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Mon, 11/04/2013 - 21:35
#101
Sandwich-Potato's picture
Sandwich-Potato
So, let me have a quick summary here:

-Lucario still awaits confirmation for xyr newest character, a power-stealing Owlite.
-Granseal, Remiliaoftheearth, Hexlash, and Topo have all mysteriously vanished into the pit of plot holes.
-We've broken the rules, at least a dozen times:
-NPC controlling (Collector)
-Power-playing (Metal Sonic going Kaplooie)
-Mary Sue characters (Fennel's "Limit Break")
-Meta-gaming (The actual word "Sprite")
-God-moding (Me randomly creating a system of unleashing arcane doom)
-Not staying in character (Fennel transforming into a polite lad after attempting to slit your throat)
Huh. Well, it's been real, guys. XD

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 00:44
#102
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Waiting...

Still waiting on Thin...

Also Sandwich, my new character can only copy the magic move and use it to the same effect as the original.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 06:10
#103
Sandwich-Potato's picture
Sandwich-Potato
@Robo

Metal Sonic went Kablooie with a Nitronome to the innards. I don't think there's anything left of him to attack or move with. :P

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 06:20
#104
Viorayne's picture
Viorayne
Is very unlikely.

Yeah, at the most you may have a head with a few cracks in it.
Could be a Talking head/Eavesdropping Head.

But coming off from a 5* Bomb to the inside...
As well as the whole Medical Facility's Nova like Explosion from the Outside...
With the Scrap that was used to repair you...

Basically its not gonna happen.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 08:48
#105
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Robo-Drilldigger
Trying to ruin me...

Look at the picture... The circle bit that was tilted inside only shows where the laser works... Besides, the only main problem that affects Metal Sonic is Fire and the armor he has is similar to ancient plate armor defense wise...

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 08:51
#106
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
STILL WAITING!

Been a full day now waiting for the new app...

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 08:58
#107
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Name: Darkness Do you mind

Name: Darkness Do you mind using a more unique word for a name? The word 'darkness' is likely to pop up in this RP more than a few times, and I don't want it confused with your character.

Gender: Male Fine.

Age: Unknown (Owlite's age rate is unknown so far) Acceptable. I would have preferred a number, but okay.

Race: Owlite Interesting.

Personality: Kind, likes people that use magic, can be shy around magical females, patient and can't see in the light well. Likes people who use magic? Isn't that a bit...picky?

Loadout: Telepathy, telekinesis (Ability to grab and move stuff) and the ability to copy other magic (Can hold 4 different magic copied) Copying just one is probably enough.
Darkness special (Covers the floor in darkness, not a copied move.) I don't think that being born in darkness gives him control over it. Besides, this isn't a particularly strong ability. Shadow cloaking would be more appropriate.
Fireball (Deals elemental damage, chance of causing burn, copied move) This doesn't have to be a copied move. I always figured this was an almost natural ability for Owlites.
Teleport (Allows Darkness to teleport behind enemies, copied move, cooldown of 5 minutes.) Why teleport when you can fly?
Final blade (Deals a large amount of piercing damage, copied move, cooldown of 2 minutes.) Owlites cannot use weapons.
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Appearance (Best thing I could find...) I've seen that pic only about a week prior. Good choice.

Biography: Darkness got his name when he was born in the dark. Because of this, he never learned what to do because the school was covered in light and Darkness couldn't see well. He then used a magic skill that every owlite gets when they are born but it is always different. The school got surprised and kicked him out of the school because of the move.
I still think another name would suit him better. How about Tyvell? (Tywyllwch is Welsh for 'darkness')

Darkness started to explore even though he was defenseless until he saw another Owlite using a move and Darkness copied it. It seemed his long time in the dark gave him the ability to copy magic and use them. He was also friends with the Grimalkins who hated the light as well. As we know Kats and Owlites almost never get along but these 2 shared a common weakness... Highly implausible. Being born in darkness doesn't give you much of anything, and why does it give you the ability to copy magic? Why doesn't it do that for everyone? And I highly doubt that an Owlite would be friends with a Grimalkin for any reason, considering how the Kats completely destroyed the Owlite civilization.

As Darkness was growing he started to copy new moves that would aid him and as he was fighting against carnavons who threw their shields, he learned a new move which allowed him to grab items with his mind and throw them back. He destroyed the carnavons and used the new skill to explore deeper the clockworks... I don't think you need to explain how he got his telekinesis ability. ;)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 09:01
#108
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Robo

This is not the Sonic universe. Granted the Sonic armor style is in the game and is presented as an item to use. However, think with a logical mind for a moment.

He had himself pulled together with scrap. He was attacked by a force that knows how to make robots and unbuild them.

You put yourself in a lose lose situation and there is no way out. Just take what happened and move on, I am sorry it did not work out the way you wanted. But as stated by Thin, your dead mate. Would you like to restart and try a new character?

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 09:12
#109
Viorayne's picture
Viorayne
@Robo

Im agreeing with Dark.
The stuff he was repaired with, was scrap. That was all done up to your picture, as aesthetics.
Basically for show. It wouldn't have really done anything more than some scrap metal would against the 5* Bomb.

I suggest restarting with a new character, and try to RP with less Power-Gaming, More Logical Gaming.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 09:29
#110
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Retry on App

Moved app to here and I thought you would need to know how he got telekinesis...

Name: Tyvell

Gender: Male

Age: Unknown (Owlite's age rate is unknown so far)

Race: Owlite

Personality: Kind, works well with people that use magic, can be shy around magical females, patient and can't see in the light well.

Loadout: Telepathy, telekinesis (Ability to grab and move stuff), Fireball (Deals elemental damage, chance of causing burn), shadow cloak (Covers Tyvell in darkness making him hard to see and gives Tyvell better sight)

Appearance (Best thing I could find...)

Biography: Tyvell got his name when he was born in the dark. Because of this, he never learned what to do because the school was covered in light and Tyvell couldn't see well. He then used a magic skill that every owlite gets when they are born but it is always different. The school got surprised and kicked him out of the school because of the move.

Tyvell started to explore and used his Fireball to knock back enemies but for beasts and gremlins, he had to fly away from them and when they tried to shoot him, he used Telekinesis and launched it back. Even when he couldn't see, he was still able to launch the bullets back. Tyvell is currently entering Emberlight...

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 09:29
#111
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Thinslayer
@Robo-Drilldigger

Lucky you, I've already got a sample app up for you.

Name: Mecanwaith (Welsh for 'mechanism')
Age: 1 day (recently created)
Gender: male programming
Affiliation: Spiral Order
Appearance
Weapon
Personality: loyal, obedient, naive, and curious, like any other newly-created robot of semi-sentient intelligence.
Biography: Reprogrammed and rebuilt by Bosco only the day before, Mecanwaith now serves as a loyal mecha knight in the Spiral Order.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 09:30
#112
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Creeperlucario

Alrighty, app accepted!

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 10:03
#113
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Next rule

From now on, all story posts shall be written in third-person past tense (e.g. "he did," not "I do" or "he does."). First-person is just too confusing.

Also, try to avoid ending sentences with ellipses (that's three periods, "..."). It's meant to cannote drifting off, often used to suggest the building of tension. It should not be used to end a sentence.

Good example: "Bob entered into the darkness. Nothing could prepare him for what he found next..."
Bad example: "He grabbed a mug of coffee... He sat down in front of the television... His wife came in and complained that he used too many ellipses..."

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 10:09
#114
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Robo-Drilldigger
Reboot

Whelp, Metal is now dead...

Name: Mecanwaith (Welsh for 'mechanism')
Age: 1 day (recently created)
Gender: male programming
Affiliation: Spiral Order
Appearance
Needle Sniper (Can't think of a good name for it...)
Personality: loyal, obedient, naive, and curious, like any other newly-created robot of semi-sentient intelligence.
Biography: Reprogrammed and rebuilt by Bosco only the day before, Mecanwaith now serves as a loyal mecha knight in the Spiral Order.

((OOC: I really can't think for anything for bio...))

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 10:25
#115
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Robo-Drilldigger

App is accepted. xD

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 10:26
#116
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
Whoops, never mind this post

Title says all

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 10:26
#117
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

You know this is the Discussion thread, right?

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 11:59
#118
Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
I have no clue where to start

Where can I start? Near Jorin, near Mortis, I just don't know.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 12:24
#119
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Thinslayer

What are you going to do to ma Mortis q.q he is a love able undead who gets Snipes stuck in his eye sockets. xD (Could not resist but to bring that back up)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 12:37
#120
Viorayne's picture
Viorayne
@Dark

Speaking of Snipes, are you sure there werent any hidden back in your eye sockets when they entered the Void?
They may be the 1st Snipes that reach the core :P

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 12:39
#121
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Edolas

Its unclear. There could be one in his skull, remember Mortis took a nap in the middle of the small court yard ajasent to the fountain in Haven. So it is possible. We won't know till we reach the core. Who knows maybe one is in there some where...Imagen of a Stranger found a Snipe in his Skull xD

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 14:35
#122
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Might not be able to post tomorrow

I am not feeling well and my writing is getting worse because of it, so Sorry if I don't post in a long time.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 14:37
#123
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Creeperlucario

Don't worry about it, take your time. I'll try to get you caught up when you're ready to post again.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 15:48
#124
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Topoyozariane
Urm....

Im going to be applying for a mod post, Thin, because you're kinda having holes. You respond to one, you forget the other. You respond to that one, you forget the other. Not that I'm complaining. I just think you're kinda busy, so.... I want to help you out a bit.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 15:59
#125
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Topo

We got this . (He could use some help. But we should let Thin decide when and who it will be en?)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 17:58
#126
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
Double Post/useful Post: @Thin

Why do I ahve the feeling Eva is going to be more leaning to the Ghost mane stalkers :L IDK just something about some one being that nice. It never ends well. Look at the Golden Haired woman. Unless I am missing something this will not end well.

Drup.

(Found out how to make a double post. Woot for me)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 18:08
#127
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Darkwatck

*She wields a Divine Avenger.
*She claims power over Heavenly Light.
*She isn't a beautiful seductress.
*She lives in the Core itself.

She's probably not evil. ;)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 18:13
#128
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
LIES AND SLANDER!

Even the most disposed light, can be a dark beaken for the devils men. The hold of what we call good is what others call there evil. :| But mah I will play along.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 18:21
#129
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Darkwatck

Here are the considerations.
*She is claimed to have raised the entire Gremlin race. Gremlins are hostile.
*One of her servants is an Apocrean.
*She is technically-savvy (like the Gremlins).
*She has created weaponry (those auto turrets at the Core's entrance).
*She wields equipment fit for combat, including a Divine Avenger.
*She has power over light and energy.

She might be evil, or at least unfriendly to certain parties. But I will not confirm it. ;)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 18:28
#130
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
O.o

Some one better get that phone.

what?

Because I mother FACKING Called it!

I hope you know I am only messing. IDK what the future holds I can only think.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 20:09
#131
Viorayne's picture
Viorayne
Gallon Limirick *May use as Recurring Phrase that haunts Gallon*

He ran through the halls,
And burning down walls,
Into the streets of smoking Almire.
As his Kingdom arose,
Into smoky death woes,
His life had gone up in a pyre.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 20:35
#132
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Sandwich-Potato
@Edo

That's not how a limerick works. It goes like this:

A
A
B
B
A

Example:

There once was a man from Peru,
Who dreamed he was eating his shoe,
He awoke in the night
And found out with a fright
That the dream had sadly come true.

Here, I'll drum one up for Gallon.

There once was an expert Bronze Lancer
They say he's Sir Gallon of Almire
But they also claimed that
He was a Lichen, quite fat
So it's not bizarre to call them liars.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 10:25
#133
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
Another new app

Since the main post is slow, I am going to create a new app

Name: Adam

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Rank: Vanguard

Loadout: Necklace that provides light in the dark,
Appearance
4 Diamond Swords (Act like Leviathan Blades, chance to deal double damage, can be used as a shield and has a durability limit.)

Personality: Prefers to work alone, kind, rather use 1 sword unless the situation requires 2 swords and an Expert sword wielder.

Biography: Adam was on the Skylark when it crashed into Cradle. On the way down into Cradle, his armor got smashed to bits making it useless and when the pod crashed, Adam fell out with all his materials being destroyed except for his swords and necklace. He started to explore the new planet fighting off lots of enemies including beasts and kats.

After exploring, he found 3 safe spots which where Haven, Moorcraft Manor and Emberlight. He currently is in Emberlight trying to reach the core and help bring the Skylark back up and leave the planet. He has seen the explosion in a building but prefers to get to the core then finding out the problem.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 11:00
#134
Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Uh

Where is everyone?

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 11:52
#135
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Eva, a.k.a. Noswyl

Here is a better picture of Eva.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 11:58
#136
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
Waiting on 2 things...

1. Is my new character accepted Thin?

2. Where is everyone because the main post is slow...

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 12:00
#137
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Deadly-Sin-Revenge

1. No.
2. Busy.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 12:01
#138
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
@Thin

What did I get wrong on the app Thin?

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 12:09
#139
Hexlash's picture
Hexlash

Sorry for my absence, life was just kinda busy, and it felt almost like homework to read posts, so I decided to step out. Since I probably will not catch up on everything that has happened, I'll just take advantage of various things, and hopefully I can join up with you guys...

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 12:55
#140
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Hexlash

You're not the only one. On all counts.

*My life is busy too.
*Reading the posts kinda feels like homework.
*Catching up is a pain.

@Deadly-Sin-Revenge:
Loadout is unacceptable. SK equipment only.
Appearance is unacceptable. It's too pixelated.
Personality has no depth whatsoever.
Biography is implausible. Knight armor does not simply get smashed to bits. One does not simply explore the Clockworks and reach Emberlight as if you were taking a stroll in the park.

Basically the entire app is unacceptable.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 13:07
#141
Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
Waiting

I have to wait until Sandwich or Edolas post now...

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 15:00
#142
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Thin

She looks nice. And ya I know the feeling of too much [scrap] on my plate. Sorry but I am using the curse as a reference. Collage :L

Also, I hate to make you think more since your already at the pecks end. But instead of the red flames. They have all turned blue? I am just asking since the cracks in his body where read and bla. Also does the Revive passive still sling out around him. Not like he had control over who it revived anyway. But I suppose I should ask.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 16:09
#143
Sandwich-Potato's picture
Sandwich-Potato
Waiting on either Edo to do something or for Thin to add stuff.

Because heroes should never get a break :P.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 16:26
#144
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
But we, are only human.

Mr. Potato.

Only Human.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 17:35
#145
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
Replies

@Sandwich-Potato: Don't worry, fun stuff is coming. If you ever wanted to chat with a Snarbolax, you'll get that chance. ;)

@Darkwatck: Not sure I understand your question. Could you rephrase it?

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 17:48
#146
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
@Thinslayer

The way you described his shift. Is he still a skeleton who can use the 'revive' passive ability that is natural to him. On that note, instead of cursed fire. Is the element that drives him something else now. As in a blue fire or as some have dubed it 'holy' fire. Since you described her abilities as 'Light' and in a since devine. Am I too far off to say that his color has changed to Blue.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 17:59
#147
Sandwich-Potato's picture
Sandwich-Potato
Rhendon seems to be quite a bit more feisty...

I like it :D. In the missions, he was kind of one-dimensional, the classic "Nice Guy, meh" thing, somehow getting a 5* Blitz and dealing >1 damage per hit with it.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 18:00
#148
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Darkwatck

Now that you mention it, no, he cannot revive zombies. Zombies are powered by accursed fire, not by Core energy. He can, however, revive beings powered by Core energy, like Apollos. The element that drives him is light (stun), not fire. And yes, his color has changed from orange to blue.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 18:05
#149
Darkwatck's picture
Darkwatck
Ah

Thank you for clearing that up. Now I may Post with out looking like a durp.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 19:49
#150
Viorayne's picture
Viorayne
Hm...

@Sandwich
Yeah, I have no real plot advancing ideas.
Waiting on either Creeper's Owlite to make a move, or Thin.

@Thin
Snarbolax eh?
*Looks at new Pierce Halberd*
...
*Looks at Pierce Vulnerable Snarby*
...
*Looks at new Pierce Halberd again*

...Well this is a no-brainer of what Im gonna try and slay.

ALSO. Do you want to take back control of Jorin & Spanner?

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