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Fri, 04/26/2013 - 12:21
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Thinslayer

PvP rules
Story link

Hello everyone!

This is my first experiment in collaborative fanfiction/roleplay. If you would like to participate, please write your character applications in this thread and, if they are accepted, you may begin writing in the above link. I have opened up the document for editing, so you can write at your leisure.

In order to edit the document, look at the link, replace "/pub" with "/edit" and begin writing. Let me know if there are any problems.

PvP rules are noted above.

In this story, Feron has been replaced by Lieutenant Serris, who is bent on opening the Core and gaining its power. The job of the players is either to assist him or stop him. In the process, the secrets of the Core may be revealed, and we will find out whether we even want the Core to be opened.

When providing a character application, please provide the following information:

Name:
Species:
Gender:
Faction:
Rank: (if applicable)
Appearance: (both as a Spiral Knight and as a human being)
Loadout:
Arsenal: (optional)
Picture: (optional)
Biography: (optional)

Do NOT post stories to this thread. All discussion and comments are to be put in this thread. All stories are to be written in the linked document.

You may begin!

Fri, 04/26/2013 - 12:39
#1
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Thinslayer
Character Applications!

Name: Serris
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Faction: Spiral Order
Rank: Lieutenant
Appearance: cobalt personal color, angry eyes, extra-tall height; bald head, aged face (~50), muscular build (like a boxer or wrestler), decorated azure Spiral uniform
Loadout: Azure Guardian Armor with prismatic Proto Crest, Cool Spiral Round Helm with Laurel, Aegis, Leviathan Blade, Valiance, Nitronome, 2 Penta-Heart Pendants
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Name: Dezna
Species: Human
Gender: Female
Faction: Puritans
Rank: Leader
Appearance: amber personal color, sultry eyes, normal height; long golden wavy hair, fair skin, angular face, battle scar on left cheek, athletic body, attractive face
Loadout: Silverhelm, Silvermail, Stone Tortoise, Cold Iron Carver, Silversix
Picture
Notes: The long feather in the above picture is supposed to be her hair tied up in a ponytail. It should be about thigh-length.

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 00:43
#2
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Callis-The-Wicked
App! :)

Name: Xalin
Gender: Male
Race: Sprite (Exiled)
Personality: In general? Not arrogant, but a complete and utter attractive flirt. He was exiled for his interest in battle, so he has a sort of flair for it.
Appearance: Wearing a hoodie looking much like the untainted night sky, with blue hair and eyes. He uses an axe, which doubles as a light green-glass blade with light green liquid stirring in it. The axe itself is completely black with blue decor on it's blade. He also uses something of a bomb to protect himself, dropping it and having it's gel expand to form a helpful barrier. He also uses arm coil guns, bright green metal wrapping around each of his arms and ending at the knuckles with bullet expellers.
Bio: Exiled now, Xalin spends his time lost in the Clockworks, trying to find his way out of...wherever he is.....

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 08:37
#3
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Thinslayer
@Seatus

Application accepted! You may begin writing. Let me know if you encounter any problems.

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 09:13
#4
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
App

Name:Hadi(later known as knight-Hadi, then legend-knight-hadi)
Gender: Male
Race: Spiral knight(exhiled vanguard, now a silent wanderer,in no way related to arkus)
Pefzsonality: Talks very less, shy around girls, silent most of the time and only speaks when spoken to.Exhiled for heing against feron's removal, has a rage mode(we'll find out later), experienced fighter and strategist always has a snipe companion with him.
Appearance: Wears a dark samurai straw hat with two spike on it as to look if he has bumps on his head,wears a spiral flak jacket over his chaos cloak,has a sack with with him containing lockdown striker gear and a few other important gear. Tall hight with determined eyes. Over this he wears a dark cloak.
Bio: Never again to return to haven, Legend roams to different areas of the clockworks, dwlling in small towns, finding a reason for his existance
Arsenal:
Weapons: Gran Faust, Polaris
Gear: Chaos Cloak with blak kat cowl
Costumes: Dark Samurai straw hat, Spiral Flak jacket and a dark cloak
Other: Lockdown striker gear

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 09:14
#5
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
And

and,i'm very interousted in in this awesome roleplay

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 09:42
#6
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Thinslayer
@Legend-Knight-Hadi

Your character is accepted!

I would like to know what other important gears he carries in his sack. I don't like surprises. xD

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 10:49
#7
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
Well

well it contains his expired badges, a small com and a small set of jewls, power crystals which contains an ever lasting elevator given to him by feron and a picture of him and a cerfain person........

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 10:59
#8
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
so

so now i write the chapter my first fanfic?

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 11:16
#9
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Thinslayer
@Legend-Knight-Hadi

Thanks. Yes, you can begin writing. Please use the link in the OP, along with the editing instructions. :)

Have fun!

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 11:30
#10
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
ummmmmmmmm.......

not to be a idiot but how do i write it. I dont see a post button there on etc

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 11:42
#11
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Thinslayer
@Legend-Knight-Hadi

It's okay. I did say to notify me if there are any problems. :D

There is not "post" or "edit" button, as far as I know. You have to change the link itself:

Look at the link at the top of the page. At the very end of the link should be "/pub." Replace that with "/edit."

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 11:43
#12
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
k

k . ty

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 12:21
#13
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
is there

is here anyway to aave a draft?

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 12:51
#14
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Thinslayer
Erm...

@Legend-Knight-Hadi: I think you deleted my portion. Try not to do that please.

Drafts are automatically saved.

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 21:58
#15
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
ty

ty did u read what i wrote?

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 22:53
#16
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Thinslayer
@Legend-Knight-Hadi

Yes, I did indeed see what you wrote. :)

You should try proofreading it though, since I'm finding lots and lots of spelling errors.

Also, I think I'll replace present-day Feron with another character. ;)

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 23:18
#17
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
Acctually

I had spelling errors because i was using my dad's samsung also i have a few dis abilities or handicaps
And also i thought serris was replacing Feron?
I was planning to make my charecter die while defending the core?
Also i really like your style of writing, though i am not sure if i can write abour another charecter whthout your uproval, i mean on what his storybis
Thank You

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 23:19
#18
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Thinslayer
@Seatus & Legend-Knight-Hadi

@Seatus: I'm still waiting for you to write about Xalin. :)

@Legend-Knight-Hadi: I'd like to refer to your character as Hadi (instead of Legend), if that's okay.

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 23:27
#19
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Callis-The-Wicked
Proposal Time!

XALIN

I grin wickedly as the last Retrode's head falls to the floor, oil spewing across the walls. I've lost count of the monsters who've come after me and how many I killed. I don't think I need to count for both, since they're practically the same count. I run, seeing more light in the distance. I am in the abyss, with two walls beside me raising to incredible heights and a narrow passage before and after me. I hear it. A large groan. Scrap! The levels are changing. The walls start to close in on either side of me. I run faster, and just as they are about to touch my shoulders, I polevault with my axe, flying to the end corridor where a rickety elevator awaits.

I punch in the level number, and I am sent soaring up.

I find myself in a Wolver Den. I grin. This should be fun. I take a few steps, and already find myself surrounded. The four Wolvers circle me, gnashing their teeth. I put away my axe, and my arm coil guns activate. Instantly, a Wolver bites me, taking a piece of me with it. I regenerate the skin to keep from losing blood, but two pips miss from my health bar. I hiss, and flip backwards. I point my arms at the Beasts, and they look surprised. The coils expand, and are all at once full cannons. I charge my attack as the Wolvers creep....closer and closer....

A loud thunder crackles, and the headless bodies drop limp to the floor. My living coil guns fall off my arms, turning into bright green illuminous snakes. They plunge their fangs into the bodies, drinking all the blood they can. This is my way of keeping my weapons running. Only through warfare they can survive. I feel a weird sensation, and look at the ground to see blue roses already growing. Damn. I have to keep moving, or it will find me.

If I stand in one place too long, my life aura starts leaking into the ground, growing the flowers that attract my main predator. The Swarm, and Almirian Guards. The scent is specifically my own. A curse bestowed by the Sprite Council. I wave to my snakes, and they jump onto my arms. I withdraw my axe, and I run through the level, beheading all in my way, my axe leaving no blood in the victims it touches. I escape only with five of eleven pips of health, my wounds trying to treat themselves.

Among the Sprite Council, I am called the Lost One. Among the Knights....

The Blue Vampire.

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 23:29
#20
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Callis-The-Wicked
ERR ;P

Someone else mind posting my stories to docs?

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 23:58
#21
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
hey seatus

Hey Seatus? mind if we join our stories together?our charecters are very alike

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 00:06
#22
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Thinslayer
@Seatus

What's the problem? Why can't you post it? Like I said in the OP, if there's a problem with the posting, you need to tell me about it. I can post for you in the meantime.

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 00:07
#23
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Callis-The-Wicked
No joining ^~^

Interaction only.

And Xalin hasn't begun to show himself completely yet

@Thinslayer My Wii U is so limited ;-; I am unable to use the docs

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 00:57
#24
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
my DS isn't working eithe

same with my DSi XL

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 01:02
#25
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Callis-The-Wicked
Us and our ghetto internet devices

XD

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 04:24
#26
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
hey thin!

i've spotted at least 5 ppl ididn't hear about and are messing with the fanfic! deleting the post telling how to edit, !this is so humiliating!!!!!!

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 06:59
#27
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
ALSo

Also I am switching my character's weapon from gran Faust to Acheron

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 11:59
#28
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
P.S/

Can 1vof u replace the ears in links and write dark ears plz?

Sun, 04/28/2013 - 12:38
#29
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Gzilla
@Hadi

There is such a thing as editing your post, instead of creating entirely new ones.

Mon, 04/29/2013 - 03:22
#30
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
@Gzilla

IK -.-

Mon, 04/29/2013 - 03:22
#31
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Legend-Knight-Hadi
@Gzilla

IK -.-

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