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The arrival of the spiral order. (APPs please?)

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Mon, 11/04/2013 - 13:11
Vandheerlorde's picture
Vandheerlorde

Military report.
This is the human race in the year 50,322. We've left earth on 11 AM because of impending danger from the sky. *Pause* We are on a 3 year long journey to our backup planet. Earth - B

Year 50,325

Earth - B cannot support life. What astronomists long observed was not real! We will launch a team of highly trained knights to Earth - C to check if the planet supports life. We're going to send them in a prototype ship called the SkyLark. It uses the spiral magnification technology to fly.

Mon, 11/04/2013 - 18:46
#1
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Ho-hum...

Armed With Wings fan, are you?

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 01:42
#2
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Vandheerlorde
Yes i luv armed with wings.

SkyLark here.
We're en route to Earth - C
Currently flying above a planet called Cradle
We've had multiple problems with the engines but nothing too serious.
We're planning to land on cradle for repairs.
2 hour later.
We're landing on cradle. Our systems show it has a thick atmosphere . We hope to get through that safely.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 01:42
#3
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Vandheerlorde
Yes i luv armed with wings.

SkyLark here.
We're en route to Earth - C
Currently flying above a planet called Cradle
We've had multiple problems with the engines but nothing too serious.
We're planning to land on cradle for repairs.
2 hour later.
We're landing on cradle. Our systems show it has a thick atmosphere . We hope to get through that safely.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 01:58
#4
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Vivideus
I'll post apps later? Vinny's are awesome.

I hope this is just a prologue.
Your style of writing is too distinctive...which isn't actually what we expect.

The good point is that I only need a few minutes to read each chapter.
The bad point...only a few minutes are needed to read each chapter.

Well, GL HF anyway, welcome to the world of fanfiction.

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 02:02
#5
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Feline-Grenadier
...

I don't know much about your story, so I'll wait and see what you can come up with, capiche?

Tue, 11/05/2013 - 02:12
#6
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Vivideus
MOAR UPDATES

Just noticed.
Earth-C = Cradle
This logic is too awesome.

Yeah, what Vinny has said. We need to see more before we can do something.
Cheers! GL HF

Thu, 11/07/2013 - 14:58
#7
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Vandheerlorde
SPAGHETTIFICATION!

The planet has turned out to me much bigger and much more dense than we though it would be. We will not be surprised if it was made out of iron.
We are pummeling down the planet's thick atmosphere. We are going to crash...
A few hours later

A knight wakes up in an escape pod. His name is Raidriar

Raidriar to himself : Where are my weapons.. At least i have this proto chest which has a set of compact proto armor.. he said as he started wearing the armor
He then started detecting signals that were the knight's signature emergency signal.
Raidriar to himself : There must be survivors! They must be looking for me. I must follow the signal.
The knight proceeded towards the coordinated that were sent in the signal. Only to face the strangest of monsters.. Jell-o that moves? Giant lizard? Robots?
He then finally reached what seemed to be a make-shift survival camp. Only to realize how bad the situation is. Either way the people there were happy to meet him.
He was quickly informed of the monsters and the findings of the spiral order.
They were going to send a team of highly trained knights with high power gear to clear out what they called the clockworks?
They were the alpha squad..

Note : I made a reference. Can you see it?

Also MY alpha squad will have different names than those mentioned in them artifacts. Which is why i want apps.

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