Spiral Knights - Techies did a 'oops'

Techies did a 'oops'

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Fri, 01/04/2013 - 15:55

Psychodestroyer

Biggest gripe is the "Before the Phantoms will awaken and stalk you!"

Smaller might-be-mistakes are a slight overuse of the word 'Soul' in the same sentence and lack of a semicolon after "Graveyards are an unnatural place".

Rewritten, like this:

'Graveyards are an unnatural place; a world between worlds where lost souls gather, hungry for the life of any being that passes though. You must hurry and find the exit before the Phantoms awaken and stalk you!'

Discuss?

Fri, 01/04/2013 - 17:15

Dukeplatypus

The guard blocking the tier

The guard blocking the tier gate in front of the subtowns (heh, remember the clockworks?) has a grammatical mistake as well. I sent a bug report on it a while ago, but I don't think it's been fixed yet.

Sat, 01/05/2013 - 01:35

Acid-Snow-Wiki

Dude

I noticed that waaay back (as did most of us, probably): http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=46198246

Dated August 17, 2011. It is a bit embarrassing for OOO, but hey - nothing beats feeling superior to a game developer.

Edit: In addition to Psychodestroyer's findings, there is also the fact that "Graveyards" is plural while "an unnatural place" is singular. The clause should read, "Graveyards are unnatural places."

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Techies did a 'oops'