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Maelstrom [RP : Free-Form]

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Tue, 05/07/2013 - 22:49
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier

This is gonna be another one of those really short RPs I randomly come up with when I'm bored.  It's gonna be free-form, so you know the rules.  If not, I'll teach you along the way.

The Scenario:

A host of all kinds of creatures, ranging from men to krakens to mermen, lived together on a massive supercontinent: Veridia.

Although there was usually a big war between two races, as well as other conflicts, the people in Veridia were, for the most part, harmonious.  Conflicts were catalysts for change, and change brought up many improvements for the people of the land and sea.  For the most part, Veridia was a perfect world to be living in.

That is, until The Comet arrived.

The Comet, as the name implied, was a massive chunk of ice and rock from the stars.  At the time, no one was sure how exactly did the comet find it's way to the planet, but the ancient scholars did realize it was no natural event.  Nay, something must have caused it, for there was no other time recorded that a comet such that had came crashing down.  Quite the intriguing enigma, really. Some say that a band of gods had descended in a violent tumult, others think of it nothing more than a disaster, and yet still others think it would be something different entirely...

Unfortunately, all the technological and economical advances brought on by the ancient Veridia scholars had been buried underwater.  The occasional merman would salvage a small device or two, but the collapse of civilization, and any hope of interracial cooperation, had rendered any major architectural project improbable.

Since the comet's fall, the water levels of Veridia have risen high enough to consume millions of square miles of the supercontinent's land, leaving only a couple of islands out of the water.  This killed off many of the terrestrial creatures from the lack of territory, but the sea creatures also did not favor this change. The water itself, once rich and easy to survive in, was now stale, dirty, and inhabitable.  The land's few and precious plants were the only filters that could repel such a poison.

On top of that, the weather in the deep was random and dangerous.  Maelstroms sucked up entire schools of fish, typhoons wiped the islands of any animal there.

Thus, any land, regardless of the creature, was considered extremely valuable.

Six generations since the first crash into Veridia, and a band of seafarers have come to settle upon the small islands that are Veridia's former mountains.  Discoveries and technologies are to be found, as well as the fame that one gets occasionally for doing so.

Prologue:

Overhead the 189 islands of  Western Veridia, storm clouds loomed ominously.  The occasional pocket of light broke through this heavy, thick blanket but only for a brief, elusive moment.

Beneath the silver canvas, dozens of boats, rafts, and other water-faring vehicles were anchored at a sandbar, where everyone had their supplies lain out in front of them.  The windless air and the choppy waters meant that there wouldn't be a storm that day, but no wind either.  Thus, the travelers were going to canoe and raft their way to each island.  Some of them hundreds of yards long, others only an eighth of a square mile in size. Some had fertile, loamy soil.  And yet again, others were sharp enough to cut through leather.   However, there was plenty to choose from, with ample time at hand... 

Today's Goal:

Travel to an island, and make that your home island.  Describe it however you wish.  You can also live together with another person on the island.

Alternative Goals:

Introduce your character via indirect / direct characterization.

Live on a boat instead of an island.

Hunt your first sea-animal.

Live on an island farthest away from the initial group (islands are about a quarter-mile from each other)

~~~

The Application:

Name:

Race (Isoran, Human, Custom):

Bio:

Belongings / Inventory (2*-3*):

YOU CAN PUT IN AN APPLICATION AT ANY TIME.

Tue, 05/07/2013 - 22:53
#1
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Feline-Grenadier
Q&A

Alright, a quick Q&A:

Q: Goals?  I have to follow goals?

A: Not necessarily.  Goals are the usual recommended tasks for the day, but it's not necessary to have one completed.  There is no reward for completing a goal, other than to advance the story a little bit.

Q: When / Where do I start?

A: If you haven't made your application yet, please fill it out in the RP thread for approval.  Once approved, you may join in as a newcomer to the RP, meaning that you will start off with no island (don't worry, there are 189 islands, about 10 occupied by NPCs, and a couple more by other players).

Q: What is the main objective of the game?

A: Besides the goals, there are long-term achievements to complete in the RP.  There are hidden technologies in the water, beasts to hunt, and so forth.  These will only open themselves to opportunity if it's possible for the player to achieve.

Q: Did you add in a posting format?

A: Yes. You can post all you want below, but I'll be editing the top post for each day.

Wed, 05/08/2013 - 09:28
#2
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Thinslayer
@Vinnydime

I would advise you to stick to "The Platform." I personally find that one more appealing. :)

Wed, 05/08/2013 - 15:15
#3
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Feline-Grenadier
@Thinslayer

I'll make another thread if this one goes down within the year (yes I said year).

I just need to get that feeling of him out of my head for a bit.

Mon, 05/13/2013 - 01:48
#4
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Hearthstone

The concept's good, that's all I can say right now. Sorry >_<

Fri, 05/17/2013 - 00:58
#5
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Bump.

Seriously, I have enough time to sleep a whole summer.

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 03:41
#6
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Hearthstone
Should I start the app-ing?

If not, I'll just wait till the end of Tev's contest... or until I post my entry, to post my appy so I won't spoil anything :3

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 04:46
#7
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Dewca
Seems cool...

This seems fun but I always have no time to do it...

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 07:41
#8
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Dewca
Anyway, here goes...

Name: Dewca

Race: Isoran

Appearance: Short, black hair. Cyan personal colour. Very agile.

Bio: Always deals with things with a smile, weather it's small or not. Quite cheerful and always likes a laugh though puts a serious face on if somethings needs to be dealt with. Rarely over-reacts from little things and gets quite cranky. Other wise is quite a happy-chappy! He was born to a loving and caring family but his mother died in a fire when he was 6. This scarred him for life but he has now passed this and now lives a good life with his father. However this makes Dewca very paranoid to fire. He is very good at combat with swords and quite intelligent, but give him a gun and you'll immediately regret it!

Belongings: Magic hood and cloak (scarf accessory), Shock-burst Brandish, Swift flourish, Owllite shield, Wetstone pendant (is this allowed?).

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 07:52
#9
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Infernus-Dragneel
....Mind if I join?

Name: Joshua

Race : Human

Bio:

Waking up on the sandy isolated shores of a deserted island, the young man had found himself amongst scattered remains of a boat wrecked from the jagged edges of rocks forming a barrier around the island. The first thought that came to him was the question of his whereabouts, but then something disturbing bothered him- he tried and tried, yet he couldn't recall a single memory about who he was and why he is here. His final conclusion was that he had been shipwrecked- and suffers amnesia as a result of the incident.

Other than only knowing his name which seems to be quite odd, Joshua was left alone in the island with no supplies or any preparations to survive. He thought of building a raft to escape from the island but after seeing what happened to the boat he might used, Joshua had planned to stay for a while in the island. But his final decision is left hanging in front of him, waiting for Joshua to answer if he truly will stay in this island or to escape from it.

Belongings / Inventory : With little Joshua could salvage from what was left from his boat, he managed to acquire a perfectly fine pocket knife and also a slightly damaged gun which could be essential for his survival- sadly it requires gunpowder which Joshua does not own at all.

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 07:57
#10
Dewca's picture
Dewca
Finally!

Finally! Some-one else is interested in this!

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 08:03
#11
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Infernus-Dragneel
@Dewca

I just found this after attempting to continue trying to fiddle with small creativity... But it seems that you posted it earlier than me since I just started writing it few minutes ago .-.

So approval then goals, and perhaps alternate goals.

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 08:06
#12
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Dewca
XD

XD

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 08:13
#13
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Dewca
I wonder...

I wonder what it would be like if a spiral knight met a human...

*Spiral knight looks up at human*
"Auuwwwhhhh... It's so cute..." The human says.
*Knight draws out cutter*
"Whoaaa... Is that a mini sword! It's so cute!" *Tickles knight lightly*
(many screams are heard after a short period)
"GAHHHHHH!!!!! WHERE ARE MY FINGERSSSS!!!!!"
*Knight smirks*

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 08:20
#14
Infernus-Dragneel's picture
Infernus-Dragneel
...

"Heh, you looked like you came from out of a game,"

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 09:15
#15
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Huh...

I'd preferably go on with 5 players to start. Still waiting.

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 18:20
#16
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Okay, then...

Let's see...

Name: Skye

Race: Human

Bio:

Once a normal student, then a capable wielder of swords and guns, he was once challenged to defeat a knight that descended from an external source. He won, and gained the blood abilities of that knight and was involved in the descent of mutants. Living on the piece of land after his escape from the initial descent, he foraged for food and other luxuries that has helped him survive.

Belongings / Inventory:

Cellphone, Sudaruska(obtained from the knight he defeated), Swiftstrike Buckler(also obtained), small pistol(from a policeman that helped him escape).

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 18:36
#17
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Knight meets Human Part 2:

Spiral Knight walks down the lane, with people passing by thinking he is just a midget or a kid cosplaying/roleplaying as a cute knight. A human walks up to him.

"Hey little kid, where are you going?" the human asks.
"To kill monsters," the knight replies.
"Haha, have fun at your play-date, kid!" the human stands up and pats the knight.

"..." the knight drew his sword, a Warmaster Rocket Hammer, and the man had his back turned. Creeping slowly, the knight whacked the man, and dragged him by the leg.

The passerby-s thought the two were just playing, and they took pictures.

"Aww... How cute!" one lady says.

The knight walks up to her and bonks her in front of the crowd, and dragged her by the leg as well.

Tue, 05/21/2013 - 01:52
#18
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Hearthstone
Aww...

No one's posting huh...

Well, the Treasure Vault's not's as lively as it was before...

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