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Thu, 01/19/2012 - 20:18
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Dragonightwolf

SO yeah, I want characters before I start the actual story.
Here is as go's (And this is my first time writing a fanfic)
I will also be on and off with the writing because of computer problems. I'll try to get 1 a week

Name:
Equipment (Actual game equipment)
Race:
Personality:
Special: (Something like VERY far eyesight or EXTREMELY quick. Nothing like COMPLETELY INVINCIBLE. Won't take it)
Best Quality:
Fear of:

And for those of you that like to help out from time to time *cough Frostrex and Atgatg cough* Feel Free. No Trolling or flaming though. Also I decide who goes in when. Include which boss you like the best except Vanaduke.

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 20:25
#1
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Frostrex
When did I help

When did I help you?

Name:Frostrex
Equipment Wolver Set, Flourish, Calibur, Cutter, Plate Shield
Race:Knight
Personality:Vicious when it comes to battle, the joker when it comes to conversations
Special:Can create Ice to freeze enemies
Best Quality:Fearless in battle
Fear of:Heights

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 20:33
#2
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Dragonightwolf
Frost

U helped me in Isisdeilton's fanfic when I was overpowered. And your character is accepted. Besides you could be a king in this fanfic (or could you?). And i still need your boss.

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 20:53
#3
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Frostrex
Oh, though I recognised your

Oh, though I recognised your name. My fave boss is Jelly King. And, yes, I'd like to be a king.

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 21:04
#4
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Faronel
Kantint

Name: Kantint
Equipment: Mercurial Demo Set, Big Angry Bomb, Electron Vortex, Valance
Race: Knight
Personality: Wise and smart. Somewhat cold-hearted. Can pop in and out of sight very suddenly. Doesn't help very much, only when he is really needed.
Special: Great at fighting. Can hide FREAKISHLY well.
Best quality: His amazing stealth, speed, and agility.
Fear of: His friends dying. (Even if he has few of them.)

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 21:04
#5
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Dragonightwolf
Cool

I'l get started when I get 7 more people. Speaking of jelly king, i need 11 more jelly gem. Sealed Sword, here I come!

PROLOGUE:

As the King sat on his frosty throne, he surveyed the room looking for a figure. A figure that could make or break his power over this frosty kingdom. This King's name.... Is FROSTREX *cue epic music*. "Send a message to King Tinkinizar. I need to find this person and fast!

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 21:21
#6
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Frostrex
You forgot the second speech

You forgot the second speech marks...

Thu, 01/19/2012 - 22:10
#7
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Sanin
Can i join?

Name:Kana

Equipment: Fallen set(likes to wear a divine stranger hat or magic hood as costume), FOV, Crest of Almire, argent peacemaker, other 5* swags.

Race: Almirian

Personality: Cheap, kind, caring, wise, totally random, ETC.

Special: pro at glitching, even better at running away, and can beat u at eating pie

Best Quality: I can eat Jelly King in 13 seconds (my JK soloing record)

Fear of: dogs, heights, homework, and my teachers

Fri, 01/20/2012 - 14:39
#8
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Valorai
Name: Blue Equipment: Angelic

Name: Blue
Equipment: Angelic set leviathan blade, heavyy plate shield.
Race: Knight
Personality: Friendly, not very smart. Loves jokes and other funny things.
Special: Can distract/confuse enemies easily.
Best quality: Can always lift the spirits of friends when they are sad.
Fear of: Frostrex thinking she's ugly. (XD)

Fri, 01/20/2012 - 15:08
#9
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Emostabe
Name: Clyde Equipment:

Name: Clyde
Equipment: Shadowsun Slicker/Stetson, wears a cracked Quicksilver Helm over the Stetson. It's got a pipe.
Race: Knight
Personality: Single-minded.
Special: Can dual-wield guns, but doesn't own one single shield. Also has a grey Snipe named Benny.
Best Quality: Has a quiet, calming presence.
Fear of: Running out of tobacco for his pipe. Clyde also hates Trojans with a vengeance.

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 11:44
#10
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Isisdelltion
Vot

Name: Vot
Equipment Solid Cobalt
Race: Knight
Personality: Kind of awkward, but all around fairly nice and fair.
Special: Nothing much, just his power to be AWESOME! :D
Best Quality: Can think through some pretty nasty situations.
Fear of: Blue thinking that Frostrex is thinking that she is ugly. It makes him quite sad. (XD)

Fri, 01/20/2012 - 21:04
#11
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Outnuendo
Wild Jed appears

Name: Jed
Equipment: Biohazard, Pulsar, Blitz Needle, Sentenza, Nameless set
Race: Knight
Personality: Cynical and sarcastic, though not to the point where it is obnoxious. He doesn't sugarcoat things, either. Appears very detatched outside of exploring, unless provoked.
Special: Amazing eyesight, and knows gun-kata to counter sword users.
Best Quality:His constant planning.
Fear of: Capture by monsters

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 14:39
#12
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Dragonightwolf
New and Relevant

You're all accepted and for Blue, you have a special set of custom made armor for you, if you become a wolver. I won't be able to post again this weekend, so see you next week. There will also be a new Clockworks monster called Freezees that belong to the gremlin family and are the cousins to them. King Frostrex will be their leader.

Theme Bosses: King Frostrex and King Tinkinizar.

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 16:08
#13
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Valorai
If i become a wolver? What

If i become a wolver? What does that mean?

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 16:08
#14
Valorai's picture
Valorai
If i become a wolver? What

If i become a wolver? What does that mean?

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 16:39
#15
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Dragonightwolf
if you change your race from

if you change your race from knight to wolver.

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 18:48
#16
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Valorai
NO FOOL! I AM

NO FOOL!
I AM SKOLVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Skolver....................................skolver...........................................................................................................................................

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 20:02
#17
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Dragonightwolf
Crew

Nightwolf(me)- Squadron Leader
Blue- Killer Skolver
Jed- Wild planner
Vot- Brains
Clyde- Calmer and Fast fighter
Kantint- Technian and Monster cataloger
Kana- Jelly Eater and Vanaduke expert

Sat, 01/21/2012 - 20:18
#18
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Dragonightwolf
Chapter 1: Torto-WHAT

As the Squadron enters the grassy area, A large roar is heard, followed by a massive pounding and fiery gunshots

- "Kantint, what is thing!" screams Kana. "That would be a Tortodrone, sir." replied Kantint. "Jed, Clyde, find a weak point on this thing and shoot it. As they pull out their guns, their is a massive roar as giant ice shards explode from the ground. While the Squadron is one the floor cowering in fear, a strange voice calle out, "Well aren't you going to thank me?" "Blue, is that you?" asked Nightwolf. "Yes it is. I heard that you needed an animal companion." "You're accepted! Welcome to the Squadron, the 151st to be exact." "um, we really should be going." said Kana. "Yes, LETS GO!" screamed Vot.

Sun, 01/22/2012 - 15:24
#19
Sanin's picture
Sanin
GJ

not bad, u were able to put everyone's names in a short paragraph, but "their" should be "there"

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 12:18
#20
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Dragonightwolf
Chapter 2: Battle of the 1000 Trojans.

As the Squadron stepped off the elevator, they spied a lot of dark runes on the ground. Suddenly, there was a rumbling and 1000 trojans appeared. As Jed fainted, Clyde moved around shooting trojans in the back. Nightwolf and Blue started double teaming them, Blue freezing and biting them while Nightwolf dispatched them with his sword. Kana used his Almirian powers to summon Slag Walkers and to heat the ground. Then a Trojan swung his sword and Kantint, but Jed woke up, pushed Kantint to the ground and shot the Trojan in the back. As the last one was defeated, unseen, a Crimson Order gremlin snuck away. As the Squadron regrouped, Clyde reappeared with boxes and boxes of Treasure Boxes. As they celebrated, Kantint snuck away, to log this greatest new discovery. 6 eyes poked out of the gloom and there was an unheard roar.

NOTE: Battle of the 1000 heartless reference.

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 19:44
#21
Sanin's picture
Sanin
Correction

i like it, but the "and" in "Then a Trojan swung his sword and Kantint" should be "at"

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 13:30
#22
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Spyash
can i join

Name:Spyash

Race:Knight

Equipment:Skolver cap and dead shot mantle

Weapons:Wild hunting blade,Final Flourish,Acheron,Polaris,Blitz needle,Nitrome

Sheild:Grey Owlite Sheild

Personality:like to make jokes and trick people (not in a very serious way),is rather sarcastic, likes to play his mandolin

Best Quality: Always makes his fights rather showy doing flips and little tricks for fun, always can think of something funny to cheer people up

Fear of: Snarby that thing ate his brother when he was little he rather hates wolvers an Snarby (no not skolvers he thinks that they're cute)

Special:Can do some awesome hand magic tricks and illusions, can always find the best in people and understand every one

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 15:33
#23
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Dragonightwolf
Update

Yes, Spylash, you're accepeted. You now work as a rogue knight for King Tinkinizar

Next chapter-Vog vs. Skolver: Territory War
Chapter after that: King's 1st advance (Frost, this is you're time to shine. I've also given you blizzardhale, sklover set, and a shield called Furzor which freezes anyone that attacks it. You will also be given two personal battle skolvers.)

Thanks for your help, Sanin and if you want to join, just fill out an application form.

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 16:17
#24
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Frostrex
?????????????????????????????

What's this about my character thinking Blue's ugly? Thanks by the way Dragon. For my next FF, I was gonna have Frostrex in his ancestors full armour. His ancestor was a king.

Sun, 02/05/2012 - 06:06
#25
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Dragonightwolf
Chapter 3: Vog vs. Skolver

As the Squadron walked through the Wild Path, there was the smell of something burning. As they walked further, it intensified. Then, A giant Vog jumped out of the ground. As the whole Squadron was under a bet not to talk, they pulled out their weapons and began to attack. However, they were stopped as Blue decided to make a ring of ice around the Vog and himself, while the Vog made a ring of fire, creating and infinity sign. Then they began to fight. Trees were knocked down, grass torn up, burning leaves, frozen stones. Jed and Clyde pulled out a magazine, but it was frozen and then burnt. As the fight went on, there was no clear winner, until Blue took the Vog in its jaws, and threw it to the ground. As they both shrunk back to normal size, the Vog got up and bowed to Blue. A name echoed in their heads. The name was........................... "Feldor." A marching army could be heard in the far distance.

NOTE: They are on Depth 18.
NOTE: If you can pls keep thread alive (Shock, c'mon, Shock) because there are long intervals between my posting.

Sun, 02/05/2012 - 07:22
#26
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Isisdelltion
SHOCK!

CLEAR! *Shock*

Sun, 02/05/2012 - 22:16
#27
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Frostrex
...

I just started a meme, didn't I?

Mon, 02/06/2012 - 12:49
#28
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Isisdelltion
Yep... :D IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!

Yep... :D

IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 04:03
#29
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Dragonightwolf
Hmmmm.....

As the King sat dressed in his gear, he wondered whether to take out King Tinkinizar. He decided to let the thought pass. He hopped onto is Battle Skolver and rode off, Blizzardhale in his hand.

As the Squadron went toward the palace, 16 slush puppies boxed them in. A booming voice was heard. Then the silence came. Suddenly, a massive ice shard shot out of the ground and into Nightwolf, causing instant death. Then King Frostrex went and beheaded Nightwolf. His army came soon behind him taking the Squadron in chains. Spylash came up and said tho the King that King T wished to have Jed and Clyde. No one noticed Kana and Blue sneak away with Nightwolf's body and head....

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 04:03
#30
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Dragonightwolf
Hmmmm.....

As the King sat dressed in his gear, he wondered whether to take out King Tinkinizar. He decided to let the thought pass. He hopped onto is Battle Skolver and rode off, Blizzardhale in his hand.

As the Squadron went toward the palace, 16 slush puppies boxed them in. A booming voice was heard. Then the silence came. Suddenly, a massive ice shard shot out of the ground and into Nightwolf, causing instant death. Then King Frostrex went and beheaded Nightwolf. His army came soon behind him taking the Squadron in chains. Spylash came up and said tho the King that King T wished to have Jed and Clyde. No one noticed Kana and Blue sneak away with Nightwolf's body and head....

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 07:36
#31
Stratosion
hey

awesome

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 15:38
#32
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Dragonightwolf
Update

So, anyone who wants to die off just post it and i will arranged an EPIC death for you. And please state if your character is male or female. And I do need a female. And for those who have read the posted chapter, I have questions

Is Nightwolf really dead?
Is King Frostrex really Frosty the Snowman or is he a Wendy's Chocolate Milkshake?

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 18:43
#33
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Sanin
HAHAHAHA!

no, I (Kana) don't wanna die just yet and can I revive nightwolf with 10 ce? ( i bet Frostrex is a milkshake :D)

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 23:01
#34
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Frostrex
...

Seriously, this story is a little light-hearted. And I'm not a milkshake, nor am I a friggin' snowman. And if I was a milkshake, I would be mint or caramel flavoured, thank you.

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 04:31
#35
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Dragonightwolf
Look Over

Ok, so if anyone wants to provide constructive crtitism then post here. Please do this before 2/10/12 when I will try to post next chapter. And what do you mean by lighthearted, Frostrex?

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 12:54
#36
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Isisdelltion
Okay... 1. Blue is a

Okay...
1. Blue is a girl.
2.If I saw 1000 Trojans.... erm, I would be the one to faint, Jed would be too busy planning.
3. Frosty's favor is definately minty caramel.
4. WHY DOES FROST HAVE A WARSKOLVER? Where can I get one?
5. Who's Feldor? What marching army? Where? When? Why?

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 13:23
#37
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Frostrex
I meant...

The questions and stuff at the end of the very last chapter you did.

Sat, 02/11/2012 - 14:50
#38
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Divineblaze
New Character

Name: The Slayer (Real Name: Roy)
Equipment: Divine Veil, Radiant Silvermail, Crest of Almire, Cold Iron Vanquisher, Divine Avenger, Argent Peacemaker,
Race: Almirian
Personality: Has vowed to slay all undead since his family was killed by them, usually very serious and very loyal to his friends, it takes a while to gain his trust
Special: Can sense fiends and undead, he can heal others' injuries(as long as they aren't mortal) but not his own
Best Quality: He is cool-headed and a quick thinker,
Fear of: His friends dying

Note: Sanin, would it be weird if we were both Almirian or can I be as well?

Sat, 02/11/2012 - 09:57
#39
Sanin's picture
Sanin
its ok

@Divineblaze
It will be aw'some if ur an Almirian as well, i like companies

Sun, 02/12/2012 - 10:24
#40
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Divineblaze
Delay in the Story

Dragonightwolf has asked me to pass on this message. Anything non-school related has been blocked, so he will not be able to post stories for a while. :(

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 06:52
#41
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Dragonightwolf
Update

Yes, what Divine says is true, I recieved a 81 on my SS test so my mom has now banned everything non-school related. I will now try to get them out at school but just keep the thread alive as Nightwolf really isn't dead.

ANSWERS

Frost is a king. Therefore he gets a warskolver. End of Story
Feldor is a Vog who merged his spirit with Nightwolf.
Frost and King T have a marching army to destroy Haven

______________________________________________________________________________________________________
As Kana and Blue were dragging Nightwolf's body parts, his armor shimmered and turned into a vog cub armor. Then he disappeared. As Kana and Blue looked in surprise, an army of Gremlins rushed at them. As they were chained and shackled, a massive fireball hit the ground, burning a mass amount of gremlins to death. As the Vog came out of the mist, it changed into a known person. "Miss me?" asked Nightwolf. Kana and Blue jumped in excitement but Nightwolf had a grave look on his face. He explained that the only force that could help them now were the armies of Lord Vanaduke. Then Kana explained that him and his brother Roy were the long lost brothers to Lord Vanaduke. For proof, Kana raised several Slag Walkers out the ground........

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