Kora's dialog has a sentence which reads:
"Heck, they survived the Skylark going down after all."
There should be a comma after down, and the tone of the sentence suggests that it should probably end with an exclamation point, more like:
"Heck, they survived the Skylark going down, after all!"
I think the latter clashes with Kora's personality, well what little we know about her. I think the original gives off a more glib vibe while the latter makes it sound almost cheery.