Alright, so here's the next story about the next character in my series, Null. Not a lot to say this time. I mean, I've sort of been writing this story since I was about halfway through my previous one, and even as I write there are some parts I want to revise. I have this habit where I let the stories wander wherever they want, not wherever I want. Maybe when I get better I can correct that.
That brings me to my next point. While I am pretty damned satisfied with Julius' story, Cross was a disappointment for me, which became more glaring after I had begin Julius' story. He was probably my most developed character at the time, and I resorted to pretty lackluster storytelling mechanics. All my stories are pretty much this 'grand scheme' I'm working on with a Spiral Knights twist, and the farther I get, the more obvious the path I SHOULD have taken becomes. Needless to say, I've been working on this awhile.
That brings me to my NEXT point, or the second half of this point: I've been planning to redo Cross' chapter, as well as make some changes to the stories, like name changes, minor(and major) story changes, general stuff like that. If you've seen my posts on all the famous fanfics before the Vault became a barren wasteland with no worthwhile stories and role-plays out the wazoo, you'll have seen all my characters with their names, personalities and biographies, hence the series' name Project Origins, which is supposed to expand on them. Well, I plan on making some changes to some of those, starting with Null, although his will be relatively minor.
I should really be giving this more effort. Kinda wish I had more drive, to be honest, but I've become a recluse since school ended. Shame, really. I mean, this was supposed to go up on the 4th, but that was my birthday, so...
Anyway, here's the next chapter in the Origins series. It was supposed to be a trilogy, but lately I've been thinking of doing more than just three. I have a couple of more characters in stock that could do with some serious thought to their own stories. So much has changed with Cross, Julius and Null over the last year or so that it would definitely help refine my skills.
Here's the prologue of Null's story. I'll be honest: since Julius' story, I've been accidentally switching between past and present tenses while writing it. Hope you enjoy, and feel free to comment.
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===Prologue===
“Where are they? Dammit, where are they?!”
I desperately scrambled around the pod, `the panic setting in. The fear was mounting. I’d have a nervous breakdown at this rate. After a few seconds of thrashing around, trying to locate what I wanted, I decided to just sit in the chair and focus. Through the window on the pod door I saw balls of fire amidst a sky of smoke, illuminated by the red glow of a colossal ship entering the atmosphere. I don’t think I could have calmed down even if I tried.
“C’mon, think. Where could they be…?”
I figured the crash must have thrown them around the pod, so they wouldn't be in any of the compartments I'd placed them in. Logically, they would have fallen...
"Oh, thank God!"
I managed to wrap my fingers around the bottle as it lay under the seat, straining myself as I did so. I didn't care, I had them. I pulled the bottle out from under the seat, twisting the top off and pouring a few white pills into my hand.
"Just need one... I guess I can take two. Yeah, circumstances call for two."
I popped two of the little pills into my mouth, swallowing them whole. I sank into the chair, waiting for the effects to kick in, watching the inferno descend outside. After what felt like hours, I noticed I was calming down. A little too much, which brought a bit of the fear back. That cancelled the mellow out nicely. I felt about as tense as normal after that, and emotionally flat to boot. I was not looking forward to when the effects wore off, leaving me with more panic I’d have to deal with.
A rumble shook the pod, jolting me out of my self-awareness. A blinding light shone through the window, blinding me. I shut my eyes, instinctively gripping the pod's chair as the pod itself was thrown from where it had impacted. As I flew through the air, the calm, rational part of me reached for the belt buckles, using them to strap me into the seat. My stomach lurched as the pod reached its apex and started to plummet.
It was a few hours later when I woke up. The bottle had gone missing again, to my annoyance. I took the liberty of searching for it again before gathering the rest of my equipment, unbuckling myself as I did so. The pills' effects were still more-or-less active, so I resisted the urge to take more. Sheathing my sword and holstering my pistol, I tentatively reached for the handle of the pod door. The window didn't show much. It was pitch black.
I tugged at the handle. The door blasted off its hinges, landing metres away with a loud crash. I clambered out, noting the atmosphere's non-toxic environment. I stretched, my joints stiff from the crash, then relocation, and most notably the medication. Damn side-effects. I looked around, taking note of where I was. I appeared to have landed in some sort of forest after being thrown from what I guessed was the shockwave caused by the Skylark's crash. I couldn't tell if it was night, or if the smoke had blocked out the sun.
With little option other than wait in my pod and starve, or be eaten, I decided to wander aimlessly until I found another survivor. A mere few hours of wandering took its toll on me, with my legs aching, my feet sweating uncomfortably, and my head dizzy from thirst. I was never the fittest. I heard a growl at some point during the journey, and whirled around to see a pair of red eyes glaring out through the branches and shrubs. My swordplay was never up to par, so I readied my pistol, firing off a few shots. A whimper followed by the sound of something collapsing told me I was in the clear. I hastened to reload when a few large mammals leapt from the darkness, boxing me in. Without much choice, I unsheathed my sword, and started swinging.
I made it out okay, with little more than a bite or two, neither of which were deep. As expected, some panic set in: were the wolves rabid? Am I infected? I didn't pay much attention to the fears consciously. I just turned and walked on as I had been doing, the fear eating away at me, a feeling I knew all too well. It took another half an hour or so before I got a message from HQ. They'd set up shop a mile or so to my west-by-northwest. I was already hungry and tired, so I opted to take a rest and partake in some rations before moving on.
I always hated rations. Everything was either powder or pellets, and with or without the added metallic-flavoured water, it tasted like crap.
Been working on a story of my own. Tense changing got me a few times, still double checking things. Also been seeing a few messed up possessives in mine. So you have my sympathy.
I like how you took the time to describe the pod landing, thats something even the game overlooks. Happy to get first comment.