Spiral Knights - The White Meteor (Fan-Fic) (Accepting Applications)

The White Meteor (Fan-Fic) (Accepting Applications)

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Tue, 07/09/2013 - 14:26

Altraknight

This is my first fan-fiction so it probably will suck but I wanna give it a try.

Prologue
It was a ordinary day on Cradle. The Snipes were chirping,the skies were blue,the air was fresh and finally my family was fighting. But i was thinking of my idol,my father. I admired him for being the strongest knight in all of Haven. Later on it wasn't your every-day Haven, the gremlins had attacked! They were furious at the knights for sealing their ancestors underground centuries ago. Chaos broke out and the knights were struggling to fight back against the forces of the gremlin king Tinkizar. My father's only choice too keep our family safe was to launch us into space. He gave me helmet,armour,sword,gun and a shield in case I ever needed it in the future. A group of gremlins followed us into space and had us surrounded in the centre of the universe. To keep me safe he sent me into a crash pod and launched me back to Cradle. Then my journey as a knight began.

Need character applications! They should look something like this.....

Name:
Role:
Personality:
Age:

Roles needed currently:
Friend
Rival
King

Those are all for now so ill see you next chapter

Watch out for "Chapter I:Awakening"

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 09:33

Altraknight

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Wed, 07/10/2013 - 12:05

Viorayne

1st of hopefully many :P

Seems like Im the 1st to apply.

Name: "Excalibur"
Role: Friend
Personality: Arrogant, Means well usually, show-off, Takes pride in using his Calibur, Hopes to make it the best he can be, Never uses anything else.
Age: Same age as your OC, maybe a tad younger.

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 14:09

Altraknight

Nice,a reply just a quick

Nice,a reply just a quick question. Would you like him to make a Levi or a civ?

Wed, 07/10/2013 - 16:14

Viorayne

Most likely CIV. He'd want

Most likely CIV. He'd want the awesome looking one due to his arrogance of having the better sword.

Thu, 07/11/2013 - 08:06

Altraknight

Okay I'll make sure that will

Okay I'll make sure that will happen,Chapter I Awakening is most likely coming out today or tomorrow it depends still writing up the script

Fri, 07/12/2013 - 10:42

Altraknight

Chapter I:Awakening

The crash pod was hurdling towards Cradle it took months,even years to get back. That made me especially lucky that the crash pod had a emergency kit stored with food and water. It hurt when I crashed back to Cradle and then it when something like this.

???:Hello,where are your whereabouts currently?
Altra:Who are you?????
???:I'm Rhedon I will be teaching you combat here in Cradle. That and I need your help with something
Altra:What is it?
Rhedon:A highly classed gremlin known as Razwog. He has an ancient artifact in his grasp that he took from us.
Altra:Well if I have to defeat this Razwog guy then teach me how to fight then. Wait what are those slimes doing there?
Rhedon:Quick pull out a sword or a gun and destroy those slimes!

Then I destroyed the slimes,learnt how to use a gun and sword,obtained a bomb from Rhedon and now it's time for my final Rescue Camp challenge. Lurking in Razwog's lair.

Watch out for Chapter II:The Highly Classed Gremlin Razwog

Sun, 07/14/2013 - 06:31

Altraknight

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Fri, 07/19/2013 - 07:17

Lord-Hood

APP

Name: Kalem

Race: Knight, but, well, read on...

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Arsenal: Uses whatever he is issued from the Crimson Order, but has a gremlin upgrade of a Polaris fused to his right arm, which he lost after he was abandoned in the clockworks by some other knights, he can, however detach the gun and replace it with a highly advanced gremlin prosthetic hand. His armor is usually Armor of the Fallen type armor that looks like Dragon Scale armor with volcanic Dragon wings that he can fly for a short time with and a Crown of the Fallen with military knight vision goggles, he uses an upgraded stalker recon shield.

Characteristics: Takes what he wants and flattens anything, or anyone that gets in his way, he is a brilliant tactician, once even allowing some knights to capture him so he could get some plans for a new weapon from Feron's office. While he avoids battles where the odds are badly to his detriment, he is ruthless in every way, he has no care for knights and wants them exterminated, he does not think of himself as a knight, but as a gremlin, and the other knights see him that way too.

Bio: When he was young, he was taken out on a training expedition by some other knights, but when they were ambushed by jellies, the other knights left him behind. With insufficient armor, and outnumbered, Kalem fought his way through the jellies, but was eventually defeated, losing part of his arm to a spike jelly in the process. A stalker gremlin from the Crimson Order found him, however, and brought him to a gremlin city, where he was taken care of and his arm repaired by a Crimson Order warmaster, named Seerus. He never forgot what the knights did to him and swore to level Haven one day. He eventually became very powerful in the crimson order, becoming a Warmaster himself as well as an accomplished assassin and spy, thanks to his Stalker training. He takes his orders directly from King Tinkizar and allows nothing to get in the way of his orders. Feron placed a bounty of 5,000,000 CR on his head Dead or Alive, but he has managed to elude all of his would-be attackers, killing dozens of knights. He isn’t just a mindless killer though, like some other gremlins, rushing to attack any knight they see. He will watch them from a distance, find out what they are doing, and THEN kill them. A few powerful knights can overpower him, but few have escaped him.

Role: bad guy, you decide what specifics

Affiliation: Great Colony

Additional Facts: Using his alchemy skill as a knight and his training from gremlins, he crafts powerful shadow resistant armor for the gremlins under his command. Because Feron has sent assassins after him before, it is whispered among gremlins that he has two personal aides, both stalker gremlins, at his side always. Since his main weapon is fused to him, Feron had a special handcuff, or really a cap for the gun made that clamps onto Kalem's Polaris, and had it issued to all Arsenal stations in the clockworks, in case a knight were to ever run into him to help subdue him.

Suggestions: I'd rather he not die, but whatever

Sun, 11/03/2013 - 01:38

Whyna

Character

Name: CruelWrath
Personality: A funny minor antagonist who always breaks the 4th wall and talks about other mmos and video games eg: Ha Ha Ha! My upper class retrodes are to busy harassing the guy who is playing this mmo!Its win win
Race:Gremlin
Gender:Undead,None
Age:89,000
Pet: A Seraphynx (get the seraph in the name) who became the shadowwalker of tainted seraphs after ShadowWrath emerged.
Arsenal: He owns Faust, since he could never be worthy of a 5* Gran Faust and he wears Dread Skelly Shield
Side: kinda evil, he commands HEAVY GEAR undead to kill everyone
XTRA info: can he become ShadowWrath?

Fri, 07/19/2013 - 10:21

#10

Dewca

Appy!

Name: Fang

Role: Friend

Personality: Silent and solitary. Usally speaks when needs to. Warms strongly to friends and protects them. Strong at combat. Doesn't know parents, abandoned at young age. Could be family to anyone (I'll leave that to you)

Extra: Part Valkaryie from a long ago lab experiment. Now hate labs, hospitals ect. Only uses wings rarely. Only the extremely trusted know about the wings. It would be nice if only very few people got to know about his wings until later on in the story. About 6 foot, dark dark brown eyes, handsome face.

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Arsenal: Vog coat and cap. Heater shield. Fang of Vog. Polaris

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Tried to keep this simplish for you?

Mon, 08/05/2013 - 01:10

#11

Kanron

Application cause why not?

Name:Relo

Role:King

Personality:He is very stubborn,and sometimes lazy.He is a great knight,and will not back down from a fight,he is also very wise adding to his greatness.He is very jumpy on regular circumstances,and never lets his guard down.Was a young knight at first,so is understanding of the younger generation of knights behind him,is also very nice when he actually likes a person,but is quite other wise.

Age:45 (has been around for quite a long time.)

Arsenal:A frosty Triglav,a rather powerful hammer,and a poison Biohazard gun.For armor he has Royal Jelly Mail,and a Royal Jelly Crown.He has a Drakon battle sprite,that is mostly grown up,and is really powerful,just as much so as him.

Race:Knight/Jelly cube (will explain this down further.)

Bio:He was saved by a escape pod like any starting knight,he began heading to haven,when he saw a weird Lichen it was purple,and seemed to be hurting.He tried to help it,but it just ended up jumping on him causing enough damage for him to pass out.He woke up later in the rescue camp that was lacking in power.They where some other knights around him,looking at him,and observing closely,he started to get up,lower body felt different.He looked at himself,and it appeared that the Lichen was some kind of parasite that had fused with his systems,making him able to shift his shapes in small ways,such as changing height,or even face shapes.He was able to respond to Hq perfectly,and went on to be the king,after many adventures,earning his place wasn't easy.He had to go through all kinds of tests,and perpetration for his battle with a fierce enemy,to prove himself much move that any knight ever had.The boss was Darkfire Vanaduke,a very strong boss monster with cursed powers,it took weeks to finish the guys off,but he did after that returning to Hq to report the good news,and he has been the king ever since.

Mon, 08/05/2013 - 08:03

#12

Pow-Posts-Again

Character

Name: The Cobalt Crusader
Race: Knight
Weapons: Leviathan Blade, Valiance
Armour: Azure Guardian set, with the helmet piece up, and the Aegis with a blue cloth.
Role: Friend
Sprite: A level 76 Drakon called Flameclaw.
Personality: Attacks monsters on Cradle with righteous fury. He is much like a traditional knight, using his sword most of the time - and only uses his gun if enemies are out of reach.
Age: 41 - joined the Order when aged 35.
Bio: Coming soon.

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 11:07

#13

Whyna

Short live the trojans....

Found the fanfiction Altraknight!

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 11:09

#14

Whyna

Short live the trojans....

Oops I necrobumped

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 15:42

#15

Sho-Marufuji

Oh, um.. Uh.. Oh, there's my app.

@Dewca: HA. I see that reference. Maximum Ride much?
@Altraknight: Don't sell yourself short man, the fan-fic so far doesn't suck, just try to stay away from the general story line of the game-play in SK and check over your grammar and spelling etc.

MY APP!

Name: You decide, he currently doesn't have one. (His name before the "incident" was Matthew)
Appearance and Weapons: Carries a Recon backpack. Armor is a Cyclops cap and a Fused Demo suit with a lot of rust and grime. Weapons consist of mostly guns (Iron Slug and Polaris) and has a lot of bombs stashed in his backpack.
Race: Knight/Mech (Not a Mecha-Knight)
Role: Um, maybe a friend?
Personality: Stays silent majority of the time along with the occasional grunt and wheeze of air emanating from his helmet, well if you don't know him. If you do he's quite a talkative person. Will pretty much help anyone in need if he can. Has a soft spot for the gremlins in Emberlight which also is his current housing.
Age: N/A (Last recorded age 17)
Bio: (Here we go..) At age 17 Matthew was working currently as an assistant to the lead navigator on Skylark doing meager tasks for him such as fetching materials etc. After the malfunction of Skylark caused by an unidentified beam of light, Matthew was shoved into a pod and descended to Cradle watching as Skylark descended down to Cradle as well. When he reached Cradle Matthew was immediately drafted to the Spiral Order at the recommendation of the navigator he worked under. He soon gained skills in gunning and detonation and signed up for a Special Ops. team in the Order tasked with blowing up certain depths of the clockworks. Matthew agreed to play the job of the demo. Matthew did as he was told in the job but also saw many disturbing things done by the order at this time such as mistreatment of prisoners (by a lot) and disregard for many other peaceful creatures in the Clockworks. On one missions tasked to him Matthew decided to go alone feeling quite angry on the situation this particular day. After setting the charges Matthew went to the elevator in order to go back up before the charges went off. Though he was ambushed halfway through and injured in many places along with the loss of a leg and forearm. The charges went off, and it was too late. The blast shook Matthew off the platform and he descended into Emberlight from the 16 depth half-dead. After the initial crash Matthew was unconscious and was discovered by Emberlight locals soon after. He was practically dead and nothing could be done to restore him to his former state. An operation done by gremlins on Matthew kept him alive but he lost all feeling of emotions and suffered from amnesia, not even being able to recall his name. He now currently defends the Gremlins of Emberlight from constant attack from enemies because of his lone memory of gratitude toward him.

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 16:06

#16

Psychnade

Plot Holes you should consider revising

So, he lived on Cradle, and when the war happened, he decided the only way to save him was to launch him in space...then bring him back to Cradle. :l

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 16:09

#17

Malkalack

Swag IS a virtue

Also, add a space after putting down a comma.

Thu, 03/06/2014 - 19:16

#18

Sho-Marufuji

Ride the waves of peace, mon.

Yeahhh.. Now that I think about it that's sorta messed up.

"HEY SON."

"Ohhaidare dad."

"There's a war ya see?"

"Mhm."

"So I'll just take you with me in my awesome spaceship then send you back, kk?"

"Uh.. Wait what?"

"Alright then! It's settled!"

"That doesn't make any sense!"

"Tomorrow it is then!"

"Gah, no you idiot!"

No offense or anything.. But like think this over man.

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