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Tue, 03/27/2012 - 13:04
Nickle

Just add a sentence to the story.
WARNING, BEFORE POSTING A SENTENCE, MAKE SURE IT MEETS REQUIREMENTS BELOW:
I cannot be shorter than 7 words.
The story must mention a place from Cradle and outside of Cradle
It cannot be innapropriate
The story ends in 7 days since I last posted.
The story has to have at least 3 characters.
You cannot type an entire paragraph
Do not post more than once in a row
Do not say THE END
The story has to make sense
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The story begins now

Once upon a time, an upbeat knight wondered around in circles.

Tue, 03/27/2012 - 13:06
#1
Iskender's picture
Iskender
All these pills he consumed

All these pills he consumed made him dizzy.

Wed, 03/28/2012 - 15:34
#2
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
So dizzy he stepped on a

So dizzy he stepped on a snipe and was beaten to death by a mob of enraged strangers.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 08:59
#3
Awesomesock's picture
Awesomesock
The strangers didn't actually

The strangers didn't actually kill him, so he wandered into Arcade and took a random ride down just to get ambushed by a crapton of Gremlins.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 09:09
#4
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
We apparently don't like this knight much.

Dodging around the gremlins spasmodically, he managed to run off and find a good hiding place, but it was a close call that came only after a heavy beating.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 09:10
#5
Iskender's picture
Iskender
Instead of attacking him,

When they found him again, however, they noticed that he had snipe blood on his boots and praised him as their new king.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 14:40
#6
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
For every Gremlin knew that

For every Gremlin knew that Snipes loved the taste of Gremlin blood, and that is why so few ever ventured to the surface.

(How unexpectedly gruesome :P)

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 15:05
#7
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Lol, gruesomeness n my part

But then, a young Vog cub came in, killed the gremlins, and then poked the knight. Sadly, it still had its fire abilities on, and the Knight started to scream as he burned. Then the Vog cub sighed and bit the Knight,

THE END

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 16:36
#8
Axonio's picture
Axonio
.

The knight was found again near a stove in the middle of the night, a sleepy female knight entered the room and she wondered about his current action, he states that he's boiling a sweet dessert with a delicious flavor while stirring a gooey mixture in the pan with a spoon; she wonders why on Cradle he's doing this at this time of the night and he replied that he lost the dominance of his existence. Then they proceeded to go upstairs where an injured and spoiled knight was watching some old tapes made for entertainment, the knight presented the mixture to the injured knight who looked at it and denied it since he no longer had appetite. Our knight, frustrated after all this odyssey he had to go through, proceeded to stare at the blank space, questioning the meaning of his life before, from deep within himself, released his outcry that could be heard in all Haven.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 17:19
#9
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Kaijuhunter & Axonio

NO THE END OR PARAGRAPHS! (you two are being such a cupel of trolls)

@Axonio truth be toled yours is quite good.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 18:02
#10
Axonio's picture
Axonio
Let's get the ball rolling again!

As our knight walked far from those gremlins, he took the elevator which arrived in a graveyard.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 18:21
#11
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
Well, we do need some more characters

Another knight, younger, stood hesitating near the elevator unsure of whether to proceed, and jumped when our protagonist approached as though she had not really heard the elevator.

Thu, 03/29/2012 - 19:21
#12
Sanin's picture
Sanin
and then

they went down to the graveyard in depth 1 and they died.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 00:07
#13
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
Elsewhere two other knights

Elsewhere two other knights with creepyishly similar appearances and backgrounds to the two deceased knights arrived at another graveyard

/reset to post#11

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 00:15
#14
Awesomesock's picture
Awesomesock
They soon found out to be on

They soon found out to be on a tier three Graveyard and took a serious beating from fiends and undead.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 01:49
#15
Valkryie's picture
Valkryie
Ride of the Valk

Then Valk was called in to save them, and he arrived by magic transport from Haven

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 04:02
#16
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
A rescate!

It was a struggle to extract the new recruits from the clutches of the phantoms and masses of zombies, but Valk won out and the three of them were soon standing safely within the confines of the end level elevator.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 04:51
#17
Happyapathy's picture
Happyapathy
Now for some real tension...

As they ascended towards Haven the elevator suddenly shuddered and stopped, they contacted Spiral HQ who informed them it would be 3 hours before they could get someone to repair the lift, each of the knights looked around awkwardly, waiting for the other to speak first...

P.S. Has this ever happened to you in real life?

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 09:30
#18
Awesomesock's picture
Awesomesock
They've got trouble

Trying to see through the pitch black surrounding their lift, our Knights curled up in panic, waiting for reinforcements to come... They herd noises coming from down below. Afraid to even move, some of them began to sob in fear, while the only one calm enough was Valk; holding his Antigua tightly, with sweaty hands. Suddenly a mob of Gremlins jumped onto the lift, and captured everyone, but some recruit, who managed to jump down onto a level below. The last thing he saw before passing out were his friends dragged into cages, by a bunch of those snarling beasts.

(I got stuck in an elevator once. Good thing there were no Gremlins around. :P)

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 08:20
#19
Fallenhope's picture
Fallenhope
I'm such a bad writer.

Valk opened his eyes, not knowing how long he was out. Looking at his surroundings, he saw his friends tied and gagged in separate cages.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:29
#20
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
QUiCKLY

quickly and quiatly Valk walked over to his friends and started to free them when.....

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:35
#21
Softhead's picture
Softhead
>_>

He was then knocked out by Gremlins!

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:41
#22
Axonio's picture
Axonio
.

He woke up minutes later in an unknown place, he looked at his surroundings and realized he was in the middle of the forest with his friends near him, sleeping.

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 12:51
#23
Softhead's picture
Softhead
T_T

Gremlins come and hold one of your female friends and a try to carry her down the depths. Luckily, A mad bomber, Shadowstunner, Snarbies and Ghostmane Stalkers brutally attack the thong of Grems, then escort you to haven. The team is then locked in a room to make sure they don't harm themselves...

Fri, 03/30/2012 - 14:20
#24
Awesomesock's picture
Awesomesock
Forest you say?

After realising that it all was just a bad dream, he returned to the tent. Sometime later Valk has been woke up, by some snarling coming from behind the tent...

/reset to post #22

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