My next attempt at writing yet another fan fiction. Because my last sucked so bad i threw it into the bin.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kPA0bt95Y-cRwLFDnuDo2tgy2rDcVLGYInIa...
The universe set in the story is same what based on Artifice's stories. So, much reference made is credited to him in advance. Go ahead, read his awesome [scrap].
Character App Sheet:
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Note that this is my first competent work. Forgive me for any mistakes or low quality work. Criticism is awesome and always appreciated. Comments are also appreciated.
Enjoy.
Reminds me of District 9 somewhat. Not a bad thing, the whole transformation concept is best deconstructed in that film, so it's instinctive for me to reference it.
Good concept thus far, but writing wise a few patches could be added, as well as some capital Is.
I can post a partial rewriting after work today, if you want to see it.