Spiral Knights - A New Haven [New Fan Fiction] Accepting Character Applications!

A New Haven [New Fan Fiction] Accepting Character Applications!

39 replies [Last post]

Wed, 10/30/2013 - 15:47

Topoyozariane

Hey guys! Topoyozariane here!

Sorry for everyone who read the last thread. I deleted that. I decided to make a new one. So... here goes.....

Link to A Hidden Danger: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xgro6Jnx1KpultR8lLril-hdFNm5GC1zRRTd...

Character Applications Goes like this.....

(I am using a character application from my last fan-fiction as an example.)

Name: Arthur
Age: 371 cycles
Race: Human avatar for the Core
Allegiance: Spiral Order
Appearance: pale skin, silvery-white hair, soft gray eyes, slim & somewhat feminine body build
Bio: Before he became the Core's avatar, he was a blacksmith for the Spiral Order. One day, while he was gathering supplies for his work, the Core created a telepathic link to his mind and took it over.

Personality: The personality of the Core hasn't changed much; as the Core's avatar, he is kind, generous, loyal to his Knights, and is a bit sassy. Some people mistake him for a homosexual due to his feminine mannerisms, and they wouldn't be too far off, since the Core considers itself female. Thanks to the Core's extensive studies of the knights, Arthur does not seem very unusual as humans go.

Loadout: Magic Hood & Cloak

Powers: full extent is unknown; space-time manipulation, energy-to-matter conversion, teleportation, and genetic manipulation are second nature to the Core (and therefore Arthur).

-------------------------

That is a role-model character application I took from Thinslayer.

Btw, I will need 4 character applications for 'Omega Squad'.

Anyways.... I will be posting new chapters onto this thread, but I will not put links.

-------------------------

Prologue:

Haven was busy, as usual. Knights milling around in the Town Square, bidding for costumes, accessories and weapons. The usual latter sitting around, chatting in the Bazaar, and the ones ready for adventure in the Arcade.
It was a perfect day for a picnic.
A perfect day for mass killings too.
Seerus grinned maniacally, and twisted the joystick to get a better view from the drone. It was flying above Haven, and he had a clear view of the entire Haven.
‘ENERGY SIGNATURES: 600
HEAT SIGNATURES: 750 ‘
“Perfect.” Seerus grinned, and grabbed a remote from his desk. Fiddling with it for a few seconds, he took one last glance at the screen, and pressed the button.

In various locations, such as the Auction House, underneath the fountain, the sprite food machine, several tons of detonite exploded at the touch of Seerus’ finger, flinging Knights and Strangers alike all over the floor. In a blink of an eye, the usual Auction House had become a kill-zone, where fire licked at the wounded Knights and Strangers still on the floor, while the smoke from the explosion still hung on the air, choking everyone nearby. With three more twitches of his finger, the Bazaar, the Arcade and the Garrison exploded, sending a static image on his screen. But Seerus knew what he would see. Burned corpses lay on the floor, while Stranger struggle to escape. Buildings on fire, Haven in panic. It was time for the second phase of his plan.

Watching the replay from a screen, Lt.Feron tightened his fist as he watched it again and again. No doubt it was the work of Seerus. He alone had invented traps and machines that killed Knights. He clicked the replay, and watched a Knight, who was leaning on the fountain, grinning and laughing, suddenly turn into a burning stick, flying through the air. He clicked replay again, to find details that would help him in his investigation, when a knock interrupted his video. Tired, he pressed stop, and said, “Come in.”
Four knights entered, their faces black with smoke. They saluted before sitting down in front of Feron.
“I believe you’re Omega squad?” The four nodded. “I see you have helped in the rescue of the knights in the bombing.” They nodded again. “Well, we need your help. We’re pretty sure it was Seerus that done this, and we need you to track him down. We’ll be sending additional squads to assist you in your search. Good luck.” And with that, Feron stood up, and wearily exited the room.

Thu, 10/31/2013 - 05:06

Hearthstone

Still gonna use Kyrie, but he should have grown a little...

BUUUUUUUUUT WAIT!

Didn't you turn him into a Vog Cub?... Well, in that case...

Application: An entirely Apocrean-based app

Name: Axl

Age: 19

Race: Apocrean-Knight Incarnate

Allegiance: Arbitrary, changes depending on his feelings or right of way or etc...

Appearance: Apocrean Hood+Mantle of Influence(hence the Arbitrary Allegiance), Apocrean Disciple Wings, jet black hair and pretty boy face

Bio: By the age of 17, his parents were victims of the Apocrean Disaster, so he was sent to his aunt. His aunt was bad towards him, torturing him and all that. He snuck out to the outside world, and dove into the Clockworks, where he witnessed the Apocrean Harvesters. That time, he was already a knight, toting a Leviathan Blade and the Azure Guardian Set, when he tried to get rid of the Harvesters. Unfortunately, he was not informed of their abilities yet, so he dove into action, and got himself killed. The Apocrean Harvesters, seeing the potential rage in the boy, ready to be harnessed, revived him, and put a seed in him. He was sent back to Haven, and when he turned 19, the seed grew and began to override his system. His Apocrean Disciple Wings and Hood and Mantle slowly appeared on him. He still tries to seek the Harvesters out for revenge. His control of the power is stable, and can manage himself with ease.

Personality: Loner, Anti-Villain type and will try to defeat anyone who objects against his current allegiance

Loadout: Obsidian Edge, Obsidian Carbine + Appearance

Powers: Can operate negative forces, generate a shield with his wings' shards, use the wings' shards as weapons

EDIT: Downgrade him a little if necessary :P

Thu, 10/31/2013 - 15:37

Topoyozariane

Nah

Skype, your application is accepted. Now I just need more apps....

Thu, 10/31/2013 - 21:01

Hearthstone

This is from Divine:

Application: Divine-esque character

Name: Rai Oh (first name)

Age: 16

Race: Valkyrie

Allegiance: Well... Um... Belief of God?

Appearance: She has valkyrie wings initially, White Eyes, Silver Hair, often without her Valkyrie Helm but integrates it's offered defense

Bio: She simply is an envoy of God, sent down to try and make anyone join the allegiance. She cares for others' opinions, but prefers they don't try to express it as much to prevent drastic measures.

Personality: I-don't-give-a-[censored] attitude and will get her right of way however she wants it, despite her faction

Loadout: Valkyrie Helm/Armor, Divine Avenger, Grey Owlite Shield

Powers: Ray of Light, able to release a powerful pillar of light when she charges her DA

Fri, 11/01/2013 - 12:23

Critzer

Name: Critzer

Age:22

Race: Spiral knight (idk what race they are really…. they're not human in the game itself so yeah…)

Allegiance: Her allegiance is to her friends, not to a corporation nor to an army. It’s to those who are willing to respect her and her ways.

Appearance: She is 6’ with heavy(muscular) but still feminine. Her wide eyes are a bleach white and her hair is a pure white thats long and flows down a bit past her waist. Her armor keeps her skin quite light and smooth.

Bio: She was abandoned by her family early on since she was female. They didn't care for a girl and instead wanted a boy. They couldn't sustain having two children, which led to her abandonment. She lived alone, moving from place to place (mainly junkyards) most of her life until she joined the order at the age of 17. She had become strong from her experience physically but not mentally. She liked to seclude herself or create a ‘safe place’ between herself and people. This turned into her liking heavy armor and long range weapons and later formed into a passion. She is known as the ‘Panzer from hell’ for her style of combat due to her passion. She wears multiple layers of heavy metals that are angled for optimum protection and on her shoulder lies an 8 foot long cannon that fires large 128mm projectiles at her target from an immense distance.The projectiles can be HE(high explosive), APCR(Armor Piercing Composite Non Rigid), incendiary, or fragmented (the shell explodes before impact and sends shrapnel at targets). To operate the cannon, she needs to ‘dig in’ meaning she drives supportive piston that are positioned on the back of her calves, thighs, and back (hooked to armor of course). To help her concentrate, her helmet is heavily armored as well and blocks sound from outside as well as having a sight for her cannon. With this seclusion, she mainly listens to orchestra when she is in a destructive mood or heavy metal when concentrating. Even with all this weight that she carries, she can move around just fine, maybe can't do as many movements as she’d like though. Also, her armor is scratched from things trying to break through it, marks from heavy projectiles hitting it and bouncing off, and the soot from her cannon firing. For anything that comes too close to her to use her cannon, she has a sideblade, by side blade I mean a combuster. When not using her cannon or not ‘digged in’, the cannon folds into segments and moves to her back. When not in her armor (which is rare) she wears a costume.

Personality: She is shy and secluded from those who she doesn't know (meaning she wears her armor to shield herself from their view). But once someone become close to her, she opens up and becomes a bit bubbly towards them. When she is extremely excited and or motivated, she tips over the insanity ledge and becomes quite destructive to her enemies, being quite bloodthirsty and gruesome (like using an APCR round to pierce 8 enemies or HE to splatter guts around the room). She loves her friends and hates those who hurts them, being very protective of them. Though when her friends act ridiculously stupid, she lets them face the consequences of their actions. Though she never went to school, it doesn't mean she isn't smart, she knows tons of stuff about the things she likes (armor, fire, cannons, metal working, and nuclear engineering). But with common stuff and taking hints, she is a bit slower than everyone else. Her armor makes her a bit braver at times.

Loadout: A combuster as her sideblade and the armor and her cannon go over a skolver set (keeps her nice and cozy). Her costume is a hallow plume helmet with vertical vents and glasses and a hallow furcoat with hallow wings and hallow bomb bandoleer.

Powers: None really, except her strength with her armor is off the charts and she is amazingly fast with it off aswell. She can take the cold a lot better than most.

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 07:34

Pipipipipi

The 4th Wall Shall be Shattered!!!

Name: Rasfie
Age: 19
Race: Knight
Allegence: Spiral Order
Appearance: his left arm is robotic, has short brown hair, blue determined eyes.
Bio: at the age of 1, dozens and dozens of hostile gremlins chased after his parents, they had stolen something of importance to them, and they could not hold back much longer, so they went to Emberlight. They told the gremlins there to hide Rasfie, and protect him until he would be ready. Most of the gremlins dicided not to take Rasfie for themselfs but a married couple of gremlins dicided to keep him and raise him. His mom handed them Rasfie and then his parents ran away to try to get away from the hostile gremlins.
That was the last Rasfie saw of his parents, he had never acually learned their names.
The Hostile Gremlins took a way around Emberlight and started going down the clockworks to search for them, but they never found them. Rasfie had learned a lot with the Emberlight gremlins, and even found out he is a natural tinker and constructer.
His first building of a robot was when he was 5. He had been watching other gremlins build stuff and he wanted to join in, so he grabbed a bunch of spare peices of metal and took it into his house. He started weilding a bunch of peices together with a spare weilder he found, when his gremlin dad suddenly appeared to check on him and startled him, and sent the fire from the weilder right into his left shoulder and cut off his left arm. His gremlin dad gasped and ran over to Rasfie who started crying hard. He wasn't that ok, his face was also covered with ashes because he didn't know to use a weilder mask, his gremlin dad bandaged it and the next day, his gremlin dad put a robotic arm where Rasfie's left arm was. That night, he worked on his robot more and was finished (also he found a weilder's mask and used it this time). He turned it on and it worked, he named the robot Odnag. He has since then added more and more to Odnag who was always his best friend to him. He has also created his own bigger robotic arm when he needs to.
When he was 18, he could go to the surface and start working for the spiral order. He packed his bags and went up to haven which he thought was beautiful when he first saw it, (after all, he had been living underground for 17 years) and started working for spiral order and has since been working for them for one and a half years
Personality: Thinks parents are still alive and out in the clockworks somewhere. Is kind and understanding. Wants to find out all the mysterys about his life. Eager for excitment.

Loadout: a modified Thwack hammer that does elemental damage. Crystal bombs he throws at enemys. A gun mode and sword mode for his robotic arm. Likes tinkering and stuff like that. Miracle hood and cloak.

Powers: none, but his robotic arm can hit really hard and again, it can have a gun on it fire and a sword come out of it.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Name: Odnag
Age: do robots have ages? well, he has been "alive" for 14 years.
Race: Robot
Allegiance: Rasfie
Appearance: looks like a blue mecha knight, but 2 eyes instead of one and much better looking and functioning much better. Has a big propeller on his head
Bio: Was built by Rasfie, back then, all he was, was a small head with a propeller that let him fly. He has always followed Rasfie and advising him. Over the years Rasfie added more stuff and even some weapons to Odnag.
Personality: Wise and will put up a fight to protect innocents.
Loadout: Light plated armor that is very good at protecting him, a great defender that Rasfie got him when he first came to haven. A antigua and a thwack hammer.
Powers: can fly by changing shape, but can not fire while flying

Fri, 11/01/2013 - 19:16

Topoyozariane

LOL!

Two character applications, one from Critzer, a forumer older than I am. Pipipipipi.... I think you have a weird obsession for the mathematical term 'Pi'.

All three applications are accepted.

Divine, as 'God' doesn't really exist on Cradle (Not saying he doesn't exist, I'm Christian!), so I'll be changing it the 'the Core'

Critzer, I will change it like this.....

No sideblade. Cannon needs long time to reload. And.... she doesn't move REALLY fast, she just moves like an average Spirilian.

And for Rasfie, no OP thwack hammer, but crystal bombs and normal thwack hammer is okay.

And.... he's working for Emberlight, not Spiral Order.

Fri, 11/01/2013 - 19:33

Hearthstone

Like I said, Divine, I'll post it for you!!!!

/runs away from Divine.

Fri, 11/01/2013 - 19:36

Kotaro-Yukiko

-_-

@Topo

- Yes. I could tell you're CHRISTIAN even if you didn't tell me. I could see it. Because I'm DIVINE damn it!
- /Slaps Topo and Skye/Hearthstone

- /runs away laughing like a maniac. "MUAHAHAHA!" and returns
- /Slaps both of them again! "MUAHAHA! Ah~! that's refreshing..." ^^

Fri, 11/01/2013 - 23:34

Critzer

>_<

The reason is said really fast was...well... its only common sense she'd move fast without her armor on and her leg muscles would be ridiculously muscular... But its fine, i was worried you would think it was to far out of the ball park to even critique it so i am thankful :D

-/Slaps Divine to the ground then points at him like she is punishing a puppy "No! Bad boy!" :3

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 00:56

#10

Hearthstone

-girl*

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 01:46

#11

Kotaro-Yukiko

@Critzer

-First of all, I am a girl.
-2nd, you cannot tell me what to do you hag! (Jk)
-3rd, you're a hag. (JK)
-4th, you're still a hag.(Joke!!!)
-5th, you're... of course, a hag.(JK)
-6th, I'm a cat!!!
-7th, I hate puppies! Me is Kittens!
-8th, I'm out of ideas!
-9th, you cannot tell me what to do you hag! I'll punish you with a scary roar! ------- "Mew!!!" Muahahaha! How's that for a kitty? >:3
-/Chases Critzer.
-Critzer says, "You cannot catch MEEE!!!"
-/bites Critzer's arm and runs away feeling toothaches. "I hate it when I bite a human's bone..." Recovers from toothaches.

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 02:16

#12

Critzer

Ahhem

-....w/e
-If your a kitty...then im a fox...

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 03:05

#13

Kotaro-Yukiko

So?

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 07:15

#14

Pipipipipi

1. hmm, yeah that is op, he

1. hmm, yeah that is op, he had modified it to do elemental damage and just more damage, I will probally reduce that if it is ok, but I think it should at least do elemental damage with the thwack hammer.

2. oopes, I forgot to put why he is working for the spiral order in the Bio

3. you think I got a weird obsession? I know someone with a weird obsession for cupcakes.

editing my previous post

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 16:18

#15

Dewca

Umm...

Name: Ashen

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Appearence: Dark, black hair and brown, warm eyes. Tall, around 6 feet.

Loadout: (Inside) Skolver cap and coat, (Costume) White battle chef coat and hat, Frozen great cleaver, Combuster, Argent Peace Maker, Heater shield.

Personality: A happy, warm guy who normally whips up the best meals under 5 minutes. He's quite humble although thoroughly enjoys compliments from his delicious meals. He keeps the spirit level of the team up. Although being a great chef, he is has extremely exceptional sword skills which come in quite handy when chopping up meat. It is recorded that he has chopped up an Alpha Wolver into fine slices of approximately 1 mm thick in 20 seconds.

Bio: A distant relative of the ever so famous Biscotti, Ashen managed to cook a full 3 meal course when he was 11. Despite his cooking hobby, he is not to be underestimated when coming to combat. Although excellent with any sword, he can't shoot for toffee. He went on runs with his trusty Blaze Brand until crafting his own Mighty Cleaver when he aged to 17. He eventually found the tool, useful to chop off chromalisk's heads. His mother was disgusted when his cleaver was covered in blood more than usual and threw out of the window. Ashen managed to rescue his cleaver that night to find that the ice had found its way through the metal (it was winter) and was now deep frozen. He preferred it this way when a Wolver managed to drag away his Frozen Cleaver but froze it's teeth until they dropped off. Ashen has now joined the Omega squad and delights the team with his assorted platters.

Powers: Awesome at making cupcakes??? Can get so angry his eyes actually pierce things??? Can magically create clones that help him??? I dunno but make him have a surprise power. (I was joking at the last 2 but being serious on the cupcakes thing. He literally hypnotises people with them, he dosen't mean to though...)

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 18:22

#16

Dermog

Hopefully I make it in

Name: Dermog

Gender: male

Age: 20

Race: Spiral Knight (Because you know how it is with these guys :P )

Allegiance: Spiral Order

Appearance: Warm Dark brown eyes and hair, around 5' 11". Light green personal color.

Loadout: 4 Star Cobalt stuff, Avenger and Faust. Costume: Military color Spiral Sallet with Mecha Wings and Eye Scanner (Or whatever it's called).

Personality: A happy and shy person who is somewhat bad at socializing, but is very protective of the friends he has. He is very serious and observant on the field, and is very good with tactical situations.

Bio: He has recently signed up for the Omega Squad as a tactician, and has always preferred to go on missions alone despite the difficulty. He always finds some way to solve a problem on his own even if it involves multiple people.

(I guess that's it because thinking of a character's past is hard for me...help? >_<)

Powers: Eagle eyes, Can build small, very intelligent robots to help him with puzzles in the clockworks. TELEPORTING POWERZ (or he could just use a clocking device).

Sat, 11/02/2013 - 18:35

#17

Dermog

Also...

Forgot to mention. Even though he prefers to go on missions alone, he will gladly take an offer to go exploring in the clockworks with other people.

Sun, 11/03/2013 - 15:47

#18

Topoyozariane

Urm....

Just a matter of approval.....

Okay, I'm having thoughts to quit this thing. I've written the first chapter 7 times, and I deleted all of 'em. I don't think the storyline would go too well. It would be VERY unrelealistic. So...

Planning on starting another fic. Worked it out, wrote a few drafts... it seems okay.

Title is: 'After Isora'

So... would you guys mind if I use your character applications from above in 'After Isora', or would you want to make another application there? (Or not. xD)

Edits on character applications:

Dewca is fine... but is Ashen is just... really.... tall....

Dermog, you application is fine, but no powers. Spiral Knights have no powers.

Sun, 11/03/2013 - 18:05

#19

Hearthstone

Same app on me and Divine.

Sun, 11/03/2013 - 18:49

#20

Dermog

I'll use the same app, but

I'll use the same app, but i'm going to change one thing.

Change: "A silly and shy person who is somewhat bad at socializing"

Done.

Sun, 11/03/2013 - 21:53

#21

Midnight-Dj

:| too late for apps?

Name: Affair (a nick name only, given by his compatriots due to the fact he seems to always manage to show up in the middle of an 'Affair'. He never had a real name due to he is an orphan at birth.)

Age: 42

Race: isorian (spiral Knight)

Profession: Mercenary, does not belong to the spiral order or its system.

Gears: Warmask of seerus (replica only, since in your fan fic, seerus is alive and well,), Almirian crusader armor. Volcanic plate shield, silver six and DA

Bio: Born on the home world of Isora as an orphan, Affair was recruited to a mercenary camp at a young age. Trained to be a killing machine, he has a hobby of wearing warmasks into battle to strike fear into his enemies. After the Morai war and few other civil wars later, Affair is now a worn off veteran. His despises the Spiral Order, and he will probably sees the explosion attack on Haven as a retribution. Despite being taught at a young age to kill, Affair, deep in his heart, always tried to fight for something, but he never knew what it is, until at his final hour, he realize, that the paradise he fought for, is inside of him, all along.

His hated the Spiral order for what they did to his mercenary brothers. One time, they were assigned by the Spiral vanguard to execute civilians in a disease infected area and was later blamed for the massacre. Only him and few others escaped the prosecution. Now days, people like him are a dying breed. He is a soldier that will answer to any danger as long as you pay him well. Killing is all he had ever known, he has no wife, no friend and no cause to answer for. The reason why he is on Skylark is probably due to security contract for the crews on board. He is also an alcholic, constantly chugging down boozes in an attempt to forget his horrible past.

He sees younger recruit of the spiral order as their 'canon folder' . And he hates it when young men and women are throw into the battle by the Spiral order(and being incompetent on the battlefield). And die before they can enjoy the most of what life can offer. He knew war is a cruel teacher, and only those who are strong enough can learn his lessons. (in another word, he believes in survival of the fittest.) He remain emotionless for the most part, only get excited when there is a featured Auction in Haven or a high ranking member of the Spiral order died (he has a particular death wish on Ozlo). You will probably only get to see him get emotional when people he cared starting to die.

Skill: Affair is a savy warrior, he will use everything in his power to put down his opponent or friend. He often pulls out a shivermist out of the bondoiler of a renegaded bomber and freezes the bomber's head with it. Then Affair will smash the bobmer's head into pieces while it is frozen with his bare fists. Despite being ruthless in combat, Affair will always make some joke to his comrads and talk smack to his enemies, throwing his enemies off track is what he does best.

Mon, 11/04/2013 - 08:50

#22

Critzer

hmmm

Yeah im fine with you using Critzer for "After Isora"

Mon, 11/04/2013 - 19:18

#23

Pipipipipi

I'm fine with using the same app

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 06:52

#24

Dermog

I forgot to ask

Can I at least keep my robots? :P (only "power" i really wanted in first place)

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 15:49

#25

Topoyozariane

Yeah

Title says all.

And guys! MIght have to wait a little while! I got 5 projects, juggling around!

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 17:01

#26

Dermog

Just found out...

apparently my Personal color is actually Aquamarine.

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 14:49

#27

Mechao

Hmmmmm...

I guess I am a little late. No matter. TO THE OTHER FANFIC!

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 14:57

#28

Mechao

Probably shouldn't return...

Well. I'm probably just blind, but could you put a link to this new comic...please. Better question. Has it been made yet?

Wed, 11/06/2013 - 15:39

#29

Topoyozariane

Comic?

The thread: Not yet. But if you want an application... post here.

Thu, 11/07/2013 - 05:30

#30

Mechao

Well then...

Name: Malivor
Age: A.I. Settings: 51
Race: Mecha Knight
Alliance: The Iron Rocket (construct rebellion)
Appearance: Similar to a normal mecha knigh in shape. Red mask that represents the front of a dread skelly mask. White eye. Large red banner located on back. Spiked shoulder pads.
Bio: Malivor was part of an advanced plan to destroy Haven. The gremlins that built him tried to turn him into an ultimate machine that could best any knight. Almost perfect except for a few things. One of these things including the A.I. To hate every thing that had flesh. Malivor rebelled against his creators upon his first few moments of existence. He escaped from the factory he was constructed in and fled to a constructed filled level in the clockworks. He turned the entire area into a giant mobile fortress that is spewing out mechanical monstrocities and to this day waiting for the perfect time to unleash his army upon the clockworks.
Personality: friendly towards any kind of machine, but his first reaction if he met a flesh bearing creature he would smah open the head, whip the insides, and then burn what ever remains.
Load out: Electrical whip that gives constructs a powersurge that amplify their abilities and shocks flesh-bearers and a flamethrower.

Did I say comics? Wow. I should stop reading so much cyanide and happiness.

Fri, 11/08/2013 - 15:51

#31

Dewca

I'm fine with using my app

I'm fine with using my app for another fan fic. As for Ashen, make him a bit shorter.

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 00:07

#32

Topoyozariane

Ah....

Just one thing.....

Ashen, Crizter..... ages will be changed to 26.

*Because how can Ashen and Crizter date when Crit is older than Ash?*

(That is possible, but will be kinda weird. xD)

And.... Dermog is 19. A bit older than Omega squad.

Affair will be 30 years old, 'cuz being 42 will probabally make him look old

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 00:36

#33

Critzer

Just get on with the story and tell us in a little note at the bottom or top (your choice)

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 07:57

#34

Dermog

/me is fine with these changes

SO LES DO DIS.

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 10:02

#35

Feline-Grenadier

Hm...

Should I? Nah...not when you totally ignored my first character in one of your much, much OLDER fanficts...

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 15:54

#36

Topoyozariane

First....

Wha-? What character? In what fic?

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 16:57

#37

Pipipipipi

lol,

Rasfie is eager for the After Isora story

hes begging you to make it right now so he can do some adventureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees (yeeah, adventure)

Mon, 11/11/2013 - 01:33

#38

Flareminute

............

Name: Flareminute
Age:152
Race: ???(related to my appearance)
Allegiance: Spiral Order
Appearance: You don't need to know and you don't want to know
Bio: Mysterious
personality: Like to scream at night and often get stunned when heard the sound of the beast bell. An obedience knight who never back away from a fight. Bad grammar......XD
Loadout: Snarbolax set(including the sword and bomb),Polaris,and Obsidian Carbine
Power: Mean look(pokemon move........lol),swift steps(MSI High),Rage-mode(few second of damage increase)

Mon, 11/11/2013 - 02:07

#39

Topoyozariane

Flareminute, your application is not accepted.

And please people, post in the After Cradle

Search

A New Haven [New Fan Fiction] Accepting Character Applications!