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[FAN-FIC] Downfall of Haven. Prologue Out Now!!! (Character Apps Still accepted!)

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Fri, 05/17/2013 - 21:23
Hyiaku's picture
Hyiaku

Ok so before I start the fanfic, I need a few character APPS and a few popular guild names. I'll try to post whenever I can, mostly since finals are coming up and I need to study. So yeah, just send in character apps below and I'll get this thing rolling.

Character name:

Personality:

Bio:

Load out for fights (important):

That's the character app form you need to fill in for a request. Now for the guild thing all I need is this.

Guild's name:

Interior of guild hall (nothing to fancy):

Size of guild hall (large 5-6 floors, medium 3-4 floors, small1-2 floors):

Again, I'll post when I have the chance. I only need about 2-3 guild names, and I'll edit this when I get some names to tell you when I have enough.

Thanks for helpin me out!

-Hyiaku

P.S

First fanfic so I'm a little new with this.

Fri, 05/17/2013 - 21:40
#1
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Hearthstone

Character name: Light

Personality: Silent(rarely speaks), Often serious, reckless at times, often aggro

Bio: Empty and soulless, he is a person who gets the job done as long as he gets paid. Someone like a bounty hunter, he complies to the instructions of his clients, but whenever he is reported, he often gets through the court with his clients helping him. Also not that sociable, he is often murderous like a contract killer.

Load out for fights (important): Snarbolax Coat, Divine Hood, Grey Owlite Shield, Gran Faust, Polaris

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About the guild, does it have to be an actual guild in the game, like, REAL?

Fri, 05/17/2013 - 22:32
#2
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Feline-Grenadier
Appy App App!

Name: Lyra

Loadout : Snarbolax Coat, Solid Cobalt Helm [Cool Plume + Prismatic Glow Eyes], Volcanic Plate Shield, Electron Vortex, Cold Iron Vanquisher

Personality: Soft-spoken, shy, reserved, humble, and the like. She really tries to make herself unknown to others.

Bio:

Lyra was an orphan-girl in Haven, one of the first native Isorans to the planet.. She was raised by her "older brother", a Knight who had adopted her. Rumor has it that he was one of the few Knights who could still remember what Isora was like, and that his status was virtually unknown to most.

She was suddenly abandoned around the age of 14, and so she traveled down to Moorcroft to take up an odd job or two, since she wasn't familiar with combat, like most Knights.

She wasn't able to avoid conflict forever. At this point, she had to learn how to defend herself from the occasional ruffian monster, since the Order's guardian couldn't be on post 24/7. Thus, she learned how to fight against both Knights and Cradle's fauna, and crafted her very own weapons. Flashforward a year, and Lyra is now an experienced bodyguard-for-hire, making Moorcroft her permanent home. She usually sparred with the Guardian, honing her skills in combat, until she could enter Lockdown. There, she quickly scaled up the rankings, earning hundreds of Krogmo Koins in the process. In fact, she was a popular rumor during her time as a Lockdown fighter. When she finally had earned enough for an Electron Vortex, she suddenly disappeared from Lockdown, leaving many Knights in confusion.

A few weeks later, she joined Tier Zero, a moderately large guild, in order to gather up enough resources for the search.

She had prepared all of this for entering a Shadow Lair, presumably for her search for her "brother". She did pass through the Gloaming Wildwoods, and barely managed to defeat the Twin Snarbolaxes.

But she never found that Knight who had saved her from a life of misery.

Disappointed, she began to brood over her thoughts in Sanctuary, literally staying over there for weeks. She had finally built up enough angst to don the dark Snarbolax Coat, and left the Clockworks a different girl.

She is now a stray wanderer, living nowhere, staying only for a day at most. She occasionally appears at Haven to restock on supplies, and her Lockdown legend is all but an ephemeral shadow. Tier Zero itself had also broken down a bit, now only large enough to barely afford a second floor.

Fri, 05/17/2013 - 23:15
#3
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Aekuryi
Weeeellll

The title interests me, so I decided to apply. I added a few more details, if you don't mind.

Character name: Manta

Gender: Female

Age: About 19.

Personality: A fiery spirit, she's set on standing up for others or herself, whether they like it or not. Even if it seems mostly pointless, she'll try anyway, and keep on going until it's done. However, she can be discouraged or deceived easier than most. Another problem with her is that once she's in a debate or argument someone, she finds herself unable to stop, even if the other side has been justified. Nonetheless, she's very social, preferring the company of others. She also has a surprisingly well-developed, yet somewhat dark sense of humor.

Appearance: Short, tousled white hair. Is also an albino, and has red eyes as a result. Usually wears a casual dress shirt and cargo pants, and a light jacket if it's cold outside. Has a small, futuristic looking collar of unknown origin on her neck. Armor used in battle is explained in another section.

Bio: Nobody really knows where she came from. Not even her. At a young age, she was found drugged, but alive, in a garbage bag, which was left in Haven's Main Square. She was taken to the hospital, where she was brought back to health. When she woke up, she was questioned by the Order. The results stated that she didn't know her name, her parents, or even her early childhood. But she did know something. Her knowledge of technology was incredible, to the point of being nearly inhuman. Eventually, she was christened "Manta", and the Order became her rightful guardians, seeing as she didn't know anyone. She was very quiet at first, but quickly gained her fiery nature. She was a mostly excellent student, however, her rebellious nature got her into fights every once in a while. Preferring to join the Recon Knights instead of being on the front lines, she took and passed the test. In the present day, she works as a Recon Head Mechanic, fixing various things. She's also tried to get the collar off, but to no avail. It's made of some black, shiny material that refuses to be damaged.

Load out for fights (important): Uses a Dread Venom Striker and packs a Pepperbox, just in case. Also carries around a pack of Deconstructors for certain situations. Wears a Kat Claw Cowl and Dragon Scale Mail.

Sat, 05/18/2013 - 02:36
#4
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Dewca
App time!

Race: Spiral (Isorian)

Name: Forrower

Gender: Male

Appearance: short dark black hair, dark red personal colour

Personality: Has quite a dark personality but can give you a good laugh if you are his friend. Will make a strong bond with anyone he trusts. He does not take jokes lightly and always tries to get revenge. He is also very agile.

Bio: mostly unknown but he was born by a loving and caring family and they kept him, but when his father did something that nobody liked they attacked his father. His mother died of a heart attack a few months later. His parents deaths being so abrupt, he ran away to the streets where he could be by himself. After this, Forrower has been an enemy to many. He has a criminal record but he is very sneaky, stealing things with ease. However he does know that this is wrong and has tried to stop this horrible habit but stealing is a must for his survival other wise he wil starve.

Load out for battle: Snarbolax set, Archeron, Sentenza, sometimes carries a gravitation vortex with him, carries a stolen crest of almire.

Sat, 05/18/2013 - 07:18
#5
Hyiaku's picture
Hyiaku
Thanks guys!!

I'll try to get the story rolling as soon as I can.

Just so you know the guild names have to be real. It gives it a little realistic and more relatable effect.

Anyway thanks for the character apps, keep sending them in. Some of them will be seen in the 2-4th chapters, since the bio kinda matches what's going on.

Sat, 05/18/2013 - 07:47
#6
Dewca's picture
Dewca
Ok

Ok, thats cool. For the guilds, i'm not really sure.

Sat, 05/18/2013 - 19:41
#7
Hyiaku's picture
Hyiaku
Update on the progress...

Ok so the prologue will be out by next Saturday at the latest depending if I have any guild names put in. I really only need a few for the prologue and more as chapters pass. Anyway, keep sending in those apps.

-Hyiaku

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 00:56
#8
Dewca's picture
Dewca
Guild name

Could we just post made up guild names and other things cause that will be alot easier?

Sun, 05/19/2013 - 13:39
#9
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Hyiaku
@Dewca

If you play the game im pretty sure u will find some guild names and their guild halls.

Mon, 05/20/2013 - 20:58
#10
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Hyiaku
Prologue..

Haven. The beautiful little town it was, now a big pile of rubble. The wall that protected the city now are fallen. Many buildings have holes, caught fire, or barely standing. Broken armor and shields scattered across the ground. Swords either shattered or covered in blood. Bodies of knights in the open or under debris. Snipes not even insight and strangers in hiding.

Peering through a broken window in the TAO guild hall, a knight in a skolver set checks to see if everything is clear. He grabs a hold of a striker shield and sharpens a Barbarous Thorn Blade. He can't be any older than 19. A knight, wearing a heavy plate set, approaches him. "Ryan, the soldiers have their weapons and are waiting for further orders." says the knight. Ryan told the knight, " tell them to equip striker, recon, or guardian class shields. We must be ready to move as soon as possible. Oh and Jake, have two of them equip a guardian shield and guard any possible entrance. We can't afford any civillian knights getting injured." "Yes sir." Jake said as he ran for the soldiers.
Ryan looked out the window once more and sat in thought. "Haven, I've never imagined you to look like this." Ryan got up to meet his soldiers. "Those things will pay for what they did, just they wait." Ryan murmured.

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So what you think? Like I said first time doing this so I hope I'm doing good.

Next chapter out sometime next week!

-Hyiaku

Mon, 05/20/2013 - 21:35
#11
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Hearthstone
Keep it up!
Thu, 05/23/2013 - 19:51
#12
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Ssosme
Application

Character Name: Ssosme

Personality: Humorous

(special)Gender: Male

Bio:

*Crash!!!* Pods come falling from the air. I come out naked with no armor or weapons. I stumble across the ground... And then someone holds there hand out to me... And then they take me to the rescue camp. I stay there with fellows just like myself. They give me armor and weapons to have for combat. And I take my journey to the haven. And that's where my journey truly began...

I walk in mystery of this so called "Haven." Running around hopeless and not knowing what I am doing. I buy something from the "Auction-House." And I had no idea what I bought and how to get what I bought. I was confused and had no one to call home! And then I met a knight called.. 'Cptbattlefield.' Me and him ran a guild together and then a new guy came with the name of 'Hyiaku.' I thought he was some ordinary noob. But no when Cptbattlefield was gone. And I left with another friend of mine (My best one ^_^) 'Ryan-Master' Me and him ran a guild by the name of "The Swordbreakers!" Which stays to this day. No one knows the members in the guild. Who are they? No one will know... But what happened to Hyiaku with his guild? Well he kept on running and and then the guild died he did all he could to try to keep it up. Later Ryan-Master quit the game. I was left with no one. I got depressed sold everything I had. And lost everything I had...

*2 Months Later!* Here I am playing on the computer I see the Spiral Knights Icon I click it for old times sake! And I created a new account by the say name of 'Ssosme.' And I became stronger and wiser and better decisions I started to make. And then a random guy by the name of 'Wandering-Star' was forming a guild in the haven. I joined him and he asked for everyone to pitch in to make the guild! I helped make it I was a founder of this guild that was named.. "The Cursed Wanderers!" Now you maybe thinking that he named it after himself but no I came up with the name and we all agreed to it :)! And to this day it still lives it has been alive for almost half a year! 6 more days when this note was posted it will have been a year since we created it. And that's where my story truly starts...

Loadout: Ice Queen Crown - Snarbolax Coat - Final Flourish - Divine Avenger - Crest of Almire - (Soon to be added if i get more stuff)

Guild name: The Cursed Wanderers

Interior of guild hall (nothing to fancy): Ssosme / Wandering-star (I guess :o)

Size of guild hall (large 5-6 floors, medium 3-4 floors, small1-2 floors): Currently 5/23/2013 - Medium 3-4 floors!

-- Ssosme, Never stop playing!

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Tue, 05/21/2013 - 20:14
#13
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Hyiaku
Umm... Ssosme...

I need a load out a guild size, and you can't be the hero for everything. I hope u kno that because my story doesn't run like that. Sorry bro but I need the info or ur not in it.

Wed, 05/22/2013 - 10:16
#14
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Ssosme
(Classified Message..)

Sorry then i will have to lock my info! NO! ONE! will ever stalk me >:O

Wed, 05/22/2013 - 17:25
#15
Shotjeer's picture
Shotjeer
durp back on apps

Im not going gremlin style this time, though it's hard not to reelate.

Name: Shreya (femlae)

Personality: Can be quiet and shy as well as loud and talkative, depending on her mood.

Bio: Lived a pretty normal knight life, though her parents were killed by a very particular gremlin (Guess who?). She had sworn a blood oath to avenge them, and took her father's Voltedge and her mother's Biohazard, and set off on a quest to kill this shadowy gremlin. Now, to her younger days though, she wasn't a very popular girl, despite her good looks. At the age of 13 her parents were killed, and yeah, you know the rest.

Loadout: Voltedge, Biohazard, Ascended Calibur, Volcanic Salamander set, Grey Owlite Shield.

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 11:45
#16
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Aekuryi
Soooo

When's this chapter coming?

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 11:47
#17
Dewca's picture
Dewca
Chapter?

Wheres me chapter?

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 15:08
#18
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Shotjeer
*cough*

you alive Hyiaku?

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 16:32
#19
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Hyiaku
Chapter delay. Will fix as soon as possible..

Sorry guy, I've been busy with school just ending and about to move. Will post a chapter as soon as I can.

Thu, 06/06/2013 - 15:51
#20
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Hyiaku
Writers block..

I got writes block badly. Sorry people's.

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