Spiral Knights - Fanfic- The Surface

Fanfic- The Surface

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Tue, 02/07/2012 - 05:46

Toxicblade

Ok. This is my first fanfic ( :DDD ohmahgawd ) and I would like you to submit your characters. At first I'll accept 8. Maybe more later on, if I need them. I would like a mixture of knights, outcast gremlins, and strangers ( strangers won't fight) Just fill this out:

Name:
Gender:(I know about gender ambigiousity but I don't like it, because some armor seems more guyish/girlish than others)
Race:
Gear:
Personality:
Special Skills:
Random Fact:
Fear:

Here's mine ( hope it doesn't seem selfish me being in it)

Name: Toxic
Gender: Male
Race : Knight
Gear : Glacius, Argent Peacemaker, Flourish, and a dagger he use with his flourish, Vog gear. doesn't use a shield
Personality: Calm, Nice, and a little bit awkward
Special skills: Can see in the dark
Random Fact: His sweetheart can best him in a duel easily
Fear: Heights

Please submit your characters so I can start!

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 07:51

Aula

Characters

Why does everybody need someone else's characters? Honestly, its much easier to create your own. It seems less personal if you use someone else's characters as your own.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 08:03

Happyapathy

It gets the community

It gets the community involved and its fun to have other people participate, when people make it open like this its not meant to be personal its for others as well.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 12:38

Outnuendo

Maybe it's true, but it's

Maybe it's true, but it's probably better to establish some sort of story and characters before that, so everything you do doesn't have to be based around other characters.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 12:48

Isisdelltion

I agree with Outnuendo. Its

I agree with Outnuendo. Its good to have a mix, so that you can completely control some, but be given others. It even make writing more fun, know that when someone's character does something good or bad, its felt through their creator.
It makes it hard to kill people though. D:

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 14:44

Valorai

Name: Blue Gender:

Name: Blue
Gender: Female
rAce: Knight
Gear: Angelic set with heavy plate shield
Personality: Fun-loving. Smart. Brave. Loves having friendz.
Special skills: Fairly good medic. She can help any knight that was injured. Also can operate a computer fairly well
Random fact: Loves wolvers
Fear: Losing a friend.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 18:51

Sanin

Name:Kana

Gender:Female

Race: Almirian

Gear:Crest of Almire, Divine Avenger, FoV, Crown of Fallen, Armor of Fallen, Argent peacemaker

Personality: Nice, wise, caring, loving, clever, likes to be carefree

Special Skills: Can bring down jelly king with a spoon

Random Fact: Vana's twin sister

Fear: Homework, teachers, height, dogs.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 22:45

Psychodestroyer

@Aula

Get community involved, adds diversity to characters, some people can't think of characters but can come up with good plots.

Want to read one with personal characters, try my Codename series or One is all it takes. There aren't any community characters (Not until after part 3 anyway), I made them all up myself.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 23:16

Faronel

Hiya.

Name: Kantint
Gender: Male
Race: Knight/Spiralian
Gear: Mercurial Demo set, Ironmight plate shield, a large variety of bombs (Usually uses a Electron Vortex and a Big Angry Bomb), and a Valiance.
Personality: Is smart and wise. Is somewhat cold-hearted. Usually calm. May sometimes appear or disappear suddenly. Will usually not help unless he is absolutly needed, otherwise he will just watch. Refuses to let friends die.
Special Skills: Is great at fighting. More importantly though, he can hide FREAKISHLY well.
Random Fact: Keeps a poketwatch from his now dead best friend.
Fear: Friends diying.

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 23:47

Toxicblade

First Entry thing

Hell, I don't need 8 characters for the intro

The Spiral Warden was now sending out groups to explore the surface of cradle. They soon came back injured, having no memory of how they got hurt. Blue was treating her last patient that day, a knight with bite marks on his armor.
"There we go, all patched up," Blue told him. "Just a few days rest and you'll be good,"
The knight thanked her and closed his eyes to sleep.

As she left the infirmary, Blue wondered what was causing the knights these injuries, and why they didn't know what happenned. We might have an enemy on the surface of the cradle, she thought to herself.

Kana sheathed her sword at her side, having finished cutting through the vines of the jungle, a couple of kilometres outside of haven. She heard a roar.
"Did you hear that!?" she asked Kantint, her friend who was exploring the surface of the cradle with her, on a mission from the spiral warden.
"Sure did," he replied. "Dunno what it was though,"
Kana shrugged, they were meant to be exploring the cradle after all, not documenting its wildlife.
"Well its good that--OOF!" Kantint started to say before he fell to the ground, unconscious.
Kana was immediately alert, looking all around, trying to find the enemy.
Too bad she didnt look up. She felt a crack on her head, and drifted into unconsciousness.

--
End first entry

Tue, 02/07/2012 - 23:51

#10

Faronel

Nice. It's beginning well.

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 00:14

#11

Frostrex

YAY!

Name:Frostrex
Gender:Male
Race:Knight
Gear:Avender, Ascended Calibur, Grey Owlite Shield, Armour of the Fallen set; I'm sure it's boyish enough...
Personality:Mostly light-hearted and enjoys a good meal. He is, like any Knight, a fiecre fighter
Special Skills: ICE
Random Fact:Does not like fire. Aboslutely HATES fire... I'm serious
Fear: Being burned alive and watching friends burned alive.

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 03:57

#12

Emostabe

Sup yo :p

Name: Hall
Gender: Male
Race: Spiral Knight
Gear: Deadly Virulisk Helm, Chaos Cloak, Iron Slug.
Personality: Talks in a silly fashion and often mixes metaphors. Enjoys the occasional practical joke.
Special Skills: Is a master of unarmed combat, but rarely gets to use it.
Random Fact: Was once molested by a Jelly Cube. If you can call that molesting.
Fear: Jelly Cubes. And other gooey things.

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 13:41

#13

Isisdelltion

Name: Vot
Gender: Male
Race: Knight
Gear: Solid Set that smells slightly of marshmellows, Ascended Cali
Personality: Nice, and a little bit awkward, leads without know/trying
Special skills: Leadership
Random Fact: Loves to read, and carries around a couple books.
Fear: Fire

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 14:40

#14

Valorai

Good beginning! Perhaps you

Good beginning! Perhaps you could make it longer? Also, maybe more details!

Wed, 02/08/2012 - 23:51

#15

Toxicblade

Second chapter

Toxic walked out of haven. He had been sent out by the spiral warden on a mission to explore the cradle. He was with three other knights, Hall, who used metaphors a lot, Vot, who smelt like marshmellows, and Frostrex, who had modified... something, that let him freeze enemies.

They were sent to a mountainous region to map the area. Ahead there was a narrow path.

"I'll go first," Vot volunteered.

"Be my guest," Toxic replied. As they walked through the path, Toxic noticed some snagged threads leading up the walls of the canyon to some rocks and bushes. He saw the bushes rustle slightly.

"Uh guys... I think theres an ambush," he said softly.

"What? Where?" Hall asked, pretending to stretch to look around.

"There. In the bushes up there on the left. Near the boulders I saw rustling,"

TBC in an hour or two >_>

Thu, 02/09/2012 - 01:55

#16

Toxicblade

continued from however long ago

The rustling stopped. The team walked on. They were almost through the path, when gunfire enveloped them.

Toxic ran out of the pathway and disappeared to the left.

Hall, Frost, and Vot blocked the bullets and took cover, returning fire with their polarises, issued to them by the warden.

"C'mon show me whatcha got!" One bandit said, standing up.

Heh, way too cocky, Rex thought as he took him out.

Suddenly, Toxic appeared at the top of the outcrop, and, with his Peacemaker in hand he unleashed a flurry of bullets on the bandits, though he didn't notice a bandit behind him, who took him out by hitting him on the head with the pommel of his sword.

Hall was taking out some bandits who had slid down the side of the outcrop to him, and they were now in combat with their swords.
As his sword was knocked out of hand, Hall smiled. Not a problem, he thought to himself. He launched a series of jabs to the nearest bandits stomach, making him cripple over, before he kicked him in the head with such power that the bandit fell onto his back. He roundhouse kicked another over, before being taken out by a sharpshooter on the outcrop.

Rex was freezing the bandits, giving Vot cover, while he climbed up to the outcrop to fight the bandits. Vot climbed up and slashed at the bandits, reducing ones hood to ribbons, before a bandit, foaming at the mouth, ran at him and tackled him. They flew off of the outcrop, hitting the cliff on the other side, and fell, onto some trees, which gave them resistance before they hit the ground.

Rex froze more enemies in spectacular hues of blue-white before fainting of exhaustion from the fighting.

Laughing, the bandits dragged the knights to their camp.

Thu, 02/09/2012 - 22:03

#17

Toxicblade

No comments?

None at all?

Fri, 02/10/2012 - 12:34

#18

Isisdelltion

Ouch D: But it was

Ouch D:
But it was awesome.
PURE AWESOME!

Sat, 02/11/2012 - 09:47

#19

Sanin

WOW

Blue is the only Knight that is on consciousness.....we need new characters to save us or something.
But Good job anyways

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 05:12

#20

Jmtheawesome

Join? Seems like a good fanfic.

Name: Arus (Yamagatchi) (Funny last names ftw)

Gender: Male

Race: Gremlin

Gear: A Crimson Order robe, Two Autoguns, Jalovec, Swift Flourish and Freezing Atomizer.

Personality: Maniac, insane, and probably broke out of the asylum. He is restless and is never without energy.
Or giving others death.

Special Skills: Expert at clinging to walls.

Random Fact: I killed my parents. (0.0)

Fear: His Shadow. (And last name)

P.S. I want to be EVIL. (Muahahahaha)

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 06:37

#21

Dragonightwolf

Character

Name: Nightwolf
Gender: Male
Race: Trojan
Gear: Trojan War Shield, Dual Blackhawks, Divine Avenger
Personality: Caring of his friends but always on his toes, will fight until he is turned to stone.
Special Skills: Can change between his T1, T2, and T3 phases. He is a Divine (or Good) Trojan.
Random Fact: Hates Gremlins
Fear: Antiguas, Argent P's, and Rigadoon Line

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 03:09

#22

Toxicblade

K...

Sorry for not posting stuffs. I'll continue the story tomorrow. NO MOAR CHARACTERS PLEASE.

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