I give up. You win.
*waves white flag of surrendering*
I give up. You win.
*waves white flag of surrendering*
Stop trying to turn SK into something its not. Crossovers are only good when they're an epic combo. Pokemon and SK? No, just no.
It seems like you start with a basic idea and try to jump into a major plot point, then forget to follow through with the climax of the plot or anything beyond that. In fact, there is usually no real beginning, either. If you put all of your fragments together and changed some names it could probably be a series of adventures.
By the way, that quote is from me.
Ugh. Portal/Sk, Pokemon/Sk. These arent the best ideas. Id stick with your other stories.