Hello! Welcome to my first fan-fiction attempt, to see if I'm any good at it. Any criticizing is appreciated, but please keep in mind that i don't have much experience. Also, there is no misspelling in the title.

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Jin.
I got off the elevator with my team. James was the recon of the group loaded with a Shivermist Buster, an Argent Peacemaker, the divine set, an owlite shield, and a good head filled with the most devilish of tactics. Sarah was the striker, equipped with the mercurial set (with a swift-strike buckler), a combuster, and her favorite dread venom striker, she could kill almost anything and have a quick soda before we even go the chance to attack. There was also Vern, the leader with the most balanced set. He had with him a vog cub cap and skolver coat (although he has a chapeau and tabard of the violet rose as costume), a fearless rigadoon and supernova for weapons, and the crest of Almire. Then there was me, Jin, the guardian. I had my Ironmight plate lines, my leviathan blade and nitronome, so i was suited for anything.
We we're sent by the spiral order to investigate an increase of Trojans in this dark city. James ran ahead to check out the area like he always does wile me, Vern, and Sarah checked our loadouts. When we we're ready we hurried to catch up with James. After awhile I realized he hadn't reported back in a little bit, but he had done his work nicely, the swarms of fiends we're damaged and lower, but strangely we hadn't seen a single Trojan in almost the entire floor. However, when we got to the final room we saw why.
There was a ARMY of Trojans, at least 20, there, and James was having a hard time placing a single bomb or shoot a single shot, let alone communicate to us. Sarah quickly ran in, burning and poisoning all that she could come close to. Vern ran in, poking them in the back and pushing away the ones posing a threat, taking a few out. I ran in, I took one out,but was immediately cornered after that and slammed behind some vines and knocked out.
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Vern.
After a long fight, the last Trojan went down (that one almost got me, I've got to thank Sarah for that.) and we noticed that Jin was gone. "James, do you know where Jin went?" He responded "No actually, I don't." "Sarah?" "No." she sounded nervous. "Maybe he went to the elevator?" We started to the elevator, but when we left the room, the door slammed shut behind us. "He must have been called to haven." I said hopefully, but I had my doubts as we stepped on the elevator to haven.
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How is it so far? Good? Bad? Okay-but-you-can-do-better-by-doing-so-and-so? Please also know that this story isn't done, and I'll update AT LEAST once every week.