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Wed, 07/31/2013 - 10:04
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Pow-Posts-Again

A new fanfic I am working on. Pow and Cloud make a minor appearance, but they are only seen in Haven and do not take part in a battle of any sort.

Characters:
Pow: A Knight, surprisingly skilled for his age, who spends most of his time in Haven or his guild hall. He has a Drakon sprite called Firesword. Firesword finds it very hard to control when he shoots a ball of fire. Specialities are Fury, Reflexes and Shield Spike. Personality: Kind if you are.
Cloud: A Spiral Guardian, a Knight who chooses the angelic path and Pow's companion. Cloud has a Seraphynx called Small Heaven. Cloud is also a very tall Knight, about twice as tall as little Pow. Specialities are Wings, Reflexes and Sharpened Sword. Personality: Caring, kind.
Edolas: A Fairly tall Geo-Knight, who tends to spend more time in target practice when he should be researching. He is still quite knowledgable however, even if it's not very obvious. He can solve algorithms and equations to almost anything, just chooses not to in favour of Battle Training. Specialities are Reflexes, Sharpened Sword and Powered Gun Charges. Personality: Laid back, Care-Free nature, Is Hard on himself when he makes mistakes that harm others. Will strive to Protect others in any way possible.
Dewca: A handsome, calm, collected man who is great at combat, he hates boiling heat and prefers the cold. A man who's personality bases on trust. However will let out his feelings by lashing out suddenly. His mother died in a fire and his father has vanished. The subject of family cuts through him. Specialities are Reflexes, Sharpened Sword and Fury. Personality: Calm and collected, but can let his feelings out suddenly. His friends matter a lot, his trust grows over time and he smiles regularly and his world seems to lighten up. He loves swimming and regularly dives under to calm down if angered.
Max: He enjoys shooting at monster from a distance, and is therefore a gunslinger. He occasionally needs motivation to speed things along, but that won't stop him from saving his friends. Specialities are Reflexes, Powered Gun Charges and Wings. Personality: Cheerful, thoughtful, is cool around others.
Jaeger: Former comrade of Vaelyn at the Core's research camp. He devotes his body to the Order, and will commit the worst of crimes on command. He currently resides in Haven to assist new recruits. Specialiies are Reflexes, Fury and Sharpened Sword .Personality : Diligent, callous, and militaristic. Obsessed with the Order.
Heroia: A rookie amongst rookies. He is fresh out of the spiral knight academy of officers after being trained as a rescue officer. His job is to rescue knights when they are out of energy/sparks of life and return them to Haven safe and sound. He is expected to become a leader one day, but fears that he will fail all of whom he will lead. He is kind hearted and will rush into the greatest of scrimishes to rescue those who fall behind. Specialities are Reflexes, Sharpened Sword and Shield Spike. Personality: always willing to help those that need it the most. Kind, yet foolish when the odds are against him.
Blue: Ex-Medic. She used to be a medic, until she failed to save her commander on the battlefield. She is still an exceptional medic. She focuses more on speed then strength. Specialities are Medical Skills, Reflexes and [unknown]. Personality: Kind, but a bit sassy. Average intelligence (Possibly a little lower), timid. a little anti-social. Very Catious Often gets left out. She's also often sad. Loves freezing cold temperatures. Calm and collected, but blows up if someone hurts her, steals from her, or harasses her. She is also often quiet.
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How to sign up:
Name:
Size:
PC:
Suit: (contains armour, helmet and accessories)
Armaments: (contains swords, guns and bombs. Custom allowed, if they are not too complex)
Sprite: (N/A for none)
Description: (will be displayed on your character section above)
Speciality: (Reflexes (Faster movement, longer dash, shield up quicker), Sharpened Sword (Sword DMG Up), Shield Spike (Damage attackers when shield is up), Powered Gun Charges (Gun DMG Up), Fury (Longer bash distance, more bash damage, quicker attacks (CTR on bombs)), Wings (can fly) - Medical Skills (heals self and nearby Knights over time) - Choose 3 - )
Personality: (will be used a lot)
Twist degree: (How your Knight is changed from normal at the end)
Expendability: (if it dies, and if so, how it does so) [WARNING: Only 5 characters apart from mine do not die and only another 5 (4 LEFT) will receive a more heroic death.

Prologue:

It was a nice morning at Haven. The Garrison was swarmed - people coming from their Guild Halls after their night's sleep. Many recruits were still sleeping on the walls of the Arcade, being so tired after their long and tedious journey through the chasm. Many Knights were at the Town Square, too. The air was filled with bustle all around Haven. Literally, every Knight in Haven was talking. Even the Strangers joined in the chatter. The only Knights who weren't talking were still sleeping. Then Feron called to silence the chatter. There was an emergency...

Look out for chapter 1!

(Don't complain about the short prologue, all my prologues are short)

Wed, 07/31/2013 - 11:09
#1
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Pow-Posts-Again
I can't start this fanfiction

I can't start this fanfiction with no characters!

Wed, 07/31/2013 - 12:56
#2
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Subsoul
Patience

Give it a day or two to let people see it.

Wed, 07/31/2013 - 12:57
#3
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Pow-Posts-Again
Yeah, that may be a good

Yeah, that may be a good idea.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 08:21
#4
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Viorayne
Done & Made Personality Shorter

Name: Edolas

Size: Tall

PC: Cobalt

Suit: Grey Owlite Hood, Heavenly Iron Armour (with Heavy Canteen).

Armaments: Glacius, Valiance, Final Flourish.

Sprite: Drakon called Ruby. Is still quite young, so only knows Fireball that has a good chance at igniting.

Description: A Fairly tall Geo-Knight, who spends more time in Guardian-Like Training when he should be researching. He is Knowledgable
however, even if it's not clear at 1st glance. He can solve equations to almost anything, just chooses not to in favour of Battle Training and Sleep.

Height: Tall (as mentioned above. Not sure what the difference between size and height would be).

Speciality: (Reflexes, Sharpened Sword, Powered Gun Charges).

Personality: Laid back, Care-Free nature, Is Hard on himself when he makes mistakes that harm others. Will strive to Protect others in any way possible.

Twist degree: Hope that he realises that the life of a Guardian isnt as glorious as he makes it out to be, and that his Geo-Knight work is more important than he ever realised it. This should help him aspire to be the best Geo-Knight he can be.

Expendability: Hope that he may die, but heroically. With a Weapon in his hands, making sure his team make it out alive. After the realisation about his twist hopefully.

Wed, 07/31/2013 - 23:10
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Pow-Posts-Again
Here.

PC means Personal Colour. ACCEPTED... But sorry, the personality needs t be shorter so I can fit it on the OP.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 02:42
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Dewca
Appy!

Name: Dewca
Size:Tall
PC: Icy blue
Suit: Skolver set, Divine scarf
Armaments: Glacius, Triglav, Hail driver, Grey owlite shield
Sprite: Seraphynx named Aqua, knows all moves apart from angelic aura, (hoping that Aqua will learn this eventually)
Description: A handsome, calm, collected man who is great at combat, he hates boiling heat and prefers the cold. A man who's personality bases on trust. However will let out his feelings by lashing out suddenly. His mother died in a fire and his father has vanished. The subject of family cuts through him.
Speciality: Reflexes, Sharpened Sword, Fury.
Personality: Calm and collected, but can let his feelings out suddenly. His friends matter a lot, his trust grows over time and he smiles regularly and his world seems to lighten up. He loves swimming and regularly dives under to calm down if angered.
Twist degree: He finds his father but his father dies and he notices that his friends would be there for him. He's scarred for life.
Expendability: Hoping that he doesn't die.
History: Started drowning in a lake and became unconscious and awoke in a lab, they experimented on him and then froze him in liquid nitrogen. He was somehow was 'forgotten' and was left there. He eventually was melted by an unknown source. He has been looking for his saviour (his father but he dosen't know that). Now he can swim underwater for amazing times and depths.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 02:56
#7
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Hearthstone

Name: Hugh

Size: Tall

PC: White

Suit: (contains armour, helmet and accessories) Dragon Scale Set

Armaments: (contains swords, guns and bombs. Custom allowed, if they are not too complex) Lionheart Honor Blade

Sprite: (N/A for none) A Seraphynx named Squeeball

Description: (will be displayed on your character section above) Unstable and hates sacrifices, cares for people much.

Speciality: Sharpened Sword (Sword DMG Up), Fury (Longer bash distance, more bash damage, quicker attacks (CTR on bombs)), Wings (can fly)

Personality: See Description.

Twist degree: I hope he understands that he doesn't have to throw his life to save an already dying girl.

Expendability: Nullify deaths until second to last final enemy.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 05:37
#8
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Pow-Posts-Again
Added

Both added. Prologue coming soon.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 08:16
#9
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Viorayne
Redone

Thanks. I cut down the Chunk of personality, and added the PC.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 20:54
#10
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Soulstaker
Wait a minute, pow and cloud?

Wait a minute, pow and cloud? Sounds very familiar. Weren't you that guy called powpowpowpowpow or something? If memory serves me right, you didn't really make a decent fanfic and was very annoying. You were probably trolling. If you have changed and here's some advice for the prologue. Always post a prologue before accepting apps because lets people know the story's environment and situation (did gremlins take over Haven? Has Feron ate all the slimes? Did the main character lose his pants while on a mission? Etc.). Makes it easier for people to fit their character into the story.

Thu, 08/01/2013 - 23:52
#11
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Pow-Posts-Again
I am Powpowpowpowpowpow,

I am Powpowpowpowpowpow, soul, but...

I don't act in a way you'd recognise me.

I am on a forum which I don't have any spare accounts on. That's how much I've grown up. And on that very forum, I made a fanfic that I'm pretty sure ten or more people said 'COOL!' to it.

I'm making the prologue right this instant.

EDIT: Prologue done! I mean, who doesn't look forward to next chapters when there's a cliffhanger?

Fri, 08/02/2013 - 05:52
#12
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Shotjeer
Anyways. A Human app.

Name:Max

Size: Medium

PC: Dark red

Suit:Full Arcane Salamander, with Divine glasses and Vanguard Crest

Armamants: AP, Leviathan Blade, Polaris, Hail Driver

Description: He enjoys shooting at monster from a distance, and is therefore a gunslinger. He occasionally needs motivation to speed things along, but that won't stop him from saving his friends.

Sprite: Maskeraith with quills and cloak, the quills are maxed out.

Specialties: Reflexes, Powered gun Charges, Wings.

Personality: Cheerful, thoughtful, is cool around others.

Twist Degree: Learning that doin what he wants is fun, but the team and his friends come first.

Expendability: I'd like him to die, but much later in the story. The death would hopefully be sacrificing his life for his team.(Not too cheesy or unoriginal I hope.)

Fri, 08/02/2013 - 08:12
#13
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Pow-Posts-Again
Ok, Shotty.

Adding...

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 01:02
#14
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

Isn't that Pow(x6)? Like, Powpowpowpowpowpow?

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 02:07
#15
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Feline-Grenadier
Supersoldiers?

Name : Jaeger

Height : Normal [5''5~6]

PC : Ultramarine

Suit : Snarbolax Coat [Cobalt Crest]; Grey Feather Cowl.

Armaments : Dual-Valiances, Dread Venom Striker w/ Wild Hunting Blade. [Incompatible with Shields]

Sprite : [Incompatible]

Description : Former comrade of Vaelyn at the Core's research camp. He devotes his body to the Order, and will commit the worst of crimes on command. He currently resides in Haven to assist new recruits.

Specialty : Reflex; Fury; Sharpened Swords.

Personality : Diligent, callous, and militaristic. Obsessed with the Order.

Twist : He remains the same. He, while having the personality of a circle on a paper, does not become affected by any "immoral" actions. The only things that will bring him conflict will only happen if it concerns the Order's or his well-being. The Order's priorities are above his life.

Expendability : Kill him off any way, any time. He isn't an exception to death.

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 03:08
#16
Glormen
Im a Bomberman by trade.

Name: Glormen

Height: 6'2

PC: blue and purple.

Suit: Plasmatech Demo suit and mask.

Armaments: Freezing Atomizer, Master Blast Bomb, Aegis, Valiance.

Sprite: N/A

Description: Local Demo man who often smirks(Do spiral knights have mouths?) under his bomb themed helmet whenever he finishes arming his weapons of choice. Even though he has fuse timers on his bombs, Glormen isn't known for his patience.

Specialty: Slowing enemies down and blowing them up.

Personality: Is often silent yet the only things shorter than his fuses is his patience and temper. Is painfully blunt.

Twist: Most of his targets are knocked out of his bomb radius by eager Knights.

Expendability: Im a bomberman. What do you think my Expendability is? All I ask is to die by gloriously killing everything else in the room with bombs.

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 10:11
#17
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Pow-Posts-Again
Ok.

The height needs to be an ingame height modifier, Glor.

Adding Vinny.

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 11:38
#18
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Nechrome
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEy it's this guy again

Weren't you banned from the forums? ._.

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 11:54
#19
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Pow-Posts-Again
I was banned, but...

I was banned from the forums (or should have been) but my old actions are worth forgetting and regretting.

Sat, 08/03/2013 - 12:03
#20
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Feline-Grenadier
Just sayin...

You guys sure aren't comfortable with killing off your characters, are you?

Sun, 08/04/2013 - 21:56
#21
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Heroia
Heroia

Name: Heroia

Height: Normal

PC: Yellow

Suit: Cool Spiral Sallet w/ Cool Mecha Wings, Cool Spiral Cuirass w/ Cobalt Crest

Armaments: Sealed sword he stumbled upon whilst adventuring, a Blaster, and a Great Defender

Sprite: Seraphynx, Riley

Specialty: Shield spike, sharpened sword, reflexes.

Description: A rookie amongst rookies. He is fresh out of the spiral knight academy of officers after being trained as a rescue officer. His job is to rescue knights when they are out of energy/sparks of life and return them to Haven safe and sound. He is expected to become a leader one day, but fears that he will fail all of whom he will lead. He is kind hearted and will rush into the greatest of scrimishes to rescue those who fall behind.

Personality: always willing to help those that need it the most. Kind, yet foolish when the odds are against him.

Twist: His sword was retrieved from his mission to rescue a group of knights at lvl 26. He wasn't able to find them, merely parts of their gear and the sword he now wields, wrapped in as many mystery as seals.

Expendibilty: let him die, if you must have him die, saving his friends while holding back a horde of monsters.

Sun, 08/04/2013 - 23:10
#22
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Pow-Posts-Again
ACCEPTED.

Ok. Adding now...

Mon, 08/05/2013 - 13:04
#23
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Shotjeer
So Pow

How many apps do you need to start Chapter 1? Don't tell me you need to fill it all in.

Mon, 08/05/2013 - 23:12
#24
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Pow-Posts-Again
@Shotjeer

Just one more to start, so I have a relatively good team to start with. I just want it big enough to have my characters unused in the team.

Wed, 08/07/2013 - 10:06
#25
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Heroia
Bump

Just bumping this thing up ^^

Wed, 08/07/2013 - 12:06
#26
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Valorai
:D

Name; Blue
Size: Short
PC: Light Blue
Suit: Frosty hood, frosty cloak ,. Accessories: Frosty Glasses, Frosty Ribbon.
Arms: Antigua and Dagger. (:D)
Sprite: E-Class Battle sprite. (Only good for recon) EDIT: Named "Eve"
Description: Ex-Medic. She used to be a medic, until she failed to save her commander on the battlefield. She is still an exceptional medic. She focuses more on speed then strength(I will add more description if you need.)
Specialty: Speed. Medical Knowledge. :P
Personality: Kind, but a bit sassy. Average intelligence (Possibly a little lower), timid. a little anti-social. Very Catious Often gets left out. She's also often sad. EDIT: Loves freezing cold Temperatures EDIT EDIT: Calm and collected, but blows up if someone hurts her, steals from her, or harasses her. She is also often quiet.
TD: Possibly overcomes shyness. Bleh. I don't care. XD
Expendability: I would like her to live, but kill her off if you want. Just make it very emotional. :D

This looks like a fun fic, and I really hope blue can join you on this adventure. :3

Wed, 08/07/2013 - 12:06
#27
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Valorai
:D

Added quite a few edits to the app. :P

Wed, 08/07/2013 - 15:37
#28
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Shotjeer
Now Pow

Start it up. Or else...*Glances at guillotine saw*

Wed, 08/07/2013 - 16:58
#29
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Valorai
Guillotine Saw?

Sounds like fun! :D

Thu, 08/08/2013 - 11:32
#30
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Heroia
Pow...

Time for you to use your name sake and POST AGAIN!

Sun, 08/11/2013 - 13:32
#31
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Heroia
How many times must I

BUMP^^

Mon, 08/26/2013 - 23:45
#32
Heroia's picture
Heroia
Asdfghjkl

Are we every going to get this started?

Tue, 08/27/2013 - 06:10
#33
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Pow-Posts-Again
Never noticed the bump

Adding characters and writing chapter 1.

By the way, some chapters will be CYS and some will be my own storyline.

CHAPTER 1:

Feron called out the details of the emergency. 'Recently, the Gremlins have made armies of all monster families and attacked our bases deep in the Clockworks. So far, 28,680 knights have been lost to these armies. What happened to them we do not know. We need a large squad of knights to bring the fight to the enemy! Who volunteers?

"We do!" called several Knights in the crowd. There were Edolas, a Geo Knight who fights more than he works, Dewca, a calm and collected man who is good in a fight, Max, a gunslinger who will do anything to save his friends, Jaeger, a former friend of Vaelyn who will do anything to help new recruits and help the Order, Heroia, a rookie fresh from the Spiral Academy and Blue, an ex-medic who prefers swiftness to hard hitting.

Feron said 'Good, we could do with a team with all your skills.' He was about to say something else, but Brinks interrupted him. Feron said sternly 'What is it, Brinks?'
Brinks said 'Sir, I chedked the crowd. Not all Knights are here. Two are missing.'
Feron asked him with a rougher voice than usual. 'Who are they? I would like a word with them'
Brinks said with a bit of panic 'Pow and Cloud, sir'
Feron shouted to Brinks 'There's a crisis going on. The two Knights may be trying it themselves. I doubt they'd succeed however, those armies have one of every monster in the Clockworks at least.'
Brinks walked away, allowing Feron to say what he was going to say. 'You will have to prepare. Those armies have at least one of every Clockworks monster. As well, all the Gremlins in the armies are of the Darkfang clan, the strongest of common Gremlins. And the leaders of the armies are none but the Crimson Order themselves. We will discuss the matter later' After saying that, Feron walked away, back to the Arcade where he normally is.

Tue, 09/17/2013 - 22:49
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Heroia
Urm

Hey, you going to expand on this?

Tue, 01/07/2014 - 00:18
#35
Heroia's picture
Heroia
Pow....

Alrighty, time for you to live up to your name sake Pow! It's been a couple months now.....

Wed, 01/08/2014 - 04:48
#36
Kookeh-Mawnster
Huzzah

Name: Rayne?
Size: normal
PC: turqoise
Suit: divine cloak and hood
Armaments: a leviathan blade , blitz needle and aegis
Sprite: N/A
Description: she was an orphaned child raised by nobody but herself. she was found by arkus and brought to the spiral order for training.
Speciality: Reflexes , Powered Gun Charges (Gun DMG Up), Medical Skills (heals self and nearby Knights over time)
Personality: prefers not to talk if available. dislikes ALMOST everybody excluding (put name here).
Twist degree: becomes more warmer in the end (you might know how to exploit this :3)
Expendability: well, you can just as well make her fall off a cliff accidently (im evil muahaha)

Wed, 01/08/2014 - 07:54
#37
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Skayeth
/laugh

Yea....I remember this guy now!

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