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After Cradle [Fan-Fiction] [Accepting Character Applications.]

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Sat, 11/09/2013 - 01:27
Topoyozariane's picture
Topoyozariane

The world is 250 A.S.C. (After Skylark Crash.) After gathering the energy source, the Spirals left Cradle, leaving a small number of techs and warriors. The Spirals, continuing their war with the Morai, are consent with staying on Isora, until Alpha Squad sent a distress signal......

Character Application Format:

Name:

Age:

Loadout:

Biography:

Personality:

Extras:

(For people who had sent an application in my last thread, and I accepted, no need to send another.)

Story: After Cradle

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 02:01
#1
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Hearthstone

Hey, Tops, the story's locked.

Sat, 11/09/2013 - 03:11
#2
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Topoyozariane
Uh oh....

Sorry!

Sun, 11/10/2013 - 03:43
#3
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

Bump! Well not really, but needs more attention.

Sun, 11/10/2013 - 06:36
#4
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Flareminute
I don't want to stuck in cradle hahaha

Name:Flareminute
Age:152
Loadout:Azure set
Biography:I dun know...........I dun care
Personality:Kinda childish but wtv
Extras:A really good guy........XD

Sun, 11/10/2013 - 10:49
#5
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Dermog
...So am I just sitting in

...So am I just sitting in the gunship watching everybody fight because my equipment is inadequate?

:P

Sun, 11/10/2013 - 12:23
#6
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Derp. :3

Here's an appy:

Name: Nicolae

Age: 28

Loadout: Shadow Stun Set. Argent Peacemaker, Hail Driver, Sentenza, and Callahan.

Biography: When the Spiral Knights crashed on Cradle the Alpha Squad was made. At this point they were made famous, used for recruitment posters, propoganda. This is when Nicolae became enamored with them. He came to every "pep rally" and celebration. Parma, in particular, he admired; not because of any personal romantic interest (although there may have been some), he admired her, her shot, her passion. One day, he worked up the courage to approach her and talk to her. One piece of advice Parma gave Nicolae a piece of advice he will never forget, "Just imagine you are in your happy place, where nothing can go wrong. And just feel peace, even if you are in the most bloody battle of your life. Feel your calmness and serenity. And fire." Even with this advice, Nicolae became a sub-par marksman. Eager, but skill-less.

Personality: Charismic, Intelligent, people are really hit-or-miss with him. He either likes a person or hates a person. There is the same thing with people in relations to Nicolae.

(Sorry, Topo, I promised this sooner. I got caught.)

Mon, 11/11/2013 - 15:35
#7
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Starts clapping

Tue, 11/12/2013 - 08:29
#8
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Critzer
Ill just put this here...

Name: Critzer

Age:22(turned 26 due to author)

Race: Spiral knight (idk what race they are really…. they're not human in the game itself so yeah…)

Allegiance: Her allegiance is to her friends, not to a corporation nor to an army. It’s to those who are willing to respect her and her ways.

Appearance: She is 6’ with heavy(muscular) but still feminine. Her wide eyes are a bleach white and her hair is a pure white thats long and flows down a bit past her waist. Her armor keeps her skin quite light and smooth.

Bio: She was abandoned by her family early on since she was female. They didn't care for a girl and instead wanted a boy. They couldn't sustain having two children, which led to her abandonment. She lived alone, moving from place to place (mainly junkyards) most of her life until she joined the order at the age of 17. She had become strong from her experience physically but not mentally. She liked to seclude herself or create a ‘safe place’ between herself and people. This turned into her liking heavy armor and long range weapons and later formed into a passion. She is known as the ‘Panzer from hell’ for her style of combat due to her passion. She wears multiple layers of heavy metals that are angled for optimum protection and on her shoulder lies an 8 foot long cannon that fires large 128mm projectiles at her target from an immense distance.The projectiles can be HE(high explosive), APCR(Armor Piercing Composite Non Rigid), incendiary, or fragmented (the shell explodes before impact and sends shrapnel at targets). To operate the cannon, she needs to ‘dig in’ meaning she drives supportive piston that are positioned on the back of her calves, thighs, and back (hooked to armor of course). To help her concentrate, her helmet is heavily armored as well and blocks sound from outside as well as having a sight for her cannon. With this seclusion, she mainly listens to orchestra when she is in a destructive mood or heavy metal when concentrating. Even with all this weight that she carries, she can move around just fine, maybe can't do as many movements as she’d like though. Also, her armor is scratched from things trying to break through it, marks from heavy projectiles hitting it and bouncing off, and the soot from her cannon firing. For anything that comes too close to her to use her cannon, she has a sideblade, by side blade I mean a combuster. When not using her cannon or not ‘digged in’, the cannon folds into segments and moves to her back. When not in her armor (which is rare) she wears a costume.

Personality: She is shy and secluded from those who she doesn't know (meaning she wears her armor to shield herself from their view). But once someone become close to her, she opens up and becomes a bit bubbly towards them. When she is extremely excited and or motivated, she tips over the insanity ledge and becomes quite destructive to her enemies, being quite bloodthirsty and gruesome (like using an APCR round to pierce 8 enemies or HE to splatter guts around the room). She loves her friends and hates those who hurts them, being very protective of them. Though when her friends act ridiculously stupid, she lets them face the consequences of their actions. Though she never went to school, it doesn't mean she isn't smart, she knows tons of stuff about the things she likes (armor, fire, cannons, metal working, and nuclear engineering). But with common stuff and taking hints, she is a bit slower than everyone else. Her armor makes her a bit braver at times.

Loadout: A combuster as her sideblade and the armor and her cannon go over a skolver set (keeps her nice and cozy). Her costume is a hallow plume helmet with vertical vents and glasses and a hallow furcoat with hallow wings and hallow bomb bandoleer.

Powers: None really, except her strength with her armor is off the charts and she is amazingly fast with it off aswell. She can take the cold a lot better than most.

P.S: A long reload time is considered on average as 4-5 rounds per minute.

Tue, 11/12/2013 - 11:22
#9
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Dermog
....Ummmm

Critzer? Topo said that you don't need to send in another app if you already did....

:P

Tue, 11/12/2013 - 15:51
#10
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Topoyozariane
Yea....

Just a 'For Your Information': Dermog was manning the laser cannons. xD

And.... Eligibility for a Spiral Knights happens at 14 years old. AND....Crit, Critzer is 16... not 26.

Young, carefree.... dangerous....agressive......

Oh, and since theres not a lot of of updates, I'm going to do this. 1 Chapter = 1 week.

A chapter is maybe 500 words or so.... if you want it longer you can say so.....

And... this is just a bump, although I haven't updated anything yet.

Spoiler: Omega squad are going to meet Nicolae, Affair and Rasfie.

Fri, 11/15/2013 - 17:18
#11
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

bump

Sat, 11/16/2013 - 17:05
#12
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Hearthstone
Might be quitting SK for a while, but idk yet.

Bump!

Sun, 11/17/2013 - 08:57
#13
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

When is Top going to start working on it again?

He said he would do one chapter per week, I thought he ment he would gradually fill out the chapter in the week, and it would be complete at the end

Wed, 11/20/2013 - 15:33
#14
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Dermog
BUMPING

Bumplez

(Yes I just said bumplez. Get over it.)

Wed, 11/20/2013 - 15:43
#15
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Topoyozariane
Sorry guys...

I got grounded....for being too 'attached' to mah computer, so this is going on Hiatus. I couldn't even tell you becuz I was grounded, but I snuck on my phone to do this. Please don't judge me. :(

Sun, 11/24/2013 - 17:06
#16
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

bump

it seems whenever I come to some threads in treasure vault, bad stuff happens

Tue, 11/26/2013 - 11:20
#17
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

If you're still grounded, your parents must like grounding you for weeks

Tue, 11/26/2013 - 15:38
#18
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Dermog
I like my poker. Don't judge me.

/me is super sad for Topo :(

Wed, 11/27/2013 - 10:09
#19
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Isekuube
Derp. :3

He'll be back on Friday everyone.

I too must speak with him about another writing project he and I are doing. Not gonna post anything about it until Friday so we can choreograph this just right.

Sun, 12/01/2013 - 12:33
#20
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

was he grounded again? I sure hope not...

Sun, 12/01/2013 - 16:00
#21
Dermog's picture
Dermog
I like my poker. Don't judge me.

...

Friday has passed, did you mean next friday? Or last Friday?

Sun, 12/01/2013 - 16:40
#22
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Isekuube
Derp. :3

I actually meant last Friday, I haven't talked to him since, well, Friday, actually. Haven't seen since. :3

Wed, 12/04/2013 - 02:54
#23
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Hearthstone

I might have some influence over the unresponsive behavior...

Wed, 12/04/2013 - 16:14
#24
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Isekuube
Derp. :3

I actually know what's gonna happen to the thread. And when he's going to pick it up, he said he was going to do it though. Unless he wants me to tell you guys, I won't say a word. :3

Sun, 12/15/2013 - 10:21
#25
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Oh, I forgot about this

I guess Top doesn't want to do it ;_;

Tue, 12/17/2013 - 09:35
#26
Dermog's picture
Dermog
I like my poker. Don't judge me.

Topo, don't make us necro this thread a million times... COME BAAAACK.

Wed, 12/18/2013 - 03:22
#27
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Topoyozariane
Sorry guys.

I have... well... quit on this. I'm very sorry, but I have been lying about grounded. (Well, half of it.) I have been grounded, but not that long. The other half.... is because I'm sorta in a depression, so I debated whether continueing this or not, because if I'm sad, it'll come out crappy.

So sorry.... I have been writing a new fic... so... stay tuned?

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