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This poem I wrote

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Sun, 07/15/2012 - 15:08
Skyber's picture
Skyber

Can someone tell me if this poem that I wrote is good or bad? Thanks in advance. Here's the poem:

Collapsing onto the chair softly
I stare at the empty space beside me
Forever wondering
Through day …
Through night…
Why won’t she love me?

Sun, 07/15/2012 - 16:34
#1
Dusvio's picture
Dusvio
forever alone

good but ... forever alone

Wed, 08/29/2012 - 04:03
#2
Adolpha's picture
Adolpha
Aww....

It's lovely! Beautiful poem Skyber.

Wed, 08/29/2012 - 19:14
#3
Iamnoone's picture
Iamnoone
It's good. It touches an

It's good. It touches an emotion we all have felt. It's thought provoking.
Who is she?

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