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Sat, 06/23/2012 - 08:44
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Observantsecond

Ello there people. I decided to make a series about my character that was in Fall of Haven,called Newobservant,who later got a scarf made out of miracloth,or named the Spiralian Timetraveler scarf.

Now,im NOT using the chapter system,instead im using the episode system,so tell the Chapter System to cry where it belongs!

Now,here are some things that will NOT change in any other way:

1. The Timetraveler,or Newobservant,may cheat death,which means regenerate,13 times (I made this,just for those who might cry that the series is short. The Regeneration system was based off of Doctor Who,which means that when he regenerates 12 times,he will die the next time he gets hurt REALLY badly.)

2. Each Timetraveler will have atleast 1 series,each one having atleast 20 episode's.

3.Newobservant HAS regenerated in Fall of Haven,but that one does NOT count,since it was the first time he got the scarf.

4.Companion application will last untill i get 13 people. 10 more apps to go.

and 5,very important,5. HE HATES PEARS.
(also,i will accept atleast,lets say,13 of them,so that i dont get MILLIONS and MILLIONS of Companion posts.)

Also,here is how you can be in the show (for the bloody boss heads that want to spam "How do i app?!?!":

Name:

Gender:

Color:

Personality:

Appearance/Armor:

Weapons:

History/Background:

Relations:

'Twist' Degree:

(OPTIONAL) Death:

Now,let the Companion application's begin!

Sat, 06/23/2012 - 13:45
#1
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Assistingknight
Mini-Bomber

I didn't get in last time so I'm going to submit him here!

Name: Mini-Bomber

Gender: Male

Colour:Cobalt blue

Weapons: Dark Retribution, Warmaster Rocket Hammer

Armor: A Mercurial demo suit with a wise owlite shield

Personality: Mini is a friendly face that help out the new knights that he sees potential in. His unpredictable fighting style can make him a deadly foe.

Skills with Weapons: He uses his Dark Retribution as a ball as he blasts it into the enemy with his hammer, or he just cracks it open with a devastating result! However, it is rare that he will do the same move twice in the same fight! Now that he has armor to rival any other he has lost his reserved bed in the hospital wing.

OPTIONAL: Back Story. He was one of the original knights, he misses the old days, when things where simpler, finding the world harsh on his own he decided to become some what of a teacher, helping those who where new. This gained him alot of friends in high places and due to this he was able to get the war masters weapons as his friends who knew him thought it would be suitable for him to have such an obscure arsenal. He finally took his career as a knight seriously and managed to obtain the best demo suit possible!

OPTIONAL: Death If he dies it will be with pride, and a big BANG! Clutching bomb weapons close as he charges into a crowd of enemy's or even the boss giving them a friendly hug, before exploding that is.

Sat, 06/23/2012 - 13:52
#2
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Rockernerd
cast me!

Name: Raze

Gender: Male

color: emerald green

Personality: Exceptionally witty, Raze is the one to look for if you want to hear a good joke. His lighthearted attitude can brighten the darkest level of clockworks and keep a squad's morale high. It is when he starts to get serious that his fellow knights know they are in trouble. Raze, despite his antics, is also a skilled recon. He uses his quick thinking and wits to stay hidden while frustrating his enemies to no end, allowing his squad mates to finish them off as they search in vain for the ghost that is Raze. However, he doesn't like fighting. The only reason he joined the Order in the first place was to chase down a cute knight he had a crush on. Even so, he is determined to do what is necessary to get back home.

Appearance/Armor: He wears a bright red salamnder mask, which accents his emerald green eyes. His armor is a Wyvern Scale Mail suit he painted himself. Instead of blue, it is a dull orange. Raze loves the large mix of colors, considering them his own private joke as no one can see them when he is cloaked. Raze is, well, short for knights, which actually turns to his favor in battle; many larger enemies swing over his head when fighting him. Finally, he carries a dark thorn shield for protection. When he has the time, he sometimes uses the glow coming off of his shield to paint shadows on his face while he is telling a scary story to new recruits.

Weapons: Preferring lighter, faster weapons, Raze usually carries a twisted snarble barb as his sword. Fast and able to hit without warning, it perfectly accents his cloak-and-dagger fighting style. He crafted it himself as well, which makes him proud in its handiwork (he isn't the best with building things. Also, his sidearm is a blackhawk. With quick firing shadow bullets and a bad-ass look, this is Raze's favorite weapon, never going anywhere without it.

History/Background: As said before, Raze only joined the spiral knights because he wanted to win the heart of another recruit. He was always trying to court her, but turned into a stuttering mess whenever she was around. They were put on the same ship, but were separated during the crash, leaving Raze wondering if she is dead, or worse, turned into some horrific experiment by the gremlins. Because of this, he doggedly searches the clockworks for clues of her whereabouts, many times taking unnecessary risks or venturing off by himself in hopes of finding hints. He dreams of going back home to peace, where he wishes to finally drop his sword and live a "normal" life.

Relations: He is everyone's friend. They are very few people who dislike him, but some knights do get annoyed with his banter.

'Twist' Degree: Obviously, his crush. It influences his behavior and can make him a loose cannon. Also, his tendency to shut up when he's scared or nervous.

Sun, 06/24/2012 - 01:20
#3
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Chibi-Tear
Ima make an app. but i'm tired, so it won't be my best :L

Name: Crilo (Cry-low)

Gender: Female

Colour: Dull blue

Personality: A light and cheerful demur hides her true self. Inside, she feels a sad and heavy weight. She doesn't tell anybody this, because it's about something that happened on Isora. However much she tries to hide it all, there will always be a sad glint in her eyes, and sometimes there will be days when she hides and cries for hours. But, she is still determined to do everything there is to do.

Appearance/Armor: A dusky spiral brigandage hides her fallen set, UV curse: low. Her helm isn't hidden by anything. Her shield is a custom made mighty defender (to be upgraded), so it looks like Rhendon's shield, but shocking/sky blue and her dull personal blue. When it's upgraded, the little cloth is replaced with a pure white one.

Weapons: Simply, she has four weapons; A glacius, a blitz, a nitrome and a dread venom striker.

History: (On Isora.) She was on a cruise ship with her husband, when one of the ship's crew stated that the ships engines had blown. Her husband, knowing a lot about things like that went down to help solver the problem. Five minuets later and there was a massive explosion on the other end of the ship, where the engine had been. Her husband had got out, but the ship was sinking and he died on the way swimming to shore. Ever since then, she wanted to not forget it, but be able to think about something else than that. She tried everything, but nothing would work. She kept thinking back to him where ever she was. In the end she attempted to join the knights ranks. It turned out, that one, it half worked, two she was pretty good with a sword, and good with a gun. She bombing skills were average as well.

Relations: None yet. Dunno if she'll get any, but \^_^/

Twist: Errr, you can change her a little.

Death: if she dies, dies protecting somebody. Say, jumped in front of someone to save them.

by the way, if i comment as Angelic-Tear, that's me as well.

Sun, 06/24/2012 - 02:25
#4
Observantsecond's picture
Observantsecond
10 more

10 more apps to go!

By the way,i will update this little list that it will tell which companion will be in which series!

Series 1: Mini-Bomber

Series 2: Raze

Series 3: Crilo

Series 4:???

Series 5:???

Series 6:???

Series 7:???

Series 8:???

Series 9:???

Series 10:???

Series 11:???

Series 12:???

Series 13 (or the final series):???

Mon, 07/02/2012 - 06:55
#5
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Observantsecond
allright

1st episode:

The Alternative Universe.
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It was a normal day in Haven. Newobservant was going on an adventure,but did not want to go,lets say,alone.

"Hmm,i wonder,how in the world did Cradle start,or how did it form... Most likely it was a big bang,but how..."

Meanwhile,Newobservant spots a knight running away from a clan of knights that are bullies,but it seems that he is defending himself.

Newobservant follows the clan and stealthy gets near a clan member.

"We are gonna beat you up! You owe us 10k crow-",the guild master stops and sees Newobservant beating up the guild member.

Newobservant,brave,gets out his Silversix.

"You leave that fellow chap alone or get a dead guild member.",Newobservant says.

"We are NOT gonna leave him alone.",says the guild master.

Newobservant shoots the guild master in the leg,forcing him to leave the "chap" alone.

"Are you NOW gonna leave him alone?",Newobservant asks.

"Yeah... Sure....",the guild master says in pain.

The guild retreats,and Newobservant helps out the fellow knight who was cornered.

"Hello there,are you ok?",Newobservant asks.

"Yeah,i am ok.",the fellow knight says.

"Whats yer name?",Newobservant asks.

"Mini-Bomber.",the fellow knight says.

"Ok,Can you help me out with something? It involves time travel and lots of... investigation..",Newobservant asks.

"Sure... I can.",Mini-Bomber says.

"Allright,off we go to investigate the 60's of Cradle!",Newobservant says.

"You might want to hold on.. My com unit wont be able to reach you,so you cant time travel,or you will end up in somewhere else.",Newobservant says.

Mini-Bomber gets close to Newobservant,Newobservant enters the correct time,and off they go!

Newobservant and Mini-Bomber warp to the place they were going,but something was diffrent..

"This seems wierd..";Newobservant says while grabbing his com unit to check the signal.

"We are at the same time where Cradle was made,but we are getting a diffrent signal,maybe i forgot to do something...",Newobservant says.

"What does that mean?",Mini-Bomber asks.

"I maybe have warped us into an alternative time,maybe somewhere along the lines of- Uh oh.",Newobservant stops and stares near Cradle,only to be shocked that seeing that Cradle has been made into a Gremlin Planet.

"I was right,we put ourself's into the alternative universe,which means that i traveled back in the time the gremlins enslaved the knights,while we should really be in the other 60's Cradle.",Newobservant says.

"So,we are basicly stuck here at the Gremlin Cradle?",Mini-Bomber asks.

"Yes,but we can travel back to Haven,but my com unit has ran out of- Of course! Com units were made,but they couldnt be modified,so this com unit needs a source of power,in which we might find in the Gremlin Town,which rose from the ground,making a new Emberlight.",Newobservant says.

"Allright,enough jibber-jabber,lets go to Emberlight.",Mini-Bomber says.

Both knights run to the enterance of Emberlight,only to be shocked that the gateway is guarded by atleast 50 Ironclaw Thwackers guarding the enterance,so they ran to cover.

"This is going to be one heck of a feast of gremlin body's,so pick em out one by one with your swords.";Newobservant says.

"I use a big old hammer and a bomb,but heck,lets do it!",Mini-Bomber says,while leaping out of cover.

"Pick the left ones,i'll get the right one's!",Newobservant says while rushing into battle with his Levithian Blade and Argent Peacemaker.

Both take down the 50 gremlins,while Mini-Bomber got thwacked in the back by one of them.

"Ow this hurts,but still,lets go.",Mini-Bomber says.

The knights run to the factory that the knights were prisoned.

"Allright,we have 2 ways of getting in. One,we bash the door down with bombs and go all suicidal,or we can just take the stealthy way and get the guards one by one.",Newobservant says.

"I'll go with the first option,you go with the second option,because i got a hammer so i can finish them off quickly.",Mini-Bomber says.

"Allright. Go on ahead.",Newobservant says while going inside a vent.

Mini-Bomber bashes the door,while thwacking the gremlins like a boss,while Newobservant silently slashes a gremlin to get the key to unlock the knights cage's.

"Allright everyone,you are free to go now,thwack out any gremlin that tries to attack you folks and make this place yours.",Newobservant says while the knights rush on the gremlins.

"Just raid on their parade!",Mini-Bomber says.

The knights overpower the city,while Newobservant and Mini-Bomber go ahead and deal with the first king before Tinkinzar,which name is Observenkar,which has NO connection to Newobservant.

The 2 knights make it to the castle,to be greeted with the king.

"What!?!? How did these knights escape the prison!?!?",Observenkar asks ragefully.

"Good question for another day,the question for now is what did these knights do to you? You only made their lives worse. You have 5 minutes to awnser or get killed by this blade.",Newobservant says while holding out his blade.

"Its because they were killing our people! We lived at ground,but then.. a ship crashed putting us in the ground,but now i've taken revenge!",Observenkar says.

"A fair reason,but still you tried killing US,because WE were knights examining the Core,until you and your little gremlin friends almost killed US.",Newobservant says.

"Now,lets make a deal. You let the knights go and live at the ground and make a deal to not assault on our knights,and we will let you go.",Newobservant says.

"NEVER! I WILL NEVER MAKE DEALS WITH A KNIGHT!",Observenkar shouts.

"Fine then! Have a little explosion to satisfy you!",Mini-Bomber says while throwing a bomb.

The bomb exploded right below a hole,making Observenkar fall to his deserved doom.

"Looks like he fell down,but hey look,an energy core just the size of my com units energy core container. Now we can go back home,but first,lets see how our knights are doing.",Newobservant says.

Newobservant looks out the window,seeing that EVERY gremlin was dead,and the knights were celebrating.

"Heh,they are one faithful group.",Mini-Bomber says.

"They are. Now lets go back to our beloved home's and finally rest,but still,im gonna make a little ship so that we can travel through time in.. something.",Newobservant says.

He punches in the code of the date they were before they were in this alternate universe,and off they go!

A few seconds later and they were back home.

"Allright,we're back,you can go rest if you want at your house,while im gonna make this little ship.",Newobservant says.

"Wait. I'll make the ship with you.",Mini-Bomber says.

"Allright! Lets go!",Newobservant says and goes to Haven to get the parts he needs to make the ship.
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End of First Episode of Series 1. Any Criticism is allowed,and the companion app's are still going!

See ya!

Tue, 07/03/2012 - 04:37
#6
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Observantsecond
you.avi

Title doesnt make sense,but still,who cares.

Episode 2

The Legion of Almirian Timetraveler's (a 2-part episode!)
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After a few days,they finally build the ship,and are ready to go somewhere else,at the time of the Legion of Almire.

"Allright,we built the ship,bu-",Newobservant stops and recieve's a distress signal from another time.

"Allright,lets check this little distress signal,my friend.",Newobservant says.

"Looks like a wierd distress signal. Looks like its coming from the 6th or 7th century.",Mini-Bomber says.

"Well,off to the 6th century,because the signal is nearer to the 6th century.",Newobservant says.

They start up the ship,and go to the 6th century.

They get off the ship once they parked somewhere that no one can detect the ship.

"Hm,looks like a nice little place. Well,lets follow the distress signal.",Newobservant says while getting out his Distress Signal Detector,or DSD for shot.

They run off to the distress signal,seeing that it was a feast of dead knights,all shot by a AP bullet.

"This looks suspicious.",Mini-Bomber says.

While they were looking for some.. well.. stuff,they were gunned down by a band of knights with swords,all having diffrent coloured scarfs.

They ran away,until they got to cover,seeing that they had guns.

"Impossible. Guns werent in the 6th century.",Newobservant says.

"Well,you see that they have scarfs. They are timetraveler's of course!",Mini-Bomber says.

"You're right,and they look like the same exact people from the Legion of Almire. Maybe they are Timetraveling Almirian's!",Newobservant says.

"Of course they are,Captain Obvious. Now gun 'em down!",Mini-Bomber says.

Newobservant gets out of cover and shoots the hell out of them with his AP.

A few seconds later,they retreat by traveling into another time.

"Well,they are almirian's. Now,lets march to their time!",Newobservant says while running to the ship.

They get in the ship and chase them in a time vortex.

"Mini-Bomber,you take the wheel! I'll try to take them down with my argent.",Newobservant says while getting out from the seat and going to the door.

Newobservant gets out his gun,and shoots the engine a few times,but the Almirian's take some nitro and run away to the time period.

"FASTER!",Newobservant shouts while getting in.

Mini-Bomber drives faster,and gets to the time the Almirian's went.
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Dere. First part.

Wed, 07/04/2012 - 12:27
#7
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Observantsecond
Teck yes.

PROTIP: If you read this,you get diamonds in minecraft today.

Episode 2:

The Legion of Almirian Timetraveler's (part 2)

Newobservant and Mini-Bomber land at a parking lot,and rush to catch up with the Almirian's.

"Mini-Bomber,have my Argent Peacemaker and try to shoot down that Almirian with the red gun. Ok?!",Newobservant asks loudly.

"Yeah.. sure.",Mini-Bomber says.

Mini-Bomber gets Newobservant's pistol and goes to a secret alley,and shoots the Almirian with the red gun in the head.

"Jackpot.",Mini-Bomber says.

"Allright,you can have that gun,i'll take this red gun,now scout!",Newobservant said while picking up the red gun.

Newobservant and Mini-Bomber rush through the town they were in to find the other 2 almirian's. They get to their place,but they have an unexpected suprise.

The 2 almirian's were dead.

"Huh,how did thi-",Newobservant says while paying attention to the wall.

On the wall the Majora's Mask was written,along with the words: "You've met with a terrible fate,haven't you?".

"Allright,pick up the guns,and make a brake for it!",Newobservant says while picking up the guns.

"RUN!",Mini-Bomber says.

The 2 knights run,while seeing the most evil face ever.

The face of a E-statue (I'll give a clue to you readers,the E stands for Elegy. Now guess the creepypasta.)

They luckily get to the ship, and teleport to the present time.

"Phew,what was that?",Mini-Bomber says.

"That was an E-statue. Its a curse for every timetraveler.",Newobservant says.

"Curse?",Mini-Bomber says.

"You see,in the real-world,a kid once buyed a game and recieved a curse of a drowned kid. That's all i know.",Newobservant says while breathing.

"But hey! Atleast i got a new toy!",Newobservant says.

"Hey.. Can i have the other guns?",Mini-Bomber asks.

"Yeah,sure. You can sell them and get another bomb.",Newobservant says. "Now,i'll examine this gun. Now shoo! And buy some drinks and/or food.",Newobservant says.

"Ok.",Mini-Bomber says while leaving.

"Oh no... It's teleported to Cradle. I must destroy it once and for all. Also,lets take a look at this gun.",Newobservant says.

"Huh,looks like a gun that shoots flamable projectile's... I'll call it "The Flare Gun".",Newobservant says.
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Allright,who guesses the creepypasta first gets 2000 crowns! Legit!

Sun, 07/08/2012 - 03:28
#8
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Bspwmv
?

Can i make an evil character and of a different race? Just thought that would be fun :D.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 08:19
#9
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Observantsecond
Yes.

You have the privelage to do it.

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