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TI'S THE HISTORY-big history book of spiral knights

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Wed, 07/11/2012 - 11:01
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine

we can all agree the story line of spiral knights is a little bit ... off? so it is my belief that it is are duty to help set things striate if you have any ideas for little bits and parts of spiral knights history that can (sort of) fit in to the spiral knights story line feel free to share your opinion and hopefully by the end of this we will have HISTORY!!!

here to get things started I will place some basic rules and a chapter

1 all chapters are divided into parts as shown here> ~C1_______p1________~
the chapters and parts are labeled sepretly and and(optional)my have a intro sentence.

2 we must agree to post it in a chapter if you have a suggestion post it in the appropriate format and then if people like it then we add it if not (not trying to serpress creativity) then I will ask politely that you erase the title and part of the Chapter(s) so no one gets confused.

3I will also be adding in chapters and when a person has a chapter to submit and that chapter has been agreed apon then I will copy that chapter and place it in appropriate format and the original will be erased to save space(all writers are given credit fore there creations)(take note for the most part I have this figured out I just would like to see if there are any better ideas or ideas that can work of mine the goal is to have perfect documentation that we can recorded on the wiki also if any one wants to place this on the wiki I don’t have the time to do it my self so that job is open)

the first chapter

~C1 THE AGES P1 THE FIRST AGE OF RISING AND THE STEG-N-RAR~

there are four ages in the spiralien history these are the remaining archives from the first age of rising...
At the beginning of the first age the spiraliens were an organic race of small yet proud&honorable beings. over the centuries they developed their technology making grate strides in bio-mechanics & metallurgy and with this technology they exchanged there organic forms for bio-mechanical ones. But centuries of neglect left their home world of spiralia on the edge of ruin that’s when the Steg-n-rar came. a race of powerful beings that created hole worlds, they took pity on the spiraliens and helped them remake their world and after the crisis was averted they formed an alliance that lasted a ten thousand years until the end of the second age of night fall.
-Regal the sovereign

Wed, 07/11/2012 - 11:12
#1
Tohru-Adachi's picture
Tohru-Adachi
Please tell me tis is fiction.

I just HOPE you're not saying this is true.

I like fiction, but don't say this is true please.

Wed, 07/11/2012 - 16:56
#2
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
by your spelling/grammar im pretty sure either

A) You are 8 (more or less)

Or

B) You are a foreigner

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 10:03
#3
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Duskfinder

trolling will not be appreciated also this is spell cheked so are you sure you are not the one geting things wrong?

@The-Trial im sorry it is history but as i stated it gets better.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 11:23
#4
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Okie, first things first.

It is not spell checked ironically you spelled "checked" wrong.

SECOND, I think this is a great idea, but if you clean up the OP I will understand this more. :3 Like, capitalization, proper grammar, etc.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 12:26
#5
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Isekuube

as you have requested i have cleaned up the OP.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 12:49
#6
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
This is what the first chapter should have looked like IMO.

~Chapter I THE AGES Part I THE FIRST AGE OF RISING AND THE STEG-N-RAR~

There are four Ages in the Spiralian History, these are the remaining archives from the First Age of Rising...

At the beginning of the First Age the Spiralians were an organic race of small, yet proud and honorable beings. Over the centuries they developed their technology making great strides in Bio-Mechanics and Metallurgy and with this technology they exchanged their organic forms for Bio-Mechanical ones. But centuries of neglect left their home world of Isora on the edge of ruin, that’s when the Steg-N-Rar came. A race of powerful beings that created whole worlds, they took pity on the Spiralians and helped them remake their world and after the crisis was averted, they formed an alliance that lasted a ten thousand years until the end of the Second Age of Nightfall.

Take pride in your grammar. ^.^ And I liked it a LOT. Very nice.

I also have some stuff to contribute, but its not History, its a whole nother section of it called Monster Origins.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 13:28
#7
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
So, with out further ado,

Monster Origins: Prologue

When the Spirilians first came to Cradle they incountered hostliles. Gelatin looking hostiles. Then further on into Cradle they had encountered more hostile, more deadly, and more fierce creatures... And being so dangerous, they were considered kings of their stratum. But where did they all come from? How did they form? This section of the Big Book of Spirilian History will give you what Spirilian Scientists have come to understand.

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 17:02
#8
Hexlash's picture
Hexlash
I like... but agreeing with Ise

I'm liking what's going on, but agreeing with Ise, if you- got your stuff edited, than I would better understand in which way I can exactly contribute to this :) plus... did you mean other* Isekuube? not 'nother'?

Thu, 07/12/2012 - 21:17
#9
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
Isekuube

thank you for your contributions as a matter of fact i plan on makeing a line of chapters about the details of all the creatures of the sk universe from there customs & culture to there legends & lore. you see its a full perspective of their true history.

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 16:56
#10
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
oh boy

i know i mite be over reacting of the lack of posts has me weryed

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 18:10
#11
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
I will NOT read any of

I will NOT read any of regal's posts. No offense, it just hurts my eyes.

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 18:13
#12
Myqpalzm's picture
Myqpalzm
LOL

I agree with Artistbma.

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 18:29
#13
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
@Hex

I have no idea what you're talking about. :P Where do you see that? :o

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 20:02
#14
Myqpalzm's picture
Myqpalzm
LOL

Oops, double post.

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 20:25
#15
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
:S

How do you double post Two hours and eleven minutes away from eachother? :3

Fri, 07/13/2012 - 20:51
#16
Myqpalzm's picture
Myqpalzm
@Isekuube

You have to know that accident always happen XD

Sun, 07/15/2012 - 12:15
#17
Regal-The-Soverine's picture
Regal-The-Soverine
@Artistbma

what is your problem Artistbma?

@Isekuube thank you for your suport.

Sun, 07/15/2012 - 17:41
#18
Dragaroth's picture
Dragaroth
regale

take a good hard look at your spelling and grammar, and then look at what artist has said.
now. as of the point of this thread, you began a story, but it seems to have sort of dropped off. If you want others to help build a story, you must make a framework. Give a solid base history that others can continue to construct on top of, you'll get more success that way.

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