to those that dont know or wonder what this is, i will post a SK story i was working on for a month now. it will folow the life of one knight.. his family, friends, his advature and his fate... whit that said lets begin. (if you see this "*" before word that means the voice is talking.. like naration, whats happening and so on)
Chapter 1, The Family
"mechanical sounds" *our knight walks.. slowly... he trys to open his eyes and he sees the steam.. all cinds of mechanical gear... but he quickly closes his eyes, and his sight was blur.. you can say that he is sleepy... he stops for the moment, and he hears the voice calling to him... he turns around to see a masive amounts of might quickly coming towards him..
"wake up... wake up you sleepy head" *a woman calls him as he opens his eyes. "common you will be late, Soul and Nag are waiting for you at the hall"
upon hearing that the knight quickly jumps from the bed and shakes his head a bit ">< dang it, why havent i woke up earlyer.." he rushes to the bathroom and looks himself in the mirror as he starts brushing his hair. "hurry up.. hurry up.." he talks to himself. the knight had long brown-red hair, red eyes and a ted like cape around his neck.. tho the cape looked like it was torn apart or cut off by something, it wasnt long eather.. as he finished he quickly ties up his hair and rushes out. the woman said "take care sweety ^^" as he runs away.
upon leaving his place he is rushing trough the hall of some sorts, many dors and other rooms are hereand there isnt much light, many computer screens and control panels are there too. after reaching the elevator and stops to catch his breath... a familiar face shows up. "hey there budy off to meet Soul and your friend?" the knight nods and the elevator door closes. the man was quite tall, he had some sort of safety helmet and was carying tools and a large mettal part of some sort. "take care of soul little one, seams she has her sight on you" said the man laughing as they where nearing the exit. the knight rooled his eyes saying "ah comon stop whit that... every time i go to see her you start that talk..". the door opened, they left the elevator and upon parting away the man said "i just know a young couple when i see it" as he smiled.
the hall our knight was in was huge, and cool loking. it had a bright light coming from the wondows wich where wery tall, the decorations and tropheys where all ower the the place. knight stands, the statues of famous alpha sqad, one of best knights around. there where many people in the hall, each minding their own buisnins as the new day was rising. and there they where! a young blue girl whit long hair, she seamed angry from some reson. and the other guy, green colored knight, he was taller then the others, se seamed quite strong. he had a strange look in his eyes.. "sorry im late guys, i owerslept :/".. "again?" said the girl.. "do you know for how long we are waiting for you? -.-*" *ok she realy looks angry, seams like she is about to punch the knight "ah common relax Soul, xD you should be used to this by now" said the green night... the trio started walking towards one of windows. and they sit next to them.
"hm..." says the girl before takeing deep breath.. "whats wrong Soul" asked the green knight... "nothing Nag, just wondering what is out there.." upon saying that all of them look into the windows and now the bright light coming from them was no more.. they take a closer look to see the darknes.. the planets, the starts and many other woders of space... "i had another dream this night" said our knight. "that explains why you are late again, every time you dreem that strange dreams you are late" said the girl whit a smile "so what did you dreem this time?". knight takes a deep thought and starts explaining.. "im not sure it was so blur and hard to see, but i remember some strange machinery sounds.. everything was blury and there was some strange light behind me that swalowed me... then i woke up". the green night looked at him saying "yap, it gets starnger every time. wish i had dreams like that, sounds fun. anyway lets go. the alpha sqad will be in training sector soon. they where sopoust to talk about our future, the other will be there as well" and whit that said they left in hurry...
upon entering the huge hall the trio sees many treaning tools, old swords guns, many people clashing swords togeder and talking. lot of noise is heard in the background as they aproach the crowd. "they should be here" says the green knight. and soon after the 4 armored solders apear before the crowd. many start screaming, and yeling but soon they calm down. the knights looked incredible. armored in their cool armor, shields and wapons... "Eulcid, Grantz, Rulen and.." said green knight as the girl said the last name.. "and Parma, the knights of the alpha sqad ^^" she looked happy for a moment and quite exited as well. "they are the great sqad of Skylark eh" said our knight.. soon as the last of the crownd stoped talking, the knight in center.. Eulcid, starts talking. "Welcome everyone.. it is great to see a new generation of spiral knights... today we will talk about your future and what will await you as the spiral knight.. your duty and your life.. many of you knows us already but to those that dont we ar..." our knight quickly looks away as he felt something strange... he looked around but everything was normal, people talking about alpha... training.. and other.
"we are bound by our oath. we, guardians are the brothers and sisters and we are ones that will guard our ally to the wery end.. should enemy come too close it is our duty to protect our friends.. even whit our lives if that is asked from us" Grantz, the guardian of alpha sqad looked wery serious as he talked.. he worn a huge iron-like armor and he was only one whit helmet in his party. "recoon is a master of the battlefield" said Parma as she talked nervously.. "we are the shadow that lurks within every corner and we are the scouts in our misions. we are invisible, the enemy never sees us comming but you must alweys stay in contact whit your felow team members... the strategy for wining any battle must be planed, you canot foolishly rush into the claws of you enemy.."
our knight started to close his eyes.. he couldnt keep them open as much as he tryed.. from some reson he could not speek... he felt so tierd.. soon he was dreaming again, same dream.. blury mechanical gears... he turned around but this time there was no light.. insted he felt pain on his face.. moments leater he woke up whit Soul saying "no sleeping ';..;'" he figured she punched him to wake him up.. and as the where about to leave (talk was nearing its end) the Eulcid said one final sentence.. "remeber my children, you must alweys chose your path.. should anything happend to you on your travels, you alweys have a choise, and remember that sacrefice, is a choise you make... loss and death is a choise made for you. goodbye.."
as the trio walked back to the hall they talked about what happend and what they will chose, as the new generation of knight they are now old enough to start the training and start working for the spiral knights. they where given a chanse to become knights themselfs...
"i will become a guardian if i get a chanse to.." said Nag "sounds intresting.."
"im not sure what to chose yet... there are so many things i could be i just cant figure what is best for me.." said Soul
"and you Tear? what will you chose" they both said.
"im not sure im still thinking abouth the dream i had... i feal so tierd but i like guns.. so perhaps i will work whit them." our knight takes deep breath and says "im sory guys im just tierd from some reson... i will take a nap and meet up whit you leater"
"alright" they sad "see you leater" and as they parted away the knight went towards the elevator, quickly Nag apears saying he forgote to give him something. he draws a yelow like gun from out of nowhere and gives it to Tear. he looks suprised as he holds it " A STUN GUN? O.O where did you get this from? i thought it is forbiden to cary wapons around.. and.." Nag quickly silences him saying "keep it down before someone notices, i took a gun from training hall and though you might want it ^^ i also have a hatchet but its too huge to cary it around so i hiden it.. i will pick it up some other time.. well, Soul is waiting, see you leater" and he runs away... our knight still confused quickly hides gun and runs back to the elevator.. leater after he arives in his room he starts loking at it.. he acidently preses the triger and shots bulled breaking the glass of water on his desk. he quickly hids the gund under his pilow and pretends to sleep should anyone enter the room... and so he dreams again...
Although there are many spelling errors, and assuming you were typing fast, I'd say this story is a good start, and welcome to the world of Fanfics! The title was attractive and the content-- I can read well enough to understand, it was constructive. Good work! :D