
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Valorai
Strange rare wolver. Name:

Strange rare wolver.
Name: Sun
Skills: Great hearing, and can make people adorified by her adorable eyes.
Weapons: Claws and fangs
Details: A rare EXTREMELY bright yellow wolver who got this colour for some reason instead of the normal colors. FRIENDLY

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 20:11
#8
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Idespawn
Thanks guys.

All of you will be added. I'll TRY to put you guys in the story.

NOT ACCEPTING ANYMORE PEOPLE KTHXBAI

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 21:05
#9
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Idespawn
Chapter 2:

Chapter 2: Danger Room!

"Ok! Back to back fighting, like we trained, right?" My friend said
I agreed, I slashed the first monster in the head. It was a void zombie, seems to be pretty weak because it died in a few seconds...Then another one replaced its corpse.
"How's it going over there? The monsters never seem to die!" I said,
"Pretty fine, but the numbers are getting larger and larger..." He responded.
More and more started spawning, we had to take evasive action, but we got forced into a corner. Well, that made my day the worse, considering I had no more energy...
"Agh!" I screamed, when getting struck by a monster. I checked my health meter...'5 Vitapods remaining, 4, 3..."
"Heeeeeeeeeeelp!" My friend and I screamed to the top of our lungs...Still bleeding...
0 Vitapods.

Then, I peered through my eye at my last breath, another block of black smoke...I tried to open my eye wider, I saw a knight...
"Hey, are you okay?" The knight said,
"What does it look like?" I said with a cough.
He revived my friend and I,
"My name is Frostrex, how's it going?"
I looked at his armour and weapons, pretty suitable, although I don't know what tier this is.
"Do you know what tier this is?" My friend said,
"Probably tier 50." I muttered.
We gotta find a way out, before they start respawning again...I found a little vent right next to us, I punched it open with my FALCO PUUUUUUNCH!
"Guys, lets go through this vent!" I said, they followed me in the dark vent... The monsters tried to get us, but they were too big to get through.

I was crawling in the dark vent, I couldn't see a thing, all I could do is go forward. We were crawling for hours, no sign of light.
"Uuuuugh, I'm hungry." My friend complained,
"Don't worry-Aaaaaaaaaaah!" I was interrupted, I fell down. My team came down too, into the dark pit. A moment later, we landed, I checked my health meter; '13 Vitapods remaining.' That wasn't so bad, we proceeded through the room, good thing there were some lights here and there, I hadn't have my vitamin D.

WIP

Wed, 01/18/2012 - 20:26
#10
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Frostrex
Whoa...

Whoa...

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 09:37
#11
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Idespawn
Chapter 3:WIP (COMING SOON!)

Chapter 3:

WIP (COMING SOON!)
WRITERS BLOCK

Mon, 01/23/2012 - 10:46
#12
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Emostabe
Monster or Knight?

Monster or Knight? Monster!

Name: Click

Skills: Being dead. And sparky. Additionally, can spark with a look.

Weapons: Valiance and an Iron Slug. Has a Darkfang Shield, but it doesn't always work.

Details: Enjoys frightening people. When he tried to walk back to Haven, the Knights there tried to shoot him, so he lurks around Emberlight playing checkers with Gremlins.

Type of monster: A Mecha Knight built with the soul of a real Knight. Thus, Click can change his equipment around as well as talk to both Knights and Gremlins.

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