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Sat, 04/07/2012 - 15:57
Sat, 04/07/2012 - 16:11
#2
Love how I posted the first
Love how I posted the first chapter of my story and no one has reviewed, but you post your's and already have someone replying.
/Tantrum
But seriously, this is a very nice piece, definitively a four star story. Keep it up.
- Zero
Sat, 04/07/2012 - 18:30
#3
Wow
Very nice =)
Sun, 04/08/2012 - 04:35
#4
So ... what was their relationship, anyway?
The story was well-written, although it bugged me through the whole thing that I didn't know what the letter said, and when we finally found out what it must have been regarding at the end ... well, without any background information as to why the character would care about this particular guild member leaving, it made the whole thing look like a giant temper tantrum. Of course, that's just me ... someone who is more active in guilds may have an entirely different perspective.
Sun, 04/08/2012 - 05:01
#5
Amazing
I love this story.
Sun, 04/08/2012 - 09:53
#6
@Tevokkia
Well, it was majorly exaggerated. And they were good friends. It's a friendly, close guild. Still, majorly exaggerated. And the anger was directed more towards the guild falling apart instead the member leaving by itself.
Sun, 04/08/2012 - 10:43
#7
@Nitresco
Ah. So I suppose that the story would make more sense if you are already familiar with the background information, since it isn't included in the story itself.
Beautiful, just beautiful! At least, the last line. I didnt read the rest..... -runs off-