Spiral Knights - The Fall of Haven.

The Fall of Haven.

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Sun, 06/17/2012 - 01:20

Observantsecond

This is a fanfic based off a fanfic,just for people who are think i RIPPED off the fanfic called The Invasion.

Now,im not gonna go and post the first chapter right ahead,i will let the users make their own character in this story.

Here is how you can apply:

Name:

Gender:

Weapons:

Armor:

Personality:

Skills with Weapons:

OPTIONAL: Back Story.

OPTIONAL: Death
Now for you wanting to be in this story,i will firstly post a intro to this medium story.
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Introduction

10:18 AM
Standard Spiral Knight things like shopping,trading,chatting,and other stuff is happening today. But no knight knew what is going to happen.
I was the only one to see a gremlin at the distance,warning the other knights that there might be a attack on Haven. Since Haven is
a small town,we should make a assemblement of squads to protect Haven and its knight's that are still in normal armor. No-one belived me,
but only my friends belived me. We began to form the squad's and protect Haven from the gremlins,because the gremlins might want to destroy
Haven because WE defeated Warmaster Seerus once and for all,destroyed the Roarmulus Twins,and most of their camps and deconstruction sites.
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Now,for those who are saying: "There are more roarmulus twins and warmaster seerus can respawn! Jerk!"
No,just no,in this story i SAY that we destroyed The Twins and defeated Warmaster Seerus ONCE AND FOR ALL.
Allright,lets spit out the application's.

Sun, 06/17/2012 - 14:33

Observantsecond

No Applications for now... If i dont find some apps,making up some characters.

Sun, 06/17/2012 - 16:49

Nechrome

:D I had a character in The

:D I had a character in The Invasion. Methinks I'll post an app.

Name: Gladius

Gender: Male

Weapons: Lots of stuff, but MAINLY Khorovod, Jalovec, Lightning Capacitor, and Sun Shards. ALso uses about 20 Hot Edges, 5 brandishes.

Armor: Drake Scale Helm, SIlvermail, Brute Jelly SHield.

Personality: He's one of those battle-scared veterans who's annoyed with the new generation. He tends to work alone, and hides in the shadows to avoid people. New Recruits annoy him greatly. He has a profound interest in Greavers and Devilites and thinks that the new generation are wimps because they think that they're too hard to defeat.

Skills with Weapons:

Gladius has great skill with heavy swords, and bombs. He tends to double wield his Jalovec and Khorovod, using them in a sort of scissor-like way. He uses his Lightning Capacitor and Sun Shards in a combo as well, exploding a Capacitor and dropping SUn Shards into the mist, thus creating electrified Sun Shard projectiles. He uses his Hot Edges and Brandishes as throwing knives.

OPTIONAL: Back Story.

Gladius was one of the first hundred Knights to land on Cradle. At that time, he was a fresh recruit, and not very skilled in the ways of combat. However, after several months living in the wliderness, fighting monsters and living off the land, he found Haven, where his brethren were. During his time in the wild, he developed rough fighting skills, using stealth and trickery to defeat any enemies. The Spiral Order honed his skills, turning him into a powerful warrior. He developed a liking for the Troika Line, which he later discovered to be very effective against Greavers and Devilites. That's why he finds them so easy to defeat.

OPTIONAL: Death

Let him live. :D

That work?

Sun, 06/17/2012 - 23:59

Observantsecond

Yes.

Yep.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 00:27

Observantsecond

Chapter 1- The Beginning

"Allright,im all set up,got my tempered calibur and freezing vaporizer",Newobservant says.
"How are we gonna prepare",Gladius says.
"Well,we are gonna defend the front entrance,since you have heavy swords",Newob says.
A alarm sounds,warning Newobservant and Gladius that we are having an attack on Haven.
Newobservant and Gladius get out of cover,finding 1 line of laser robots.
"Fiddlesticks.",Newobservant says.
The 2 knights get out their swords and attack the robots.
They defeat them,while Newobservant got pushed by an unknown force.
"What in the world of moorcraft?!?!",Newobservant shouts angrily.
Gladius sees a knight that has some wierd bloody equipment.
"Who are you!??!?!",Gladius shouts.
The mystery knight gets out,turning out to be...
"Brother!",Newobservant shouts.
"Wait,what?",Gladius is confused.
While Newobservant was getting to his brother who was still a apprentice,Newobservant see's that he is cursed by some unknown force,having 2 sides.
"Brother... leave...",Newobservant's brother says.
Newobservant gets out his tempered calibur,slashing his brother's other,evil side.
"Uhh.... Where am i...",Newobservant's brother asks.
"You're in Haven,the established base of operations of the Spiral Order.",Newobservant says.
"Allright,what's his name?",Gladius questions.
"His name is Mark. Now Gladius,go and protect the entrance to Haven while i take Mark to safety.
"Allri-",Gladius stops.
Gladius gets tapped on the knight,seeing another person which has the same armor as Gladius.
Gladius gets sucker punched,and turned out that Gladius was a gremlin.
The Fake Gladius got returned from camoflauge only to be a gremlin,while the guy who punched him was the Real Gladius.
"Heh,i knew he was about to backstab you.",Gladius says.
"Phew,i thought you were another knight. I lead Mark to safety while you were gone.
"Allright,who is this "Mark"?",Gladius questions.
"Long story short,he's my brother.",Newobservant says.
"Allright,i can see some gremlins at the di-",Gladius gets stopped only to be hit and pushed by a rocket.
Newobservant runs to Gladius,reviving him in the process.
"Thanks mate,that rocket REALLY hurt.",Gladius said
"Allright,lets beat up those gremlins that you saw.",Newobservant says.
Both knight run to kill the Gremlins,and they killed them,while Newobservant got a medium scratch on his arm.
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Here is chapter 1. If anyone has comments or wants an application to the series,feel free to let them be spoken.
Signed,Newobservant.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 02:09

Roablade

Herez

Name: Diroa

Gender: Male

Weapons: Dark thorn blade, Silent Nightblade, Virulent Catalyzer.

Armor: A Wyvern Scale Helm and Ash Tail Coat crafted into a black theme with mysterious patterns unique to the Stealth Corps. Sinister Skelly Shield.

Personality: He hates being at the centre of attention, enjoying privacy in the shadows. He is usually quiet and somewhat shy, but is both a tactical genius and swordsmaster when in combat.

Skills with Weapons: He uses his Virulent Catalyzer to either taunt foes into making rash decisions or piling up rounds to obliterate tough foes. However, he is an expert swordsman and is extremely quick in his reflexes. Diroa is also fast and very stealthy, preffering to strike foes in their most vulnerable areas with his Silent Nightblade before quickly rushing in with his Dark Thorn Blade.

OPTIONAL: Back Story: After completing basic training, Diroa was sent to be trained within the Stealth Corps after a Senior Corpsman noticed his potential.(Sorry but this backstory is getting kind of boring, being quite similar to my other characters and so this will be it.)

OPTIONAL: Death: Either he does not die, or goes M.I.A, his status only known to the Stealth Corps.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 06:11

Observantsecond

Chapter 2-Raid's a frustration.

"Dang Fiddlesticks on a Devilite's Mouth!",Newobservant shouts with anger.
"You ok?",Gladius asks.
"Im ok,just scra-",Newobservant stops and hears a scream.
Newobservant runs to the knight that screamed,and see's that he is being beated up by gremlin scoots.
"No you bloody dont,you foul gremlins!",Newobservant gets out his sword and kills the gremlin scoots,while the knight who got beated up gets up.
"Thanks mate.",the unknown knight says.
"What's yer name?",Newobservant says.
"Diroa's my name,your's?",Diroa says.
"Diroa. Wanna join our squad to defend Haven?",Newobservant says clear.
"Yes,bu-",Diroa stops to see that the gremlins are bombing the building's.
"Allright,just run,i'll get em with my Catalyzer.",Diroa says.
"Ok,i'll save the knight's that were in the building's.",Newobservant says.
Diroa shoots the gremlins bomber's,distracting them,while Newobservant gets the knights out of the buildings.
"Gladius,you still here?",Newobservant gets out his com to contact Gladius.
"Ye,but im being raided by puppy guns. If all fails,we are moving to the Rescue Camp.",Gladius says.
"Allright,im coming to your location with Diroa.",Newobservant says.
"Diroa,get over here,we are gonna get to Gladius.",Newobservant says.
Newobservant and Diroa run to Gladius.
Newobservant takes a Silversix from a dead knight.
"Allright,Diroa,you protect Gladius while i get the puppy guns.",Newobservant says.
"Ok.",Diroa says.
Newosbervant snipes the puppy guns,one by one,while Haven is falling.
"Diroa,Gladius,follow me,we are scouting to the Rescue Camp quickly!",Newobservant shouts.
"Fellow Knights,we are going to the Rescue Camp. Follow my lead!",Newobservant shouts to the other knights.
They cross the road to the Rescue Camp,destroying any gremlin constructions on their path.
A few knights get scratched while they were crossing the road,so they were moved to the spiral medic for further treatment.
The 3 knights see that its nearly knight,and power is out. They decided to protect the rescue camp for the knight.
"Anyone of you 2 tired?",Newobservant asks.
Both shake their heads from left to right.
"Allright,lets protect this camp for the knight,we might get some payment.",Newobservant says.
"Gladius,you protect the front gate from any constructions and gremlins,while me and Diroa protect the second path,ok?",Newobservant says.
"Ok!",both say.
It was 10 PM,no sign of any monsters or constructions.
"Uh,this is boring as a ghost moving in a circle.",Diroa says.
Meanwhile,some constructions were on the way to destroy the Rescue Camp.
"Allright Diroa,you take the left side,i'll take the right side.",Newobservant says.
Both snipe out the robots and scuttlebots.
Meanwhile,Gladius heard a conversation with the gremlins hacking a gremlin com unit he picked up.
"We are gonna put a raid on the Rescue Camp,since Haven is fallen to the Gremlins",the gremlin says through the gremlin com unit.
"Guys,the gremlins are putting a raid on the Rescue Camp tomorrow. We should prepare,since this was just nothing.
"Raid's gonna be a frustration,since they got a full arsenal of scuttlebots and robots.",Diroa says.
"You know this?",Newobservant asks.
"I am a Stealth Corps agent,and i got an assigment to spy the gremlin construction sites,only to find a full arsenal of,well you know what.",Diroa says.
"Allright,we should go to sleep,since the power got on. Maybe it was a power out.",Newobservant says.
"You're right,i need a rest.",Gladius says.
The 3 Knights go to sleep,hoping to protect the Rescue Camp tomorrow.
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Allright,end of Chapter 2. Only 2 more app spots.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 06:38

Roablade

Excuse meh

But do you want to do this fan fic co-op? I mean, maybe we could like work together to make the fan fic, so it has more variety and the story is uploaded at a faster rate.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 06:46

Observantsecond

Sure....

Sure,since im free at summer and have nothing else to do.
Spiral Knights tell talk maybe?
Spiral Knights Username: Observantsecond

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 07:23

Roablade

Sure

Yeah but what's the time on your side right now?

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 07:28

#10

Observantsecond

Well,since i live in Europe

And in Croatia,my time is 16:28. What glorious joy.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 08:12

#11

Observantsecond

By the way..

I will make 10 medium chapters. And no more apps are coming D: Closing application for the Fall of Haven in 2 days. Better hurry if you wanna be in the story!

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 08:15

#12

Roablade

Dude

Before I go to sleep, I just want you to know that your writing skills need some work. Seriously. I doubt the majority of the forum community find your style of writing appealing. This is just some healthy criticism.

Mon, 06/18/2012 - 08:17

#13

Observantsecond

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 00:05

#14

Roablade

Chapter 3-Midnight Endevours

Diroa opened his eyes and gazed at the stars. He did not even have to turn his head to know that his two new comrades were still peacefuly asleep-his time training within the Stealth Corps taught him how to sense the presence and movements of unseen enemies. Slowly, he rose from his sleeping position and crept away, into the darkness.

After finding a secluded spot, Diroa whipped out his communications device and keyed in several numbers. Nothing happened. Frustrated, Diroa tried again and again to establish contact with his superiors. It was bad enough that he had revealed his identity to two other knights, and now the rest of the Corps would not be able to know the current situation he was in. Diroa continued in his seemingly futile attempts before finally hearing a stern but warm voice come from the device.

"Diroa, we have been trying to contact you for a long time. I demand you report why you could not establish contact with us."

"I apologize, sir. The mission has gone out of hand, and Haven has been attacked!"

"We heard, but the question was why we could not contact you, not what had happened near you."

"Honestly, I don't know sir. I think it has something to do with the Gremlins..."

The voice coming from the device let out a long, slow exhale.

"You have a new mission Diroa"

"Sir?"

"I want you to investigate the cause for this breakdown in communications. It's not just you. Other Corpsmen out in the field are experiencing the exact same problem, and after hearing each of their individual reports, there is a high chance that the source of the problem is nearest to you. Is that clear, Diroa?"

"Yes. Yes, sir."

Diroa gripped the device tightly as the voice coming from it was cut off. He had a new mission, and he was going to follow through with it. But still, he felt a shiver go down his spine as he realised how important the result of the mission may turn out to be. After contemplating the best decision he could make from there, Diroa decided to head back to camp to try and get some sleep. The other two may turn out to be valuable in helping him complete his mission.

Moving like a light breeze under the moonlight, Diroa silently crept back into his original sleeping position. Shutting his eyes, he allowed himself the luxury of drifting into a world of dreams.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 02:48

#15

Observantsecond

Chapter 4: The Regeneration.

Newobservant gets out of bed,while his 2 comrades are asleep. It's still to late for the raid,so,he goes to train his gun skills. He double check's the enterance to know if there are any constructions or zombies. Turn's out that there were'nt any.

"Bah,no monsters or anything,now i can go do gun training since i got nothing else to do!",Newobservant says.

All of the shooting wake up Gladius and Diroa,since the gun shots were loud as a mewkat screeching in pain after being bitten by a Grimlakin and left to die.

"Why in the world are you doing in gun training in the morning?!?!",Diroa shouts.

"Fun stuff. You two go se- wait a minute Diroa,whats that com unit doing in your hair?",Newobservant asks.

"N-n-nothing...",Diroa says.

"Hmmm,i dont think i can easily trust you saying that its nothing. Still,im gonna go to Haven to check if there are any survivors or items/guns,since we are gonna take Haven back sooner or later.",Newobservant says.

"Im coming too,since i have a little more powered weapons then you.. You still have 3' equipment...",Diroa says.

"Allright,lets go. Gladius,you go secure the enterance. Maybe there wont be raid,like you heard in your com unit,maybe that they were trying to scare us
so that we dont go to Haven.",Newobservant says.

"Okay.",Gladius says.

"Come on Diroa,lets go.",Newobservant says.

Newobservant and Diroa scout to Haven,since that would be the best tactic.

"Allright Diroa,we will split up,you take the left side of the enterance,ill take the right,ok?",Newobservant says.

"Okay.",Diroa says.

Both run to a crushed building,seeing a communication breakdown tower,infested with gremlins.

"That's it! We have to destroy that communication breakdown tower,then we can use our com unit's!",Diroa says.

"Okay,you get the left gremlins,i'll get the right one's.",Newobservant says.

Both get the gremlins,and get to the comunication breakdown tower to press the self-destruct button.

"Allright,looks like we have a minute to get out of here once we hit the self-destruct button,ok?",Diroa says.

"Indeed,just be quick once you press it.",Newobservant says.

Diroa hits the self-destruct button,and both run to safety.

BOOM! The Communication Breakdown tower was destroyed,enabling com-unit usage.

"Yes! Now i can contact Feron,and after that i can contact the guy that is maybe behind this,King Tinkinzar.",Newobservant says.

"Tinkinzar doesnt have a com unit,so you can only contact Feron.",Diroa says quietly.

Both see a group of survivors in the building.

"You,yes you!",Diroa says.

"Wha- Diroa! I thought you would never come!";the person says.

"Dang it,my commander will be MAD once he hears that i established the squad with another person!",Diroa says.

"Just shush,and get them out so we can escort them to the Rescue Camp.",Newobservant says.

"Allright.",Diroa says.

Diroa scouts the building to get the survivors,after that the building colapses,and hits Newobservant in the leg! Ouch!

"FFFFFFFFFIDDLESTICKS! Im stuck!",Newobservant says.

"Shush! Im gonna try to push the building so you can get your leg out!",Diroa says.

Diroa trys pushing the building,but does not succesfully push it.

"Should i pull-",Diroa stops to see something drop from the sky.

The thing dropping from the sky was a miracloth scarf,making Newobservants leg get out of the building.

"Damn,im not gonna make-",Newobservant gets interrupted to be pulled to the sky.

The scarf pushed newobservant up,making him glow.

"RRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE!",Newobservant says angrily,after his wierd like regeneration.

"Whoa,holy Grimalkins!",Diroa says.

Newobservant dropped to the ground,dead.

"Allright guys! You carry Newobservant to the Rescue Camp,i'll cover you guys!",Diroa says.

The squad succesfully gets Newobservant to the Rescue Camp.

"Uhhh... What happened....",Newobservant asks in confusion.

"You were lifted into the sky.. and glowed... I dont know what happened.",Diroa says.

"I look like i have Mighty Cobalt Armor,and not Solid Cobalt Armor,and i see that my Tempered Calibur is an Ascended Calibur,and the Silversix i picked up is instead of an Argent Peacemaker,a Valiance!",Newobservant says yet again in confusion.

"Huh,thats wierd.",Diroa says.

Newobservant gets up,picks up his sword and gun,seeing a miracloth scarf near it.

"Huh,tha- Oh my god. That's not just a miracloth scarf. That's a Spiralian Timetraveler scarf! I got the scarfs power to regenerate!",Newobservant says.

"And my Com unit has a power to travel through time and the clockworks! I know this,since i read books about the scarf!",Newobservant says.

"Soo,whats special about the scarf?",Diroa asks.

"I'm.. a Spiralian Timetraveler,because of the scarf. Now i cant die,i can only regenrate,everything i do is a descision of a timetraveler,everything i happen to have is standard to a Spiralian Timetraveler. Now what's special about it,is that i cant take it off."

"Hmm,ill try to take,nevermind. Its night allready,since you were knocked out for what,like 11 hours."

"Still,Gladius,did you get any raids during your patrol?",Newobservant asks.

"Nothing special. Just zombies and stuff. We should go to sleep.",Gladius says.

The 3 knights go to sleep,while Diroa gets up yet again.

Diroa contacts his commander,since the communication breakdown tower is destroyed.

"Sir,me and my friend,Newobservant destryoed the cause of this communication breakdown.",Diroa says.

"Good,what was the cause?",the commander asks.

"A communication breakdown tower. Now a question,you ever heard of the Spiralian Timetraveler scarf?",Diroa asks.

"I do know only that its a scarf of a special power,made by the Sanctuary. Why you ask?",the commander asks.

"Well,my friend,who's name is Newobservant by the way,he has this scarf.",Diroa says.

"Well,thats one expensive scarf. It cant be taken off. By the way,the cause of all of this is Warmaster Seerus,while he was assisted by King Tinkinzar.

While Diroa was about to say "Ok",he see's a flashlight made by Newobservant's Valiance,being that Newobservant was there.

"Diroa,give me the com unit so i can speak to this "commander" of yours.",Newobservant says.

"Allright.. just be kind to the commander.. he doesnt like the angry type of people.",Diroa says.

"Allright.",Newobservant says,taking Diroa's com unit.

"Hello,anyone there? This is Newobservant,the guy with the Spiralian Timetraveler scarf. You are Diroa's commander,is that right?",Newobservant asks.

"Yes i am. Why do you ask?",the commander asks.

"Well,we will need a full squad to take back and repair Haven. Do you have this kind of squad?",Newobservant asks.

"Yes i have,their location is in the Rescue Camp,while both you and Diroa are in. Get the squad to take back Haven.",the commander says.

"Ok. Here Diroa,have your com unit and shut it down.",Newobservant says like a boss.

"Ok...",Diroa says it and shuts off the com unit.

Both knights go back to their tent,to rest from a long day.
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Extremly filled with stuff you wont care about.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 06:25

#16

Roablade

Chapter 5: Soldiers of Black

Once again, Diroa found himself in a familiar predicament.

"That was very reckless of you, Diroa."

"Yes, sir"

"How could you be so careless as to allow another knight to gain access to your com unit? You know very well that if anyone were to get their hands on one, our headquarters would be discovered!"

"Yes, sir. I apologize sir."

A deep sigh comes from the unit.

"Do NOT allow anyone else to use his com link again, do you understand?"

"Yes, sir..."

"Now, is it true that the person I spoke with just now has, in his possesion, the Spiralian Timetraveller Scarf?"

"I'm not too sure, but from what I've seen, yes."

Diroa's heart almost stopped when an intermission of silence ensued in the conversation. After a long few seconds of waiting for a reply, the sound of rustling papers quickly reassured Diroa that his superior was not too furious with him.

"Diroa, you have four star gear, and so I expect you to perform better than what you have been doing. I understand that those several cycles doing nothing but stealing Gremlin information have made your skills rusty, but you NEED to get back into your original state, fast. Do you understand?"

"Understood."

"Now, the squad at the Rescue Camp will consist of three people, all of which shall reveal their identities to you only. Firstly, your swordsman shall be Demyle Kukris."

"You mean the guy that we always see drinking at the HQ bar wearing that custom made Vog Cub set which has black flames burning instead of the usual?"

"Yes. Those blacks flames are his mark of the Stealth Corps. He will be armed with an Acheron, Voltedge, Final Flourish, Nitronome and Barbarous Thorn Shield"

"Alright. The second person?"

"Decan Leonel will function as your status specialist. He will be wearing the Salamander set with thick black stripes with Stealth Corps patterns on it. He is equipped with a Blazebrand, Freezing Atomizer,Gigawatt Pulsar and Wise Owlite Shield."

"I've never seen him before..."

"Mostly because he's usually out in the field or watching a Lockdown game."

"Ah."

"Okay, lastly we have Sesar Myrian. He specialises as a bomber, and has only recently completed his training. He is currently being mentored by Demyle, and you can easy identify him by his black themed Fused Demo set. He is armed with a Super Blast Bomb, Sun Shards, Grintovec and Stone Tortoise. During a recent spying mission on a Gremlin Outpost, he had also recovered a bomb called the Dark Reprisal Mk2, so that could be included in his arsenal as well."

"A swordsman, status specialist and bomber. Seems like quite the team!"

"Yes, but note their personalities. Demyle is mostly silent, and is an assertive leader. Decan has a more friendly personality, but would never reveal our secrets. However, you need to watch out for Sesar. He has a tendency to fly into a rage."

"Understood, sir."

"Demyle will inform you of your next mission. Until then, don't mess up."

Once again, Diroa was faced with the familar sudden stop in communications.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 06:34

#17

Roablade

Question

How old are you, Observant?

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 06:54

#18

Observantsecond

Meh

10. I do not know that actually i made the plot have more hole's then Vanaduke's cheese.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 07:03

#19

Roablade

That explains a lot. Try looking out for grammatical errors and expand your vocabulary. A tip is to go read books or other fan fics. Another thing is that you have to allow others to sometimes have the dominating effect. Nobody likes it when your character seems to know everything and be superior to everyone else.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 07:07

#20

Observantsecond

Allright.

Allright. I will try to get those errored undone. Thank you for your healthy criticism.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 07:11

#21

Roablade

No problem

This Fan Fic is now partly my responsibility anyway.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 08:15

#22

Observantsecond

BTW,for all of you "people" liking this Fan Fic

Im gonna do Chapter 6 After tomorrow,since im gonna give my head some rest.

Wed, 06/20/2012 - 11:50

#23

Observantsecond

Chapter 6: The Payback

Bah,my head had enough rest,decided to make Chapter 6 today!
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All 3 knights woke up in the morning,and went to the main part of the Rescue Camp to find the team.

Eventually,they arive.

"Hello Decan.",Diroa says.

"Hello. So this is our squad? A knight with Mighty Cobalt Armor wearing a blue scarf,a big bloody juggernaut with throwing knives and big swords?,Decan says.

"And you 3 are not going to be in the mission?",Newobservant asks politly.

"Heh,i forgot that WE are in the mission too.",Decan says.

"Hey,i thought i've seen that scarf before,,, Still,dont care.",Demyle says.

"Allright,lets get to Haven to take it back.",Demyle says.

All 6 knights go to Haven,silently running and watching out for any construction.

"Heh,looks like a big gremlin squad,anyone got plans to drag them off?",Decan says.

"I got one.",says Newobservant

Newobservant gets out of cover to shout:

"LOOK AT ME,IM A DUMMY!",Newobservant shouts,while dodging their gunshots.

"That was bloody stupid.",Sesar says.

"Yeah,well watch this!",Newobservant says.

Newobservant gets out of cover yet again,shooting and slicing away gremlins,geting almostly scracthed by a thwack hammer.

"Hmm,nice skills you got there.";Demyle says.

"Thanks,now town square is secured,while we only have the Bazaar and the Arcade.",Decan says.

They firstly get to the Bazaar,silently walking to avoid any traps.

"Looks like a flaming situation. Those gremlin flamethrower's can fire 400 degrees,so they burn your helmet off quicker then Vanaduke can use his hammer while drinking too much Blaze Powder cocktails.",Diroa says.

"Heh,it will be easy.",Newobservant says.

"I'll swipe them out with my throwing knives,while you carefully get in the Arcade.",Gladius says.

"Hmm. Not a bad idea,but stay dangerous.",Diroa says.

"Kay.",Gladius says.

While Gladius was fighting off gremlins,the 5 knights scout to the Arcade.

"Allright,looks like we will have to take this silently.";Diroa says.

"Allright,now silently takedown those gremlins silently.",Demyle says.

All 5 knights take out gremlin after gremlins,silent as a bird chirp.

"Allright,the Arcade is secure,loo-",Newobservant stops to see a massive change to the clockworks.

"The Swarm has taken over the Clockworks while we were at the Rescue Camp.",Newobservant says.

"I've done study's on the Swarm,and it says that the Swarm is really hostile if approached. It can corrupt anything,even the Core. Im just about worried
what is happening to the team down at the Core,and the Core itself.",Diroa says.

"Huh,thanks for the info,i bet Gladius cleared off the gremlins.";Newobservant says.

"Gladius,did you defeat the gremlins?",Newobservant says through his com link to Gladius.

"Yes i did... I need some help... *screech*",Gladius logs off.

"You guys stay here,im gonna go help Gladius.",Newobservant says.

"But we are more stealthier then you are,Newobservant!",Diroa says.

"Still,im atleast a better sword fighter then stealther.",Newobservant reply's.

"Whatever,just go get him.",Diroa says.

Newobservant runs to Gladius,seeing that he is wounded BADLY and needs medical treatment.

"Come on Gladius,get up on your feet and lets get out of here.",Newobservant says.

"Ok.. Lets just get over to the Rescue Camp quickly... I beated the gremlins,but got blasted by a bomb in the process...",Gladius says.

"Spiral HQ,send in troops and builders,Haven is safe.",Newobservant says.

"Diroa,take the squad out of the arcade,we are going back to The Rescue Camp,to secure it when Haven is built.",Newobservant says.

"Okay...",Diroa says.

All knights get over to the Rescue Camp,while Gladius is at the hospital.

"Phew... We did it... Even though it was short.. It was still good to atleast save the base of operations.",Diroa says.

Feron gets over to the knights,happier then Vanaduke is getting new Slag Guards.

"Good job Knights,you have been succesfull to retrieve Haven back from the Gremlins. Here are your rewards.",Feron says,giving all of the knights in the operation a bag of 10,000 Crowns! Yippee!
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Six Months later,Haven was rebuilt and re-established by the Spiral Knights,while Diroa,Newobservant and Gladius had some minor changes...

Diroa got a high rank of Vanguard through the six months,getting promoted to a commander,being no longer bossed around,but being happy and commanding knights.

Gladius got his weapons sharpened,and got even more throwing knights. What joy.

Newobservant? He turned out to be a new timetraveler,being saluted by Spiral HQ. But,he still had depression,having no-one to love. He might even get a girl of his dreams,but who knows?
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Yeah,6th chapter,short,nothing else but rubbish,and maybe even having plothole's having the size of a hole that vanaduke maybe falling through.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 13:51

#24

Assistingknight

A new character!

Name: Mini-Bomber

Gender: Male

Weapons: Dark Retribution, Warmaster Rocket Hammer

Armor: A simple fused demo suit covered up by a regal stranger hat and and demo suit.

Personality: Mini is a friendly face that help out the new knights that he sees potential in. His unpredictable fighting style can make him a deadly foe.

Skills with Weapons: He uses his Dark Retribution as a ball as he blasts it into the enemy with his hammer, or he just cracks it open with a devastating result! However, it is rare that he will do the same move twice in the same fight! Unfortunately his disregard for armor has left him in the hospital wing more than most.

OPTIONAL: Back Story. He was one of the original knights, he misses the old days, when things where simpler, finding the world harsh on his own he decided to become some what of a teacher, helping those who where new. This gained him alot of friends in high places and due to this he was able to get the war masters weapons as his friends who knew him thought it would be suitable for him to have such an obscure arsenal.

OPTIONAL: Death If he dies it will be with pride, and a big BANG! Clutching his weapons close as he charges into a crowd of enemy's or even the boss giving them a friendly hug. :3

I know I'm too late but I only noticed this after I typed it up. :/ Feel free to use it in any upcoming fan fics you got planned.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 17:47

#25

Roablade

Hey

This actually seems like the end of the story...
So I'm gonna make a new fan fic that will be a continuation of this! You will see.

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The Fall of Haven.