FANFIC Infection Of Haven. Now also accepting apps.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 07:25
This is an fanfic about an plague. Also i like to hear feedbacks.
INTRO:
A crazy knight called Ferox quickly detonate his latest invention: The Infector. The Infector spreads a highly dangerous virus that can turn a knight's mind into crazy and mad. The only one who is immune is those who have a gremlin's blood and constructs. As a result, almost all sentient creatures in Cradle becomes crazy. However, a knight called Bolt got a injection of a gremlin's blood, and he decided to find the cure of the infection.
Notes:
*The main protagonist and villain are immune because they have a dose of a gremlin's blood in their body.
*The monsters are in the surface of Cradle because they ran out of food.
*The clockworks is now a mining site.
*The biome in Cradle is far more varied.
Now have fun and if you have a feedback please give it to me.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 08:26
#2
Capitalization Nazi has a bad grammar.
Yes my grammar sucks [cog].
But Quakeman's case is different, he's not use the shift key. At least i capitalizazing my sentence.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 08:48
#3
Still, what gives you the right to pass judgement on other people's capitalization if your own isn't 100% perfect? Do you see anyone else complaining about his habits after EVERY SINGLE POST HE MAKES?!
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 10:27
#4
*cough*CaptializationNaziforgottocapitalize'i'*cough*
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 15:23
#5
Come on now...
Let's not turn this into a cesspool of grammar nazism. I mean, it's a fanfic thread, so how about we keep it that way?
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 15:34
#6
We're just pointing out how hypocritical he's being.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 16:31
#7
/sigh
*You're
^ It's just you, Larry #2.
Now, can we get on with this?
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 16:51
#8
It's your... not you're...
It's your... not you're...
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 17:00
#9
Wait whu???
You're = You + Are, right?
am I wrong?!
Anyhow, it's actually *I'm just pointing out how hypocritical he's being.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 17:06
#10
How about we just graveyard this?
WTF i just plan to make a fanfic, not some grammar nazi discussion thread.
Love how a hypocrite complains about a hypocrite.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 17:12
#11
Oh I thought you were
Oh I thought you were correcting this: "You get on Quakeman's case for not capitalizing when your grammar is just as bad."
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 17:18
#12
OH!
LOL now that one was out of my sight.
Thu, 02/07/2013 - 20:01
#13
Hey guys
I was hoping that you lot would see the action in my thread... and trust me, it's a lot worse than grammar Nazis. I am sorry to anyone who is unnerved by what is in it. (No, there's nothing perverted or NSFW, no rule 34 or 63, but... it's BAD.)
Fri, 02/08/2013 - 00:52
#14
Wait...
How was I being a hypocrite? I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes in any of my posts...
Fri, 02/08/2013 - 01:09
#15
@Unstable
Look at Artistbma's post.
Also i've make this fanfic while being sleepy so i'm sorry about my grammar.
BTW how to link stuff?
Fri, 02/08/2013 - 01:16
#16
No,
He was correcting Vinnydime. I never even typed the word "you're" (Oh wait, I just did).
Let's just forget about this silly argument now.
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/filter/tips You can either just post the whole link or do it like this
Fri, 02/08/2013 - 05:02
#17
@Unstable
Mmhmm, nothing was
@Unstable
Mmhmm, nothing was wrong with your post, I just thought Vinny was correcting it incorrectly. But he was correcting something else.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 11:41
#18
This is the shortest fanfic post of all time. Chapter 1.
NOTE: I seerusly recommend you to read this post while sleeping. Also my brain cells are killed so my grammar is getting worse every day.
First Day
"Where's everyone?" Bolt shouts loudly.
Bolt wanders around in Haven, but he's still can't find anything. He quickly enters the training hall, hoping for someone. But as he enters the training hall, he saw a bloody knight's corpse.
He's disgusted by the bloody knight's corpse, so he decides to clean the blood off. Meanwhile, he heard a knight-like voices. He then thinks the training hall is haunted.
He quickly draws his Callahan to the source of voice. He silently walks to the source of the voice.
However, the source of voice reveals itself as a crazy knight and quickly leaped to Bolt. Bolt quickly shoots his Callahan to the crazy knight, hoping it to calm down.
But instead of calming down, the crazy knight punched Bolt's face. Bolt have no choices but to stab the crazy knight's stomach with his Sudaruska.
( Since I run out of characters, I accept apps for now. )
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 11:41
#19
Two things.
Why couldn't you
Two things.
Why couldn't you have used this grammar in the Roleplay?
And.
Who would see a dead body and decide to clean up blood rather than get the authorities?
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 11:46
#20
I'm a hypocrite.
First because English is not my native language. If you can teach me I'll appreciate it.
Second because he doesn't want the authorities to get into his business.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 11:48
#21
Alright.
The chapter was good
Alright.
The chapter was good I guess.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 12:05
#22
I'll just drop this link here
since I'm not just someone who rages on how hypocritical people are.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 12:22
#23
@Unstable
How about we'll just agree to forget this argument?
I'm sick of people that post things like that in an completely unrelated topic.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 12:28
#24
Post 16
"Let's just forget about this silly argument now."
Way ahead of you.
Sat, 02/09/2013 - 12:33
#25
Okay, just make sure to not
Okay, just make sure to not post it again because if you read my newer post, it doesn't whines Quakeman's spelling.
Also after reading an idiotic suggestion post, my grammar is getting worse.
Wed, 02/13/2013 - 04:16
#26
Chapter 2
A Bad Luck.
While he hates the authorities, he thinks he have no other choices and the authorities could solve this. However, while he called the authorities using his comlink, the comlink is jammed.
"What the f***? Why does the authorities exist when I don't need them and now they don't exist when I need them!" He swears to his comlink.
After that, he quickly leaves the training hall. While leaving the training hall, he saw Feron and now he seems to be a member of a cult. Feron seems to be different than the other knight in the training hall and seems to be smarter than them.
"All hail the Infector! The wise, powerful, and smart! Death to all opposers of the Infector!" Feron loudly shouts.
Since this marks Feron has an infection in his head, and the Infector could be the source of this Infection, Bolt quickly runs to Feron.
"Sorry sir, but since the Infector seems to infect your mind, I greatly oppose him." Bolt loudly shouts to Feron.
"The Infector is the cure of every diseases! And since you oppose him, you must die!" Feron silently whispers to Bolt.
Bolt quickly slaps Feron face, but Feron dodged Bolt's slap and fires his Magma Driver to Bolt's body, burning Bolt's body. Bolt quickly kicks Feron and places his Nitrome under Feron, resulting a quick kill.
A heavy rain comes, extinguishing his burned body but also signing a bad event will happen. Since Bolt is fed up by the world's madness, he decided to go into the arcade, hoping that at least a friendly face comes to help him.
((Sorry for bad grammar.))
You get on Quakeman's case for not capitalizing when your grammar is just as bad.