Hello. This is a fanfiction I'm currently not done with. I'll be adding chapters as I think of things to write. Warning: For reasons I don't feel like explaining, I write very dark things sometimes. This is no exception.
Prologue: Darkstar's journal, final entry.
"Knight Darkstar's log, date... I don't even care anymore. I've been stuck in this hole for weeks now. Nothing living has even passed by here since I fought with Neji. I've *cough* run out of supplies, and I don't think I can last much longer without help. This is just great. I finally catch up with the man that put me through hell, and my only chance to make him pay is stolen by some trigger-happy Gremlin. *cough* It's getting hard to see straight, and my head feels a little funny. Everything hurts. No one is coming for me. And I think that- *heavy coughing* -Ugh. I think that I'm running out of breathable air. I wonder if the curse still keeps going, even after I die? I sure hope not. I... I... *thud* can't even sit up straight anymore. I'm getting weaker by the second. Yep. This is the end. Wait... Wha... What's that light? Is it..."
Chapter 1 will be written sometime in the near future. When I'm not writing at 1 in the morning to stop myself from going to sleep.
It is written very dark, but the style of suspense and the quick drama are really well done! Though you might wanna try adding a little spacing to make it easier on the eyes.
Can't wait to see more! :D