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[FANFIC] The Librarian [Chapter 2 Out] [Accepting Characters]

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Thu, 07/19/2012 - 06:03
Trobolta's picture
Trobolta

My next attempt at writing yet another fan fiction. Because my last sucked so bad i threw it into the bin.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kPA0bt95Y-cRwLFDnuDo2tgy2rDcVLGYInIa...

The universe set in the story is same what based on Artifice's stories. So, much reference made is credited to him in advance. Go ahead, read his awesome [scrap].

Character App Sheet:

Name:

Equipment:

Bio:

Personality:

Note that this is my first competent work. Forgive me for any mistakes or low quality work. Criticism is awesome and always appreciated. Comments are also appreciated.

Enjoy.

Thu, 07/19/2012 - 07:19
#1
Arctifice's picture
Arctifice
Reminds me of District 9

Reminds me of District 9 somewhat. Not a bad thing, the whole transformation concept is best deconstructed in that film, so it's instinctive for me to reference it.

Good concept thus far, but writing wise a few patches could be added, as well as some capital Is.

I can post a partial rewriting after work today, if you want to see it.

Thu, 07/19/2012 - 12:44
#2
Dreathuxy's picture
Dreathuxy
Honk

Is there going to be character applications?

Thu, 07/19/2012 - 15:19
#3
Trobolta's picture
Trobolta
Thanks for the Comments.

@Artifice; Thank you. It is after all my first competent workings. My was one was rather ... crappy. I haven't really seen District 9 asides the premiss behind it.

Yes, I would love to see what you could do to help.

@Dreadthuxy; I'm not sure. It is my first works and all. I might open up later on.

Fri, 07/20/2012 - 07:47
#4
Trobolta's picture
Trobolta
Bump

Now accepting characters.

Tip at writing a char app; Please keep it moderately lengthy. Im new to this and reading a wall of text isnt going to help either you getting the part or me with writing this.

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