Spiral Knights - <Fanfic> Disturbances <CANCELLED>

<Fanfic> Disturbances <CANCELLED>

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Mon, 03/26/2012 - 14:15

#51

Nickle

Response

Name: Pikachow

Gender: Male

Species: Gremlin

Equipment: Anything yellow

History: He was born in a distant island around Haven. He is very talented in sports and drawing. He had a traumatic accident when he and his mother had to flee a sinking ship doing the trip from the island he was born on all the way to Haven. He loves to battle Gremlins because his father is part of the rebellion. He has a burning desire and loves anime.

Relations:His name is sort of the name of the island he was born in, which is called Pikchoi island. He is a geek in anime. His father is the only living thing on Cradle that can access Japanese things from a special device that steals Japanese stuff from Japan on Earth. He is in love with Pokemon and Pikachu. His favorite food is obviously chow.

Tue, 03/27/2012 - 17:58

#52

Soulstaker

APP for story

Name: Graves

Gender:Male

Species:Knight (But he is a rogue or forgotten knight)

Equipment: Ashtail Helmet and Armour. A acended calibur and a faust. He has a a grey owlitte shield (he found it in ruins of a owlitte academy)

History: One day Graves went to a nearby wolver den to find some missing knights. He encountered Ash Tail Wolvers and he killed them all without breaking a sweat. He found the knights but unfortunaly they were... dead. He was ambushed by more ash tails but there was too much, he contacted HQ for knights to come help him but they denied the request for some reason. Then, he decided run back to elevator but there was a loud rumbling noise. He saw huge gears turning. He realized that the gates are changing and it was impossible to return to the gate and it might be months or even years that that this gate would reappear in the SK Arcade. He decided to just survive in these depths until the gate reappear. Few days later it started to snow forever and he started to use ash tail fur to make clothes to make him warm. But, one thing that also kept him alive.... the thirst for vengance. Over the months, He started to go a bit insane but hid it. He befriended the gremlins and helped them with their projects to destroy the knights (Because he seeked revenge against Spiral HQ). But then one day, someone changed everything.... (And thats when he comes into this story if you would include him)

Relations: He has alot of loyal gremlin friends and have a pet wolver.

I don't really care how you make this character fit into this story.

Mon, 03/26/2012 - 16:22

#53

Nickle

Second Response

Name: Urr

Gender: Male

Species: Lumber

Equipment: His fists

History: He was first constructed to battle knights, but he befriended them. He was a weapon of kindness. As they were going to bring him to the surface, people were afraid he might turn evil and left him there. But a single knight secretly brought him to the surface and he was nowhere to be seen ever since. Until you bring him into the story.

Relations: He calls his fists his loved ones. He has a pet Chromalisk. He is 9' 11'' tall. He is about 1,240 Lb. He speaks over 40 languages. He is the best Lumber there is.

Mon, 03/26/2012 - 20:53

#54

Nechrome

Very well. I'll use my more

Very well. I'll use my more dark character. :) I always wanted a chance to use him.

Name: Exodius

Gender: Male

Species: Hybrid of rogue Spiral Knight and machine.

Equipment: Mainly Khorovod, Jalovec, Magic Hood, Wolver Coat, and Bristling Buckler.

History: Exodius used to be a normal Spiral Knight. However, when the SKylark crashed and his pod landed, his head was addled from the crash, thus becoming semi-insane. He went rogue and hid in the Clockworks. At some point, he encountered Lord Seerus, and fought him. Seerus defeated him, but realized Exodius' potential as a powerful weapon. He performed a series of operations and the such like on him, adding several mechanical upgrades to his body, and a microchip to control his insanity, turning him into the perfect killing machine. He fights in the name of Gremlin Empire now, but occasionally hires himself out as a mercenary.

Relations: Lord Seerus, King Tinkinzar, Gremlin Empire.

That good enough? :)

Wed, 03/28/2012 - 19:04

#55

Tevokkia

I'm just going to leave this here. Looks like you may need it.

Name: Kastner

Gender: Male

Species: Spiralian

Equipment: He wears a Shadowsun Slicker with a black Rose Chapeau, and carries both an Argent Peacemaker and a Setenza.

History: Kastner is easygoing and friendly, to the point of being almost too friendly at times ... he occasionally creeps people out. The problem is that he seems to enjoy everything in life, even things that most normal people don't - like really rough battles or trips to the dentist - and this generally results in humor at inappropriate times. For all intents and purposes, he's led a pretty normal existence: supportive family, good grades in school, and nothing much to mention in the way of romance ... so nobody is quite sure where that extra bit of weird came from. He's good at what he does and has never done anything worse than make people grimace a bit, though, so no one really bothers him about it.

Relations: He has three siblings (one older, two younger), and his parents are still living. He actually has quite the extended family. He also has a couple of close friends, a medic named Frankel and a swordsman named Jalen, who don't mind the over-happy and generally have his back.

Wed, 03/28/2012 - 16:12

#56

Nickle

Name: Suchaiwingjalicoppa (in Stranger Language) or Swifty

Gender: Male

Species: Snipe

Equipment: Dreaded Skelly Helm, Ash Tail Coat, and a very very very bushy tail that is fake.

History: He was raised near an expert knight's house. He unintentionally tried out the Dreaded Skelly Helm and it was stuck, then he was trapped in an Ash Tail Coat, and then fell into a glue that was on its rear and a tail of a wolver was attached to it. He flied endlessly until the knight found it and decided to keep it. The knight would bring the snipe as a companion into the clockworks. One day his companion died trying to save the snipe from the Vanaduke. The snipe wanders around trying to get back into the surface. But unfortunately he too was lost in the clockworks.

Relations: He is 7'' tall and 4'' wide. He is about 3 lb. He is probably the first case of equipment theft by a snipe. He is the only snipe in the world who was raised around an expert knight's house. The snipe's second name was Fashionalisticaljimbuquial (in Stranger Language) or Fashionista even though he is a male. He is a very persistant snipe in the clockworks. The companion cared for the snipe more than anything in the world.

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:01

#57

Shue-Donnym

#Ayup

fdsfgghsd
Parents dragged me on "surpriz vacaishun" so I couldn't post for a while.
Reply time...
#Nickle
Bluh, didn't want to say this but I don't think your characters can fit.
Pikachow- seems horribly out of place and rather nonsensical, as far as I know there isn't a sea round haven
Urr- Not very clear on this one, try to make him more interesting and I'll think about it
Swifty- oh boy...oh... um... This... incredibly nonsensical. #sorry

#Soulstaker
Nice enough, getting to work on integrating him into the story

#Tev
Niiiice... he's in.

While I drag my feet during my creative block to make another chapter, I've created yet another bonus read.
#BeRightBack
...or right after I get some sleep.

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 06:27

#58

Softhead

...

So I have no replies?

XPLAD! Y U NO REPLY!?

Sun, 04/01/2012 - 17:19

#59

Nechrome

What about me? D:

Mon, 04/02/2012 - 05:33

#60

Soulstaker

Yay

Hope the next chapter comes soon :)

Mon, 04/02/2012 - 06:07

#61

Shue-Donnym

#Ayup

Geez guys, I dragged my feet up two hundred fourteen stairs a few days ago, can't I have a break?
...just kidding.
#Atrum: Chuck is...the same character you've used in crap tons of other fanfics. Creativity could be appreciated but I'm mulling it over.

#Necro: I feel like Exodius is basically Necro but with ROBO-TERMINATOR POWAAAAAAAAAAASDFGHJKL. Same as with Atrum, mulling it over.
--CHAPTER FIVE--
Atraxine woke up. There was pain in her shoulder and some in her leg too. She looked around and saw she was in one bed in a row of many. In the beds beside her lay many other wounded, both Knights and Gremlins.
"Ohey," said a Mender,"you're awake." He looked at a clipboard he had been carrying under his arm and said, "Um...Atraxine, right?"
"Yeah."
"You've been out for five hours."
"What?" Atraxine exclaimed. "I gotta get back there!"
"Too late, battle's over."
"We won?"
"Yeah, also, here's what happened according to what we've patched together from eyewitness accounts and medical examination.
You raised your shield to block the energy bolt. The internal mechanisms were thick enough to absorb the energy, but the force was too much and your arm was pushed back, fracturing your shoulder. You fell down, and one of your legs was cut by some saws you were stockpiling for throwing. The medics brought you out immediately. As in regards to the battle, the enemies were taken from behind by a group of Frostifur Wolvers led by one of the rare Skolvers. They've been milling around after the battle. They seem to recognize that we're on the same side.
The monsters have retreated back into the darkness."
"Hey," said Atraxine, "since you're a Mender, would you mind patching me up already?"
The Mender laughed, a deep gravelly voiced-laugh. His hood fell down, and Atraxine found herself looking at a bearded face, with sunken, sleepless eyes lacking the goggles of a regular Mender. He raised his wand and it glowed once.
Atraxine felt slightly better. "Is that all you can do?"
"Unfortunately, yes. All I have is Level Five Mending Clearance on this wand. I can patch you up with some duct tape, though."
"Huh, okay, sounds good."
...
Atraxine staggered to her feet. Her shoulder and leg were covered in duct tape, and she was using a crystal-less Mender wand as a walking stick. She turned to the Mender and said, "Oh, I almost forgot, what's your name?"
"Call me Variance."
"Is that your real name?"
"Nah, it's just a moniker I adopted somewhere along the line. See you, got some other patients to keep watch on. Bye!"
Atraxine stood there as the Mender walked away. She swore she could almost hear him chuckling.
--CHAPTER END--
Ookay that's all I got tonight. T'was pretty hard thinking of something to write but I've got some deaths planned out already. Signing off~

Mon, 04/02/2012 - 06:13

#62

Tevokkia

This makes me laugh.

*applauds* I love how snarktastic you write Atraxine to be. XD

Mon, 04/02/2012 - 08:45

#63

Soulstaker

Nice chapter.

Dangit..... you should have not included got deaths planned out, going to make my head trying to guess who will die.

Mon, 04/02/2012 - 17:24

#64

Shue-Donnym

Ghost to Riverbed

@Tevokkia
Thanks.
@Soulstaker
If I were half the writer I wanted to be I would be torturing you with suspense and biotch-slapping you upside the head with cliffhangers.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 05:56

#65

Shue-Donnym

#Ayup

So a while ago my internet was being a biotch and randomly disconnecting and reconnecting so I randomly decided to draw Variant or at least what I envisioned him looking like in HARDCORE MODE (Read: MS Paint). See it here.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 06:30

#66

Tevokkia

*golf clap*

That, sir, is truly hardcore. XD

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 08:04

#67

Awesomesock

Let's submit some maniac

Name: Kradal

Gender: Male

Species: Gremlin

Equipment: Wears a bloodstained, dirty Ironclaw mender outfit with a hammer, duct tape and some pouches filled with medicals. Also has a wrench wand with an orange, glowing crystal clamped on.

History: A homicidal, sadistic mender, who has more people tortured, then healed chalked up. He wasn't always this sick. He used to be a quiet schoolboy at the Gremlin Mender College. Few relised he was actually bulled by his relatives. Constant insults and teasing have turned him into a cold-hearted, mean sunovasnipe.

Relations: None.

This is how he looks like:

http://buggerthefox.deviantart.com/art/You-don-t-want-him-to-be-your-men...

Re-sknning is magic.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 17:41

#68

Shue-Donnym

#Ayup

#Tevokkia
Thanks
#Awesomesock
Would you want him to be an outcast type or just another squad member?
EDIT: Also random Spiralspy tidbit: Vanduke shares the same body type with Slag Guards and Trojans. You can effectively make those models play each other's animations. The thing that made me realize this was the incredible similarity of Vana's cast animation and Trojans' buff anim.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 17:57

#69

Soulstaker

I'm still camping at the

I'm still camping at the forums waiting for a new chapter :P

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 20:21

#70

Shue-Donnym

ses

Hey! I have a life outside of mediocre fanfiction, y'know!
If you're that bored, then break a few ribs with this.

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 20:40

#71

Soulstaker

I don't click on links I

I don't click on links I don't trust :P

Tue, 04/03/2012 - 22:13

#72

Awesomesock

@Xplad

He's in a squad. If he were from Emberlight I would have used different textures. Thanks for the tip, by the way. :3

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 16:15

#73

Shue-Donnym

OH FOR CHRISSAKE

I've been delayed again because my comp broke and instead of just fixing it my mom bought a WHOLE NEW operating system effectively wiping out all my files.
Yes, including my Spiralspy stuff and a few retextures I was going to show you guys.
To add to that I somehow can't play SK on Windows 7 Ultimate.
I like to call it ultimate piece of crap now.

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 16:18

#74

Soulstaker

I am sorry for your loss...

Wed, 04/04/2012 - 16:21

#75

Tevokkia

Oh noes!!!! I'm sorry you lost all your stuff. It's always awful when that happens.

I know SK installed differently on my Windows 7 machine than it did on my XP machine.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 05:34

#76

Awesomesock

@xplad

I have Windows 7 Ultimate and it works nicely. :U Maybe it's because I have Steam, though.

Thu, 04/05/2012 - 22:22

#77

Shue-Donnym

Muh

While I type up some bonus read to keep you at bay have some randomness.
--WHITE HOUSE UPDATE--
Obama: I will make tax cuts worth a trillion billion million THOUSAND over the next ten (trillion) years.
Obama: We must do what's good for our future and wipe out China.

Fri, 04/06/2012 - 11:29

#78

Soulstaker

Pffft China will win against

Pffft China will win against the US. You may ask how but this is the master plan..... EMBARGO ON THE US, HAHAHAHAHAHHA NO CHEAP PRODUCTS FOR THE US = US loses due to economic problems.

Fri, 04/06/2012 - 11:29

#79

Soulstaker

Double post

Fri, 04/06/2012 - 11:52

#80

Isekuube

Wow...

I'm suprised on how much that makes sense :P Good master plan, DON'T TELL ANYBODY IN CHINA D:

Fri, 04/06/2012 - 12:21

#81

Awesomesock

@Isekuube

I bet they figured it out already...

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 01:49

#82

Shue-Donnym

I AM SENDING THIS CONGRESS TO HELL

Okay I managed to throw together a bonus read to distract you guys while I crash a train in Western Northern West Virginia. nah jk
---
It was the middle of the night as a knight was awoken by a shouting outside his room.
The sleepy knight stumbled out of his room and through the door.
"What is that loud shouting noise..." he thought.
He decided to look in the streets for the source of this commotion.
Then as his eyes adjusted to the dark, he was greeted by a horrifying sight.
Dozens of undead creatures groaned and moaned as they scrabbled through the streets of Haven.
A zombie walked up to him and stared into his eyes, instilling terror in his mind.
The knight decided there was only one logical thing to do.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!" he screamed as he rocketed into his dwelling and double, triple, quadruple locked the door to his room.
They were outside the door now. He could hear footsteps.
"This is my end...I'd rather kill myself than fall to those horrible creatures..." he thought.
So he got up and rifled through his drawer until he found the item he was gunning for(lmao gun jokes)...an Antigua.
He bit down on the gunpowder covered barrel and a single tear fell from his eye before he pulled the trigger.
He fell to the floor dead as his head leaked blood across the floor.
On his shelf, a news broadcast module flashed to life and projected the words:
DARK HARVEST FESTIVAL: COLLECT UNDEAD MONSTER MASKS AND SHOW OFF TO YOUR FRIENDS

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 09:53

#83

Soulstaker

Lol! That was funny.

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 10:10

#84

Isekuube

A-A-AHA!

XD THat's ha... ha... LOL. Hilarious! :P That ought to keep ppl occupied

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 12:30

#85

Tevokkia

...

Oy vey. /facepalm

Sat, 04/07/2012 - 13:55

#86

Soulstaker

Friend: -./)

Edit:tev beat me XD

Sun, 04/08/2012 - 08:53

#87

Nomadk

App

Name: Nomadkrad

Gender:Male

Species:Knight

Equipment:Daring Rigadoon, BlazeBrand, Strike Needle, Antiqua, (only holds one gun and one sword at a time AKA only has 2 weapon slots) Chapeu of the Gold rose, full Heavy Plate

History:I lived on the Skylark for most of his life and swore he would see his brother again since he didn't join the spiral order. Aboard the Skylark I didn't have many friend and anyone that hated him would be challenged in the ring. I won some and he lost some. Most don't remember me after the crash except the ones who hated me and my friends. Once going through a cooling chamber I found a frostifur cub that was very weak and hurt. Seeing evidence of a wolver fight, blood, patches of fur and deep claw marks in the snow. I look over the cub.It'll just slow you down, continue with the mission. No I could just stab it through the ribs with my sword but no, its dying and its helpless, besides i couldn't bring myself to do that. Upon finding the elevator, I ascend to Haven and go to my house, a pod with scrap metal and bricks welded to it as a "Housing Expansion" I set it down in the room and leave to get some, chroma meat for the pup. I come back and my pillow is shredded and a broken picture frame of my brother is lying on the floor. Ok calm, its a wild animal, i can tame it, it will get better.I sit down next to it and it swiped my face leaving a shallow scar on my cheek which shortly after freezes over. Well it could be worst, it could be an ash tail. I give it the meat and soak my face with warm water I leave a bowl of water out and making sure its sound asleep I collapse on my bed and enter a deep sleep. You know I remember those moments best even more than the battles. Anyway, I eventual train it and name her Cassie. I don't want to take her to battle wet because, god forbid she gets hurt. I grew so attacheted to her aver the past months. So, uhh, is that it for the interview? Yes? Well it was a pleasure talking with you.

Relations: Has a brother on another planet who he misses, A pet frostifur cub, named Cassie that he has treated at his house dosent take into battle until older.

Sun, 04/08/2012 - 07:25

#88

Soulstaker

No I refuse to let this

No I refuse to let this fanfic to die.

Sun, 04/15/2012 - 20:52

#89

Shue-Donnym

He will go down, he will drown down deeper down

"I see leaves and they are starting to turn brown, but they'll be green and growing when the second season comes around."
@Nomad
Your bio is very confusing. You flitter from first to third person constantly. Clean it up and maybe I'll think about it.
@all
I think this is enough characters for me to handle, closing role casting soon.
--CHAPTER SIX--
In a certain part of one of the deeper levels, a cloaked figure stood in a dark room chanting olden words forgotten by time. In front of the figure was a table. And on that table was a skull.
In the eye sockets were dark matter crystals.
"Vralnis kryvlen srilat atrientum saelius," chanted the cloaked figure.
Then a long arm reached out and tapped the skull ever so lightly.
Once.
Twice.
Thrice.
And the crystals glowed as from around the room came the sound of bones tearing themselves from their fleshy bonds to join their new master.
---
The knight sat on the ground drinking from his barrel belly.
He was pretty far from the others, but he wasn't afraid as he thought that the enemy was gone.
Then the wolver leaped from the shadows as the buzzsaw lodged in its chest kicked into action.
The unfortunate knight died from a jagged gash running the width of his chest.
The buzzsaw finally ripped its way out of the wolver and clattered to the ground. The wolver died, all its energy spent.
---
Later on, both knights and gremlins stared in disbelief at the grisly carnage. Then some of them heard something echo across the halls.
The unmistakable growl of saws revving up.
--CHAPTER END--

Sun, 04/15/2012 - 06:40

#90

Soulstaker

Yay new chapter

Sun, 04/15/2012 - 21:03

#91

Shue-Donnym

Once upon a night we'll wake to the carnival of life

/bump

-"I may be old but at least I'm not like all those other old guys."

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 15:11

#92

Tevokkia

Wolver saws!

I'm just imagining a few dozen rabid wolvers with buzz saws sticking out of their chests running down a hallway, only the glow of their feral eyes visible at first as they descend upon the knights and gremlins ...

...okay. I'll stop now.

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 15:16

#93

Shue-Donnym

I think I'll call them Razorfronts.

@Tev
Thanks.

Also if anyone is wondering why I switched to the jelly mail avatar, well, I'm like the only guy wearing it on the entire forum now. The only other guy I saw with it is some guy who probably just logged on the forums to rage quit about grimalkins.

DON'T YOU COPY ME

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 17:23

#94

Soulstaker

I'm one of the closest guys

I'm one of the closest guys that is similar to your Forum Picture. Royal Jelly ftw

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 17:54

#95

Liltes

If it's not too late...

Name: Liltes

Gender: Female

Species: Spiral Knight

Equipment: Crown of the Fallen, Armor of the Fallen, Acheron, Sentenza, Blackened Crest, Glasses, and helmet Flower

History: Liltes is one of the many Valkyrie Knights stationed on board the Skylark, unlike most of her fellow soldiers she has an unhealthy obsession with the swarm, fanatically collecting every bit of data she can scrounge up on it with the ultimate goal of incorporating the seemingly invincible swarm into her armor to render it invincible. Her pursuit of such dark matters has left her armor darkened and her eyes a sickly green. She berates knights who rely on light-based weapondry. She in not inherently evil but she does have a hard time making new friends.
"The light is finite, but the darkness goes on forever."

Relations: Liltes rarely talks to anyone not directly in the line of HQ operatives, she frequents with Kora to receive the latest intel on the biggest groups of the swarm, she also talks to Vaelyn who is at the core and probably closest to the shadow lairs. She also talks often with Biotech Hahn to make sure she is never harmfully affected by the time she spends near the swarm, she also doesn't mind letting him have the entire conversation on his own.

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 03:39

#96

Shue-Donnym

@Liltes

She's in. Gonna work on incorporating her into the story.
--CHAPTER SEVEN--
Graves stepped out as the elevator ground to a halt. This place...was strange...it had a foreboding feeling to it. As Graves got into the castle, he noticed the two paths. He thought he would go through the gremlin path. Before he could go in, the portion of the ceiling above the path's entrance slammed down.
That left only one option.
The knight path.
Graves looked at the rotating slicer.
"This'll be an interesting challenge," he thought.
He jumped onto the blade, paused a bit, then jumped and rolled into the hallway on the other end. "Not even hard," he thought.
From ahead came the sound of battle, of metal, of screams.
----
Kastner shot a Razorfront in the skull with his Sentenza. It skidded to a halt at his feet. He kicked it away and continued to shoot as the other Knights, Wolvers and Gremlins fought on the frontlines. One enemy was about to tear a frostifur in half before it was shot out of the air. The enemy was driven back for a moment, but it was rebuffed by an unexpected arrival.
A few dozen zombie gremlins scrambled out into the battle zone, swinging their weaponry like mad.
Then five Knight-monsters marched out and opened fire.
And there was something worse yet to come.
A towering, gangly skeletal figure staggered out into the warzone. Inside its eyes were two glowing dark matter crystals. Unlike mostly everything around it, it moved leisurely, as if there wasn't much to worry about.
Kastner shot one Knight-monster one, two, three, four times before it dropped.
Then he turned his attention to the skeleton.
His shots blew off its arms as the frontliners hacked away at its legs.
It clattered to the ground as a pile of bones.
The crystals glowed.
The bones scrabbled over each other, linking and attaching to reform the skeletal being.
The reborn monster lifted up an unlucky Knight and threw him down to the ground, breaking his neck.
----
Kradal saw something out of the corner of his eye. A Gremlin sneaking away from the battle and around a corner.
"Coward," thought Kradal. The mender decided to just ignore it and report the coward later.
But something didn't feel right.
Kradal thrust his wand into a nearby mender's free hand. "Hold this for me, will you?"
Then before the other could react, Kradal was running towards the place he had seen the other gremlin.
Kradal peeked around the corner.
The gremlin was talking to one of the knight-monsters.
Traitor.
Kradal walked noisily around the corner.
The knight-monster screeched and ran away, dropping its firearm.
Before the traitorous gremlin could pick it up, Kradal tackled him to the floor and picked the firearm up first, then aimed it at the traitor.
"I should kill you right now."
"Hah, you can't kill me, you're a Mender! There are rules, you know!"
"You know what? I've got a question."
"What is it?"
"If a tree falls in the middle of the Jigsaw Valley, and no gremlin is around to hear it, does it make a sound?"
"Uh-"
"Yes." said Kradal, interrupting the other.
The traitor's face twisted into a smile. "That means you can't kill me."
Kradal shot the energy bolt into the gremlin's skull.
"Problem is," said the mender,"nobody's going to hear it."
Then Kradal walked back to his station, leaving the crossbow behind.
--CHAPTER END--

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 04:53

#97

Awesomesock

Awsome.

I like how you used my character in this chapter. Waiting for more.

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 06:31

#98

Tevokkia

Yay! New chapter!

Liking the descriptions in these sections, and especially loving Kradal's dialogue. Haha ... started reading and was like "Kastner? That name sounds familiar ..." Took my dumb self a few moments to realize he was my character. Oh dear.

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 17:19

#99

Soulstaker

Yes finally my character at

Yes finally my character at least was a chapter. Looking forward to more chapters.

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 18:33

#100

Hexidac

Name: Valon Gender:

Name: Valon

Gender: Male

Species: Spiral Knight

Equipment: Arcane Salamander Mask, Snarbolax Coat, Acheron, Callahan, Voltaic Tempest, Recon Division Standard Issue Cloaking Generator

History: Valon, while excelling in training as a scout and infiltrator, never felt very comfortable knowing that his skills would make him stand out of the other recon trainees. Not wanting to be well known to the public eye, he intentionally sabotaged his records and decided to play the part of a lazy slacker. He came out of training known as the worst of the bunch. On the surface, Valon appears to be lazy and sleepy. Underneath, he is calm and collected, and will not hesitate to strike down enemies of the Spiral Order. Many foes have fallen for his act, and paid for it with a blade through the torso. He is a brilliant tactician and very lethal swordsmen, though he does carry a Callahan around just in case.

Relations: None, family deceased

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