[Fanfiction] Project: Origins- #1: Cross (Concluded)

Hello once again, fellow Knights and story writers/reviewers. If you've been on the forum withing the last month or so, you'll have noticed my ever-lurking icon on all the famous works. Well, with all the "character-spamming" that I do, I figured I'd actually do something more. Better. A few things in one, in fact: Write a fanfic(s); list my characters; and better my writing skills. Put my crowns where my mouth is, as some would say. Anyway, this is the first of a planned series of fanfics, each of which focuses on the respective origins and backstories of my stock characters, the characters they meet along the way, themes, events, struggles, blah, blah, yadda, yadda.
For the sake of self-promotion, I guess I can add that this technically isn't my FIRST SK fanfic. My Wiki page, seen here [ http://wiki.spiralknights.com/User:Scamall ] was stumbled onto by Lordofnecromancers, who politely asked my permission to post a link to the Vault. I gladly obliged. Wouldn't be here now if that never happened, so thank you, LoN.
I suppose that's enough of an introduction. Without further ado, I present Project: Origins- #1: Cross. Enjoy.
Oh, and be sure to give feedback. Constructive feedback. I do NOT want this turning into Pow*6's trainwreck of a thread series. Speaking of Pow*6, I'd rather he not post here. Nothing personal, I'd just rather be able to find my way around a thread this time.
===Prologue===
"C’mon, move! Faster! I want to hear that sound barrier shatter!”
A dark bullet whizzed past his head, hitting an adjacent banner, scorching it. This wasn’t motivation. This was madness. He tore through the regally-decorated corridor, footsteps echoing loudly on the stone. He had been running for hours through these damned Depths. Each individual muscle screamed out in agony, and still he ran. His anaerobic breathing was loud and shallow. A chorus of voices were screaming inside his head, each one as anguished as the last:
“You shouldn’t have done this… why do this to yourself… you get what you pay for… what sick person does this… just stop, rest… I need a moment… please, someone, help me… feels like my body is on fire… where’s the exit… no way out… no way out… no way…”
Just a bit further. He could see the elevator, almost feel the warm sun on his face. The taste of freedom wafted in front of him, drawing him ever closer. Just… a bit…
*Clunk*
He fell forward spectacularly, his speed carrying him several feet through the air before finally collapsing comically on the cold stone floor. His every muscle relaxed once it had registered in his mind that he had fallen. The relief was so grand it actually ached horribly to feel each part of him fall into a bloodless sleep. He barely even noticed the pain from when the bullet punched him in the back of the head. After what seemed like an eternity, he was dragged to his feet.
“Nice one, Famine. Took him down clean. You okay, rookie?”
Cross looked up, dazed. He saw War standing in front of him, holding his still-smoking Sentenza. Just behind War stood Famine, with what looked like a sniper rifle. Wasn’t standard issue, Cross knew that much. He wondered how difficult it was to make with no known recipe for a gun even remotely like it. He held a hand to his pained head, gathering his thoughts. Then, it dawned on him.
"You shot me. You SHOT me! In the HEAD! What the Hell, man?!”
“Easy” said War, in a somewhat half-hearted effort to calm him. “Low-velocity rounds. Besides, they weren’t even bullets. Training pellets. You know, for your TRAINING? Jeez. Yeah, they’d kill you if you knew where to aim, but Famine’s a good shot. She knew better than to-“
“Then why’d YOU shoot? That damned cannon nearly took my head off!” yelled Cross.
“Believe me, if I wanted to do more than spook you, I’d have done it.” War menaced, holstering the Sentenza.
“Excuse me,” interjected Pestilence, sagging under Cross’ weight, “but would you mind giving me a hand? His muscles are, for want of a better word, kaput. Little more than dead weight now.”
“I’ll show you dead weight,” mumbled Cross angrily.
“Famine, help Pestilence with the rookie,” ordered War. “In the meantime, I’ll take that.” He motioned towards the rifle. Almost reluctantly, she handed it to him. “Horsemen. Elevator. Now.”
“Easy,” Famine whispered as she took Cross by the arm. “C’mon, let’s get you back to the hideout.”

Death was just a name he went by while in the Horsemen, tying in with the Four Horsemen myth in the Bible. He's still a rookie in War's eyes at this point, hence him being called "rookie". And, since I prefer the name "Cross" I figured I'd refer to him as such. I could retcon that in somehow. Oh, and thanks for the feedback. As for the wiki page, I pretty much copied-and-pasted from the editing pages of other profiles (I didn't actually edit them, so don't worry).
Oh, and since nobody was commenting, I figured I'd post Chapter 1 instead of the usual "ninja bump" that everyone else does.
===Chapter 1===
Six Months Earlier
The whirr of the elevator’s motor rang out as he descended. The occasional clunking and clanging as it changed tracks, weaving around giant gears and platforms, shook the elevator, forcing him to sit down and grip the surrounding bars. He wondered how this impossibly-large travel system was created, as it seemed too great and complicated for even gods themselves to devise. Nervously, he peered out through the bars, looking down miles into darkness, seeing nothing but steam, smoke, and the occasional yet brief flash of light from a source he neither new nor cared about. The vertigo was too much to bear, so he turned his gaze skyward, staring instead at the island-sized gears sinking away from him, and with them the firm and stable ground he had never fully appreciated on his home planet. Looking up was worse than down, so he closed his eyes and waited for the nerve-twanging coaster to finish its run. He hated coasters. He hated heights. Above all, he hated this planet.
The elevator slammed somewhat haphazardly against the island. Nervously, the Knight crawled off of the platform, clutching the sweet, sweet ground. As his heart rate slowed, he mustered the strength to rise to his feet, and checked his surroundings. Dark City, home to those shadowy Fiends he had heard so much about. He turned to face the elevator, resting snugly in its steel nest. The overseers of this planet’s construction seem to have cared little for a gentle end to an elevator ride. He dismissed the elevator, trying to forget about its existence. A noise behind him made him jump. He wheeled about, Proto Gun raised, and saw a round purple demon, carrying a chair over his head.
“Dammit”, muttered the Knight.
The Devilite flung the chair straight towards him. Instinctively, he blocked with his shield, and ran in a large circle around it, blasting it with his gun. The Devilite shrugged off the shots, and pulled out a briefcase, lead his target, and threw it. The Knight rolled under the case and began charging a shot as a last resort attack. Right when he was about to release the trigger, he was blinded by a flash of yellow. Covering his eyes, he was certain his foe would take the upper hand, but nothing came. He lowered his hands to see his foe, standing perfectly still, gazing at its chest, which was oozing a dark blue substance, before falling dramatically and exploding into a puff of purple smoke.
The Knight spun around wildly, looking for the source of the shot, hoping to thank his saviour. After failing to locate him or her, he heard a loud bang. Turning his head slightly to his left, he caught a shape in his peripheral vision. He leapt away and drew his sword, ready for battle, but his assailant has already fallen with an identical wound to its predecessor. The Knight, bewildered, looked up.
A lone figure stood on the roof of the nearest skyscraper, bulky and intimidating. In both hands he held two different handguns, neither of which the Knight had seen before. The figure’s glowing red eyes chilled him slightly, forcing him to turn tail and run. Every way he ran, he stumbled into more Devilites, and every single one he encountered either was vaporised in a blinding flash or collapsed from a sudden bullet to the head. Several times he would look up and spot his follower's dark silhouette trailing him, always far enough away to be indistinct, but still intimidating. After several panicked minutes, he spotted the next elevator in the distance. Yelping with joy, he sprinted for the exit, slamming into the control panel as he reached it. Before he could press the button to send him skyward, another bullet hit the panel, causing him to turn around, coming face-to-face with his mystery stalker.
Glowing purple spurs, a red poncho, and a dark Stetson: A Shadowsun set? What was a Tier 3 Knight doing in Tier 1? Why was he menacing the Knight? Was he friend or foe? The Shadowsun gunner, for some strange reason, bowed low and respectfully, but something was off. A certain sinister omen showed itself in this bow. Why was he bowing, anyway? The Knight was about to ask the gunner’s name, when the safety bars of the elevator rose up, sealing him in. He spun around to see the control panel sparking and fizzing. He looked closer and saw that one of its buttons were pressed, and broken. Even closer, he found a single… golden… bullet… oh, no.
The lift dropped without warning, falling at such a speed that the Knight could have jumped and then broken his legs trying to catch back up to it. He seized the bars and held himself to the floor, looking up to see those red eyes looking down at him with a sadistic pleasure. He waved comically as a final insult to the Knight’s indignity.
“Well,” he said to himself, “At least he didn’t kill me… yet.”

===Chapter 2===
Present Day
“Ow! Watch it! In case you hadn’t noticed, I just ran a three-hour marathon through the Scarlet Fortress!”
“I know, kid,” replied Pestilence, carefully lowering Cross onto his mattress. “But that don’t mean you can just holler at us like mutts. War knows what he’s doin’. Little extreme, I’ll admit, but hey, ‘what don’t kill ya’, right?”
Cross said nothing. He just focused on his aching limbs, seething with rage. He made a mental note to punch War in the stomach the next time he saw him. He would have to heal first, however.
“How do you feel?” asked Famine. “You don’t look too well.”
“Gee, thanks,” Cross snapped. “I feel like I just went ten rounds with a steamroller. Then two dozen rounds with… what’s that thing called? Big spiky thing, lives in the Wildwoods… Spino-something. Ugh, my head’s a mess. Why exactly did War chase me around the Fortress for three hours?”
“Training,” replied Famine. “He was testing your endurance, which, I have to say, is pretty damned impressive. If the rest of us ran that gauntlet we’d have died less than halfway in.”
“Damn straight,” laughed Pestilence. “ Boy, I can still remember when War brought you to us all them months ago. All kinds a’ stuff he said, about you runnin’ through an entire Dark City without breakin’ a sweat! Hot damn!” Still reminiscing, he sat down next to Cross, being careful not to cause more discomfort.
“He knew you would be up to the task,” said Famine. “Extreme as it was, War was confident that it would force your muscles to strengthen at a much faster rate. Give it a few weeks and you’ll be running that gauntlet with little trouble.”
“Weeks?!” Cross yelled. ”If this keeps up I’ll be dead in days! No. No way I’m doing this anymore.”
“You’ll do it or die.”
War had entered the room. Pestilence stood to attention so quickly the sudden movement almost made him lose balance. Famine glanced at Cross, and did the same. Slowly, deliberately, War approached his injured apprentice.
“We have a rule here,” He said, his voice low and gravelly. Cross could feel the anger in his voice, see it in his eyes. “Each Horseman is initiated in the most brutal manner corresponding to their unique skills. Only the best survive, who are then inducted into the squad personally by me, the elected leader. Once you have been initiated, you are recognised as one of us, and you will BE recognised as one of us until… you… die.”
He grabbed Cross by the collar, holding him up off of the ground, his legs dangling helplessly. Famine moved to stop him, but Pestilence held her back. Unable to help, she stared frantically.
“Put him down! He’s injured! What the Hell do you think you’re doing?”
Cross was groaning in pain, trying to stay conscious. Famine was looking on in horror, still being restrained by Pestilence, who was merely watching with a look of grim acceptance. Without warning, War dropped him back onto the mattress, on which he bounced pathetically.
“Your initiation is complete,” he said in a calm and relaxing tone, something that didn’t fit the mood at all. “Welcome to the Horsemen, my friend. In recognition of your speed, agility, and endurance, you will fulfil the role of Death, the master assassin, a role that has been vacant for quite a few months now. Team, let our newest member have his rest. Oh and Pestilence? That rifle needs a tweak. I was practicing with it earlier, and the sight’s a bit off. I want it dealt with by our next assignment, understood? Horsemen dismissed.”
War left the room with a certain pride in his step, almost like a swagger. Pestilence released Famine, and both saluted War as he left. Cross, through great effort, adjusted himself into a sitting position, before allowing himself to slump against the wall. After a few pained seconds, he broke the silence.
“Anyone mind telling me what the Hell just happened?”

It all makes sense now, that clarifies what I needed to know, thanks! Oh AND that was a really good chapter!

Thanks Ise. I try. Oh, and I think I understand everyone's need for people to comment on their work. It actually IS frustrating. I'm still not going to "ninja bump" anything, though. Too predictable. I'm sticking with my patented "progressive bump".

"Several times he would look up and see his follower, always far enough away to not be visible"
Waitwaitwat

Hooray! My first embarrassing mistake! I'll just edit that now...

Chapter 3
Six Months Earlier
The elevator sped along its rickety path, far faster than its maker intended. The Knight clung to the bars in terror, wishing to wake up from the nightmare. In desperation, he began pinching himself to determine whether or not he was asleep. When it became apparent that he was very much awake, he started head-butting the bars in a vain attempt to knock himself out and spare himself the torture. In the end, he simply sat in the corner of the lift, feeling his stomach churn with the gears, hearing the clunking of machinery and the whooshing of air as he was carried downwards. After mustering enough strength, he looked through the bars to get a glimpse at his destination. He let out an audible groan as he neared another section of a Dark City. More Fiends to battle, and this time there would be no help from the hatted stranger. The lift slammed against the docking station with bone-shattering force, knocking the Knight right out of it.
He landed on the urban ground, spread-eagled and staring up at the smoky abyss he had just come from. He wondered how much further to the Terminal, so he could rest up, buy some items from Basil the merchant and get out of the city until he was better trained and equipped. He wondered who that gunman was, where he came from, and why. Most of all, he wondered how he could cope with the impossible task the Order set for him. How could a Knight such as he get to the Core? How could he even get out of the city? He had barely even escaped the Skylark before it crashed, barely even got his escape pod door open before he starved to death. He even wandered through the wilderness for hours until he found the Rescue Camp, by which time he was utterly delirious with hunger. Then he remembered something.
He had survived this far. Despite all the odds, he had survived up until that moment. What’s stopping him from surviving just that bit further? Nothing, not even that shadowy gunman. After a moment of reflection, the Knight rose to his feet, dusted himself off, and proceeded to run through the city, shooting at Fiends from a distance, and then cutting them up once he got closer. His Proto Gear was weak, but his resolve was strong, and so he kept going. One by one, the monsters fell to his blade, and step by step, he came closer to the exit. When he finally saw the elevator in the distance, he broke into a sprint, running as fast as he could to victory. He could see the Terminal icon on the screen, hear the motor whirring and then…
Something caught him around the ankles, sending him flying several feet before crashing on the cracked pavement. Scrambling to his feet, he turned to face his attacker, sword raised. He found himself staring into a familiar pair of red eyes: The Shadowsun Gunman. Impossible. How did he get to this part of the city so quickly? Why was he following the Knight? What did he want this time?
“You really expect to be able to hurt me with that fly-swatter?” the gunman mocked. His voice was low and gravelly.
“Fly-swatter? Is that the best insult you could come up with?” the Knight retorted.
“Is that your best sword? It isn’t much better. Come on, try and hit me with it. Tell you what,” the gunman drew an ornate purple revolver with a winged barrel. The Knight tensed up. “Land a single strike on me with that sword, and I’ll hand over my most prized gun, this Sentenza. You can use it, pawn it, do whatever you want with it. It’s got to be worth something. I got three UVs on this thing. Sound good?”
“And what if I lose, then, Mister Slick? What do you get from me?”
“You’re pretty fast, kid. Especially for a rookie Knight. I could use a guy like you in my squad. I win, and you get the privilege of joining my crack team of ‘adventurers’. Lot of coin in our business. So, how about it?”
The Knight hesitated. “So, I win, I get a really valuable gun. I lose, and I join a team of crooks and steal thousands in crowns. You know, I really can’t decide- HYAAAAH!”
He lunged without warning in an attempt to catch the gunman off guard. As if expecting this, the gunman raised his shield, blocking the strike with such force that the Knight was thrown backwards. He took a brief moment to observe the shield the gunman was using. It looked vaguely like a ribcage torn from a skeleton. The Knight’s limited knowledge of gear failed to identify the shield, but the ghostly smoke issuing from it told the Knight that it defended against shadow damage. Raising his sword, he charged again, making several frenzied swipes that the gunman dodged effortlessly, before bringing his shield up once more with enough force to throw the Knight back again.
“Oh, come on,” the gunman said in his mocking voice. “Surely you can do better than that.”
The Knight, enraged, began charging his sword for a last-ditch attempt to win. Once charged, he lunged forward one final time, eyes closed, working on instinct, delivering a devastating slash with his blade that he knew connected with his target. He opened his eyes to see his blade pressed against the gunman’s shield. The gunman himself was grinning. A ghastly grin that indicated a successfully-sprung trap. As the Knight slowly began to comprehend what was happening, the gunman used the sword’s energy in tandem with his shield to form a magnificent aura of energy, blasting the Knight off his feet. The Knight attempted to rise to his feet, but the gunman was too quick, and delivered a powerful kick to his foe’s chest, sending him into the elevator’s control panel, and shooting the “down” button with his Sentenza.
“I win, kid,” the gunman laughed. “Rest up at the Terminal and head back to the city. Don’t worry about me, I’ll find you and make good on your end of the bargain. Watch for my sign. Oh, and here,” the gunman threw his shield and a blue tank into the elevator. “Dread Skelly is gonna be a lot more useful than Proto. You can use that Crystal Energy to unbind it. Bring it to Vise in the Bazaar, he’ll do the rest.”
“Who are you?” the Knight asked.
The gunman chuckled. “All in good time, rookie.”
With a final salute from the gunman, the elevator began its descent to the Terminal.

:o oooooo....niccee.
:O really, i can't say anything else? wow. i'm having a bad day i guess xD

Uhhhhh, my mind was blown more from the wiki page rather than the fanfic, but this is still cool.

It's nice to see a legit fanfic for once. Keep up the good work! :)

"Wouldn't be here now if that never happened, so thank you, LoN."
Yer welcome! :D
Anyway, great story so far! Love this!

Chapter 4
Present Day
“Ooh, there’s one! C’mon, take the shot! Hurry up!”
“This thing has a cooldown period, just wait a minute. Ok, good to go. Where is it?”
“Over there, by the Lumber.”
“Oh, sweet! Watch this.”
Cross put the Scorcher in his sights, adjusted the angle to compensate for gravity and wind, and shot. The rifle’s signature firing noise, a screech via technical jargon associated with the many chambers of the gun, rang out, scaring away the nearby wildlife and echoing around the Jigsaw Valley. The Scorcher’s tank exploded, igniting both it and the Lumber. Spacker laughed with glee, relishing in the kill. Cross made a mental note to find out exactly how the gun worked once he got back to the hideout.
“Ha hah! Taking pot-shots at those little suckers never gets old.” Spacker turned to admire the rifle. “Boy, Pestilence sure knows his way around guns. And bombs. Never knew he was this talented, though. Can’t believe no-one thought about a sniper rifle in your little Order before. Nice shot, by the way.”
“You sure you don’t mind?” asked Cross. “I mean, these ARE your people, Spacker.”
“Not anymore, Cross. Or do you go by ‘Death’ now? Ooh, you’re so scary, now, aren’t you?” his voice quivered with laughter.
“Easy, fuzz ball. I’m still me, just...” Cross shrugged. “One of the team now, I guess.”
Spacker sat down on the grass, beckoning Cross to join him, which he did. Spacker was a one-of-a-kind Gremlin, or at least, a very rare kind. Like those from Emberlight, he too was exiled from the colonies, but unlike the others, he was banished simply because he was far too crazy. His foes greatly underestimated him in combat, and his allies greatly feared him when he slaughtered opponents in unimaginable ways. He was once a dignified and respected soldier, who bore many medals on his chest with pride. He sacrificed himself to get his squad to safety, and was captured and subsequently tortured by a rogue clan of Gremlins. After two months, he returned to the colonies with nothing but tattered clothes, a blinded eye scarred by a blade, and a fractured mind. He was brought to trial, where rumour has it the Crimson Order themselves banished him on behalf of the King. After his exile, Spacker chose to distance himself from Emberlight, and found his way to the Horsemen, where he became a valuable ally with his knowledge of Gremlin weaponry. He regards the Horseman as the only friends he has left, which, when one thinks about it, is kind of sad.
“To be quite honest,” Spacker said, tilting his head back to stare at the artificial night sky, “it’s about time. You’ve been the errand boy for long enough, and you’ve earned a break. War may mean well, but he’s hard to read and he’s a real tough nut. Is that really true, you running around the Scarlet Fortress for three straight hours?”
“All true,” Cross replied, sounding slightly boastful. “But man, did it hurt. I felt like my body was on fire.”
“I know that feel…” Spacker muttered darkly. “And so does our friend down there. Don’t ya, buddy?!” he yelled.
Cross checked his HUD. “Oh, damn. Is that the time already? I told Famine I’d be back in time for our-“
“Date?” Spacker interrupted, before roaring with laughter. Cross frowned. “Oh, lighten up, kid. It’s a joke. C’mon, laugh! If I didn’t know any better, I’d say you actually were-“. Spacker’s eyes widened. Cross immediately avoided his gaze. “Oh, my. You actually…” He then laughed his loudest yet.
“It’s not a date, it’s a scouting mission!” Cross yelled angrily.
“Hah! Scouting mission?! So that’s what the kids are calling it these days!” Spacker choked through his laughing fit, which had evolved to rolling around on the grass in glee.
Cross took a breath before continuing calmly. “We’re friends and squad mates. You know that.”
“Yeah, but I can read people. You want more, don’t you?” Spacker’s fit had subsided, replaced by a more serious, endearing demeanour. “Don’t worry, your secret’s safe with me. Last thing we need is this turning into a poorly-written lovey-dovey tween romance story.”
Cross stared at him, puzzled. “Are you feeling okay?”
“What’s that about a fourth wall?” he chuckled. “Never mind. Go on, get going. I won’t breath a word of this, I promise. Oh, you see War, tell him I’ll have those dynamos for him soon. King Tinkybell’s upping security for some reason, so it’s getting a bit tougher to sneak my way into the markets. Soon enough it may just not be worth the pay. I can’t bribe my way out of an execution, can I?”
Cross stood up, slung the rifle onto his back and shook Spacker’s hand. “So long, old friend. Be careful out there.”
Spacker grinned his usual toothy grin. “You know me. I’m crazy, but I’m not stupid. I can look out for myself. Only on my left, though. Hah! Little blind joke for you. Good thing the ladies love scars. At least, Gremlin women do. Little tip for your love affairs, am I right?”
Cross sighed. “Sure, Spacker. Catch you later.”
With a final wave, Cross left for the elevator.

C'mon, guys. I can't refine my writing without feedback. Comment and stuff! Here's another chapter for you.
===Chapter 5===
Famine was crouching on the edge of the abyss, staring at the factory in the distance. She could make out the Gremlins lugging around crates of whatever was being shipped in from wherever they got their equipment from, be it mines or elsewhere. War was right, they were planning something big, but she couldn’t move without Cross. She was never too uncomfortable on her own. Rather, she liked the solitude that came with scouting, but preferred the company of teammates, provided said company notified her if they weren’t tagging along. She had been waiting for a while in silence scoping out the area, when Cross showed up, looking quite sheepish.
“Sorry I took so long.” He sounded embarrassed.
“I was starting to think you wouldn’t show up,” Famine said, annoyed. Slip-ups were not part of her job. “What kept you?”
“Spacker likes to talk,” Cross replied. “So, what are we scouting?”
“War thinks the Gremlins are up to something.” She turned back to the Factory. “A lot of activity has been noted around these areas of the Clockworks.”
“Hmm… Spacker did say something about Tinkinzar tightening up security around the colonies. Did you see anything useful?”
“So far, nothing. I’d go for a closer look, but War told me to wait until you got here,” she said, still eyeing the Factory. ”I’ve been waiting for half an hour.” She added.
“Hey, I said I was sorry.” Cross was starting to feel a bit shameful. “I brought the rifle, if that helps.”
“It’s a start.” She took the rifle and used the scope to get a closer look at the area. “Much better. There’s been nothing noteworthy besides the shipments they’re bringing in, so I would recommend a stakeout. We’ll camp out here until we see anything useful. Sound good?”
“Sounds boring, but okay.” Cross began setting up a tent while Famine was still scoping the Factory. “Still got your Heater Shield? I brought some food, but nothing for a campfire.”
“Are you serious?”
Cross was puzzled by the tone. “Uh… what do you-“
“Three things you got wrong in that statement,” Famine said, sounding just short of offended. “One, I always carry my Heater Shield with me, because it’s my most valuable piece of equipment, especially on stakeouts. Two, lighting a campfire would give away our position. Three, I’ll let you off easy because it’s your first time,” her eyes narrowed, “but don’t assume you know more about this than I do, rookie.”
Cross felt a bit shocked. He could feel a burning around his neck, a notable indicator of shame. Famine now looked a bit apologetic.
“I-I’m sorry,” she said sheepishly. “I just-“
“You’re just stressed out, and you didn’t like waiting around for me,” Cross cut through her words easily. “It’s fine. Really. If anything, I should be sorry. I know how seriously you take this job, and how tough it must be on your own. You separate your social life from your job so you don’t make mistakes, and I respect that. Yeah, it makes you high maintenance at times, but we all have flaws, and the fact that you don’t let yours interfere with your line of work makes you pretty admirable.”
Famine looked slightly happier. “You didn’t need to say that.”
“No, I did,” Cross said, unblinkingly. “I know how sappy it sounds, but it’s the truth.”
She blushed. “Let’s just set up camp.”
In the distance, eavesdropping on their conversation, were two shadowy figures, one bearing a type of visor with which to watch the two Horsemen, and the other with a com unit to listen and record.
“That was a touching speech he gave. I got it recorded if you want to listen.”
“And I can see her blushing. Whatever the kid said, it worked. Smooth talker.”
“Got that right. Pestilence, my friend, you owe me two thousand crowns.”
“Eh, not a problem. Just don’t go spending it on whatever you Gremlins spend money on, scar face.”
“I’ll try not to. Ah, our little trooper’s spreading his wings. Sure War won’t mind us being out here?”
“He doesn’t need to know, but if worst comes to worst I’ll just say we got a distress call from them.”
Spacker chuckled. “See, this is why you’re the smart one.”

why refine it when it's great? i can't think of anything bad about it

Especially the end, “Got that right. Pestilence, my friend, you owe me two thousand crowns.”
“Eh, not a problem. Just don’t go spending it on whatever you Gremlins spend money on, scar face.” I loled at that part it was funny, as Tear said, I can't think of anything wrong about this, just good :P

I wanna see this page flooded with comments, guys! All together now: "Scamall's the GREATEST!"
===Chapter 6===
Six Months Earlier
“How’d a novice like you get a shield like this?”
“Long story, and it’s all a blur. Can you unbind it?”
Vise scoffed. “Kid asks me if I can unbind a shield. Hear that, Punch?”
Punch twitched, before giggling maniacally. “That’s funny. Real funny. Funny-funny… funny.”
Vise took the shield to his workbench, where he opened the energy tank and extracted it with an odd-looking tool. Then, grabbing the shield, he focused the energy into a miniature laser, zapping the shield little by little, bathing it in blue. After a minute or so, he expended the rest of the energy in the shield’s centre in a concentrated blast, resulting in a sharp hissing that signalled the dissipation of the shield’s heat. Satisfied, he took the shield and
tossed it to the Knight.
“There. Go ahead and equip it. Careful, though. I don’t think you can pay me for another unbinding.”
Slowly, cautiously, the Knight slid his arm into the shield’s straps, which fastened instantly. The shield glowed for a brief moment, then faded again. The purple smoke had once again begun to issue from between the bones that comprised it. After an awed second or two, the Knight could have sworn he had heard a whisper coming from the shield. Something about blocking.
“Whoa… thanks, Vise. Pleasure doing business with you.”
Vise stroked his beard. “Anytime you want your weapon modified or unbound, come see us. We never turn down loyal coins- eh, customers.” Punch started giggling again.
The Knight saluted before leaving their shop, still content with his new 5-star shield. He decided to head to the Arcade to test it out. Within a few short minutes, he was in a Graveyard, fending off the skeletal swarms with ease thanks to his similarly-skeletal shield. He was astounded at how easy it was to wield, how light it was, how durable. Depth by depth he dove, smashing skulls and fracturing femurs, until he was at the Terminal again. Basil greeted him as he approached the healing station, then beckoned him forward.
“Little one,” he said gently. “I have been expecting you. I have been asked to give you this.” Out of his box of wares came a five-star armour and helmet, both looked as skeletal as the Knight’s shield. A Dread Skelly set… the gunman’s sign, perhaps?
The Knight was puzzled. “Asked? By whom?”
“The man did not say. He paid me handsomely to assure my completion of this task.”
The Knight had a suspicion, but needed to be sure. “Did this man wear Shadowsun Gear? Did he have red eyes?”
“Why, yes,” Basil responded. “Oh, here he comes now.”
The Knight turned around to see the Shadowsun Gunman approaching him at a slow pace, as if savouring the atmosphere he fortified with each step.
“Well, well, well…” he whispered, his voice barely containing his joy. “If it isn’t the rookie… Basil, leave us. I diverted the elevators to the other Terminals, so no other Knights should be capable of passing through here today.”
“Very good, sir,” Basil said with a respectful bow. “Will you be all right?”
“We’ll be fine, thank you,” the gunman answered, becoming a bit irritated by Basil’s polite demeanour.
Basil nodded and went to the elevator in the hope of selling his recipes to other travellers. The gunman faced the Knight with what looked like a smile on his face. The Knight was unnerved. When a trained killer stares at you with a smile in a remote part of nowhere, you know there’s something wrong. The gunman didn’t speak, but merely stared intently, as if daring the Knight to ask the questions he so wanted to ask. Finally, the Knight spoke.
“Alright… who are you, what do you want, and why should I care?”
“I’ll boil it down to its bare bones for you,” said the gunman, eager to answer. “They call me War. I am the leader of a 4-man squad called the ‘Four Horsemen’, or simply ‘Horsemen’ for short. With my team, named ‘Pestilence, Famine and Death’, we became the unknown conquerors of many of the Depths beneath our very feet. We fight and kill for money. Not the most noble cause, I’ll admit, but money’s the only language people understand these days, and I’m one Hell of a diplomat.”
The Knight was dumbfounded. “What does this have to do with-“
“Recently,” the gunman went on, “my team has suffered a very small, very minor setback. One of our team, an uncommonly talented man, died after sabotaging a Gremlin munitions depot. Ironically, the man who died was Death, our watchful, silent assassin. Pestilence, the team’s brain and demolitions expert, suggested I weed out contenders for his replacement. Famine, our sniper and thief, is not so sure I can. Well, I can, and have. Seeing you in action definitely proved that. You move as fast as Death did in his prime. With training, you will be able to do more. Much, much more. As I said last we met, there’s a lot of coin in our trade, and we’re short of a member who will take a long time to replace should you refuse. You in, or out?”
As he asked, the Knight noticed him finger the handle of the Sentenza he kept in his holster. He weighed his options. If he refused, he was dead, and would never be found. No other Knights would pass through that day, and it wouldn’t take long to dispose of a body on this planet. A simple toss off the side of the platform would suffice. His belongings would be stolen and sold, even his father’s amulet. On the other hand, if he accepted, he could gain countless amounts of crowns, kill a few bad guys on the way, go down in a blaze of glory, be remembered as a real badass, and enjoy an afterlife of hunting demons with Vog, or whatever the Stranger religions promised. Morality could not waver his decision, so, out of greed and fear, he said:
“So this is how a deal with the devil, a ‘Faustian Bargain’, feels,” the Knight said, both intimidated and impressed. “You know what? Sure. Why the Hell not? I’m not going to do the Order any favours the way I’m dealing with things now. They have plenty of pawns, and I want to live like a king.”
War’s smile grew slightly wider. “Good,” he said softly. “You’ll receive the best training and equipment, for your assignments, as well as the best rewards. But,” he paused for a brief moment before continuing. “I have yet to know your name. You need to earn the title of ‘Death’. What do they call you?”
The Knight hesitated. He didn’t know his own name. When he crashed, he was stricken with amnesia. All he had was his X-shaped amulet, which both helped him remember his father and provided a nickname for him with the other Knights. It was the closest he had to an identity. A life. A life he could only now begin to live…
“They call me… Cross.”

New chapter. Sorry it took so long, but I was having trouble getting my Prismatic Cake-Face. I am effectively a lemon sorbet.
===Chapter 7===
Present Day
Cross woke with a start, sweating and shaking. He pondered what he dreamt, staring at the ceiling of the darkened tent. He glanced sideways at Famine, still sleeping peacefully. How was she this calm? Was she always this calm before being sent into enemy territory? Cross sat up slowly, trying not to wake her up, and snuck out of the tent. He lay down on the grass and breathed in the recycled air, once more focused on his dream. It was of his encounter with War before joining up with the Horsemen. Why was he fearful of his dream? He could not be sure. What he was sure of was how vivid it was, how he felt each emotion again as he relived it. There was something else, though…
Cross took his amulet in hand, squinting into the amethyst in its centre, glittering from the artificial starlight. It was his father’s, that much he knew. His father was an angry man, twisted and warped by his military history. Back on the Homeworld, his father never rose above the rank of Soldier, despite everything he sacrificed for the Order. He projected his anger onto his son, who grew to resent him and what he stood for. Cross considered this for a moment, guessing that his resentment of his father manifested itself as a lack of motivation to achieve as a Knight. He remembered the amulet itself, given to him by a faceless Knight his father once knew after his father’s death in the field. He remembered his lack of feeling during the funeral, not grief, sadness or anger, but uncertainty. What would happen? What did happen? He was taken in by the Academy, despite being two years too young, and trained.
The amulet had seen more action than its wearer; despite being only an heirloom with no other significance it was thought to have blessed his father with luck, which ran out the day he died. Indeed, Cross himself had experienced this luck when he crawled his way to the Rescue Camp from his steel death-trap of an escape pod. He still needed to be careful, because he would soon follow Famine into the fire.
Cross had calmed down from his uncomfortable slumber, and went to re-enter the tent, but not before standing up, then turned to observe the factory. There was a strange light emanating from it. Curious, he reached inside the tent for the rifle, then used it to scope out the light. Slowly, he lowered the rifle again, then hastily ducked for cover as a rocket shot by him, barely missing the camp and spiralling into the night. Cross crawled into the tent and shook Famine awake.
“Famine! C’mon, wake up! I SAID WAKE UP, DAMMIT!”
“Huh? What’s going on?” she asked drowsily.
“We’re under attack! They know we’re here! What do we do?”
Her eyes widened in shock. “How did they find us?”
“No idea,” Cross responded, glancing at the tent entrance. Another rocket whizzed by. “But we need a plan. Now, if possible. Any ideas?”
Her eyes darted around as she thought. After a few seconds she came to a conclusion.
“If we flee, they’ll follow us. They get a good enough look, they’ll think we’re Spirals and start a war.”
“If we make sure they don’t follow us…” Cross started.
“No, they could jump to conclusions. Unless-“ she was cut off by another rocket, passing so close it shook the tent. “If we call the others, we could stage an attack on the factory, then frame some Gremlin clan and shake the heat off us.”
“That’s one way to go about it, but we don’t know where Spacker is,” Cross said pointedly. “That, and the team would take a while to get here.”
Cross’ HUD beeped, causing him to check what was causing the disruption. To his pleasant surprise, it was Spacker.
“Hey, kids,” Spacker chuckled through the comlink. “Couldn’t help but notice you’re in a pickle. Don’t worry, mom and dad will sort you out.”
Something kicked over the tent, causing it to collapse flimsily on its occupants. After a brief, panicked attempt to throw off the tent, Cross looked up to see Spacker and Pestilence smiling down at him. Frowning slightly, Cross broke the silence.
“Have you been… spying on us?”
The two exchanged glances and quickly changed the subject. Another rocket.
“So, uh…” Spacker began. Pestilence cut across him. “Here’s the plan. Go in, sabotage what they’re doing, stick a symbol on the walls, get out. Got it? Good. Now, we can use the gears to traverse the chasm, which gives us a stealthy entrance, and we have…” he counted the available equipment. “Enough stuff here to split into two teams. Fuzzy and I’ll cause a pretty neat diversion, allowing you two lovebirds,“ Cross and Famine glanced awkwardly at each other, “to infiltrate and sabotage what they’re doing. If you can’t bomb them, think of something. If you can bomb them, I got a little somethin’ here for ya.”
He pulled out a crudely-made bomb. It was, essentially, a metal container with jars and wires strapped to it. The jars’ contents and the wires were equally multi-coloured. There was a blinker on the top, likely a receiver for remote detonation, as well as a few gauges and dials stuck to it with... duct tape?
“Is this a joke?” Cross asked.
“Nope. This,” Pestilence beamed, “is what I call my most devastating creation. Haven’t thought of a name yet, but the legends this thing’ll cook up will see to that. Expensive as Hell, I’ll admit-“ Cross scoffed. “But it’ll take out a sizeable chunk of the factory. Use it wisely. Team, move out!”
Pestilence and Spacker moved to the edge of the island, where Pestilence shot his grappling hook at a gear in the distance. Grabbing Spacker, he leapt from the island, reeling himself in to the gear. Cross picked up the other grappling hook and moved to do the same, but Famine grabbed his arm.
“Is everything okay?”
“What?” Cross asked, confused.
Her amber eyes stared him down in an accusing fashion. A rocket briefly illuminated her face as it passed by.
“Is… everything… okay?” she repeated, with extra emphasis on each syllable. “You were talking in your sleep when I went in to rest. What’s wrong?”
“No point in lying, I guess. I was… having nightmares. War sure knows how to make an impression.”
She smiled. “That he does. We’ve all been there. Even me. Just… don’t let it get to you. C’mon, let’s go.”

As I said earlier, my mind is blown more from the wiki page, but this is still cool.

Pow, you have ANOTHER NAME?! Seriously, "Little-Cloud"? Come on, at least something original. Trolls these days have such little talent compared to the good old days.

The Internet never ages, well for me it's that way.
On topic: That was a great chapter, hope for more to come!

Damn straight there's more to come! BUT! I'm a bit busy this week. I have a major exam next Monday and a class trip on Saturday, so... I'll be putting this on a minor hiatus until then. I promise the next chapters will make up for it, though. Oh, and I forgot to mention I'm in my last year of what you'd call "high-school", so I have zettabytes worth of school stuff to be studying for the most important exam in my forseeable future (hoo-bloody-ray)...Once the school year ends I'll be churning out fiction like butter, so stay tuned.

Atrum, what are you doing? Not only has this thread been comatose for the last month, but I was in the middle of typing up my next chapter now that I have free time! That's why I was active on the forum today! You ruined a surprise bump! YOU RUINED EVERYTHING! WAAAAAAAAH!
Anyway... what can I do for you? And what do you want with Necro?

Oh and necro is doing something for me now....

Ok, then. Maybe the new chapter will grab his attention.
>ahem<
===Chapter 8===
“Easy… easy…”
Cross lowered himself from the gear, clutching Famine tightly as he went. After a tense minute of silence with only the sound of a strained grappling hook to keep them company, they landed on the roof of one of the many warehouses lining the Factory. What were they keeping here?
“Ah, there we go,” Cross muttered. “Still got the bomb?”
“Yeah, replied Famine. “Where do we go, though?”
“Anywhere the others aren’t,” Cross answered. “In the meantime, we can poke around for a bit, see if there’s anything worth noting. Or stealing,” he added, jokingly.
There was a window on the roof of the warehouse. Cross crept along the roof towards it, being followed closely by Famine, then both peeked inside.
“Oh my God...” Cross whispered.
It was an army. A thousand constructs stood in rows and columns around the warehouse, each as well-made and menacing as the last. The armour wasn’t the standard scrap-metal the Gremlins were known for using, but struck a chord between sleek and bulky, looking stylish all the while. Each plate was painted crimson, and bore ornate gold markings around the shoulders and chest, save for a few of the machines, who were painted black, most likely to represent authority. The faces had four ‘eyes’ each, arranged in the shape of an ‘X’: Darkfang Constructs. Cross glanced at a nearby warehouse and saw even more of them.
“Well,” he muttered. “At least we know what they’re doing.”
“They don’t seem to have been activated yet,” Famine said. “Maybe we can just bomb them now and be done with it.”
“We don’t know how many they have,” Cross replied pointedly. “There could be more elsewhere. I say we move until we get to the centre of the Factory, steal anything useful, plant the bomb, and get the ‘F’ out of dodge, as they say.”
“Alright, then.” she muttered with a tone of finality. “I guess it doesn’t make much sense to just bomb this place when Pesty and Fuzz-ball are-“
Her words were cut short by a thunderous bang in the distance. Both Horsemen wheeled around to see fire and smoke billowing from what looked to be a fuelling station.
“Causing a diversion?” Cross asked comically. “C’mon, we need to move!”
They dashed towards the edge of the warehouse before leaping to the next, repeating this long process until they reached the end of the line. Cross tossed the grappling hook to Famine, then jumped up onto a low-lying rooftop.
“You’ll need that more than I will.”
“Who trained you to run that fast?” she questioned.
He smirked in response. “My dad and his cane.”
He turned and sprinted across the rooftop, before jumping to a pipe and using it to scale the wall of a much larger building. Famine hastened to follow, but even with the grappling hook, she was having trouble keeping up with him. After a minute or two of scaling, Cross found a ventilation shaft. He signalled to Famine to stop reeling herself upwards, then grabbed the grate covering the vent. Taking precautions, he tightened his grip on the pipe before attempting to tear the grate from the wall. After a strained grunt or two, the grate came loose, and with one mighty tug, Cross ripped it from its nest. Famine looked slightly surprised.
“Huh,” she said, impressed. “Strong AND fast. Nice work.”
Kicking her legs to gain momentum, she swung herself towards the wall and grabbed the edge of the vent, before hoisting herself into it. Cross followed, being careful not to fall.
“Oh,” she muttered. “Forgot to retract the grappling hook.”
The rope slackened, signalling the hook’s separation from its wall. Cross glanced behind him and saw the hook fall by the vent, before hearing it knock itself against the building with a loud clang. The rope was then pulled into the main body of the grappling hook, taking the hook itself with it at an alarming speed, walloping Cross in the back of the head as it did so.
“Ow!” he grumbled. “What is it with you and hitting the back of my head?”
Famine giggled slightly, then cleared her throat and assumed a guise of solemnity. Turning away from Cross, she began crawling. Cross followed. Every so often they would hear an explosion or two, along with the chattering of Gremlins and, though rarely, laughter. It must be Spacker, Cross thought. Further and further they crawled through the vent, moving higher and lower, turning corner after corner, until Cross’ legs started to hurt. He leaned to the side to try to see where Famine was headed, but ended up simply staring at her rear; the vent was too crowded. While they crawled, Cross began to appreciate the form-fitting suit that Famine wore. It made her less likely to be seen, or heard, and allowed her slender figure a certain degree of flexibility-
Another explosion snapped Cross out of his trance. Pestilence and Spacker were inside the building. The distraction they promised would no longer be very effective. Famine suddenly stopped moving, causing Cross to nearly crawl into her.
“What is it?” Cross asked.
“I found a grate. If we’re lucky, we won’t drop into a corridor filled with Gremlins. I just need to…”
She pulled out a small screwdriver and started working at the screws. Cross was getting edgy; they had spent enough time doing nothing.
“Almost… got it! OH-!”
The grate fell out of the frame just as Famine removed the last screw. For a brief moment they held their breaths, but it did nothing to silence the deafening noise the grate made when it hit the ground.
“Crap…” she finished. “C’mon, we need to move!”
She lowered herself from the vent before dropping to the ground. Cross did the same. They checked their surroundings: no one in sight.
“Where are we?” Cross asked.
“If I knew I’d tell you.” Famine glanced around. “Go check out that window.”
Cross crept to the window, making sure he wasn’t seen, then observed the room below him: a mainframe of some sort. The layout was efficient as well as stylish. Supercomputers lined the four corners of the room, and the four aisles all led to the central terminal. Lining the walls were large monitors adorned with letters of the Gremlin alphabet. What were they planning?
“I think I found something worth stealing. Come take a look at this.”
“Whoa,” she said, awed. “How do we get down there?”
“Doesn’t look like anyone’s around, so we could just…”
Cross punched the glass, shattering a large portion of it before jumping down into the mainframe. An alarm sounded; the information kept here was highly classified. A loudspeaker on the ceiling started chattering random gibberish to all personnel in the building.
“Oh, shut up!” Cross yelled angrily, shooting the loudspeaker with his Silversix. His HUD beeped.
“Famine, Death, come in!” Pestilence shouted through his com-unit. “What in Sam Hill are you two doing? Half the Factory just went red!”
“Oh, we just broke into a top-level-security base, wound up in a mainframe of some description, tripped an alarm, and we’re about to hack some stuff to figure out what these fuzz-balls are up to. You know, the usual,” Cross muttered sarcastically.
“What was that? I couldn’t hear you over the immaturity!” Pestilence shouted back. “Take things more seriously, would you?”
Famine decided to add her two cents. “Pestilence, it’s Famine. We’re right above you, so you’d better get up here and cover us. This place is gonna be swarming with Gremlins now that we’re here, and I get the feeling that whatever’s in this room is too important to blow up.”
“Eh, copy that. Be there in two. Pestilence out.”
The duo ran to the central terminal, whereupon Famine plugged a small techni-key into a slot.
“Ok… accessing hacking software… bypassing firewalls… re-routing...” she mumbled as she worked.
“No idea what you’re doing, but do it fast.” Cross spoke with a tone of urgency in his voice. “I think we may have-“
A bolt of energy hit him in the back of the head, breaking his train of thought. His brow furrowed in pain and frustration.
“Same… damn… spot,” he growled. “Company!”
In one fluid motion he whirled around, drew his Umbra Driver and opened fire on the Gremlins now pouring into the room. After clearing a sizeable chunk of them, he turned to Famine.
“How much longer ‘till it’s done?” he yelled over the gunfire.
“A few minutes, give or take!”
“If only it were that easy…” he whispered under his breath. “I’ll buy you some time!”
He charged down the central aisle towards the room’s entrance, gunning down Gremlins that were failing to find cover. As more entered the mainframe, he was forced to utilise his agility to dodge their shots. Once they were within melee distance, Cross jumped, kicked off of a nearby computer terminal and soared above the squad of Gremlins, drawing his Nightblade as he did so, before landing in the thick of it, whereupon he started cutting.
“I’ve almost got it!” Famine yelled, turning to see Cross fighting with skill and grace, dodging wrenches effortlessly and slicing his foes with his blade. His training had paid off, it seemed. It was like working with his predecessor- No. She couldn’t think about that. Not now.
“How’s it going, Famine? Because I’m kind of fighting for my life here!” Cross shouted. “How much longer?!”
“Just hold on a moment! Just a few more… almost… YES!”
She wrenched the key from the terminal and dashed for the exit, shooting the stragglers who had little interest in fighting Cross, who snatched the bomb from her as she ran past.
“What are you doing?” Famine hushed.
“My job,” Cross replied. “Pestilence, come in. What’s your position?”
“Right behind you, genius.”
Pestilence and Spacker had entered from the opposite entrance, looking exhausted.
“So…” Spacker wheezed. “How’s the first date going?”
Cross ignored him. “Why didn’t the Darkfangs come in from that door?”
“Plot hole or something? I don’t know!” Spacker growled. “We’ll need to repair that fourth wall, by the way.”
Cross looked around. The walls were intact. “Okay… I’m priming the bomb. You guys get going. I’ll catch up.”
Pestilence nodded. “You got the data?”
“Right here,” Famine held up the key. “Now let’s get out of here.”
The three of them left the room, Famine shooting a backwards glance at Cross as if to say “come back safely”. Cross nodded in response, watched her leave, then turned towards the bomb.
“Now… how the hell does this thing work?” he asked himself blankly. ”What’s this blinking light for? Pestilence really should have given me a manual or something. Let’s see… dial with a clock painted on it. Probably the timer. Twist that to… I’d say two minutes? Maybe two and a half, just to be safe. I just hope these ARE minutes. It would really suck if they were seconds. Okay… how do I start the timer? What’s this button do?”
The bomb started beeping. Cross lowered it carefully to the floor before making a mad dash for the exit, glad to be rid of this place. All around the corridors were Gremlins, either dead, wounded or fleeing the Factory. It was a maze of tunnels, and Cross was starting to wish he didn’t enter the building through a ventilation shaft. After a minute or two, by which time Cross was starting to panic, he spotted the exit. His HUD beeped.
“I see you kid!” Pestilence shouted. “Come on! We ain’t got all day!”
“I’m almost there! Oh! I just thought of a name for the bomb! How about the H-“
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And no, Atrum, I am not your slave.
On a story-realted note, I'm reading a book right now that has kids with the names of Wisdom, Virtue, and Peace. Compare to your characters' names. XD

Why would I forget about my only serious piece of writing? Come.on, now. I've just been busy studying. I have exams coming up in June, and I made a €200 bet with one of my teachers that I'd get an A on one of my subjects. I AM making progress on that, by the by. I'll try to post on weekends until my exams are over, but no promises. Until then, the ambiguity the latest chapter provides should keep you wanting more.

===Chapter 9===
Six Months Earlier
In front of Cross stood two armed figures, both of whom looked capable of killing him within seconds. On his left, a tall, bulky, Bomber-clad brawler with piercing blue bespectacled eyes behind his Bomber's visor, bearing on his arm an equally-bulky shield, probably Third-Tier, but Cross couldn’t be sure. On his right, a smaller, frustrated-looking merc dressed in Divine garments, standing an inch or two shorter than Cross. Needless to say, neither looked very pleased to see the timid Skelly standing before them.
“I suppose you’re wondering why I called you two here,” War asked his two colleagues.
“This better be good,” the Bomber said. His voice carried a southern drawl coolly from his mouth. “I have research to be doing. Sir,” he added respectfully.
“As a matter of fact, it is,” War replied, his voice dripping with liquid contentment. “This,” he gestured towards Cross, “is the newest contender for our recent… vacancy.”
The Divinely dressed Horseman laughed mockingly. Whatever look her amber eyes contained was highly doubted to be anything praising. Cross was becoming less convinced of his usefulness as time progressed.
“What did you do, grab the first Knight you saw, dress him up, and drag him here?” she asked somewhat sarcastically. “There’s no way in Hell this… this... NOVICE can replace…“ She froze, and became pensive.
“Are you done?” War asked lightly. “Good, good. Now, let’s introduce ourselves to our new recruit. What say you?”
“Alright, fine,” the Bomber said with a tone of resignation. “If you think this kid’s got what it takes, I won’t judge.” After an awkward pause, he asked, “Does this guy have a name, or…”
“Oh. Um... I-It’s Cross. Name’s Cross,” he said sheepishly.
“Pestilence,” the Bomber said, gesturing to himself. “I’m the tech expert, weapons specialist, and bomber of this squad. That’s Famine,” he pointed to the Divinely-clothed, still lost in thought. “She’s the scout, and thief. You’ve met War, I presume.”
“Well, now that that’s out of the way,” War chuckled, “we can get better acquainted. Why don’t you two talk amongst yourselves for a bit? Give the rookie a ‘pep-talk’, as it were? Famine!” he barked. She snapped out of her trace and stood to attention. “There’s a time and place for dreaming. It’s called sleep. And-“
“”And a Horseman sleeps when he’s dead.” I know,” she mumbled.
War’s red eyes narrowed. “You watch your tone,” he whispered coldly. “And stop living in the past. It happened. It happens all the time. Get used to it.” He turned to face the others. “Horsemen! Dismissed.”
He left the room in an orderly fashion. Famine, looking somewhat distraught, shot a quick glare at Cross before running out of the room as well. Cross was having difficulty processing what had happened, and how to feel about it. Pestilence thumped Cross in the shoulder to grab his attention, then moved to a nearby mattress and sat down, beckoning for Cross to do the same. Cross glanced towards the door before joining him.
“Eh, she’ll be alright,” Pestilence said dismissively. “She’s just… upset.”
“Why, though? What happened?” It was a rhetorical question, and Cross could come up with a few good answers without help. Pestilence seemed to pick up on this.
“Forget it. Now,” he said, his eyes scanning Cross from behind his glasses, “let’s talk about you. War’s confident you can join us. Are you? What can you bring to the table?”
“I’m fast," Cross said, more confidently. "War said I move as fast as my predecessor did “in his prime”.”
“Did he now? Interesting,” his look was difficult to read. “And combat experience? Any of that?”
“I’ve only been out of stasis a week now. I have an extra two years of Academy training, but not much else.”
“Acceptable, but you don’t know the law of this world, which is a slight disappointment. No matter. Our training should compensate.” He adjusted his glasses. “Enough about experience. Tell me about yourself. You. Who YOU are.”
“The crash left me with some degree of amnesia. At least, the Camp’s medics told me that.”
“So you’re almost a blank template, then? No wonder he chose you. You have potential, both mentally and physically.”
Cross was starting to feel uncomfortable. He felt like a test subject being poked and prodded for the slightest detail. Pestilence picked up on this, too, changing the subject.
“Well, that’s enough of an interrogation,” he said, noticeably less serious. “Any questions you wish to ask about us?”
Cross was puzzled. “Uh, yeah. Why are you so ready to tell someone you’ve never met before about your team?”
“Well, War trusts you, so you can’t be all bad. Besides, there’s no guarantee you’ll survive the coming months. I’ve been around for a while, kid. Even before Skylark’s Fall, we were doing this same old song and dance. I’ve seen competent people die for a spot on this team, both recruit and member.”
The matter-of-fact tone in which he spoke was almost worse than what he was saying. Cross was feeling somewhat afraid. “And this “song and dance”, then? War said you just kill for money.”
“Of course he’d say that. Well, he’s not wrong. We take up contracts and odd jobs that the Order is too scared to, both before and after the crash. Sometimes we’re hired by Strangers. Hell, I remember a job we got from a couple of Gremlins once. The money goes toward research for weaponry and materials for crafting. Good money, too,” he added. “Prices range from a few thousand crowns, minimum, to a few thousand crystallised energy units. Crystal energy, if you prefer.”
“Okay, then. You mentioned research. What research are you doing?”
“Well, as far as I know, we have no advanced guns on this planet. Just handguns. Now, I know some are good quality, but they’re still handguns. I recall seeing an ancient schematic detailing a ‘sniper-rifle’, if you know what that is.” he looked unsurprised at Cross' confusion. "Basically, it’s a monocular on a rifle. I find it odd how no one thought of something so simple, yet brilliant. I could patent it and sell it to the Order for a few million, but then again, I wouldn’t trust them with this JUST yet. War would probably want to keep it low profile. Anything else?”
“Actually, yeah. Don’t get offended, but you seem to follow War around like a lapdog. Don’t you ever question him, or disagree with him?”
Cross immediately though he had said something offensive. Pestilence did not answer immediately. He removed and folded his glasses in a slow, deliberate fashion, before turning to answer.
“Let me tell you a story, kid, and pay attention.” His tone was no longer that matter-of-fact voice that spoke words of indifference, but more endearing, like a grandfather reminiscing about days gone by to his grandchildren. “I used to be kinda like you. Curious, inexperienced, cynical, you know. Then I joined the Order, and I thought it would end, that I’d be a big, strong hero. How naïve I was…” his voice trailed off before he caught himself. “Anyway, I was moving up the ranks like any Knight would. Took a while, but I made Defender, which I was proud of. Then we were sent off to battle. To Ilsora.
“The Morai,” he spat. “I guess you don’t know who they are, then? Doesn’t matter. That fight's over. Long story short, I came close to dying, by their hand no less, when I was saved. By the very man who brought you here. Told me all kinds of nonsense, of a “rogue squad of black-ops Knights” and there being an “open spot for recruits”. Reeled me in with the old “lots of coin in our trade” line, he did. I knew he’d kill me otherwise, he'd told me too much, so I accepted. Sound familiar? Of course it does. Anyway, he trained me for a few months under the most brutal regime I could have ever imagined. War never pushed me too hard, though, he knew my limits. That’s how he trains you: he just waits until you collapse as a test, then pushes you to that extreme each day. Then the initiation came.
“The initiation,” he went on, “is when everything comes to a head. Starting out with War and the others, I thought I’d die from the training. Boy, was I wrong. See, by that time, I’d grown stronger, as expected, but also smarter. I knew War wouldn’t kill me with training. But the initiation's not training. It's do or die. That, and he never actually TOLD me about the initiation. So when he chained me to a live bomb and told me to get clear or die, I had my doubts, but then I saw that look in his eye. He wasn't lying, and no amount of doubt would convince me otherwise. So, naturally, I tried to defuse the bomb. Only thing was, I couldn't. One of the only times I couldn't do my job. I panicked, then started counting down the minutes until my death. Then I noticed something.
"War had told me all about different encryptions and hacking techniques. None of them worked on the bomb. I wasn't SUPPOSED to be defusing the bomb. The 'chain' he tethered me to the bomb with had a computer locking mechanism. I tried that. After some attempts, I succeeded, but here's the twist: War had encrypted it multiple times. A multi-layered encryption, who would've thought it? I used every single thing he had taught me to get that chain off, every damn thing, then made a break for it with seconds to spare.
"See this?" He pointed to a scar on the left side of his face. Cross hadn't noticed it due to the lighting. "Burn mark from that explosion. Everytime I see it, I remind myself that the reason it's there is because I followed orders, and where I'd be if I didn't. After my initiation, I stopped being that little kid who questioned everything, because I would have died that same cynical kid had I continued the way I was going. I haven't doubted War since then, and that was more than a decade ago."
Cross remained silent. There was no simple response to a story like this.
"Look, kid," Pestilence said to him. "My point is, War may not be the most noble guy. Hell, none of us are perfect, but I owe him my life. If he tells me to jump, I ask "how high?" Yeah, I may not agree with him, and I make suggestions when I think of them, but he has the final say. That's why he's the boss."
"So if I keep my head down and do what I'm told, I might survive?"
Pestilence chuckled. "No guarantees, kid, but give it your all. I'd say the odds are with you. War said you move like the last guy did. The last guy survived his initiation with little more than a broken leg and a gash on his forearm. You'll do fine."
Cross managed a weak smile. "Thanks, but I'm still getting used to the idea that the next few months will suck."
"You don't know that. Just relax once in a while. Nothing says you can't make friends here. Speaking of which, I should introduce you to my buddy Spacker sometime. You'll like him, you know, if you like crazy Gremlins with little regard for life."
There was a pause.
"So..." Cross said. "'Sniper-Rifle', you say?"
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Author's Notes: Not much action... or any. More dialogue than anything. Figured Pestilence deserved some character development. Poor guy never gets any screen time.

I want to comment on something you said earlier... LUCKY! You have cool teachers, none of my teachers will make bets with me!

I'd hardly regard that as "cool". It was a safe bet from his perspective, though. Mathematics is probably one of the toughest school subjects to get an 'A' in. Fortunately, the terms of the bet didn't involve ME losing money, so either way I win. Unless I fail the exam, in which case my teacher will NEVER let me live it down. Oh well...

Encouraging Mode: I wish you the best of luck!
Mean Critic Mode: “Famine, Death, come in!” Pestilence shouted through his com-unit. “What in Sam Hill are you two doing? Half the Factory just went red!” PAH! How could you miss this? Only the most lowly, stupid writers would make thyis kind of mistake!
Critic Mode: “Famine, Death, come in!” Pestilence shouted through his com-unit. “What in Sam Hill are you two doing? Half the Factory just went red!” I could've sworn you said you weren't going to call him Death. :P
Note: Do not be offended by my mean critic mode, I was in a mean critic mode, :/ so, my concoince did not say anything to that, mind my MCM

A Mean Critic appeared!
Mean Critic uses Plot Hole!
Scamall is affected by criticism and has been forced to retaliate!
Scamall uses Debunk!
"I said I'd refer to Cross as... Cross. Pestilence is not me. His being called Death by other characters is part of the story. Ergo, not a plot hole/contradiction."
It's super effective!
Mean Critic defeated!
270 EXP Gained!

The same mean critic appears!
Mean Critic points out an error!
So, where did Pestilence get that name from, because of “Oh. Um... I-It’s Cross. Name’s Cross,” he said sheepishly. and A life he could only now begin to live... “They call me… Cross.”
Super Effective!

They're called the Four Horsemen after the same horsemen from the Bible: War, Pestilence, Famine, and Death. In my story they go by their codenames because of safety protocols regarding their identities. Remember what War said? "You need to earn the title of Death." Cross is a recruit. He doesn't go by Death until his initiation. We discussed this several chapters ago. Oh, wait... I maybe forgot to mention that the others don't use their real names. Whoops. Still... My point is valid. Maybe you just haven't heard of the Biblical Horsemen, which explains all the confusion.

so that's the non-spiral related thing you're doing. Well, seems interesting enough, but I STILL don't get why ONLY Pestilence calls him Death on ONE occasion. (Ugh, you don't have to answer that, I feel stupid enough already :P)

Hey, now. We only see War in flashbacks, so he hasn't had much of an opportunity to call him by his title. Of course, once he finally does, it won't have the same effect now that we've been discussing this. Eh, it won't be a problem.

A somewhat shorter chapter, but to Hell with it. I said every weekend, so every weekend it is. My exams start next week... and go for another two weeks... I will perservere!
===Chapter 10===
The smell of something burning ensnared him, choking him, forcing him to open his eyes. He was drowsy; stunned by one of the chunks of metal that was now crushing his midsection. A shard of something pierced his side, causing tremendous agony. Without his armour, he would at least have been spared this pain, but now he would die slowly, painfully, buried under the very pile of rubble he created. He couldn’t move, couldn’t breathe, couldn’t… think...
One of the pieces of metal covering his face was lifted, offering refreshing gulps of air, or whatever passed for air at the time. He inhaled deeply, as though he were using his lungs for the first time. The smouldering remains of the Factory swam hazily into focus, as well as a pair of peculiar eyes, one as unseeing as it was milky white, with a long scar running vertically through its centre, the other dark and gleeful.
“I know this is a bad time to be facetious… Hell, the definition of ‘facetious’ is ‘humour used at an inappropriate time’, but there are so many jokes I want to make right now… oh, well. Guys! Got ‘im!”
A few seconds passed, during which time Cross could hear some movement in the background. Something grabbed the metal crushing his ribcage and heaved it to one side. He felt himself being dragged to his feet by a large Bomber with a familiar-looking pair of glasses.
“You okay, kid? That was a Helluva blast. Frankly, I’m shocked there’s any of you left.”
Cross staggered to his feet, only to have the wind knocked out of him by what felt like a tackle.
“Thank God we found you!”
Famine released Cross almost immediately, looking very embarrassed. Her eyes were filled with tears.
“Well,” Spacker interrupted. “Thanks for avoiding the public displays of affection, at least. I’m so glad we’re being professional about this.” Famine glared at him. “What? Facetious, remember?”
“Can we get back to more pressing issues?” interjected Pestilence. “How are you feeling, kid?”
“Yankee-doodley-dandy. Why do you ask? I’m in serious pain, you stupid f- ungh!” He clutched his side. “Get this damn thing out of my side before I bleed out!” he shouted through gritted teeth.
“You kids and your manners, eh? Hold on.” Pestilence procured his medpack, from which he took a health capsule. “Take this. It should numb the pain, at least until its healing kicks in.”
He handed the capsule to Cross, who wolfed it down hungrily. The blinding pain in his side vanished. “Thanks. What do we do now?”
“Back to the hideout, I guess,” said Famine. “War might want to know about what we got from here.”
“Sounds like a plan. You guys get that symbol up on the walls?”
Spacker chuckled before pointing at a nearby wall. “Over there, buddy. My own design.” The symbol was a white semicircle with a vertical line going straight through it. Cross noted how much it resembled Spacker’s own eye. “Like it? Thought so. C’mon, let’s get out of here.”
The four mercenaries suited up before heading to the nearest exit. There was little to nothing left of the Factory. Charred corpses and blood-stained piles of rubble lined the pathways. Whatever that bomb did, it worked. Pestilence wasn’t lying when he said how powerful it was. After some trekking, they reached their point of entry, the warehouses. The Constructs were no longer standing upright, but were strewn about the ground like the recently-deceased Gremlins.
“That’s interesting,” Pestilence said with a hint of curiosity. “They must have been linked to the central terminal somehow. Maybe we could bring one of them back with us?”
“I don’t think we can carry something that heavy,” Famine answered. “Scanning their systems seems to be a better idea. With their schematics and this techni-key, we may just have to boost our hiring prices.”
“Terrible idea,” Spacker chimed in. “In an economy like this, people are more willing to pay for a bargain. Your way is only good for short-term money making. You need to think about this stuff, you know. Maybe we could just sell the schematics at a raised cost?”
“If you two are finished…” Pestilence grumbled, adjusting his glasses. “I’ll scan a couple. Try and get Death to safety before administering medical aid.”
Activating his HUD scanner, he approached the fallen Constructs, gun raised. Famine put her arm around Cross before drawing her grappling hook and firing it skyward at the gear. Spacker pulled out a bag of medi-gel and a few bandages from his satchel before saluting comically before Famine pulled herself and Cross towards the gear.
“Out of curiosity,” Cross asked. “How long was I out?”
“I don’t know. Five hours? You’re lucky we found you,” Famine replied. She still looked a bit shaken.
“Oh, you bet your ass I am. It’s lucky I managed to wake up to a nice, slow, painful death. Not what I had in mind when I signed up for this crap.”
“Some things never change,” she said, managing to crack a smile. “Hold on, now.”
They had reached the gear. After an awkward effort, both Horsemen had managed to climb on board. Cross’ HUD beeped.
“Famine, Death, come in,” Pestilence said through the connection. “Whoever designed these things was preparing for a full-scale invasion. I’ve never seen Constructs this well-built. The armour quality, the weaponry. Hell, they have Retrode-grade beam cannons installed in their heads! I think we just found a goldmine of data.”
“That’s strange…” Spacker muttered through the comlink. “I recognise this symbol. The Crimson Order? By the Gear Sages themselves… this is Seerus’ handiwork!”
“Seerus?” Famine asked. “The Warmaster?”
“Looks like War’s gonna be PRETTY damn interested in what we got here,” Pestilence remarked. “Those Spirals might just need deeper pockets.”
“I’ll take Death back to the hideout,” Famine said. “We’ll meet up with you later.”
“Sounds like a plan. I don’t think we’ll be hanging around here much longer. You okay, Fuzz-ball?”
“Huh?” Spacker woke from his trance. “Yeah… I’m fine… what’s that maniac planning?” he whispered to himself. “Oh, this is not good at all.”

===Chapter 11===
"So... you were really worried about me, weren't you?"
"What?"
"Oh, come on," Cross said teasingly. "No point in lying."
"I was not!" Famine yelled angrily. "I was... just...worried that we might need to fill in a new vacancy. It went SO well the last time," she added sarcastically.
Cross laughed. "Sharp tongue as always. Gotta respect that."
They walked carefully across the field-sized gear, around the pillar in its centre. Cross always wondered about how these gears were moved to accommodate the great machine that was the planet. Now, it didn't matter. He was limping with a wound in his side similar to a sword's, and was trailing small amounts of blood as he walked. Famine made a continuous effort to keep him in an upright position, something Cross was silently grateful for. After a long time of pained walking, during which time they had managed to grapple to different heights and depths, the pair arrived at the hideout, located in an abandoned gate. Famine approached the console by the entrance.
"Password: 14247. Retinal scan..." she put her eye to the scanner. The light turned green. "and there we go."
The blast door slowly rose upwards, allowing the Horsemen access. They stepped inside, allowing the door to slam shut behind them, sealing them in the dark.
"Wonder if the others made it back," Cross wondered out loud. "We've been moving pretty slowly."
"That's not your concern. We need to properly fix this wound," Famine responded anxiously.
"Yeah, yeah. To the medical bay, then."
The pair walked the corridors in silence, bypassing several rooms, including Pestilence's lab, War's shooting range and armoury, and Death's obstacle course. Well, it was Cross' now. Upon passing the debriefing room, they heard raised voices: Pestilence and War, arguing?
"- wasn't their fault! They were found out somehow!" Pestilence shouted.
"What do you mean, "found out"? There's no way they could have just been happened upon!" War yelled back. "They slipped up! And then they go and blow up half the goddamn Factory! And you!"
There was a noise, followed by a grunt of pain. War must have hit Pestilence.
"Where the Hell were you? Why didn't you stop them?"
"I gave the order," Pestilence said breathlessly. "We can't risk an invasion on Haven."
"Really? Well, it looks like it's gonna happen either way! There's no way those filthy rats will let this slide!"
"Hey, watch it," came Spacker's voice. "That's offensive!"
"SHUT UP!" War bellowed.
"That doesn't sound good," Famine whispered.
"I'm going in there," Cross muttered.
"What?" Famine whispered, panicked. "We need to-"
"My blood levels aren't that bad. I can wait a few minutes."
Cross limped into the room, Famine following closely. War turned to face them slowly. Cross had never seen such anger.
"Talking about us? I though performance reviews were done in person," Cross said with a smirk.
War walked slowly towards his colleague, each step echoing like the shot of a gun, which Cross assumed he would be feeling in a short while. On and on he walked, until his face was inches from Cross's.
"You have a lot of nerve, boy," War growled, his eyes narrowing. "I brought you here under the pretense that you would be a great asset, but here you are, proud of making a mockery of this entire squad. You know what I should do?"
"Pat me on the back and send me on my way?" Cross chuckled.
"What are you doing?!" Famine whispered loudly.
"No," War said softly. "I was thinking..."
In a flash, he drew his gun and jammed the barrel into Cross' wounded side. Cross yelped in pain and tried to move, but War restrained him with his free hand. Famine stood, transfixed, hands covering her mouth, and even Pestilence was reacting with utmost horror.
"Maybe I should just pull the trigger," War leered. "Ever been shot by one of these?" He twisted the gun, causing Cross to grind his teeth to withstand the pain. "The ignition from the powder not only sends a piece of lead into your body at an alarming speed, but also heats it to the point that it could cauterize your wound shut, trapping it in your internally-bleeding torso. Do you know how that feels? DO YOU?" he seethed, twisting the gun further.
Cross' pained moans were groing louder. "No! No I don't!" he shouted.
"Of course, that's not the worst of it," War continued. "You see, after the searing pain drills into you, the darkness kicks in. It spreads through your veins, slowly corrupting you, poisoning you, until..."
He yanked his gun out of Cross' wound. Cross screamed in pain before War kicked him in the stomach, knocking him to the ground hard.
"Until you bleed to death, slowly and painfully," he finished calmly. "What say you?"
Cross groaned in pain, clutching his side. After a few seconds, he spoke up.
"Well, not the most attractive option," he said through gritted teeth. "But I can think of worse."
War frowned. "This is pointless," he spat. "Every second I waste on you, no matter how satisfying, is still a second wasted."
He turned to Famine, gazing into her stricken face, her amber eyes laced with fear.
"Did you two at least find anything at that Factory?" he asked, sounding mildly annoyed.
"Y-yes sir," she squeaked, before handing him her techni-key. "Some data from their central terminal, and Pestilence has some schematics he thinks you might find interesting."
"You didn't mention this, Pestilence," War said sharply.
"I didn't feel the need to, sir," Pestilence responded, his voice low and angry.
"Hm," War scanned the key with his HUD. "Needs decoding. You can take care of that, right,?" He tossed Pestilence the key. "And forward me those
schematics. Maybe this night hasn't been a total disaster."
He went to leave, stopping once he had reached the door.
"Oh, and Famine?" he asked in his calm yet sinister tone.
"Sir?" she asked nervously.
He spun his Sentenza so that he was holding the barrel, before swiping at her face with the butt of the gun. She staggered before losing her balance entirely and falling to the ground.
"Be more careful next time," he said callously. "Horsemen! Dismissed."
Cross growled in anger, more concerned about this than his own predicament.
Famine scrambled to her feet before attempting to help Cross up. Her breathing was shallow.
"You two okay?" Pestilence asked concernedly, before moving to do the same.
"I-I'm fine," she stammered. She didn't sound fine.
"Yeah, me too," Cross grumbled. "Maybe I shouldn't have done that."
"Well, no going back now," Pestilence said. "'Sides, he probably doesn't think you're gonna break as easily, so he might lay off."
"Speaking of breaking, I think he cracked my ribs. Med-bay, please."
Pestilence chuckled. "Sure thing kid. Hey, Famine, I got him, don't worry. You just have a lie down, okay?"
"Yeah... okay," she mumbled, before wiping her eyes. "I'll just... go."
She stepped out of the room, leaving a sense of sadness in her wake.
"She'll be fine," Pestilence said. "She's always fine."
"Yeah..." Cross said, pensive. "But how much can one person take?"

I FINALLY GET IT! Makes perfect sense now!
And on the note of the story, I was too much into reading it that I didn't pay attention to grammical errors. That War guy is a real [Insert bad word here].

No, I didn't SEE any grammatical errors, if there were any, because I was too wrapped up in the story. And I now understand the conversation we've been having posts 34-39.

Didn't think I could keep someone's attention that well with my writing. If you want, I can give it back. Ohoho, jokes. Nah I'm keeping it.
To be honest, I've been waiting to start that chapter for a while. I like portraying War as a competent yet arrogant [this swear has been filtered as per forum protocol].

My exams are finally done! Woohoo! And it only took 14 days! That's almost 2 weeks!
/jokes
Anyway, I'm motivated enough to post something that should have been posted during the weekend. Bit of a heart-wrencher, compared to my other chapters. Unless I'm terrible at emotive writing or you're all soulless. Let the universe be the judge of that. Moving on...
===Chapter 12===
She sat in the chair next to his bed, lost in thought. Whatever kind of dream she was having, it wasn't a pleasant one. Her amber eyes staring just ahead of her, seeing and unseeing. Cross sat up in his mattress, being careful so as not to disturb his wound. He observed her for a moment, noting how pretty she looked when in this state, before dismissing himself as blunt to what troubled her. In spite of himself, he decided to strike up a conversation to prove himself wrong.
"Hey. Everything alright?"
"Hmm?" Her reply was answer enough. Distracted, like her train of thought had derailed.
"Famine? Come on, talk to me," Cross said. "Is it War? Look, I know he's a bit of a-"
"It's not War... well, it is, but that's not what's wrong," she mumbled.
"We're going in circles here. I'm gonna keep asking until you tell me."
"I-It's nothing," she said quickly. "I'm fine, really."
Cross closed his eyes and started humming monotonously, lazily waving his hands left and right in front of her.
"What are you doing?" she asked, puzzled.
He opened an eye. "I have the gift..." he whispered. "You... are troubled, child." He closed his eye before continuing.
"Enough with the jokes," she snapped.
"Oh, lighten up," he smirked. "I'm just trying to lift the mood. Talk or I'll do it again."
"I swore to take it with me to the grave. I promised him-" she gasped, then covered her mouth with her hands.
Cross frowned, trying to make sense of what he had just heard. He remembered each time Famine had become like this: pensive, distant, almost afraid... guilty, even. The first time he had seen her like this, she was talking about...
"Ah," he said placidly. "Death. Not me, the other one. My precursor."
Her silence hinted towards his being right.
"He made me swear never to tell anyone..." she gazed into his eyes. "Promises are made to be broken, I guess."
"Not sure I want to hear this, but you've been carrying it around for a while now," Cross reasoned. "You need to tell someone if it's as bad as I think it is."
"Oh, it's worse than you think it is," she muttered. "Much worse. But... I trust you."
She took a moment to collect herself before continuing.
"You know how our system works, right? Our titles correspond to our roles in the squad. Pestilence, the bomber, good with volatile compounds and explosives, hence his bomb that nearly killed you."
"Still recovering from that, by the way," Cross said. "What was in that, anyway? Asbestos?"
"War, the master of munitions," she continued, "adept at all manner of weaponry. Famine, the thief, capable of infiltrating and stealing precious resources... and Death, the assassin. Fast as the wind, silent as snow. Dark as the night..."
She let herself reminisce for a second before continuing.
"War wasn't always our leader, you know. Your predecessor was elected before him, back when the Horsemen existed on the Homeworld. I was fresh out of the Academy, having graduated with top marks in stealth, and I was ready to take on the world. I was sent off to 'retrieve' a data package from an enemy camp located in the middle of some desert. It was fun, yeah, until I was captured by those... monsters..." she shuddered.
"I don't even want to know what they'd have done had he not come along. I assume you know who I mean, right? Death himself walked in their front door and took down every single one of them. A bit excessive, I'll admit, but as a recipient of their 'hospitality', I'd say it was well-deserved. He was a lot nicer than War ever was. Even asked if I was okay before liberating me from that place. Then he offered me a place on the squad. Hell, if joining meant I could be half as sneaky as he was, then sign me up.
"It all went well for some time. I had the best training, good friends and colleagues... then Ozlo announced the big sendoff: We'd be going with the millions of others on that colossal Skylark. After the crash, Death had us Horsemen regroup in the nearby mountains until HQ got the Uplink set up. Once they did, we moved to Haven, which wasn't all bad, except we were more likely to be out in public. Eventually, Death got clearance for an abandoned gate, and that's how we found the hideout.
"A week or so later," she continued, "we were assigned to take out a Gremlin munitions depot. We did the usual approach: War would blitz his way through with Pestilence while we rigged the place to blow. Of course, once we got to the main hub, Death tells me to turn back while he moves on. I asked why he'd do such a stupid thing. I wasn't expecting his reponse.
"In the year or two I'd gotten to know him, I had found out a lot about Death's personal life. He was married, well, widowed. His wife was killed by some splinter cell of the Morai that he'd pissed off at some point. I don't need to tell you what became of them. All he had left was a baby daughter, who he left in a relative's care while he did his job. With everything we'd been through, I guess you could say I started to care for him, and I'd wager a guess he felt the same. I thought maybe once the Order got stuff done so we could get off this rock, we'd have a life together. I was wrong.
"He told me that someone had sent him a message, saying that they knew who he was, who his daughter was, and that she'd suffer if he ever showed his face again. He knew they weren't bluffing. That's how he lost his wife, after all. So he told me to go. To leave him behind and enjoy my life, and that he was sorry. Sorry our life together would have to wait for another time, another life. Sorry he wouldn't be around to see his daughter's face one last time. He told me to find her and let her know his last thoughts were of her. So he took the detonator... and walked toward the central hub with a bomb. I ran for my life, past all the other explosives we had planted, and escaped the coming chain-reaction.
"I should have stayed with him," she said, tears streaming from her face. "I should have..."
She broke down, covering her face and sobbing uncontrollably. Cross hadn't expected this, and wished he could forget it, but she needed to let it out. The guilt would have killed her otherwise.
"T-That's why..." her voice shook as she spoke, "I was worried about you. I couldn't s-stand the thought of losing another... everytime I l-look at your armour, I see him... I'm s-sorry..."
"You have nothing to apologise for, but you have to let him go," Cross said, putting his arm around her. "He chose to save his daughter, a noble sacrifice. It isn't your fault."
She looked up at him, her amber eyes filled with tears. Her face was inches from his own. Slowly, they moved closer... until...

Yeah, I'm pretty sure "apologize" is spelled with a "z" and not an "s". Just sayin' :3
Other than that, great story. And I'm glad to hear you're finally finished with your exams!

1) Thanks for the praise, both storywise and exam-wise.
2) I believe apologise can be spelled either way, depending on where you live. Hence why I add a 'u' in certain words and spell 'centre' thusly.
3) Other than that, way to kill a mood, Ise! Don't tender moments mean anything to you?

Sorry. :3
Oh, and I have another thing to ask you. :3
Did you win your bet? XD
I loved it, but I have a question I think I remember that Cross's name was Death at the time *checks Cross's Character App* yeah, here let me show you: " Originally part of a 4-man squad called "The Horsemen", Cross went by the alias "Death". Along with his allies "War", "Pestilence" and "Famine", they plundered and pillaged the Clockworks for vast amounts of loot." Yeah... so that is basicallly the only thing wrong I found, other than that, it was awesome!
(P.S. How did you do all that stuff on you Userpage? Like the portrait and the open up box thing? :3)