Spiral Knights - Fanfic: Unity (Rolecasting!)

Fanfic: Unity (Rolecasting!)

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Sun, 04/15/2012 - 21:51

Korakc

This is my first fanfic,so I'm a bit new to this stuff ^·^

Tell me if I'm doing something out of order, like if the Prolouge goes in first post. I am going to start fanfic as soon as I can get a few more characters.

Submit characters including as much detail possible and useing the format below;

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Age:
Appearence, Weapons and (optional) Tactics:
History:
Role:
Expendability:(this is if you would like your character to live or not.)
Friend/Foe:(Do you help the main party or hurt them?)

Current Roles:

Starting Roster in Prolouge

Leader: Hawthorne
Second in Command: Silver (Gremlin Hybrid healer/thwacker)
Hawthorne's Medic: Halcus
Guardian:
Recon: Valon
Hawthorne's all around:

Main Party's Enemy's Roster

Leader:
Second in Command:
Technician:
Guardian:
Recon: Hex
All around: Blyne

Non-Party characters:

Blue (a frostifur)

I would like for it to be one character per person, but that cn be changed if needed.
I will be starting the prolouge as soon as the main party's characters are almost all filled.

Credits:

Starring as Blyne, Xplad! http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/50881#comment-346122

Starring as Halcus, Za-Ck! http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/50881#comment-346683

Starring as Blue, Atgatg! http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/50881#comment-346763

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 15:21

Shue-Donnym

Hi :3

Name: Blyne
Gender: Female
Race: Spiral
Age: 29
Appearence, Weapons and (optional) Tactics: Mad Bomber set, Volc Plate Shield, yellow color. Sudaruska, Supernova, Irontech Destroyer. "All signs point to blow up everything."
History: One of the first to land on Cradle, Blyne was a promising recruit, and Feron led her to one of the elite squads once she was qualified for Tier 3. She quickly fulfilled her end of the deal, carrying the rest of them through many sticky situations. She made her squad one of the best there was, but never really managed to live up to the bar set by the Alpha Squad. However, her squad were unhappy with her, and threw her out without prior notice. She retreated into her pod for months, ignoring any attempt by Feron or anyone else to lighten her up. Over time, the fair eyes in which Feron had once seen a future success had become sunken and sleepless from days and nights of obsessing over what was next for them. When she finally went out, she marched straight into the clockworks with one of her old squadmates, not revealing her identity. As the elevator ground to a halt and landed in the first depth, Blyne incapacitated her teammate and then dragged him along as she destroyed every enemy on the level. As they reached the elevator, Blyne stared into his eyes and said,
"Tell the squad that we were not one of the best.I hate this idea that we were one of the best. I was one of the best. I'm the best in the world at what I do. And they are nothing without me."
Then she was gone, and the knight lay there, dumbfounded.
Role: Enemy All-Around
Expendability: "Survival is job one."
Friend/Foe: Foe. Bitterness does big things.

So you're new, eh? Good luck, and don't be afraid to accept criticism from the other Treasure Vault regulars.
Also I don't think age really matters in a fanfiction, but oh well, your call I guess.
And in case we ever touch upon the subject: Theme

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 15:16

Za-Ck

Eh, why not?

I guess I'll submit something, been a while since I have for one of these things.

Name: Halcus

Gender: Male

Race: Spiral

Age: 25

Appearence, Weapons and Tactics:
Vitasuit Deluxe, Valkyrie Helm, Blue color, Glacius, Final Flourish, Storm Driver, Grey Owlite Shield.
Never first to charge directly into battle, but fully supports the team as best as he can. Always carries a vitapod around so he can have extra health to give to his teammates. Although not his specialty, he also makes a decent mechanic if needed. He is a calm and cool type of person, not easily enraged or provoked. However, he is stern with his patients and will not hesitate to enforce his authority if he feels that it is for the patient's own good. Outside of duty though, he is friendly enough and easy to talk to.

History:
A member of the same group that Hawthorne had trained with before becoming an official Spiral Knight. Although he does not really know Hawthorne that well, he is on good terms with him and volunteered to be the team medic when Hawthorne was elected a squad leader. After landing on Cradle, Halcus has managed to tame a chromalisk and keeps it as a pet. Otherwise, there really isn't much to say about him.

Role: Hawthorne's Medic

Expendability: Not very expendable, but will take the hit if no one else will

Friend/Foe: Friend

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 16:31

Korakc

Alright, both apps are

Alright, both apps are accepted. :D Thanks for the apps!

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 16:43

Valorai

Name: BlueGender:

Name: Blue
Gender: Female
Race: Frostifur
Age: 16
Appearance, weapons, tactics: Sharp claws, fangs, a very white coat, very small. She would be about 1 foot. Gray, sad eyes. She isnt very strong so she prefers to strike quick with her claws then run off. Although she acts rash when friends are in danger.
History: A ..... 'midget' of a frostifur, Blue never hunted with the rest of her pack because of her size. She was always thought of as weak. One day, trying to prove herself, she wandered the clockworks and found a trio of knights who left her badly wounded. She never trusted knights again. And she could never face the consequences of coming back to herpack, so she roams the clockworks this day....
Role: Lonely, dangerous frostifur.
Expendibility: Feel free to injure, but no death plz.

Foe/friend: Foe. (Bit only because she doesnt trust them. (Perhaps they could gain her trust again?)

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 16:43

Artistbma

-_- I am so annoyed. I was

-_- I am so annoyed.

I was about to finish my app and it was like 2 paragraphs long. Then Atgatg put his up and i got knocked off the internet because of bad connection.

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 16:46

Valorai

Nice!

Um.... Sorry?

Mon, 04/16/2012 - 16:54

Artistbma

Well...I FORGIVE YOU!

Boohoo....im so sad....

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 16:46

Korakc

Alright, Blue is accepted

Alright, Blue is accepted :D

Artist, if you still want to make an app you can :P

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 18:01

Korakc

Prolouge is finished, just

Prolouge is finished, just waiting for one more app so I can post it. Have blanks where the knight should go, lol :P finished but have blanks :P

Will be up by 2 days, gotta format and type (did it at work, in a notebook

Tue, 04/17/2012 - 18:18

#10

Manxy

*shrug* why not

Name: Manxy
Gender: Male
Race: Knight
Age:23
Appearence, Weapons and (optional) Tactics: Vog Cub coat, Dragon Scale Helm. Glacius and archeron.
History: A very skilled knight who was one of the best when it came to hunting down his enemies. His methods were sometimes frowned upon by his superiors as he had a reputation for being overly cruel and brutal. He lost his whole squad not to long ago in a gravyard because of his will to complete a mission no matter how impossible. This has caused Spiral HQ to ground him untill further notice. He is not happy with this. Take this and use it however you will. He can be good, he can be evil, he can be a Loner. Its your story.
Role: Whatever.
Expendability:(this is if you would like your character to live or not.) Whatever
Friend/Foe:(Do you help the main party or hurt them?) Whatever

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 14:31

#11

Afroken

Ok I'll join(may not be able to come as often as I hope)

Name: Hex
Gender: Male
Race: Gremlin Thwacker(axe guys)
Age:21
Appearence, Weapons and Tactics: Basic looking gremlin but a little battle worn(dirt and a few scars) uses a steel axe with a tiny light shard carved into the hilt. As for tactics likes to play it stealthy but wont hesitate to bring the hurt when needed.
History: Was recruited as a recon agent at a young age and aspired to be promoted to the crimson order ever since
Role:Enemy Recon
Expendability: Lives
Friend/Foe: Foe
Hope thats good enough.

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 14:46

#12

Isekuube

I'll put in a couple of apps, cause they all go together.

Three, here you are:

Name: Element

Age: 17

Personality: Generally happy, Joker, gets offended if anybody makes fun of his habits.

Equipment: COSTUME: Snarbolax Coat with Shadow Valk Wings and Crown of the Fallen. REAL ARMOUR: Skolver Coat and Vog Cub Cap SHIELD: Crest of Almire UV: Elemental Max. WEAPONS: Glacius, Gran Faust, Argent Peacemaker, and Plague Needle. NOTE: His armour tends to chan ge on whatever mission he is on. (Feel free to nerf his gear when he is on different missions, I'd like you not to nerf his Ace Gear)

Skills: Likes to use double guns or double swords at times, with his Crest on his back. Often made fun of this habit.

Biography: Born into a group of Swordmen, who were built on the sole purpose of the art of Swording (does that make sense? :3) he never really followed the rules, always sneaking his guns on his missions, one day he was found out and was exiled from the group, after that he didn't have to stress about sneaking his guns in his coat, but he still does and is often thought as a swordsman from knights who don't know him.

Additional facts: Likes to sneak his guns on the inside of his coat and is often thought as a swordsman from knights who don't know him.

Pet/Friend: Teir Three Ghostmane Stalker, Echo, exiled from the colony. His most trusted friend, he has other knight friends, but he is considered his closest.

Allies: Tank, All Variations of Ice (IceKlaw, IseKube, etc.), Bull, Glacier, Fluro, Jack, Mark, his girlfriend Sophie

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Name: Sophie

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Race: Spiralian

Arsenal: Valkire Set, Divine Flower on Valk Helm, and Divine Valk Wings. Grey Owlite Shield. Silversix, Blitz Needle, Voltedge, and Leviathan Blade.

Personaity: Fun loving, and positive, when critizised of her past she won't talk to anybody but her snipe, Jovie

Bio: She lost her parents in a horrible takeover with devilites, she was only a little girl of 9 then, but promised to avenge them, she was still always down, untill she stumbled upon a snipe that wouldn't stop following her, finally she took her home and named it Jovie, since then they are forever friends, one day she was walking around Haven and she got an outbid, she kept trying to win the auctio, but she eventually lost, she sighed looked to her side and saw that a knight was getting what she was bidding on, she got mad at him and the two fought, htey became good friends after that, and eventually boyfriend and girlfriend.

Additional facts: She loves her Snipe, Jovie, a lot, sometimes more than her boyfriend, Element.

Friends: Element, Jovie, and Echo.
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Name: Echo

Gender: Male

Age: ??

Race: Gremalian? (lol waht?) maybe just Gremlin

Personality: Generally quiet and wise, often will wait. Comical at times will often crack jokes on their bleak situation, just for kicks he will cloak himself and sneak up on Element and scare him.

Equipment: Issued Ghostmane Stalker equipment. Besides his glaives/shurikens, he sometimes uses an Antingua.

Skills: Loves cloaking and is a good shot with his Antingua and glaives/shurikens

Biography: Shortly after Lord Seerus (Seerusly :D) rose to power he led a rebellion of Gremlins who didn't agree with him, the rebellion utterly failed and the living Gremlins fled the colony making their way to Emberlight. He got separated from another Gremlin friend, during the frenzy of the fleeing. By chance he stumbled upon a knight and they quickly made friends and traveled with him mostly everywhere.

Additional facts: Sneaks up on Element a lot, scaring him for kicks.

Friends: Element, Xovian, Jovie, and Sophie.

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 18:19

#13

Hexidac

App

Name: Valon
Gender: Male
Race: Spiral
Age: 27
Appearence:Arcane Salamander Mask, Snarbolax Coat
Weapons: Acheron, Callahan, Voltaic Tempest, Cloak Generator
Tactics: Backstab, plain and simple. If it comes to down to it, "If you want something done right, you have to do it yourself".
History: Valon, while excelling in training as a scout and infiltrator, never felt very comfortable knowing that his skills would make him stand out of the other recon trainees. Not wanting to be well known to the public eye, he intentionally sabotaged his records and decided to play the part of a lazy slacker. He came out of training known as the worst of the bunch. One day, he went into the clockworks to test out his newly forged Acheron. When he stepped off the elevator however, he found only debris. Making his way through the devastated area, a cloaked Valon eventually came upon the now traitor Blyne, just in time to hear her parting words to her former squadmate.
Personality: On the surface, Valon appears to be lazy and sleepy. Underneath, he is calm and collected, and will not hesitate to strike down enemies of the Spiral Order. Many foes have fallen for his act, and paid for it with a blade through the torso. He is a brilliant tactician and very lethal swordsmen, though he does carry a Callahan around just in case.
Role: Hawthourne's Recon
Expendability: I'd prefer him to live, but he can take a hit for the team if he has to.
Friend/Foe: Friend

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 18:30

#14

Korakc

Isecuube: Before I accept

Isecuube: Before I accept them, do you have any roles you want them to be in?

and Model, Valon is accepted :D

Hex is also accepted, ty for the apps :)

Wed, 04/18/2012 - 18:56

#15

Isekuube

Oh idk

Maybe a non-squad all four of them traveling together (Jovie as well please ;)) but all in all, I'd like them MAYBE to be a main person, idk, maybe friends of Hawhorne's

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 15:49

#16

Korakc

Prolouge (not sure if the format is great, and may add more on.)

Prologue:

Bravery has many meanings. It can be strength in combat, or daringness in missions. It could be when you aren’t scared, or when you never will refuse a request, no matter how dangerous. Unity’s motto was one word. Bravery.

Unity was an elite guild consisting of dozens and dozens of squads. The Guild Master’s squad was led by Hawthorne, the founder of Unity, before the war. It consisted of 6 people, all the first to join and the most skilled. Occasionally gremlins or constructs with lots of skill were allowed to join, if they weren’t hostile to knights in Unity. It was every knight’s dream to be in Unity. But then the war that was known as the Clockwork Rebellion happened.

Hawthorne was mad. Not at anyone else, but at himself. How could he have not seen this coming? And now a war has erupted and no guilds but Unity were left. Unity only had 6 members left: The first 6 to join. After the war, Hawthorne thought to himself, I will need to put Unity back together. Hopefully all the other prestigious guilds would regroup, too.
Hawthorne stood up from his chair in his room next to the bazaar. Using the com unit on his Skolver Cap, he called Spiral HQ.
“Hello, this is Hawthorne, Guild Master of Unity. Could you please send Silver to the Town Hall, next to the vending machine with information about the war. I am going to help fight the gremlins with the rest of Unity.” Silver was Hawthorne’s second-in-command gremlin that helped maintain Unity with him. Whenever he needed to get some information or needed to pick something up at the auction house, he was always happy to help.
Hawthorne exited his living quarters and walked to the Auction House. Spotting his fellow guild mate, Halcus, he waved and Halcus waved back. Hawthorne went over to meet him and Halcus asked, “What do you think we should do about the war? I’m getting a bit nervous, like some gremlins could come at any time.”
“I think I am going to fight for the Spiral Order, and I’m going to ask the rest of Unity, too.”
Just then Silver walked out of the arcade and went over to Hawthorne.
“I have Feron on the Com-Link, flip yours on and tell the rest of Unity to also turn their com units on, too. He will be briefing ton the war.” Hawthorne forced down a smile. Silver always came through, no matter what.
Flipping on his com unit, he told the rest of Unity to listen. Finally, Feron started to talk into the com unit.

Sorry it's not fully done, didn't have a lot of time this week to play SK D= Hopefully will have the rest and Chapter 1 out soon.

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 16:40

#17

Valorai

Awesome! Would be better if

Awesome! Would be better if longer though....

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 16:49

#18

Isekuube

@Atgatg, it's not finished

Great Prologue, and did I make in?

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 18:18

#19

Korakc

Yeah, I had a meeting for a

Yeah, I had a meeting for a work expansion lol, hoping to get more done.

and yes you did, I'm drafting the later chapters to find a spot for you.

Ya know, deciding what chapters will have what characters. ^.^

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 19:05

#20

Hexidac

O.o I didn't realize this was

O.o I didn't realize this was going to be about the actual guild Unity. Just so happens I'm a member of it, lol.

Edit: Wait a second, why is EoS writing a fanfic about Unity? Hmm...

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 19:41

#21

Korakc

not actually about Unity,

not actually about Unity, lol. as the story progresse Unity and the squad Element is in merge. That's why it is called Unity.

But yeh, its not about the actual Unity guild. when I get into further chapters it will be easy to understand.

Thu, 04/19/2012 - 19:53

#22

Afroken

Good job so far!

Great job so far, even if its only a bit, can't wait for the rest!

Fri, 04/20/2012 - 13:55

#23

Isekuube

Wait...

is the squad "Element" my squad?

Sun, 04/29/2012 - 18:33

#24

Korakc

yeah, and sorry I havn't

yeah, and sorry I havn't posted a lot here, been busy.

Mon, 04/30/2012 - 14:38

#25

Puuppet

Name: Iron Gender: Male Race:

Name: Iron
Gender: Male
Race: SK
Age: 20
Appearance: Azure Guardian set. Levi, CIV, Combuster, and Polaris.
History: The only thing that is known about Iron is that he has been corrupted by the swarm.
Role: idk maybe a solo knight that pesters the main team. Or other teams
Expendability: He can die, but die good
Friend/Foe: Foe, but "Corrupted" he can turn good in the end or something.

Mon, 04/30/2012 - 17:42

#26

Korakc

Accepted, but what is Iron's

Accepted, but what is Iron's shield?

Tue, 05/01/2012 - 17:55

#27

Puuppet

Ooops

FAIL! Ok, his shield is the Heater SHield! No jk, Aeigis.

Sun, 05/13/2012 - 09:57

#28

Angelic-Tear

ima make an app.

Name: Angelic Tear (no not me. Angelic Tear = forum and app person.)

Gender: Female

Race: spiralian

Age: 18

Appearence, Weapons and (optional) Tactics: well...i think i'll do the simple way: http://imgur.com/a/jePFN#8 and the next pic. Snarbolax set with costume crown of fallen, holding a barbarous thorn shield. She changes her sword for where she is. (if she can, otherwise what she had last)

History: hmmmm...we will say:
As a young girl, Tear always wanted to prove herself. She had a relatively normal life, so not much to say. She trained to fight, and was pretty good at it. During training, she would get as much sword practise as possible, sneaking swords into gun/bomb only missions. She was scolded, but they soon realised her potential and gave her extreme sword training. yeah...the skylark crashes etc.

Role: What ever she can get.

Expandability: If she dies, she dies fighting, for the people shes with or the people she loves.

Friend/Foe: Friend if possible.

Sun, 05/13/2012 - 17:08

#29

Korakc

accepted, but I probably

accepted, but I probably won't post the next chapter for a few days =/

Mon, 05/14/2012 - 06:22

#30

Verid

application

Name: Lannk
Gender: Male
Race: Spiralian
Age: 19

Appearance, Weapons: Lannk sports a Magic robe and hood and has bright green spherical eyes. He uses a Defender shield, with a modified paint job. (Dark green with a shard of Luminite painted on) He uses a Searing Edge and a Blaster. (I can upgrade his gear as he continues)

Tactics: Lannk Knows which enemies to take out first in a battle. He knows when to run as well. If he ever gets overwhelmed with his sword, He tries to fall back and hold them off with his blaster. If the enemies STILL persist, Lannk runs. (only if he needs medical help however)

History: when he was abord the skylark, Lannk was training to become a Geo Knight.

Role: Reconnaissance, Swordsman, skilled in Alchemy. Terrible with bombs, (barely passed his basic bomb test) and is a decent shot with his Blaster.

Expendability: Lannk is pretty hardy, Having survived multiple Geology expeditions, which often lead to trouble. He is not afraid to die for the cause, but would rather live to enjoy peace.

Friend/Foe:(Do you help the main party or hurt them?) Lannk tries to help out his party any way he can, often being more generous than his own good.
Sometimes people have tried to take advantage of his generosity all too often.

Tue, 05/15/2012 - 13:23

#31

Kaijuhunter

Plz lemme join

.... Can i joinz?

Name: Lelouch

Gender: Male

Race: Spiralian

Age: 17

Appearance: a bit taller than a medium sized knight, but shorter than the tall ones. Purple eyes with a red sigil in the left one.

Tactics: he usually studies his enemies and waits for them to attack before retaliating. He almost always finds a weakness in his enemies' form, and exploits it.

Gear: Snarbolax set with Fallen helm and Chaos Cloak as costume. Uses a Barbarous Thorn Shield and Barbarous thorn Blade. Also uses an Acheron, Sentenza, and a few poisoned black throwing knives.

Personality: ruthless, cruel, and usually heartless. However, he cares greatly for his 12 year old sister, Aria. Calculating and also very intelligent. Calm even in the face of danger. One of his few good traits is that he is honorable, and doesnt deploy dirty tactics against his enemies.

Role: rival squad leader

Foe ( he fights Hawthorne a lot, and when they fight there is never a winner; they're evenly matched )

Tue, 05/15/2012 - 20:54

#32

Soarel

Name: Soarel Gender:

Name: Soarel

Gender: Male

Race: Spiralian

Age: 24

Appearance/Gear: Green Personal color, Solid Cobalt Armor, Cobalt Helm with Helmguards/Helm mounted display/Plume

Weapons: Tempered Calibur, Stun Gun (:P).

History: A tragic accident caused half of his chest to be replaced by an Energy Core. He thus has a speech impediment (*tchk* appears in every sentence) Keeps pet Chromalisk and refuses to hurt any other Chromalisks in its presence.
Role: Second In Command

Expendability: Injured once. Tempered Calibur becomes a Cold Iron Carver at end.

Friend.

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Fanfic: Unity (Rolecasting!)