okay, so I was wondering If my story is wiki worthy so pls. tell me what you think!
The characters are real players but i changed arsenal and other stuff. I mean no offense...
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Tue, 12/11/2012 - 14:01
Tue, 12/11/2012 - 18:52
#2
Put whatever stories you want on the wiki.
Just, your story switches between third person and first person in some parts. Just a tad confusing.
Tue, 12/11/2012 - 23:31
#3
Hmmmm Interesting
Hmmmm Interesting
Wed, 12/12/2012 - 08:36
#4
:D
thanks for the feedback
Thu, 12/13/2012 - 09:53
#5
It was interesting indeed
It was interesting indeed especially with lots of characters as Artistbma said its kinda confusing you should focus on one character and add some details about the others from time to time.I would really like to read more chapters please and who is the writer,is it you?If yes then add me in the game i might help you in the story my ign is Lord-Raedon.
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