Fanfic: The Legendary Armour. [ROLECASTING] [Prologue-Chapter II Done]

I decided, while I wait for school to start (honestly I don't care if it does. :P) so I can get my original fanfic done, I thought I'd start this. In this there are new weapon/armor sets. You'll find out about them more in the prologue. I am also rolecasting for six characters. These will be the main characters. Here there are eight main characters. Four good, four evil. I'll give you a little set up for the app, or use your own, make it as long as possible.
Name: (The name of your person. :3)
Gender: (Male or Female?)
Age: ( 15 or higher for main characters, try and keep them young 15-27 )
Arsenal: (What your character wears/weilds)
Personality: (Whether humourous or dedicated, or dark, or frank, make it interesting )
Bio: ( I'd rather not have a parents-died-in-a-horrible-accident bio. If you do, at least try and make it interesting )
Additional Facts: (Anything else I should know?)
Special Skills: (PLEASE, no OPness. It kills the fanfic)
Twist Degree: (How your character should change throughout the story)
Role: (Good/Evil. Main Characters/Side Characters)
Now, for the organization of the characters:
The Lights (The Good Guys):
Leader: Light
Swordsman/woman: OPEN
Gunslinger: OPEN
Bomber: Blast
The Shadows (The Bad Guys):
Leader: Shadow
Swordsman: Aura
Gunslinger: Umbra
Bomber: OPEN
Note: I want the swordsman/bomber/gunner. To be PURE whatever job they have, so I will auto-reject any who is hybriding.
Character Apps for the Leaders of the Squads:
Name: Light
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Arsenal: Divine Set with Prismatic Glow eyes and Divine Valkyrie Wings. Divine Avenger and Argent Peacemaker for emergencies
Personality: Wise, never known to do anything bad, extremely nice.
Bio: Her Parents are unknown, but it is rumored that they were filthy, stealing peasants. Which would make no sense because Light is the most kind-hearted person all of her friends have met. It would make sense that she is a medic for her squad and she does her job better than anybody hhas ever seen. She has mastered the art of magical mending that it rivals the skills of a Darkfang Mender.
Name: Shadow
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Arsenal: Chaos Set. Barbourus Thorn Blade, Acheron, Gran Faust, and Dread Venom Striker.
Personality: Dark and Sadistic. Sarcastic and always a downer, often cracks sick jokes. Sometimes disrespects his leader's judgements
Bio: Nothing is known about Shadow except he has been mentally scarred by something and he refuses to tell.
Additional Facts: Favours his Gran Faust and is feared in Lockdown because of his master use of it.
Now, for the Prologue:
~The Legendary Sets Prologue
Long ago, the Great Smith who forged all weapons and armours of today, forged a new, more powerfull and evil weapon. He was very proud of his creation and he showed it to the Spiral Council to get it approved. Of course, the Smith did not tell the Council about its evil powers and the Council approved. In this time, of the early era of Cradle, all weapons that were approved, they were allowed to make a set of armour to go with it. This is exactly what the Smith did. He made the Penumbra Sets. They were made infused with pure evil, they were designed for power hungry, blood thirsting, shadow lurking villains. The Penumbra Sets were made for a Swordsman, a gunner, and a bomber. Only one weapon for each of the sets. The Gran Vod for the Swordsman, the Sentencer for the Gunner, and the Umbrage for the bomber.
But, what the Smith didn't know that these sets could corrupt a man and make him do whatever they say. This happened to the Great Smith and eventually, the sets found their way to worthy, evil people. With that much power in their hands they could rule all of Cradle. Which is exactly what they intended to do. They eventually conquered Cradle and cruelly dictated it. Many people fought back, in turn many people lost lives. A secret resistance group formed called Light in the Dark who forged equally powerfull weapon sets that were called The Resistance Sets. The weapons included the Virgin for the Swordsman, the Illuminatior for the Gunner, and the Luminesce for the Bomber. Theses sets, instead of corrupting a man, they purified a man.
Eventually, these sets found worthy owners and they challenged the evil dictators of Cradle. They fought for days on end, whether rain or snow. Hail or sleet. They fought, for days until finally the two swordsman were left and their comrades were cut up and dead on the floor. The two clashed. Eventually, the Swordsman won. But not without great costs, he had lost his dear friends and a few limbs. He was bleading internally and externally. Too many broken bones to count. The last things he did before he died was sealing away The Resistance and the Penumbra sets and renamed The Resistance Sets to the Luminesce Sets. He crafted a Leader Set for the Luminesce set which nobody knows what it looks like. Lastly, he sealed himselft away with The Luminesce Sets and lived out his final hours there.
The Sets became Legendary.
The Legendary Sets.

Name: Grey
Gender: male
Age: 20
Arsenal: Divine veil(wid gwasses), Snarby coat , Acheron, Gran Faust, Voltedge and BTB
Personality: A bit crazy but kind. Cracks jokes at the worst possible moments.
Bio: A knight who was found unconscious in moorcraft inside the mewkats dark ritual circle. At first he was mistaken for a villain because of his attire but he later gained the trust of the Order by his various heroic deeds.He has no memory of the past.
Additional Facts: Will not harm anything small cute if fluffy and a great cook,master of camoflauge
Special Skills: Can use almost anything for various reasons( once he lock picked out of a prison with a brick)
Twist Degree: minimal (?) Not sure if this us what joo meant
Role: Good / main character

Name: Newobservant
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Arsenal: Snarbolax Cap with Regal Stranger Hat as a costume,Snarby Coat,Levithian Blade and Argent Peacemaker
Personality: Personally helpful,and sometimes good at shooting.
Bio: (Just so you know,this is from my other fanfic,called the Timetraveler,which you can check out.) Newobservant started out as a normal knight,but when he was older,he got a mystical Spiralian Timetraveler Scarf when he was 21. He got the scarf when he was taking back Haven (in the fanfic Fall of Haven that i made... Fun fact..) while he got crushed by a building,but only his leg got crushed. When he made his timetraveling ship,he used it for timetraveling. Of course. On his 2nd time of timetraveling,he notices that a new enemy,called BEN has been released on Cradle. No one else but his companion knows about this. Before this timetravel nonsense,he was just pure normal. Every friend he had liked him. Move along. (But in this story,he doesnt have the ship. For less OPness.)
Additional Facts: He has the mind of a average person,and he also has the Spiralian Timetraveler scarf. And it can SHINE. Yay. BTW,he's a gunslinger,and he sometimes uses his sword if his gun is worthless. Yeah.
Special Skills: No special skills,but he does have the power to hack through his com-link on large distances.
Twist Degree: He gets 22 in the story,and he gets more helpful and helpful through the story. Nuff else said.
Role: Im the good one,of course,and i WOULD like to be one of the main characters.

@Dusk I may use him; I'll keep him in mind.
If you elaborate further on his bio I can use him. He's a good character, but he just needs more elaboration.
@Observant I have a couple of problems with your app:
Normally, I don't really mind the name, but Newobservant. :/ If somebody's name was Newobservant, I couldn't imagine somebody saying "Yo! Newobservant" :3 Observant is fine for me. And, if you elaborate on a bit more things I might accept him.

Name: BEN
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Arsenal: Full Snarby Set,and nothing else but an modified Acheron. With claws.
Personality: Always in the mood of evil,and mad that he lost his EYES. Yes. It's true.
Bio: He was a normal knight until the Swarm corrupted his mind and sent him to the real world,or lets say Earth. When he returned,he got full power until he got killed by a knight that took his eyes. Then,he was resurrected by an unknown force,and has been sent to Cradle,to completly demolish the whole planet. He was unknown until a timetraveler called Newobservant found out he has been sent to Cradle,bla bla bla,and the rest of his story is unknown. Smell's pretty legit to me.
Additional Facts: Nothing here,move on. I said move on! Fine then,his weakness is while being shot in the eye,and he can be only killed by drowning.
Special Skills: When he gets taunted enough,he goes into Rage mode,and becomes a combination of Snarbolax and the Royal Jelly.
Twist Degree: He dies at the end. Nothing else said. Move on to the role.
Role: He's on the Evil side,and he's a side character,and can he be a Swordsman? Please?

Name: Blast
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Arsenal: Volcanic Demo Helm, Volcanic Demo Suit, Nitronome, Electron Vortex, Dark Briar Barrage, Dark Retribution.
Personality: Blast likes seeing his foes get blown up, and gets quite annoyed when something won't just die. He does co-operate well with others though and has a lust for adrenaline.
Bio: Blast helped during Operation Crimson Hammer and faced off against Warmaster Seerus, but when the cooling system ruptured from one of Seerus' attacks, he became literally frozen in ice. When he thawed, he had fallen into a state of unconsciousness, and about five weeks after the success of Operation Crimson Hammer, he woke up...with one problem.
Additional Facts: Blast has amnesia, which made him forget about the entire siege on the Grand Arsenal, and even when gifted a Dark Retribution, he still wouldn't remember. His personal color is ultramarine.
Special Skills: He is good at computer hacking.
Twist Degree: Blast's amnesia finally begins to clear up and he remembers the accident that put him in an icy coma.
Role: Good, Main Character

@Observant Newobservant found out he has been sent to Cradle,bla bla bla,and the rest of his story is unknown. :/ Really? bla bla bla? /sigh I'm going to say no to him. I might make him a cameo though.
When I meant by elaboration is the scarf, how did he get a Timetraveling Scarf, and a SCARF of all things. Elaborate? :)
EDIT: Oh goody, another app. :D
@Phantom Wow, I love him. He's in. :) Great app. I hope his Computer Hacking comes into use. /shrug

Name: Dreath
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Arsenal: Callahan, Silent Nightblade, Penta-Heart Pendeant, Ash Tail Cap, Azure Cobalt Armor.
Personality: A fun knight who people always like to be around. He will do anything to save his friends. And he loves killing the jelly king over and over and over and over...
Bio: A knight who was sent out the Great Colony to check on some knights who have fallen near the area. He saved the knights, but he sacrificed himself to the Swarm. The Swarm made him half mechanical-half knight.
Facts: Dreath sometimes is corrupted by the swarm, causing him to injure his friends and himself. He wears a Penta-Heart Pendeant to help resist the corruption, but sometimes the swarm overcomes it.
Skills: He can speak in the language of gremlins and Dragons due to his mechanical half.
Twist Degree: Like I said before, the swarm can sometimes corrupt his body causing him to injure everybody around him. Any other minimal twists are allowed to be put in.
Role: Main/Good character (swordsman or gunslinger)

I might take him. But not as a main character, as a support.

Name: Aura
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Arsenal: Aura clads himself in Almirian Crusader armour, with an extended cape reaching over his left pauldron and held in place by a clasp of an eagle, wields and Acheron and Leviathan Blade, and a Volcanic Plate Shield
Personality: Independent, doesn't talk much, usually puts down enemies without so much as a face expression, whether angry or not, can control his emotions
Bio: Not much is known about Aura, only that he lost his wife and is searching for his daughter, joining the Shadows in doing so. They said that if he assissted them, they would lead him him to his daughter. Being trained as a guardian, he took ont he role of swordsman.
Additional Facts: Thought to be dead after an elevator collapsed in the Arcade
Special Skills: Can take a pretty big pounding and take on several enemies at once
Twist Degree: Aura should eventually see the light, but will not join the Lights
Role: Shadow's Swordsman

can I at least be in a max of 3 chapters? Like Portrayt from Redemption?

@Dreath Sure. I might put you in more than 3 Chaps though.
@Frost AWESOME. I'm going to use him.

I will appreciate it when you start the fanfic!

technically I have, lol. /prologue :)
Ohwell. I guess technically it hasn't started yet.

I see you've decided to ignore my app. Or you just decided not to use it :I

@Dusk I may use him; I'll keep him in mind.
Did you not read that?

Could you possibly put the whole story in Google Docs so i could print it?

there's three piles of apps in my book.
The Ones I'm Using.
The Ones I may Use.
and
The Ones that I Won't Use.
Yours is in, The Ones I May Use.
I'm just keeping yours around to see others.

Maybe, though I perfer doing it through coments. And the incredibly short bar is so rough for me. When I'm done with the whole story I might put it in the story. But, why do you want to print it off? It might not turn out so good. :S

I print off fan-fics because I want to read them when im not on the computer. I have a life other than SK (hard to believe).

He just started this thing 9 hours ago. He just gave you the prolouge. Do you really need the story that much?

Tomorrow morning, I'm not sure.
And the one I just posted was to you.

I might do that... but, each chapter will be individual.

Name: Sin
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Arsenal: Snarbolax Set, Barbarous Thorn Shield, Barbarous Thorn Blade, Snaeby Spike Bomb (forget its name),Gran Faust.
Personality: Cold-Hearted. Merciless. The Azmodan of Cradle. Very sneaky and persuasive. Cross him, you're dead.
Bio: Some say he came from the Core itself. Sin is born of the shadows. Once a knight came to the deepest depths of the clockworks and found Sin sitting in a corner. That knight was never heard from again.
Additional Facts: Sin is evil. xD
Special Skills: Seems to be able to "melt" into the shadows. Meh. I mean he can hide very well.
Twist Degree: Do whatever you want with him.
Role: Idc. You figure that out. :P
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I'm ready for any changes.

If I did why would I post that comment?
Edit: apparently I skipped that comment and kept reading the rest *facepalm*

Consider changing the name... 'Sets' doesn't really sound right, consider changing it to armours or something.

I made the elaboration of the scarf.
If you are happy,you get a jaffa from the Newb.
/emote gives Jaffa.

Light was laying back on her bed, hands behind her head, just staring at the ceiling. She yawned absentmindedly and sat up. There was a knock at the door and she got up and opened the door to whoever it may be. There was nobody, just a small envelope filled with coins. On the envelope it said: Outbid Notice. Light emptied the letter and tons of crowns fell out of the envelope along with a piece of paper that floated gracefully to the floor, right on top of the money. She picked up the letter and it read:
Visit the Auction House for another chance at this item!
Light sighed, picked up all the money, put it in her bag, and headed out the door. When she got to the auction house she rebid on her Flower. She noticed this man in Volcanic Demo armour was talking about something and he had a large group of knights wth him. "... He got the Gran Vod approved. But the sword corrupted him and convinced him to make more armour and more weapons armour for one of each for the classes. He did as it commanded. He called them The Penumbra Armour. The weapons were Gran Vod for the swordsman, the Sentencer for the gunner, and the Umbrage for the Bomber. The sword told the Smith to find worthy bearers. And so he did. The evil armour eventually found its way to power-hungry, blood thirsty, pure evil knights who eventually, took over Cradle. A resistance group was formed and they crafted The Resistance Armour, later its name was changed to The Purified Armour. Anyways, the armour and weapons were given to the devoted leaders of the group. The Virgin for the Swordsman, the Illuminator for the gunner and the Luminesce for the Bomber."
~
The lights were off, which Shadow loved. Nobody could see him at all. He just layed back on his bed. Plotting. Shadow got up and headed out the door, going to check the Auction House for anything worth his presence. He noticed that there were an unusual amount of knights swarmed around one particular knight. He decided to investigate. He pushed his way to the front of the croud. "Hey!" "Watch it!" "No cutting!" Shadow was able to hear the last words of what this guy was saying. "... The Purified Armour and The Penumbra Armour were able to grant near INFININTE power to its bearers. The Luminesce Armour was crafted to oppose the evil dictators who wore The Penumbra Armour and weilded the Penumbra Weapons. They managed to defeat the evil dictators, but not without great costs. The last things the Swordsman did before dieing was sealing away both Armour in completely different places. Luckily, I know a few scientists who are tracking them." What was all Shadow had to hear.
~
As Light was walking away from the intriguing story, he heard a couple of knights gasp and scream. She turned around and saw what was causing all the commotion. A knight in Chaos Armour was holding a Dread Venom Striker to the Demo's neck. The blade wasn't even touching him, but the scent of the poison was enough to make him wince. Light could barely hear the Chaos knight, but she guessed that he was asking about something. The man held up his hands and responded. The knight pushed the man down and walked away towards the arcade. Light rushed over to the man and helped him up. Light asked him, "What happened?" The Demo brushed himself off and replied, "He asked where the scientists were," "This is not good, he could..." Light trailed off. "I know, their my friends too, I want to help!" The Demo responded. "My name's Light, what's yours?" asked Light. "I'm Blast," he responded. "Where are your friends?" "In Aurora Isles, the Low Gardens," Blast replied. "Ok, then, lets head over there!" said Light enthusiastically, "We have some scientists to warn."
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There you go! And on other notes...
I changed the name, like Frost suggested. I also changed the name of The Luminesce Sets to The Purified Armour. And I'm accepting Sin. However, I am unfortunatly, not accepting Observant.

Grammar Checks:
You said "When she got the the Auction House," I assume you meant to.
Also, "The scent pf the poison made...' I assume you meant of.

Armour is spelt armor in American english. Armour is the British English spelling. Just saying, you know.

I just like the "u"s better. Prob because that's how my dad does it. I also use "u" in colour.
AND
It annoys me on Dictionary.com, "armour" isn't an actual "word" :S

Name: Grittle
Gender: male
Age: 23
Arsenal: Rock jelly helm with cool game face, miracle cloak, fiery pepperbox, shadowtech alchemer mkii, silversix, sinister skelly shield
Personality: easily provoked, cant make desicions, smart mouth, laughs alot, makes fun of enemies that he dominates
Bio: More smarts than shots, Grittle was quite smart, able to pinpoint which targets to hit, and strategizes the best terrain to fight, but instead of those sit in the back camper gunners, Grittle was more of an in-your-face smart mouthed up close and personal gunner, blasting most monsters in the face with his fiery pepperbox, he is quite volitile, but well-mannered.
Additional Facts: is extremely scared of snipes
Special Skills: speaks many langueges, very smart
Twist Degree: becomes less volitile when the story progress, and more frank.
Role: Good, gunslinger for the lights squad

Blast HAD to say that while shadow was around...bad idea Blast :O
But still, nice work.

Name: Solar
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Arsenal: Wyvern Scale Helm, Silvermail, Drake Scale shield, Khorovod, Jalovec, Faust
Personality: More or less a pretty easy going guy with an minor ego problem. Will stay cool under pressure. Sort of a wise-guy (literally and figuratively). He's the joker of the team, and tends to crack jokes a lot. Sadly, easily provoked Grittle is usually the target of his jokes (only if you choose to accept Grittle. If not, then that part is void), thus leading to a rivalry between the two. As said, he has an minor ego attitude. Not the kind along the lines of Pow*6, but more of a 'Derp. I can't believe you missed that shot! I could have totally made that, and I'm not even a gunner! Epic fail.'
Bio: Solar used to be called Necro, but changed it to Solar to join the Lights (he assumed that the name Necro, associated with the term Necromancy, a dark art, would ruin his chances of getting in. :P). He had recieved heavy sword and strategic training superior to that which was taught to most Spiral Knights.
Additional Facts: Solar has a profound interest in heavy swords and Fiends. ._. Especially Greavers.
Special Skills: Stealth, tatical warfare stuff, extra intelligence
Twist Degree: Due to his usage of the Faust, a weapon associated with the Shadows because of its dark powers, Solar steadly grows to become sort of like the members of the Shadows, if you catch my drift. Although he stil stays part of the Lights, he begins to think and act more like a member of the Shadows.
Role: Light Swordsman, Main
For some reason I feel like I'm missing something. ._.

Name: Umbra
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Arsenal: Shadowsun Stetson/Slicker, Umbra Driver, Sentenza, Polaris, Callahan. Dusky Pipe on his Stetson.
Personality: Always pessimistic, makes cruel jokes, seems to have a permanent scowl on his face, always has the need to make crude remarks, has a calm, controlled temper, but is quite deadly in a fight. He's also quite dramatic sometimes, and is always very sarcastic. Yeah. The usual villain. xD
Bio: Umbra never cared for anything in the world, except for himself, his guns, and his Shadowsun Set. He ran away from home at 7, and made his home with a group of thugs. When he turned 11, he slaughtered them all in their sleep, and ran away again. 10 years later, he's still on the run, now a known murderer and has a big, big, big price on his dead. He'll work for anyone in exchange for shelter and profit.
Additional Facts: Seems to have a liking for drama.
Special Skills: Very skilled gunner, has a knack of picking up small sounds and things in the corner of his eyes no one else usually notices.
Twist Degree: Stays the same. Perhaps joins the light side. Dunno. He doesn't care for anything, as I said, only for his weapons and possibly the occasional profit. A mercenary, basically. You choose.
Role: Evil gunner. Main character, please.

@Grittle I'll wait around to see if any other apps come around.
@LoN Great! He's in!
@Dusk Since LoN get's the swordsman part, I'll add you in as a support character.
@Shadow Hmm, well, maybe if you change the bio a bit, because The Shadow's squad hasn't actually formed yet.

Darn, theres a big chance i wont make it into th story :(

:D I'm in!
Waitaminute. Did I just steal Dusk's role as teh light swordsman? >.>
._. Grittle. :D You'd better get in. I need to tease you. XD

"now a known murderer and has a big, big, big price on his >dead<"
Might wanna fix dat.
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@LoN
Tanks alot man :<
I would make an app but I'm feeling lazy atm :I