Hello, I'm looking to sell a CTR Ver- Wait
What I mean is, I've been writing something in my spare time (meaning not very often). I don't do this for any other reason than to record the adventures that occur in my head.
You can find the story here. Let me warn you, this isn't a microfiction like a lot of fanfictions are; this is a work in progress, chaptered (novel style) story. Don't worry though, it's still pretty short at this point so it won't take you long.
I post it here for your feedback and/or your enjoyment. Please have a bit of both =]
Bound (fanfiction) - Feedback always appreciated
Fri, 04/12/2013 - 18:14
Sat, 04/13/2013 - 04:12
#2
^
As in it was short for a chapter or short for an entire story? It definitely isn't the entire story and as for the chapter length, dual-column writings tend to vary in that regard. But this is good; feedback is what I'm here for :0
Sat, 04/13/2013 - 09:54
#3
Well...
Yeah, chapter-wise. It would be better to just compile it all into one "Tale" like those massive Sherlock Holmes books do (You know, the Complete Collection ones that are like inches thick?)
Pretty much the shorter tales are divided, while the larger tales actually get to have chapters.
Sat, 04/13/2013 - 10:26
#4
Hmm
I've always liked chapter format for books/stories/things. It's good for premade starting and stopping points and the use of cliff-hangers without ending the storybookthing. I wasn't planning to make it short enough to be called a tale (or long enough to be called a book I suppose.) Technicalities, bleh
Sat, 04/05/2014 - 11:09
#5
Updated
Sat, 04/05/2014 - 11:09
#6
Good a double post >_>
Sat, 04/05/2014 - 13:54
#7
Wow...
That was pretty damned good. I wonder where this would go...
Sat, 04/05/2014 - 20:29
#8
Thanks for reading (again) and thank you for the praise :D
To be honest, I'm just as interested to see wherethe story goes as anyone. It's always a plus when an author is intregued by his own writings
The story (the first link) was pretty good, besides the fact that it was quite short for a double-column book format.