Gremlin Legends and Knights Tales
Dear Reader,
In case you are wondering, I am remotely entering this into a digitalized diary through my radio unit.
I am writing this so that you may be able to know of the dangers that await you and of the history and truth about this place. I hope that you will be able to find out what has happened to me in your adventures and not make the same mistakes I have. I was an explorer of the clockworks a brave adventurer, one day I was fighting a horde of Gremlins, after defeating them I was walking away when I noticed a strange slip of paper that was being held by the leader. You might think a slip of paper is nothing to worry about but this piece of paper had intricate wiring around it, as I touched it, it changed, into a electronic book, I was entranced. Upon it were the words: Maintain the infection…
I arrived at Emberlight shortly after, when I asked the gremlins there they all seemed to be hiding something and all said they didn’t know what it meant. Except for one, the old gate keeper, they say he was the first to be banished from the great colony, he is the oldest of them. I asked him, at first he was unwilling to speak, then I offered him a snipe egg (Gremlins seem to like keeping baby snipes as pets) he agreed to tell me what it meant, but instead of telling me, he brought me to an abandoned chained up gate. There he gave me a shadow key something that I used to think was a legend, and he unlocked the gate. Before I went down to explore he warned me: Do not be consumed by them, never give in to them and never think of them as real they are the infected.
To be continued…
The way you tell this is epic, but needs more characters and some more dialog. Like, I said, "Tell me what 'Maintain the infection' means." Other than that this is truly epic! The way you tell the story is suspenseful and amazing.