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almirian empire war fanfic (this time i will doit better

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Tue, 01/24/2012 - 09:08
Judgemagisterr's picture
Judgemagisterr

I'm making a fanfic about a war between spiralians and almirians.
Prologue:

In a normal day,something strange happened.Spiralians that went to the clockworks didn't come back, the sensors where broken and some portals stuck.
Feron,lieutenant of the spiralknights forces sent to haven received a message of Kora:
-There are multiple targets coming to haven!-
-From where!-
They are coming from the clockworks,take care!-
Feron usnseathed his sword aand he prepare for combat.
Some lifts returned from some portals full of gremlins and they began to annihilate the spiralians that where around the lifts,Feron and his squadron tried to hold back the gremlins knowing that it was impossible.One spiralian before his dead saw Feron's troops diyng and capturing Feron.
There where survivors but only 450 spiralians survived and they began to search for more survivors and they united to make the resistance.

I need 4 people to his character:
Here is what i need:
Name:
Bio
Equipment:
Feat:(radar,super-speed...)

Hre is the captain (XD)
Name:Judge
Equipment:Fallen set,sentenza,cold iron vanquiser,aegis and acheron.
Bio:a survivor of Feron squadron he will not stop fighting until he make his vengeance.
Feat:Termo vision,ray of vengeance(special ability)

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 10:10
#1
Spyash's picture
Spyash
sweet i'm in

Name: Spyash

equips: Acheron,Blitz Needle,Wild hunting blade,Polaris,Final Flourish.

armor:dead shot mantle and skolver cap

shield:Grey owlite shield

bio:a bringer of light to the shadow realms of the clockworks,freeing the spirits of monster from the evil body.Some people think of it as a honour to be killed by him.he moves of fast as light and loves doing flips and showy tricks and making his battles as fancy as possible

feat: he's really fast and disappears and get's the objective (as long as it's a combat) done while people say "where the hell is he when we need him"

other: has a great grin and makes sarcastic and funny comments. very friendly to people he works with and loves snipes and skolvers. He also does fencing

[edit] i added a fifth weapon hope thats ok if not i remove it.

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 10:54
#2
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Emostabe
Woo!

Name: Benny

Bio: Once the chief of Spiral Weapons R&D on the homeworld, Benny came to Haven in search of new resources to build things that went bang. Unfortunately, the bump from the landing made him a bit kooky.

Equipment: A Toxic Bombhead Mask with rounded eyes, a Scarf and a Com Unit. As for armor, has a Mercurial Demo Suit and Royal Jelly Shield.. Wields an Iron Slug and Neutralizer.

Feat: Often repurposes monster bits into weapons. Has a red Snipe by the name of Clyde on his shoulder (Benny and Clyde? Anybody? No? I'm so alone..).

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 10:59
#3
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Fallconn
okie dokie :D

name:Falcon

race:Spiral knight

Gear,Vog cub set, Polaris, Divine Avenger, Acheron, Final flourish, Volcanic Plate shield

Color:Red

Likes: Being heroic and beating the crud out of enemies

bio: when he was on the skylark he accidentally burned his entire body by dropping some special chemicals on himself thus setting his entire body on
fire...now for some strange reason he can ignite his entire body on fire just by thinking about it

Dislikes: All foes

Gender: Male

Other:Sometimes in a fit of rage will throw aside his sword and beat enemies with his flaming fists of fury

Feat: has special fire powers

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 10:04
#4
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Spyash
uhh a little help here

i don't know how to post pics so if some one can tell me i can try to sketch up all the characters using spiral spy.

Spyash-done

Falcon-done

Benny-done (although the colour of the jelly shield is white and the eyes aren't round sorry about that)

Judge-done

Tue, 01/24/2012 - 14:34
#5
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Valorai
Blue Angelic set, heavy

Blue
Angelic set, heavy shield leviathan blade.
Feat: Can hear very well.
Bio: (make one up)

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 00:15
#6
Spyash's picture
Spyash
atgatg

your shield is the heavy plate shield right?

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 09:19
#7
Spyash's picture
Spyash
crap it double posted

ah sorry about that

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 09:47
#8
Judgemagisterr's picture
Judgemagisterr
ok

spyash,falcon,Benny and Blue.

Wed, 01/25/2012 - 10:11
#9
Spyash's picture
Spyash
oh wow

i just realized 3 of us have Acherons

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 10:26
#10
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Judgemagisterr
Chapter 1:In search of survivors part 1

1st day tuesday 2:15AM
Captain Judge was searching for more survivors in the woods and he received a communication from Kozma:
Kozma:There is a gremlin patrol near your position!-
Judge:What?!How they know this place?!_
Kozma:They have detected you, get out of there!-
Judge:I need to search for more survivors.-
Kozma:But!
Judge:End of transmission!
Judge heard some gremlins approaching him.
Gremlin:Groo lana chaca!(Get him!)
Judge killed the gremlins wiht his cold iron vanquisher but a gremlin planted a bomb near him and. boom!
He flew away until he collide with a tree and fell unconcious.
3 and a half hours later (5:45AM)
Judge got up and he said:
Where am I?
???:On a safe position
Judge:(i recognize that voice) Is that you Falcon?
Falcon:How do you know it?
Judge:Don't you remember me? I'm Judge, we where comrades on Alondra
Falcon:Ah judge,long time has passed when Alondra crashed
Judge:We must move out.
Falcon:Yes.
When they where returning to the survivor's base they had another conversation:
Judge:What happened to your body?
Falcon:accidentally on a expedition i drop some chemicals on my body, but miraculously i survived.
Judge:...We must get to the base!
They heared Choo laka laka!(hurry get the minerals or King Tikinzar will have our heads!)
Judge:We have to kill them!
Falcon:Don't worry,i'll use this. Combustion!
Gremlins:Grola,grola!(help,help!)
1and a quarter hours passed(7:00AM)
They reached to the base.
Bechamel:We have 1 more survivor:Benny
Benny:Ufffh i need something to drink.
Spiralian:Take some tea
Benny:Thanks!
Judge:Atleast there is 1 more survivor
Falcon:You're right.
End
Spoiler:In the next part the squadron will finally assemble

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 10:26
#11
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Judgemagisterr
Chapter 1:In search of survivors part 1

1st day tuesday 2:15AM
Captain Judge was searching for more survivors in the woods and he received a communication from Kozma:
Kozma:There is a gremlin patrol near your position!-
Judge:What?!How they know this place?!_
Kozma:They have detected you, get out of there!-
Judge:I need to search for more survivors.-
Kozma:But!
Judge:End of transmission!
Judge heard some gremlins approaching him.
Gremlin:Groo lana chaca!(Get him!)
Judge killed the gremlins wiht his cold iron vanquisher but a gremlin planted a bomb near him and. boom!
He flew away until he collide with a tree and fell unconcious.
3 and a half hours later (5:45AM)
Judge got up and he said:
Where am I?
???:On a safe position
Judge:(i recognize that voice) Is that you Falcon?
Falcon:How do you know it?
Judge:Don't you remember me? I'm Judge, we where comrades on Alondra
Falcon:Ah judge,long time has passed when Alondra crashed
Judge:We must move out.
Falcon:Yes.
When they where returning to the survivor's base they had another conversation:
Judge:What happened to your body?
Falcon:accidentally on a expedition i drop some chemicals on my body, but miraculously i survived.
Judge:...We must get to the base!
They heared Choo laka laka!(hurry get the minerals or King Tikinzar will have our heads!)
Judge:We have to kill them!
Falcon:Don't worry,i'll use this. Combustion!
Gremlins:Grola,grola!(help,help!)
1and a quarter hours passed(7:00AM)
They reached to the base.
Bechamel:We have 1 more survivor:Benny
Benny:Ufffh i need something to drink.
Spiralian:Take some tea
Benny:Thanks!
Judge:Atleast there is 1 more survivor
Falcon:You're right.
End
Spoiler:In the next part the squadron will finally assemble

Thu, 01/26/2012 - 10:36
#12
Spyash's picture
Spyash
2 more survivors

Spyash and Blue unless one of us is dead

Sun, 01/29/2012 - 13:41
#13
Spyash's picture
Spyash
is a new chapter coming out soon?

is one?

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