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Sat, 05/26/2012 - 21:13
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Generation-Shock

This RP will be about breaking through the core barrier. The story will be written by me, but feel free to throw in suggestions... Like core bosses. But one thing is for sure.... we have to battle the core itself, when it turns into.... THE CORE: FINAL CHARGE. Resume's should look like this:

NAME(Self explanatory.):
ITEMS(Weaponry, Special things....):
SPECIES(Really, You need an explanation?):
POSITION(Ranking in the team.):
SMALL BACKSTORY(This is optional. Just make it into a story about how you got to the core.):
BATTLE STYLES (This is how they attack.):
POSITION (This is what they do.):
EXPENDABILITY (Can your character be killed?):
APPEARENCE(This is armor, Accessories.):

This won't be a weekly process. I might go offline for a month, maybe! But anyways, Here's the first part:

Breaking The barrier: Part 0
The Path is Sealed

The elevator hissed, and with a cloud of steam and energy, a platform slid down into the terminal. A few seconds later, a lone knight tumbled through the air from the level above and hit the floor with a deafening crunch... If anyone was around. The terminal was quiet, until a small love puppy rose out of the knight's back and started barking. The knight got up, revealing her Mercurial demo armor and light blue eye. This knight is Generation-Shock, And she is our main Protagonist. Her gun puppy is snargelhaven... And who knows what enemies await her and her team in the core.

So, What do you guys think of this story? Leave a Resume below, and i'll get around to making the story... Someday.

Tue, 06/26/2012 - 11:54
#1
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Angelic-Tear
God i'm sorry :O

NAME(Self explanatory.): Yire

ITEMS(Weaponry, Special things....): God i totally forgot about this! If you haven't already put weapons.... Final flourish, voltedge, acheron and blitz.

SPECIES(Really, You need an explanation?): Spiralian

POSITION(Ranking in the team.): recon or something like that.

SMALL BACKSTORY(This is optional. Just make it into a story about how you got to the core.): This is a stock person of mine. I've forgotten most of the story now, but if you want to know something about i'm making a secret thing with her in. She's the young girl crying in two paths' pro log, my fanfic.

BATTLE STYLES (This is how they attack.): Charge in and attack like crazy BUT coordinated. Amazingly coordinated

POSITION (This is what they do.): stealthy and fast.

EXPENDABILITY (Can your character be killed?): Well...for a boyfriend or something, but not alone or not epicly.

APPEARENCE(This is armor, Accessories.): Valkyire set, with glasses flower and valkyire wings (divine)

Sun, 06/03/2012 - 11:38
#2
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Generation-Shock
YES! THANK YOU ANGELIC!

Alright, Here we go...

Breaking the barrier: Part 1
A new Friend

GenShock looked around, and saw another knight looking out over the core. "Beautiful, isn't it?" the knight said, and turned around. "Yire! It's been so long!" Genshock said, dashing toward her. "How did you make it past that Gremlin ambush?" "Well, isn't it obvious? I beat their tiny little skulls in!" Yire said, rubbing the top of her armor. "So, what are you doing here?" Genshock shrugged. "I felt like trying to get into the core." she said. Yire looked over the edge. "The path is sealed... I don't think we're going in anytime soon." she said, with a hint of dismay in her voice. "We're not getting in until we get some hammers... Or nick opens it up." Genshock smiled under her armor. "Oh, please. Do you think i got past the grand arsenal without retrieving a rocket hammer?" Genshock said, and held up a gigantic hammer with a rocket fused into it. "We may not be able to get through the core...

But at least we can get into it."

END CHAPTER 1!

Also, Forgot to publish this...

NAME: Gen-Shock

ITEMS: Ironmight Plate shield, Supernova, Cold Iron Vanquisher(With chains flowing around it.)

SPECIES: Spiralian

POSITION: Team Leader!

SMALL BACKSTORY: Genshock JUST wanted to finish her mission, but the core was sealed. Who's to say that she's not allowed to get help?

BATTLE STYLES: Always gets a bit out of hand, Whirling with her blade, Destroying constructs with her head, That sort of thing.

POSITION: Rush in, Defend, Destroy.

EXPENDABILITY: Never able to be killed, somehow.

APPEARANCE: The Mercurial demo armor set, Love puppy monster pocket (On her back), Volcanic Parrying blade.

Cmon, people! keep posting!

Sun, 06/03/2012 - 21:50
#3
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Hexlash
Your Story is overflowing with potential!

Just like a Sealed Sword!

NAME: Ensiz (means Blade in Latin!-> ensis)

ITEMS: Vile Striker, Swift Flourish, Avenger, and Combuster. Aegis, Ash Tail Coat and and Wyvern Scale Helm.

SPECIES: Spiralian

POSITION: Attacker, Specializes in taking down foes with Swords

SMALL BACKSTORY: When he was given his Calibur, he could utilize it easily with the skills of other swords, e.g. the speed (almost) of a cutter, the strength and knock back of a big swords, and he could almost replicate status affects. He became more skilled, and practiced a lot in various places to hone each type of sword wielding, however, you can say he's actually quite bad a defending.

BATTLE STYLES: He goes to the front of the group with sudden speed, and depending the different type of situation, skillfully uses a sword, than tires out after a little bit, and runs back to the back of the group to rest.

POSITION: The Sword Master, weakens the monsters in preparation for his team.

EXPENDABILITY: Will probably die during one of his forefront weakening attacks, or he might learn from repeated injuries and change his strategy, but most likely, he'll give his life dramatically by throwing out all his swords in every possible direction as a last attempt, he doesn't necessarily hate defeat, but if something needs to be done, than it should be done!

APPEARANCE: His Ash Tail Coat was made special after he saved someone in an arena, the affect of the dark cloudy dust that appears normally actually has tinges of other colours, on VERY rare occasions, it may heal status affects or cause status affects to monsters.

Cmon, people! keep posting!: I can;t WAIT for you to (hopefully) use my character!

Tue, 06/05/2012 - 03:10
#4
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Metaalpha
I wanna come!!! Name:grimace

I wanna come!!!

Name:grimace (nickname) grim

Items: An iron might plate shield ,Sssuudddaaa!!!!! A valiance modified to deal shadow dmg, note He is using a Suda

Species: Gremlin!!!! Yes so unbelievable!!

Position: He don't like Lockdown equipment

Backstory: grim has been hiding out away from king tinkinzar and he has stolen the Suda,iron might plate and valiance
From knights who have died in Decon zones, he is also has a short temper and is the "Silent type" this means he doesn't speak much
He has learned how to upgrade various technology and is a very skilled gremlin

Battle styles: he is very swift and strikes his sword using insane power!!
When he gets tired he goes back and uses his valiance

Expend ability: he can't die but he can get injured

Appearance: he is a T3 Thacker that is tall slim and has his iron might plate shield on the side of his left arm (weapon in right hand)
No accessories

I cannot wait till grim appears in this awesome fan fic

Thu, 06/07/2012 - 15:11
#5
Metaalpha's picture
Metaalpha
Free bump :D

Free bump :D

Sat, 06/09/2012 - 09:50
#6
Generation-Shock's picture
Generation-Shock
Finally! Chapter 3! Thanks, Metaalpha and Hexslash!

Sorry I was out so long, It's almost my birthday. I'll make it up with a longer story.

Anyways....

Breaking The Barrier: Part 3
Needs More Bacon

"So what are we doing here?" Asked Yire. "This is the middle of a Deconstruction zone. Are you sure you saw a Valiance?" "Absolutely." Said Genshock. "It kind of Shimmered and dashed away, If you can believe it." Yire smacked a gremlin with the flat of her blade, Sending it sprawling. "I hope you're right, Or we wasted 20 Energy on nothing." She said. Suddenly, A sound like crunching bones and melting Goggles was heard. "What was that?" Asked Yire, Quizzically. "What we are looking for." Said Genshock, standing up. Suddenly, a Retrode dashed around the corner of the Wall they were hiding behind, and Sprinted away. "Dammit!" yelled Genshock, stomping her foot. "I didn't even get a chance to Headbutt it!" Yire stood up, Shaking the dust off of her dress. "Let's just find the valiance and get out of here." she said. Genshock nodded, and dashed around the corner. Almost immediately, a pot Flew by her head, Crunching into the wall behind her. A blast of shadow was seen, and three more pots came out of nowhere. Genshock ducked, And dashed toward the shadow blast's Direction. When she ducked behind the wall, She turned and saw a gremlin staring at her with a strange look on his face. Genshock screamed a bit, and took out the supernova. "WHAT IN VOG'S NAME ARE YOU DOING WITH AN UMBRA DRIVER?" She yelled, and the gremlin took out the Valiance. ".... This is a Valiance." He said, pushing down the Supernova. "I'm using it to stop those pots from knocking me out cold." Genshock put away the Supernova. "I'm Generation-Shock." She said, holding out her hand. "...Grimace..." The gremlin mumbled. "Can I call you Grim?" asked Genshock, Motioning for Yire to come over. Yire dashed over, Rolling twice to evade a pot. "What in Vog's name is that Gremlin doing here with a Valiance?" She asked, Ducking behind the wall. "Long story." Said Grim. "Can one of you find out who's throwing those pots?" Genshock got up, and shielded. "No problem. Be back Soon." She said, Jumping around the wall. Yire and Grim stared at each other awkwardly. "....So do you like chess?" Asked Yire.

Genshock Jumped around the corner, and saw a Knight carrying a full arsenal of swords. "Why were you throwing POTS at me?" Asked Genshock. The knight jumped up, and Genshock saw his armor. He was wearing an Ash tail coat with a Wyvern Scale helmet. "Who are you?" Asked the knight. "Generation Shock. And may I ask the same without a pot to the head?" Said gen-shock. "Ensiz." Said the knight. "Latin for Blade." Genshock grabbed his hand, and dragged him out. "It's alright!" She yelled, And Yire got up. "This guy is unharmed!" "Aw, You interrupted our Chess game!" said Yire, With a hint of depression in her voice. Genshock and Ensiz walked over, and Grim bolted up. Ensiz pointed dramatically, and said "YOU!" loudly. Yire and Genshock grabbed the two, and held them apart. "Ensiz, Grimace is alright! He's a rebel against Tinkizar!" said Genshock. "So why was he SHOOTING me?" Said Ensiz, Struggling to grab his Swift Flourish. "Because you threw a pot at me!" Said Grim. "STOP IT, BOTH OF YOU!" Yelled Genshock and Yire at the same time. "You Two wanna help us get into the core?" asked Genshock. "Alright... But if that gremlin makes one false move, I'm putting a blade in his forehead!" said Ensiz, and he stopped struggling. Grim just shrugged, and boxed up the Chess set. "Good. Now, Where's the elevator?" asked Yire. "It's over there." said Grim, Holding the chess box. "Who's paying for me?" Genshock held up four elevator passes. "Science." She said smugly. Yire face palmed. Ensiz shrugged. "Science needs more bacon." He said, grabbing an elevator pass.

Alright! That concludes Chapter 3! We're going into the core now, Does anyone have any ideas for Creatures in there?

Sat, 06/09/2012 - 15:40
#7
Metaalpha's picture
Metaalpha
That was so COOL I luv how my

That was so COOL

I luv how my character came in

Maybe infested gremlins come like swarm infested ghost manes and maybe laser shooting scuttlebots

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 01:39
#8
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Observantsecond
Can i Come?

Name: Newobservant (nickname) Newob

Items: Great Defender and a Tempered Calibur

Species: Spiralian

Position: SCOUT

Backstory: Got to the core with luck on defeating vanaduke with 3* armor and some friends. Nuff else said.

Battle Style: Like's to arrange his tactics and use his 360 degree spin attack on large bloody crowds.

Expend Ability: Since he has 3* armor,he can get hurt really badly if not taken care of himself. Luckily,he is a scout.

Appearance: He has Solid Cobalt Armor.

Can i come?

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 01:39
#9
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Observantsecond
Can i Come?

Name: Newobservant (nickname) Newob

Items: Great Defender and a Tempered Calibur

Species: Spiralian

Position: SCOUT

Backstory: Got to the core with luck on defeating vanaduke with 3* armor and some friends. Nuff else said.

Battle Style: Like's to arrange his tactics and use his 360 degree spin attack on large bloody crowds.

Expend Ability: Since he has 3* armor,he can get hurt really badly if not taken care of himself. Luckily,he is a scout.

Appearance: He has Solid Cobalt Armor.

Can i come?

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 02:48
#10
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Roablade
MOAR STEALTH CORPSMEN!!!

NAME(Self explanatory.): Loaken.

ITEMS(Weaponry, Special things....): Twisted Snarble Barb, Kilowatt Pulsar, Sun Shards. Also has an ominous blue blade that looks similar to a Divine Avenger, but for some reason can be used at incredibly fast speeds, that is used only when fighting the toughest of opponents. Swiftstrike Buckler.

SPECIES(Really, You need an explanation?): Spiralian.

POSITION(Ranking in the team.): The Second in Command(Able to hold his own with Knights with 5 star gear).

SMALL BACKSTORY(This is optional. Just make it into a story about how you got to the core.): A member of the Stealth Corps that has already gone on a fair number of missions. However, the reason why he still has 3 star gear is due to his personal challenge of collecting all the recipies of his 4 star gear before getting them upgraded. He was sent to the core on one of the Stealth Corps' private elevators in order to investigate the current state of the Tier 3 area, but the elevator malfuctioned and sent him plummeting until he reached the core.

BATTLE STYLES (This is how they attack.): Usually keeps foes on their toes while stealthily but quickly moving around them, surprising them with quick attacks on their vulnerable areas before either slipping back into the shadows or going in for the kill. Any variations of this battle style always involves a surprise attack and either a quick getaway or more attacks at blinding speed. However, while he may seem like a jack of all trades, when fighting against the most poweful of foes he becomes a hardcore swordsman.

POSITION (This is what they do.): Team reconnaissance man and strategist.

EXPENDABILITY (Can your character be killed?): No.

APPEARENCE(This is armor, Accessories.): Gunslinger Hat and Dusker Coat made into the Stealth Corps' black theme and patterns.

Tue, 06/26/2012 - 10:19
#11
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Shocking-Developer
Alright, there was an error...

There was an error. Generation-Shock No longer exists, Instead i had to sign in using my alternate account. So yeah. Thanks for the player resume, Roakou and Observantsecond. Nice back story, Roakou!

Chapter 4
Remains of the First
"What are we doing here?" said a knight dressed in a gunslinger hat and dusker coat. "LOLZ I DUN HAZ CLUE" Said another knight, wearing standard Three star equipment. "I JUS CAME ALON FOR CR" "Right...." Said the gunslinger. "Remind me to never speak to you again." ":c" Said the standard equipment knight, Somehow making an emoticon. Suddenly, the elevator behind them hissed, and brought down Genshock (Who had started calling herself Shocking Developer), Yire holding a chess box, Grimace, and Ensiz. The knight dressed in a gunslinger hat pulled out a kilowatt pulsar, and held it at arm's length. "Who are you, and what is that gremlin doing with a valiance?" he said, Not wavering at the sight of a gigantic electrical-colored Golem. Grimace shrugged, and walked over to the railing. "That's grimace." Said shocking. "I'm Shocking developer, This is Yire and Ensiz." She motioned toward the two knights. "May we inquire your names?" The gunslinger put his kilowatt away. "I'm Loaken." He said, tilting his hat. "im newobservant" Said the knight wearing standard armor. "So this is the core?" asked grim, standing on his toes to peer over the railing. "I'm sure I can get in." He jumped over the side, and a variety of sounds were heard. Pounding, hissing, Screws being loosened. "You wanna help us traverse the core?" asked Shocking. Loaken peered over the side, and saw grimace working amazingly hard. "Sure, why not?" he said, after a moment of thought. Suddenly, a sound like breaking metal was heard, and the door to the core opened. "Done!" said grimace. Shocking developer grabbed Yire and Ensiz, and jumped in. Grimace followed shortly behind. Last to jump, Loaken dove in. And somehow, Newob tripped on the railing and spiraled into the core. Almost immediately, the door Whizzed shut by itself, and the knights were trapped in there.

Shocking flipped around in midair and crashed into the floor, leaving an indent. Loaken went about halfway and pulled a parachute out; and Newob just spiraled in and landed on his face. Newob looked up, and saw a skull. "AAAGH!" He screamed, and scooted back. Grimace slid down the slanted wall, and picked up the skull. "Spirilian." He said, flipping it over. "How do you know?" asked Yire. "Have you killed some knights?" Grimace nodded, and set the skull down. "Must be that squad who came through here earl-AGH!" He said, Screeching at the last part. Grimace fell to the floor, Teeth clenched. "What's wrong?" asked Ensiz. Almost immediately after asking that, Grimace underwent a strange transformation. His fur turned Jet black, And all of his clothes turned grey. "GaH hAh HaH... " Said the grey-cloaked gremlin. "YoU mAdE a TeRrIbLe MiStAkE." Shocking bolted back, whipping out her sword. "Swarm! Everyone get ready!" she yelled, Swinging around her Vanquisher. Yire picked up a Thwack hammer, Turning it into a gigantic hammer with a red core. "That's new." she said, swinging it around. Ensiz and Loaken both pulled out swords. Shocking could easily identify one of them, a Combuster. But what was that Blue sword, That looked amazingly like a divine avenger? Grimace got up, pulling out his Sudaruska. "YoUrE nEvEr GoInG tO lEaVe ThIs PlAcE aLiVe." Shocking looked down the hallway, and saw more Swarm-Infested Gremlins. She had a feeling this was going to be a long day.

END CHAPTER 4

Don't worry, meta, Grimace isn't going to be killed. He's just gonna be unconscious when he's defeated. And by the way? Observantsecond? I'm sorry for making your character look like an actual noob, but it would take away some of the tension. Anyways, What do you guys think? Pretty good, eh?

Tue, 06/26/2012 - 11:58
#12
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Angelic-Tear
God god god sorry!!!!

I totally have a crazy memory, and i totally forgot about this D: But i love the story! So sorry ._______________. Major Derp on my part. I deserve a dunce hat :3

Tue, 06/26/2012 - 17:09
#13
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Flyingninza
Am I too late?

NAME: Rashuz
ITEMS: Acheron, Barbarous Thorn Blade, Combuster, Sentenza, Chaos Cowl, Snarbolax Coat, and Barbarous Thorn Shield
SPECIES: No one really knows...(he is a Phantom, but that isn't common knowledge.)
POSITION: Not good in a team, Rashuz is a lone support unit.
SMALL BACKSTORY: After being Cursed by a Gremalkin Shaman, Rashuz roamed the Clockworks, searching for a way to end his curse. For a way to die.
BATTLE STYLES: A night assassin, striking from the shadows and dragging people into the dark.
POSITION: Scouting ahead, infiltrating and assassinating key enemies.
EXPENDABILITY: Kill-able, no. Wound-able/capture-able, go right ahead.
APPEARENCE: A Black Chapeau with a custom-made Shadow Scarf and Heavenly Iron Armor with Shadow Valkyrie Wings and a Prismatic Parrying Blade. Dark purple color and Sultry Eyes.

Tue, 06/26/2012 - 20:15
#14
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Shocking-Developer
Chapter 5? TWO CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY? IMPOSSIBRUUUUUU

No, Flyingninza, You're just in time!

Chapter 5
Lost and Found

"I KNEW IT!" Shouted Ensiz, punching a gremlin who got too close for comfort. "I KNEW WE COULDN'T TRUST A GREMLIN!" "Stop shouting!" said Shocking developer. "We're grouped together. We can hear you just fine. And besides, He didn't betray us! He was corrupted by the swarm!" Shocking blasted a gremlin with her Supernova. "Wait... Do you hear that?" asked Yire. "Kinda busy!" said Loaken, thwacking away a gremlin with Newob's body. "Yay Im a sword" Said newob. "It sounds like... Shadows." Said Yire, Backing up. "Everyone down!" she yelled, as a blast of shadow went over her head. It slammed into a gremlin, And shocking saw her first good look at it. It was tall, dark, and radiated a strong sense of fury and remorse. It had a Jet-black Chapeau on its head,And wore a Corrupt looking Iron armor. The shadowy scarf billowed out, and a purple blade hung on his leg. A purple feather stuck out of the side of the hat, and he carried a Wicked-looking Thorn blade. Time returned to normal, and the blast of shadow started flying from gremlin to gremlin quickly. "Is that a knight?" Asked shocking developer. Suddenly, the shadow sped at what used to be grimace. Loaken threw Newob into the way, and the shadow tumbled to the ground. "ow." Said Newob, stuck in the ground by his helmet. The shadow turned around, and Yire gasped. "It is a knight." She said quietly, and took out her hammer. "WHO WANTS A PIECE OF ME, DIRTBA-" She said, Stopping when she saw there were no more gremlins. "-Oh." She put back her hammer. "Don't hurt that gremlin!" yelled shocking developer. "You leave me little choice." Said the knight, and he threw his blade. It hit Grimace, and a series of black pixels flew off of him. Grimace collapsed to the ground, dropping his blade. Grimace started snoring softly. "He's like a baby!" said Yire, picking him up. "Urgh... An extremely heavy baby." Shocking walked over to the newcomer. "How did yo-" She was interrupted. "Get out of here. Now. While you still have a chance." The knight said sharply. He looked at shocking. His eyes, furrowed and bagged from a lack of sleep and comfort, Unnerved shocking. She pointed up at the gate, and the stranger looked down. "Fine. Just keep safe, and make sure not to let that gremlin get black again." the newcomer said. "I'm Rashuz. Ranked NO#1 in the Blast network." Ensiz stared at him blankly. "Do you mean Lockdown?" He said, Quizzically. "Has it been that long since that update?" Said Rashuz. "It felt like only a few hours...."

After catching Rashuz up to date on all the equipment, New monsters, and the Massive Energy costs,They realized that he wasn't even close to where he should be. He was a Recruit. And somehow, He hadn't updated his armor since October 2011. Almost as if he had never updated... What the knights didn't know was where the aura of remorse and fury came from.

END CHAPTER 5

So that ends yet another chapter! Does anyone have suggestions for things the 7 heroes could come across next time?

Here's an idea....

NAME: Tears

SPECIES: Voltail

POSITION: Wolver pet.

BATTLE STYLES: Bite. Shock. Dig. Evade.

EXPENDABILITY: Kill-able.

APPEARANCE: A Crimson fur coat, Electric Blue eyes, a vitakit strapped to her back, and wires taped onto her legs.

As always, See ya later! Shocking and Snozelhaven OUT! Fluph!

Mon, 07/16/2012 - 21:55
#15
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Shocking-Developer
Intermission-Chapter 6

Nobody is posting... Nobody is doing anything.... Why don't i just make another chapter?

Intermission
What happens when everyone is bored

The group was at a small camp, one left behind by alpha Squad. Yire was setting up an equipment chest, Shocking was starting a fire, Grim was chasing after a snarbolax cub who stole his valiance, Rashuz was on lookout duty, and Loaken, Newob, and Ensiz were setting up tents. "Okay, so if we give the girls one tent, Loaken, can you set one up?" said Ensiz. Loaken took out a tent-kit. "On it." he said, and walked away, setting up a tent as he went along. "Newob, I don't trust you, bu-" Ensiz was interrupted. "lol i don't trust myself either" Newobservant said. "-But, You can help me set up the tent for the guys." Ensiz finished, with some annoyance in his voice. He took out a large tent kit, and started setting up the tent next to where Loaken was. "Hey, do you think we might see some nakedness through the tents?" said loaken, Quietly. Ensiz glanced over his shoulder at the girls, and quickly whipped it back. "Maybe. But for now, let's make sure to build these tents properly." he said, picking up the instructions.

Shocking was repeatedly striking the fire with Ensiz's Combuster, but nothing was happening. To be continued. Tomorrow.

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