Forums › English Language Forums › General › Treasure Vault

Search

[FAN FIC] The Story of Fellsnow Ice: Accepting Apps!

17 replies [Last post]
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 10:41
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench

My story that I am creating for Tev's great contest. I will post chapters every two days. Enjoy! (please note, this is copied from Microsoft Word, so the format may be a little...awkward. :D)

Chapter 1

They say we are fighting for our very existence, but I know different. They say we are stranded on this planet, but I know there are hidden reasons. They say we much reach the core to power our ship, but will they stop when we reach the core?
My name is Ice, Private Fellsnow Ice of the 10th wave. We estimate what wave you are by when you reach the HQ. The first month fighters are known as the 1st wave, the second month as the 2nd wave, and so on. I was 9 months shy of the joining age, so I was spared for the time being, but that has ended.
When I joined, I was issued the standard items: Flak Jacket, Crescent Helm with a com unit and a helm-mounted display, and a proto sword, gun, and shield. I don’t see the point of such ill-leveled gear, but I can do nothing about it. The training I go through is tireless; everyday they force us to compete in skirmishes with each other.
The point of the skirmishes, they say, is to decide which class you desire to join: Guardian, Recon, or Striker. I always loose, and everyone seems to have no patience for me. Can’t they understand I am trying? Can’t they understand I am just learning how to fight? No, they think of themselves as gods and belittle me. I wish to make my name known, I want to be feared by everyone knight on Cradle. Anger and hatred drive me; anger at those who mock me, hatred at those who belittle me.
“Private Ice, report to the front of the Mesh Hall.”
It is so difficult to become feared when one’s arsenal is so small…
“Private Fellsnow Ice!?
Dang it, “Here and accounted for, sir!”
“Report to lab number 31 for your debriefing and your upgrade.”
As the announcer turns I wonder what he means, “Well, excuse me chaps, I have to report to lab 31, unlike some of you.” Mocking laughter follows my comment, why am I such a fool at times? When I exit the exit mesh hall, I am greeted by the blinding rays of the sun and must raise my armored hand to shield my eyes, oh how I wish for a chapeau to protect my eyes. I glance down at the dirt and feel a sickening homesick emotion. Of all the element Cradle has, it seems to lack immensely in the soft white sand. Also, this planet has a twinge of the smell of burnt rubber, which makes me very nauseous. I start to move, letting my feet make trails in the dirt. Finally, I reach lab 31, this is also known as the Gremlin specialty lab. I knock on the steel door.
“Private Ice? Please come in. Come in, come in.”
I enter the lab and get a quick bear of my surroundings. There are numerous info screens with various pictures of Gremlin weapons, gear, and architecture. Also, there are 3 devices scanning 3 pieces of Gremlin gear: a weapon, shield, and mask.
“Fellsnow, mind if I call you that? Ice seems so official and awkward at the same time.”
I nod at the muscular knight who is speaking to me.
“You have been called here to be part of an experiment…Sort of at least. You have been chosen to try out captured Gremlin weapons and gear, the ones you see before are the ones you will be trying. Your job, should you accept it, will be very important, but I know that you are a brave and can handle thi…Ugh!”
The “Ugh!” was the knight being nicked by a zapper that a scientist was holding.
“Tell him the darned truth, Endo! *Sigh* What we are basically saying kid, is that you have been picked as a guinea pig to try out Gremlin gear that could malfunction at any time. We picked you only because you are practically a nobody, so there is no significant damage done if you get hurt in any way, Capish?”
I stare at him, flabbergasted at whate he just said. How could someone say that? My hatred and anger begin to raise, but I shove them both done with a swallow.
“Sir, even though you disrespect me, I will take what you have to offer, no matter the risk. Even though I am a nobody, I am not afraid to die.”
In all actuality I am absolutely terrified, but this is the only way to make a name for myself. The scientist walks over to the table and begins to explain the gear
“A wise choice on your part. Anyway, back to work. As you can see, we have numerous things. This here is the Mask of Seerus himself, and this is his personal hammer. Before you ask, we had a group of Class-A strikers attempt a capture mission. They failed in capturing Seerus, but they managed in stealing numerous of his personal items. Also, this is the Darkfang Shield, taken off of the back of a Gremlin in Depth 27. As you can plainly see, this is all higher class gear, so you cannot wear your flak jacket anymore. Instead, the HQ will supply you with a Final Flourish and a Skolver Coat. Endo will take you to the armory now, but, do you have any questions?”
I shake my head, this is all a bit too much for a recruit.
“Excellent, Endo, please take him away, oh, and don’t forget your gear, Ice.”
I grab my gear and begin to follow Endo out when I notice the tattoo upon his right arm. Citius Caedimus, swiftly we strike, the motto of the Class-A Strikers. When I see this, a question springs into my mind.
“Endo, were you one of the strikers who captured the gear?”
“I was, although, don’t think of it as an easy picnic, it was one of the hardest things I have done.”
“What was it like? I bet it was full of adventure! Could I meet the other members of the squad?”
At this statement, Endo froze and slowly turned to face me.
“Don’t ever bring up my squad again. There are things in this world that are known, that can be learned, and that never should have happened. Don’t ask about the things that never should have happened. Now follow me.”
I follow him outside where the sun is beginning its decent into the horizon. As I walk, I begin to notice others pointing at my hammer, and I cannot help but feel pride in my mighty weapon. I follow Endo into the armory where he is already going through numerous skolver coats. He throws me one that looks my size and is obviously used.
“Put it on, it should fit like a Wolver Coat, just with a higher advancement of technology and defense. And finally, here is the Flourish you were promised. It is made with a more expensive type of metal that is extremely light but also very tough. So now you can deal damage in elemental, piercing, and normal. After researching for a couple of days, the scientist discovered that the hammer deals very strongly in elemental attacks, so use it wisely.”
“This is so much awesome stuff! Thank you so much Endo. Quick question though, should there be a blood stain on my skolver coat?”
The blood stain was rather noticeably, considering it covers the entire chest of the coat.
“The blood stain means that you are wearing the coat of a deceased warrior. You should wear it proudly….Wait, that blood stain…”
Endo’s giant figure suddenly freezes again, and I watch as his fingers curl into fists.
“I never expected them to recover that coat…How did they recover that? Why would they not tell me?! Little one, go now and practice with your new gear. Leave now.”
As I turn to run out the door I see him throw up into a nearby bucket. I turned to help him, but he drew his blade and shouted at me to flee the premises. I needed no second bidding. There’s obviously more about Endo than anyone is letting on, and he seems to be struggling with his past. Nonetheless, Endo is to come second. To the skirmish area I shall go.

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 11:12
#1
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
Chapter 2 :D

Chapter 2

As I walk toward the coliseum I wonder what kind of fighters I will be facing, and will I even stand a chance?Before I received my new weapons,I was just in Teir 1,the lowest of the teirs. As I approach the skirmish area,the coordinator of the day asks me my name,weapon arsenal,and which Teir I wish to be in.

“Hypothetically speaking,if I had these weapons,which Teir would I be in?I just received these as a gift and have no idea where I should practice with them in the skirmish arena.”

“Well,since you are fighting with a Final Flourish,a Skolver Armor,and some weird looking hammer and mask,you will be in Teir 3. There is a team getting ready now,if you hurry,you can join them.”

I quickly thank him and rush off to join the team. When I get closer I hear a knight on the blue team calling for a volunteer to join for this round,and I speedily offer to help out this round. The knight looks at me with a raised eyebrow.

“Hmmm,well,I am guessing this is your first time in Teir 3 Lockdown,might I say to you,welcome. Just log your name into the computer and meet us next to the gate to the arena. Hurry,you only have 30 seconds.”

I rush over the computer and quickly type my name into it,and then I grab a booster pack and join my team next to the gate. The countdown hits the 8 minute mark and the gates fly open,allowing our entire squad to rush out,heading for the points in which they hoped to capture. As I ignite my striker pack I am thrown against the wall, apparently I am still new at trying these. I pull out my hammer and begin to maneuver my way around the bushes to the nearest point. When I arrive I see a red fighter in Vog Cub armor heading straight for me. I prepare for his attack and draw back my hammer to strike,but he does something unexpected. Instead of charging me straight on,he curves around my hammer and begins to attack me in a circular motion. The next instance I am on the ground,out of the game for 20 seconds.

I hear a voice in my earpiece.

“Ice,that was terrible. You were given that hammer to use,not as a decoration. I guess it was too much for you to handle. That knight ran circles around you. Finish this round and meet me in the training.”

I grimace,Endo did not sound pleased with my performance. When the round ended I shamefully left quickly,but I did manage to get a look at the scoreboard. My entire team had managed to score over 9000 damage,but I had done a measly 576.

When I arrived at the training hall I searched for a back entrance,but found none. Thought begin to run through my head,“Why can’t I fight?Why am I so scared of Endo?Why can’t I enter the training hall through the main entrance?” I sigh,there is not a different entrance. I open the door to the training hall and walk in. To my surprise, I cannot see Endo anywhere;perhaps he had somewhere to be and could not meet. I hear the door close behind me and turn to see Endo barring them.

“Endo,what are you doing?!”

He doesn’t answer;I slowly back up until I feel a wall hit my back. He begins to walk toward me,gradually drawing his Leviathan blade from its sheath.

“Draw your weapon,defend yourself, if you dare.”

With that he charges me,raising his blade above his head. I swiftly draw my flourish and dive to one side,feeling the wind from the blade pass my head. I land off balance and raise my shield in time to stop his back-hand stroke that sends me reeling backwards. He sheathes his sword and comes at me with his fists;I attempt to poke him,but he traps my blade under his boot and does an open palm strike to my face, which forces me to drop my blade. I am tumble backwards I see an energy orb from a Polaris heading straight for me,how could he be so fast?I attempt to raise my shield but am to slow and I feel energy coursing through my body.

I feel his body slam against mine as he drives me against the wall. My eyes are beginning to close,but I finally see my chance. Reaching down to his belt my hand finds the trigger to the Polaris. I pull it and the shock orb drives us both apart,tossing him across the room and pinning me against the wall again. I draw my hammer and swing once at him,but he is out of reach. He begins to stand up,drawing his blade again when I go for a backhanded swing. The unexpected occurs;the rockets on the hammer suddenly ignite,flying out of my hand into the face of the rising Endo. I fall to the ground,my arm dislocated and pain overwhelming me. The darkness that follows is the most welcoming aspect of this day.

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 14:11
#2
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
chapter 3

Chapter 3

“…You what?! You locked yourself in a training hall and made him fight you?!”

“He needed it,you should have seen him battle the Vog Cub in the skirmish,it made me quiver.”

“Endo,you must be patient with him,you know he is only a recruit that was given powerful tools.”

I slowly open my eyes to see who is reprimanding Endo. I sit up,stunned,it is Feron! The sudden movement causes me to grimace and let out a grunt of pain,which causes both knights to turn abruptly. I try to sit myself up gently with my arms,but find that my right is in a caste. I then realize that I am in a infirmary bed,not as a guest but as a patient. I see Feron studying my face,but when I make eye contact he looks away.

“How are you feeling?”

“Not to good,how long do I have to stay in the infirmary?”

“We’ll have to ask the doctors,but it would be good if you up and about in two days,we need you to continue your experiments with the Gremlin weapons. In order for you to fully achieve the potential of the weapons,I am placing you in isolation with intense training. Endo will oversee your training personally.”

At hearing this,Endo glances my way with a look that simply terrifies me.

“Ummmm,Sir?Is there someone else who could train me until I am better,and then Endo could train me?”

“That is what is going to happen,Ice,he is overseeing your training,only occasionally training you personally.”

“Oh,then who will be…Thank you,Sir!”

Endo and Feron stand up,salute,and then leave. As I sit in silence I wonder what kind of training I would go through,and why was I to be put into isolation?For the next two days I reflect upon those questions and try to regenerate my strength. At this time,I can wait for the future.

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 22:27
#3
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
Chapter 4

Chapter 4

My eyes snap open,alert and awake. It is one minute till 4,and the trainer is already yelling at me. I swiftly and silently stand up,stretch,and begin my 10 mile run. As I exit my small camp I caste a final glance of disdain at my trainer,then I turn and continue my journey up the mountain side. This is the third month of my isolated training,and I have improved greatly. I have been trained in all variations of weapons and guns,and the hammer I have mastered on my own.

The schedule Endo has me under is simple: 10 mile run at 4,breakfast at 5,skirmish training until lunch,which is at 12. The 20 mile obstacle course follows lunch,and it is mandatory that I am back at 2:30. Strategy lecture and demonstration occurs after the course,then dinner. After dinner is the weight section,then lights out.

As I approach a ridge along the path I pull out my hammer and swing once,and then I allow the rockets to thrust me over the gap. I look at my hammer,such a sturdy and reliable weapon. One month ago the scientist took back the shield and mask,but I have increased my arsenal immensely since then. I now have a set of armor to counter each element and enemy type. I am always tired;I never expected that becoming fighter could be so tumultuous.

When I arrive back at camp I begin to devour the ration pack that is set out for me.

“Ice.”

“Hmm?Can’t you wait until after breakfast?I only get this once a day you know.”

“Ice,look at me.”

I look up and to my surprise Endo is standing before me. In all my three months of training,he has only appeared trice,so this visit is unexpected.

“What can I do for you Endo?”

“Ice,I am here to inform you that we have decided to allow you back into public. Your training here has come to an end,but it will continue in Haven.”

“Haven,Haven…I’ve never been to Haven.”

“I know. You must begin your journey immediately if you wish to reach it before nightfall. Your new trainer will locate you once you reach Haven. There are three arenas that you must go through before you reach your destination,so leave now.”

“Whatever,thanks for letting me enter the public,even if it took you a while.”

Endo doesn’t respond,good,that shut him up. I pack up my stuff and grab my weapons. Ever since my Polaris incident with Endo I have made sure all of my armor and helmets have a maximum shock resistance. I done my gear and begin my journey through the thick forest. As I follow the path I catch glimpses of wolvers and chromos,then I see the arena before me. I enter the first one and quickly dispatch all enemies that appeared. The second arena was just as simple,but a surprise came in the middle of the third. Instead of Gremlin Trees appearing,four Trojans spawned with a horde of Mecha Dnights. I pause for a split second,and then move into instant action. I slash at the back of the different Trojans with my flourish,then switch weapons and behead numerous Mecha Knights with my Voltedge. I manage to slaughter two Trojans and the majority of the Mecha Knights when suddenly I am struck from behind and dashed against the wall. I glance up in time to see a giant sword descending upon me,and I am smashed to the ground,unable to move. The Trojan who smashed me meanders away,searching for more enemies. I was done for,there were just too many of them…I had failed.

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 22:35
#4
Mzculet's picture
Mzculet
What a fast typer ._. I read

What a fast typer ._.
I read first 2 chapters! Anyways Great story!

Thu, 11/08/2012 - 23:08
#5
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
thanks!

The only sad thing is I copied this from Microsoft word, and in the process some things got sctewed up (no space between a comma and the word that follows). When I get enough time is hopefully I can fix it.

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 19:39
#6
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
Chapter5

Chapter 5

I am utterly surrounded,there is no hope. Suddenly I see a message appear on my monitor. It reads,I know you failed,and I expected you too. I am coming to retrieve you, ~Endo. Great,the one person who I am trying to impress is coming to revive me. I feel as if I could die from embarrassment. A blinding light flashes and Endo appears before me, but the Mecha Knights and Trojans see him also. He is wearing a striker pack that appears to have a moded booster.

As the Trojans charge he sets down a Shivermist Buster Bomb and freezes each enemy within a 20 foot range. Endo then boosts around one of the frozen Trojans and attacks it viciously from behind. Purple combustion appears from the back of the horse warrior as Endo slays it,then he draws his Voltedge and beheads numerous Mecha Knights. Abruptly the last Trojan charges him,catching him off guard. It bashes him against the wall,stunning him and throwing him to the ground. The Trojan raises his blade,preparing to bring the might piece of iron upon my trainer. Endo quickly activates his booster,tossing himself up into the air. While in the air,he pulls out a Callahan and punctures a hole through the head of the Mohawk head of the horse. He lands as his feet as his enemy topples to the ground,then he approaches me and sends a wave of energy that reactivates my muscles. I stand up.

“Thank you,Endo,for reviving me. I was in a sort of pickle there.”

“Hmmm,you’re welcome;now let’s continue to Haven,it is just five miles away now.”

We begin to hike through the forest, and soon I see outposts that belong to the Spiral Order.

“Endo,I’ve never been to Haven,do you have any advice?I am kind of nervous…”

“I know,there are some things you should know though. First,there are numerous snobs in Haven that should be humiliated in Lockdown whenever you get the chance. Second,there are many beggars in Haven,do not give them your gear, whatever you do. Thirdly,there are many guilds in Haven, choose which one you want to be in, but choose wisely. The rest you will simply learn from experience.”

We walk in silence until we reach the bridge that is the entry way to Haven. Here, Endo pauses.

“This is where I depart as I have other duties at the outposts. Your new trainer will find you here,good luck to you,and I will see you again.”

With that,Endo walks off, leaving me in silence next to the bridge of destiny. An idea occurs to me then,and I swiftly change into my gear that was first issued to me: Flak Jacket, Crescent Helm, Proto Sword, Gun, and Shield. I am going to make an entrance into Haven like none have ever seen…A majestic appearance.

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 19:43
#7
Hungran's picture
Hungran
Hai

Hai Wrenchi

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 20:38
#8
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
Hai Hungran

Hai, How is you?

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 23:45
#9
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
Accepting apps

I am going to use two for my story, so make your character interesting! (I also need the female that Ice falls in love with)

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 06:59
#10
Topoyozada's picture
Topoyozada
Name:

Name: Topoyozada
Bio: Rilval-ish, Jokey and loves Danger. IS a champion and is a half-gremlin and half-spiralarain( go to teasure vault my life as a hybrid for reference)
Personaility: Loves food and hates bombs. Loves wolvers and mewkat and even has a pet Vog Cub named Quicksilver.

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 08:05
#11
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
@Topoyozada

Thanks!

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 13:58
#12
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Char Prof:

Name: Sophia Serapheart (pronounced Seraph-heart)

Bio: Was born on The Skylark years before the crash. By the time the Knights reached Cradle, she was of age for working within the Spiral Knights. She quickly gained ranks due to her skill as a linguist, which opened up vital alliances with the Gremlins of Emberlight. She stopped at Knight Elite, and refuses to do anymore missions concerning Gremlins. However, she still remains as one of the most prestigious of knights, and excels at the use of firearms.

Loadout: Sunset Set; Master Blaster; Blackhawk; Wise Owlite Shield;
Costume Loadout: Spiral Tailed Helm (Hallow Glasses, Ribbon); Seraphic Mail (Shadow Valkyrie Wings)

Notable things: One of the several linguists sent to build alliances with Emberlight Gremlins. Loves Gremlins, and refuses to harm any of them. An adept fighter with bombs and swords, although her real skill is with her guns. Particularly curious about the anatomy of Snarbolaxes, and the social structures of Jelly Kings and Queens.

You can use her later, but I preferred if you didn't get her killed like a Mary Sue.

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 11:39
#13
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
@ Vinnydime

I like this character a lot, thanks!

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 15:20
#14
Powernexus's picture
Powernexus
App

Name: Hex
Bio: A spiral knight who hates gremlins, Mainly Emberlight gremlins. also dislikes greavers, and slags

Notes: Good at swords and guns, ok at bombs
Armor: Snarbolax cap + coat
Weapons: Sentenza | Gran Faust | BTB | Triglav
Trinkets: Elite Quick Strike | Penta-Heart Pendent
Shield: Omega Shell
You can change the Equipment if you want :)
By the way i would not mind if he gets killed :)
(dont kill him too soon :) )

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 20:41
#15
Sergeantwrench's picture
Sergeantwrench
@Powernexus

Me like this guy. Should see him pretty soon in the story...Depending on how it goes.

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 11:57
#16
Newbek's picture
Newbek
Application

Name: Newb
Bio: A nice knight who like's peaceful creature's. He recently adopted a young Snarbolax,which averagly fight's,but he's very good at finding thing's :).
Notes; Good at bombing and bashing,but bad at gunning.
Armor Snarby Hat/Skolver Coat
Weapons: Dark Retribution and Valiance
Shield:BTB Shield
Pet Info:
Dodging: 4
Fighting: 5
Intel:8.5

This is all you need to know. Just one rule:

Dont use Snarb alot. Wish you good writing,
The Newb.

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 18:49
#17
Hexidac's picture
Hexidac
Application

Name: Valon

Loadout: Snarbolax Cap, Vog Cub Coat, Acheron, Voltaic Tempest, Recon Corps standard issue cloaking device.

Costume Loadout: Arcane Salamander Mask, Snarbolax Coat (Shadow Dragon Wings, Crest of Winter, Snowfall Aura)

Bio: Valon, while excelling in training as a scout and infiltrator, never felt very comfortable knowing that his skills would make him stand out from the other recon trainees. Not wanting to be well known to the public eye, he intentionally sabotaged his records and decided to play the part of a lazy slacker. He came out of training known as the worst of the bunch.

Personality: On the surface, Valon appears to be lazy and sleepy. Underneath, he is calm and collected, and will not hesitate to strike down enemies of the Spiral Order. Many foes have fallen for his act, and paid for it with a blade through the torso. He is a brilliant tactician and a very lethal swordsmen.

Powered by Drupal, an open source content management system