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Betrayal: [A story] Accepting character apps.

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Wed, 03/20/2013 - 05:31
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian

So....... I know I've been making some Fan-Fictions and dumping those lately....... Well, I really haven't been myself those few days, been hard on myself, and I feel sick. More sick than I've ever felt before. So..... sorry guys. (For those worried little people out there: I'm fine now, thanks. For those who weren't worried: Shame on you!) Well, this is a story about this guy...... who goes this place....... then has these friends....... GAH! Read the story yourself! DO IT!

Link to Betrayal: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WzkNJA8qfvuMOTEVPXJp-7OVFojYl7IUcpnr...

Anyway, I need some Applications to get this story stared. I made the prologue but that doesn't mean a friggin' thing. So...... Apps please?

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Age: (Optional)
Bio:
Personality:
Loadout (Optional: I don't think Monsters might have loadouts so......)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------List of applications I have accepted before and now:

Fripper: Gremlin shadowmaster M
Sin: Freelance bounty-hunter M
Mynah: Wolver/Snarbolax F
Luke Ira: Freelance Bounty Hunter M
Orion: Spiral Order Bomber M

Thats all I got now. So... Apps please!

Fri, 04/05/2013 - 05:45
#1
Ashdahero
Application

Hi so i saw this and i wanna put in an application if that's ok :D
so here it is XD

Name: Ashdahero (call me Ash XD)
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age:15
Bio: Ash is a boy who doesn't take life that seriously so his dad signed him up to become a knight at a young age. he hated his dad for that and decided to neglect him completely. on a mission to search for a new planet Ash Crash-landed on the planet Cradle and was stuck there ever since.
Personality: Ash is a very laid back guy. doesn't really see the importance or seriousness in situations. he also seems to get in to ridiculously dangerous situations and brings his friends and/or party members into it.
Loadout: Voltage, Dual Argent Peacemakers, Polaris and Blitz Needle. He wears Divine Veil and Azura Guardian amour and his shield is Grey Owlite Shield

Wed, 03/20/2013 - 14:31
#2
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
hm...should I

I might try a little bit of experimenting. How would you like to put Tamara into your story?

Wed, 03/20/2013 - 14:33
#3
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
hm...should I

I might try a little bit of experimenting. How would you like to put Tamara into your story?

Wed, 03/20/2013 - 19:55
#4
Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
Application

Name: Torrem "Vox" Mutili

Gender: Male

Race: Gremlin

Age:???

Bio: An anceint old man who seems to have lost more than a few bronze bolts over the years, he has fought alongside the knights during Operation: Crimson Hammer, and claims to have seen the fall of the warmaster personally. He may not have been the strongest or the fastest warriors during his time, but he learned how to use his hammer for more than just repairs. However, he's always had a way with machines. As the years went by, he worked to perfect his craft, and can repair even the most complex machines with ease. Unfortunatly, when the spiral order tried to recruit him into enchanting, he outright refused, calling it an "art, not a skill".

Personality: Many belive him to be mad, as he seems to argue with invisable persons when left alone. Although almost always aggittated, or angry, he's never hostile or confronting; he's reguarded as a mentor, and never jokes around. He's seen the worst war has to offer, leaving him with a sort of detatched demeanor. It's in his work that he seems to find peace. And sometimes, if only for a moment, a smile can be seen on his old, scarred face, right as he finishes a project.

Loadout: Standard Issue Thwack Hammer, Various tools, Misc spare parts, and a small medicine pouch

Wed, 03/20/2013 - 19:55
#5
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Hazardous-Anomaly
Application

Name: Torrem "Vox" Mutili

Gender: Male

Race: Gremlin

Age:???

Bio: An anceint old man who seems to have lost more than a few bronze bolts over the years, he has fought alongside the knights during Operation: Crimson Hammer, and claims to have seen the fall of the warmaster personally. He may not have been the strongest or the fastest warriors during his time, but he learned how to use his hammer for more than just repairs. However, he's always had a way with machines. As the years went by, he worked to perfect his craft, and can repair even the most complex machines with ease. Unfortunatly, when the spiral order tried to recruit him into enchanting, he outright refused, calling it an "art, not a skill".

Personality: Many belive him to be mad, as he seems to argue with invisable persons when left alone. Although almost always aggittated, or angry, he's never hostile or confronting; he's reguarded as a mentor, and never jokes around. He's seen the worst war has to offer, leaving him with a sort of detatched demeanor. It's in his work that he seems to find peace. And sometimes, if only for a moment, a smile can be seen on his old, scarred face, right as he finishes a project.

Loadout: Standard Issue Thwack Hammer, Various tools, Misc spare parts, and a small medicine pouch

Wed, 03/20/2013 - 22:06
#6
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Need extra hands?

Name: Silver
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 17
Bio: A petty thief in his childhood when his family ties are severed. He fends for himself, and he cleans his name when he joined the Order. He often likes to listen to music and bases the rhythm of his attacks with the beat of the song/music his gauntlet plays. Currently, he wanders Cradle in silent training, seldom speaking to anyone but himself.
Personality: Silent, laid-back, pretty serious about everything. His last smile... well, that's another story.
Loadout: Final Flourish, Chapeau and Tabard of the Coral Rose, Acheron and Crest of Almire

Thu, 03/21/2013 - 03:33
#7
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian
Thanks all!

I'll post a chapter by the day after tommorow.

Fri, 03/22/2013 - 18:36
#8
Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
Interactive?

Will those who applied be able to join in on the story, or did you just need insparation? :/

Fri, 03/22/2013 - 20:08
#9
Cobalterian's picture
Cobalterian
They

They will be in the story, but they are for me to write about. Your bio and personailty will be made by you, though.

Fri, 03/29/2013 - 08:45
#10
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
Wow

I'll post a chapter by the day after tommorow

You are very very bad at keeping promises Topo

Fri, 03/29/2013 - 09:44
#11
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

Oh my lord...

I don't even wanna put in another app if they're not going to be used.

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