Forums › English Language Forums › General › Treasure Vault

Search

Adventure Of Ghigxhalon [Fan Fiction]

21 replies [Last post]
Wed, 03/14/2012 - 16:16
Imowor's picture
Imowor

This tells of some of the adventures of my character. (Told in first person) It will begin with my delve into the Grand Arsenal.
So, I might as well tell you my equipment:
(This is my real stuff in-game)

Helmets:
Azure Guardian Helm (W/ Com Unit and Bolted Vee)
Salamander Mask
Perfect Mask of Seerus (But my character doesn't get this until later)

Armor:
Azure Guardian Armor (W/ Parrying Blade)
Miracle Cloak

Shields:
Aegis
Wise Owlite Shield

Swords:
Gran Faust
Glacius
Barbarous Thorn Blade
Warmaster Rocket Hammer (Again, won't get this until later)

I do have gun and bombs, but i don't ever use them. Dark Retribution may make an appearence, however.

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 16:37
#1
Imowor's picture
Imowor
[Operation Crimson Hammer] Chapter 1: Looming Walls

I was really about to do this. It was no longer a terrifying thought, or dream. The lift was right in front of me. I was really going to the Grand Arsenal.
"Don't sweat it, you'll be fine. Just use those swords you crafted, and you'll blow right through, said Bosco"
"Don't forget about damage types!!", said Biotech Hahn as I took my first step.
Kozma then stood in front of me.
"Your armor is very finely crafted. Don't let it go to waste."

I stepped on the lift, and pressed the DESCEND button. In a blue flash, the elevator started moving downward. I made a final weak attept at a wave, but by then I was in the shaft. The smell of lubricants filled the air. A few seconds later, a bump.

Feron and a few other officers stood at a small wooden table in front of me. I was not longer standing in the dimly lit room full of recruits and drop pods. I had arrived.

"I'm here", I said. It was all I could think to say.
Feron looked up from the table and simply responded with "Well met, soldier."
Then he went into the explanations. He put a projector on the table, showing the layout of the fortress. The place was huge. And well defended. After the walled section we were in, several cannons were lined up, firing mercilessly.
"These things are our main problem. We would start the raid, but we can't leave, out of fear of being shelled. And our hiding spot won't be safe forever. We're pinned down."

As is to prove his point, a shell landed Next to the table and exploded, sending the papers flying, and killing an unfortunate recruit. It had left a massive hole. One of the other commanders at the table yelled "GO! GO ! GO!
A captain, waiting at the door, rushed out with his squad of pith-helmed recruits. He was followed close behind by me, Feron, and the other commnander.

I had thought it would be hard. Now I realized how terrifying this place truly was.
The walls loomed above our small squad. And then the mortars started coming down.

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 17:14
#2
Oroseira's picture
Oroseira
SO Far, Looks good

Nice one. Keep it up!

Wed, 03/14/2012 - 19:20
#3
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Im thinking if i ever finish

Im thinking if i ever finish mycurrent fanfic, ill make one about all my expidiotions into the clockwroks! The only difference is that Ill make it seem dramatic

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 20:03
#4
Imowor's picture
Imowor
[Operation Crimson Hammer] Chapter 2: Firestorm

Rockets and mortar shells flew in every direction. Utter chaos. Knights fell left and right. Me, Feron, and Commander
Anthony pushed on. Anthony took a direct mortar, but he kept going. I tossed him a Health Capsule, but it would do little good. I had found it somewhere in the Snarbolax's lair, and it would heal a mere 3 pips. Still, better than nothing.

More importantly, I had myself to worry about. Gun Puppies up ahead were firing at us. There were at least six of them. It was bullet hell. A bullet went right between the prongs of Feron's maedate. Close one. I took a bullet to the face, but the Azure Guardian Helm prevented much damage. Sure, it was the hottest, hardest to see out of, most cramped helmet ever, but the complete facial protection was worth it.

"Keep moving!" yelled Anthony. He was being followed close behing by three recruits, Tempered Caliburs at the ready.
"Take this!!" Euclid began spraying his Pepperbox at the Gremlins. A few demos fell, their bombs detonating in their hands.
"AAARGH!!" One of the recruits fell. he had been hit by a Thwacker. Euclid quickly shot it.

Mortabombers and Thwackers were approaching. I dodged and lunged through the approaching crowed with the my thorn blade, downing several of the Thwackers. The Mortabombers could not be hit from the front. I leaped over their heads and landed behind them, Gran Faust at the ready. I swung twice. One Mortabomber fell, and the rockets activated in the other one's backpack, sending him in the air like a jet.

"Look out!!!' yelled Feron.
But it was too late. Anthony and I were on fire. I was trapped in the cramped armor, and it was heating up. The pain was unbearable. I fell to the ground, unable to take it. I was trapped in the melting coffin that was my helmet. Anthony threw off his Ironmight Plate Helm, and Feron snuffed out the flames on him. But the fabric on my armor was fueling the fire. I was choking in the smoke. the heat had distorted my helmet, and I couldn't get it off. Anthony, Feron, and a few others were trying to help desperately. My lungs were burning. Then the world went black.....

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 15:36
#5
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Love the detail :D

Great work here!

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 16:23
#6
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
I have a question...

Isn't Euclid dead? Or missing, because he is a member of the Alpha Squad, adn well, we all know what happened to them D':
Oh and btw, great story so far, I love it :D

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 20:24
#7
Imowor's picture
Imowor
Oh yeah...

I just though of that name..... I KNEW it sounded familiar. I just couldn't put my finger on it. I thought Euclid was a GM for a second, but I couldn't remember.

Anyway, his name is changed to Anthony to avoid any further confusion with Euclid, member of the M.I.A Alpha Squad. If you've played Operation Crimson Hammer, Anthony is supposed to be the guy with the Ironmight (or Boosted) Plate Helm right behind the shield door on the first level, charging a Pepperbox.

~Ghigxhalon

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 20:43
#8
Imowor's picture
Imowor
[Operation Crimson Hammer] Chapter 3: Awakening

Was I dead? Would I know? Would it be obvious if I was? Where was I? What had happened?
Then, after my whole life flashed by for the sixth time, I remembered.
Operation Crimson Hammer.
Mortar barrage.
Flames.
Helmet is a coffin.
Agony.

And now this. I knew I should have worn the Salamander Mask. But what did it matter now? I was probably dead, laying scorched and mutilated on the floor. But somehow I knew I wasn't. It was just a hunch. A hunch. But it was something.......

Something.....

Then I woke up.
"Ghig? Ghig?! GHIG?! Wake the hell up!! We're getting slaughtered over here!"
"Feron!" I yelled. I was still a bit confused, and shocked that I really wasn't dead. I was burned all over, particularly my face. I looked up. I could see my reflection in a puddle of oil that had spilled from the tank of a dead Scorcher. Maybe the one that had burned me.
My face was raw, bloody, and just screwed up in general. One of my eyes was swollen almost completely shut, and the part of my eye I could see was a sickly orange. Likewise, half my vision was red.

Anthony leaned over me.
"You look like crap."
"Acknowledged," was all I could respond with.
"It was a cruel trap."
"What?" I said.
"They sent a few cages full of Oiler lichens at us. We were confused at first, but then Feron saw the squad of Scorchers following. Then he realized what was happening. It was too late. You got messed up."
"Yeah."
"Anyway, we mostly hammered your helmet back into shape."
"Kozma's still gonna have a fit," I said.
Anthony laughed. This time, I would wear the helm with the visor up.
"Here we go!"

Anthony pulled me out of the safe corner, right into the hailstorm of approaching Gremlins.

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 21:39
#9
Imowor's picture
Imowor
Useless post....

I typed Chapter 4 but I didnt like it, so I got rid of it, and now I'm stuck with this pointless comment.....

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 02:12
#10
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
A friendly message from Pow...

Pow: CHECKOUTMYNEWFANFICCALLEDTHECLASHINEEDCHARACTERAPPSFORTHEPROLOGUE

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 06:25
#11
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
This is such a good story, it deserves a bump! :D

Hey Ghig, don't forget that time I...erm...saw you on the guild list.
Oh wait, that was my alias...
YOU NEVER SAW ME HERE! XD

Mon, 03/19/2012 - 00:30
#12
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
I now have...

COMPETITION!!!

Why? WHY DO I HAS COMPETITION!!!!???

Thu, 03/22/2012 - 15:34
#13
Imowor's picture
Imowor
Competition

Because you do. It's true. TRUE CAUSE IT RHYMES! xP

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 13:20
#14
Imowor's picture
Imowor
[Operation Crimson Hammer] Chapter 4: Mayhem

Wave upon wave of Gremlins advanced toward us. I wasn't sure whether to panic and flee in terror, or to charge right in. Of course, I chose the second option. I let out a fierce battlecry and ran at full speed towards the onslaught. I swiped and slashed and shielded, every Gremlin I killed replaced by three more. I wasn't scared. I had survived worse tham this.

Well, maybe not. I lay sprawled on the ground, Heat Embers scattered everywhere. Ouch. Anthony quickly revived me, and we were both ready to attack. Anthony pulled out a Mega Magnus.
"I'll give you covering fire! You just charge on in!"
"Alright! Try not to fall on your butt!"
"Hah! I won't. To think, the recoil force is so much, but it's still so damn heavy!"

I charged in, followed by a few other soldiers. Some pulled out Caliburs or Brandishes, others Blasters and Alchemers.
Mayhem.
Bullets flew, mortars detonated.
Menders casted spells, Thwackers swung hammers.
Knights swung swords, shot handguns.
And Anthony yelled.

He was being overrun. I was too. The Thwackers just kept on coming!
Anthony desperately shot the Gremlins off of himself.
I swung wildly, but they were still coming.
Anthony was right on the edge of the platform.....

Charging his Magnus.
"What are you doing?!"
"The only thing that will get us out of this mess!"
"Are you insane?! Do you realize what that will do?!"
He nodded.
"It'll probably kill me, but it will save the rest. Complete the mission! I don't know where Feron is....... everyting rests on you now, Ghigxhalon!!"

And with that, he fired.
The huge bullet cut down the entire squad of Gremlins, saving us both.
Sort of.
Anthony was thrown off the platform into the abyss.
I looked over the edge, almost thinking a hand would grab the side at the last minute.

It didn't.
And then the hammer hit me.

When I came to my senses, I was falling..... falling.... falling.....

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 13:58
#15
Pow-The-Commando's picture
Pow-The-Commando
I have soloed OCH twice, and

I have soloed OCH twice, and both failed while fighting Seerus. F0CK YOU SEERUS!

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 14:49
#16
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
^^^

Wth? Does it really matter? (Besides, there is no way, it is REALLY REALLY hard, so I call you a LIAR!) Ahem, yes, great! chapter! Oh and btw, I have a question, how do you pronounce your name? o_O

Fri, 03/23/2012 - 15:17
#17
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
@Ghig

It's cool. XD Mine's actually the start of a longer series, where I'm guessing that yours is a stand-alone? I can't reveal anymore.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 15:16
#18
Imowor's picture
Imowor
To answer your questions...

This is not a stand-alone. It will most likely include all the bosses and other expiditions.

My name is pronouced:

Gig - zah - lon

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 16:41
#19
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Gig-za-lon...

Heh, seems easy enough I think the "h", "x", and other "h" mad it hard other than that it would be Gig-a-lon. so yeah, well thanks then. ANd to make this a worthy comment, are yu almost done with the next chapter? Heh, I like your writing and want to read moar :P

Sat, 03/31/2012 - 16:22
#20
Imowor's picture
Imowor
[Operation Crimson Hammer] Chapter 5: The Pit

Let me tell you, landing back-first on a pile of steel rods at terminal velocity is not a pleasant experience. This is definitely one of those, "I'll take your word for it" situations. Don't try it.

I lay on the ground, paralyzed, bleeding, and in much pain.
"AARGH!!! T-th-that hurt..... and I can't move.... m-maybe m-my spine is b-broken....."
"You'd be dead if it was."
"Who's there?!"
Anthony's Ironmight Plate Helm came into view.
"You're alive?!"
"Yeah, charge-firing the Magnus right before hitting botton is a good way to survive a fall, as I've learned. It sends you back up a little so you fall a small distance slowly.
"Well, using Polaris for that would only result in a self-electrocution...... not like I could help it."
Anthony helped me up. I felt a bit shaky, but I was alive. Still hurt a lot, but I could get around that.

I heard a small noise.
"Here comes the calvalry," said Anthony.
"What?"
Ropes fell down and six Knights quickly slid down.
"Alright.... time to take out those cannons," said their leader.
I gave them a confused look.
"Those cannons are making it hell for our reinforcements.... we need to go in and take them out. We didn't take the lift, but the guns are around this depth. I'm Kevin, the squad leader. The supplies should be here soon."

Eight crates fell down from above.
"Here we go," said Kevin.
We opened the crates. They had Nitronomes, Sudaruskas, and Magma Drivers inside. They also seemed to contain some form of Jelly Armor made from Oilers.
"Heavy weaponry. Let's do this," said Anthony.

We all stripped down and put on the Oiler suits. I slung a Sudaruska over my back, put the Magma Driver on my belt, And stocked up on Nitronomes.
Time to take out the cannons.

Then we heard raspy laughs and growls. The glowing slits of the Gremlin's goggles were all arounds us. We were surrounded.

Still, they didn't stand a chance.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 08:50
#21
Imowor's picture
Imowor
Bump.

Also may want to read the chapter above for those who were waiting for it.

Powered by Drupal, an open source content management system