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Defrosting [fanfic]

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Sat, 08/31/2013 - 21:10
Anbroid-One

Entry in Tev's contest. Thought I'd like to get feedback.
Who might have been affected by the events of Heart of Ice?

Read it here.

Sat, 08/31/2013 - 21:26
#1
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone
Well written, I rate 8/10.

Meh, I have other reasons but too lazy atm. You're a great writer, all I have to say.

Sun, 09/01/2013 - 02:10
#2
Topoyozariane's picture
Topoyozariane
Awesome!

^^^

Mon, 09/02/2013 - 19:37
#3
Sandwich-Hero's picture
Sandwich-Hero
Tis good

Maybe you could expand the story a little bit, such as the later hours of the storm and after it ends. Other than that I'll rate you 7/10, good day sir.

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